Awesome drawing :D

I tried drawing my two original characters having a moment under the sunset but i failed miserably ><" anyways, let me know what you guys think

this is the first video i posted on youtube, i hope you guys could tell me what you think of it (:

This is one of many How To vid's sa pamamagitan ng Mark Crilley! He has taught me so much about how to improve my drawings :)