It's nice. I would recommend working on coloring since it's uneven and somewhat sloppy-looking in a few places, most noticeably the dress. One eye is also significantly darker than the other.
Also maybe make her skin a little bit darker as it sort of melts into the white balahibo of her dress making it hard to see where the balahibo starts and her neck ends. (Of course this might just be because of the lighting.)
pangkalahatang just focus on being consistent and neat with your coloring and lineart; everything else looks good. :)