Bleach Anime Make your own zanpakuto!

jadzter18 posted on Jan 01, 2009 at 06:06PM
enhance your imagination!
If you were a shinigami what will your zanpakuto's name and abilities be?

share your thoughts and ideas of your ideal zanpakuto!!!

(note:please follow this format so that there will be a uniform ideas, and so that people would read this topic more interesting and more easy to read, thank you)

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[zanpakuto's name/shikai name]
[release command]
[bankai name] - optional
=description - optional

[shikai abilities] - limited only (3)
=description

[bankai abilities] - limited only (3)
=desciption - optional


=(then comments on your zanpakuto)


that's all we want to know!
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sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas Ryuuikari said…
The original creator of this zanpakutō did not complete it and left it without a bankai (he did leave it with a bankai name however). So I completed it and gave it a bankai !



Name: Seiryo Kushoku (Turquoise)
Sealed appearance: It takes the form of a katana. The sword has a golden hilt and a silver blade with a small shard of sapphire in the blade near the hilt.
Release command: Glimmer in glorious light.

Shikai appearance: The katana changes from a long sword into an even longer spear. The shaft is very thin, but quite robust. It will not break under impact. The tip of the spear is really the distinguishing feature. Two prongs jut out, curving inwards about halfway down their length until each tip is nearly touching. They form a barrier of sorts around the middle prong. Each prong boasts two sharp shards of sapphire embedded in the metal.

Shikai special abilities: Seiryo Kushoku utilizes the sapphire shards embedded within the metal of its spear to perform its shikai techniques. The sapphire material is extremely hard.

Shikai technique(s):
Aohasai (Blue Fracture): Each of the shards of sapphire dislodges themselves from their respective places and launches themselves in the direction the spear is facing. After five seconds, six new shards of sapphire will form where the previous ones were.

Aohada (Blue Skin): Any number of the shards dislodges themselves from their respective places and adheres to the wielder's skin. There, they grow in size to create a powerful plate of sapphire armour that is large enough to cover an entire one of his limbs. Though very hard, the armour quickly deteriorates and flakes off, eventually shattering itself. After five seconds, new shards of sapphire will form where the old ones had initially been.

Aoniku (Blue Flesh): One of the shards dislodges itself from its place and takes residence in one of the wielder's wounds. There, it expands and grows until it fills the wound and after a short while, it turns into flesh. After five seconds, new shards of sapphire form where the old ones previously were.

Bankai name: Hōseki Heisetsu (Gemscape)
Bankai release: The wielder stabs the tip of the spear into the ground and then initiates bankai. At that, six petal-like sapphire extensions sprout from the ground, around the wielder, and curl shut in a bulb around them. The sapphire bulb then explodes sending shards flying everywhere and revealing the released bankai form.
Bankai appearance: In bankai the prongs lengthen and sharpen and each prong now has four sharp shards of sapphire embedded in the metal as well as six sharp shards of sapphire being embedded along the shaft of the spear. His shihakushō now sparkles as if gemstones were embedded into it.

Bankai special abilities: Hōseki Heisetsu retains all its shikai abilities and gains new ones in bankai. The sapphire material is even harder in bankai.

Bankai technique(s):
Seigyoku Sekai (Sapphire World): This technique activates immediately after the activation of bankai. Within roughly a kilometre diameter area around the wielder, sapphire spikes (of varying sizes) begin to sprout from any solid inorganic object; this landscape alteration shows that the technique is active. This technique enables the wielder to freely manipulate the sapphire material around him for various effects.

Seigyoku Sonzai (Sapphire Existence): A special technique that enables the wielder to transmute their entire body into the sapphire material whilst retaining biological significance. Transformation into the sapphire form takes a few seconds, at most. While in this state their body is homogenous with no part being more important than the other. In sapphire form, light and laser-based techniques can be harmlessly reflected or refracted (regardless of their power) and the wielder possesses the ability of high-speed regeneration (provided they have sufficient spiritual energy). However using this technique consumes a lot of spiritual energy to maintain; the rate of spiritual energy consumption increases exponentially the longer the form is maintained. Thus it is rare for the wielder to use this technique for more than a few tens of seconds at a time.
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blackpanther666 commented…
Nice one, dude. So this is the blade Yushi shall be facing??? Interesting... I think I'll take this to heart. I might revise my current version for Nanjuu No Sonoshi Kokoro (Nan-chan XD) and post it on here, so you understand Yushi's abilities. sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas
Ryuuikari commented…
Yes this is the very one, took me forever to think up designs and abilities. Hahaha whenever I read "Nan-chan" I imagine Shunsui XDD sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas
blackpanther666 commented…
Haha, yeah. Shunsui certainly has that effect. I kind of thought the same, too, when I decided to have him use that as her pet name - kinda personalised her a bit more. sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas
sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas Ryuuikari said…
It's a new one...

Name: Teionjin (Low Temperature Blade)
Sealed appearance: While sealed it takes the form of a regular katana with a simple bronze cross-guard, flame orange-coloured hilt-wrapping and a flame orange-coloured sheathe.
Shikai release: The wielder says the command, “Defy” then blows on the tip of the blade.

Shikai appearance: In shikai, the blade is covered by special fire-like plasma; in essence it looks like the blade is on fire. The ‘flames’ burn for as long as shikai is active.

Shikai special abilities: The fire-like plasma that covers the blade has properties that are very different from normal fire. The fire-like plasma rapidly absorbs the heat within anything it touches, thus drastically lowering the temperature of the affected object or victim. This means that whatever Teionjin cuts, has its heat absorbed and its temperature drastically lowered. The more heat that is absorbed, the larger and stronger the ‘flame’ covering the blade. Teionjin ‘burns’ using the wielder’s spiritual energy and heat absorbed from things it has cut; once depleted the fire-like plasma extinguishes and shikai is forcibly resealed.

Bankai name: Genshotai Teionjin (Extreme Heat Body, Low Temperature Blade)
Bankai appearance: In bankai the fire-like plasma now engulfs the blade and is blue in colour. The wielder’s appearance changes slightly as a result of bankai, with blue-coloured fire flaring from their hair, wrists and ankles. Like in shikai, the ‘flames’ engulfing the blade and the flames on the wielder’s body will continuously burn for as long as bankai is active.

Bankai special abilities: Genshotai Teionjin retains all its shikai abilities but now has the ability to project and manipulate the fire-like plasma that it generates. The fire-like plasma more rapidly absorbs heat than in shikai, thus lowering temperatures a lot lower than it would in shikai. The fire that flares from the wielder’s extremities has the normal properties of fire and gives off heat as well as being able to burn things; when heat is absorbed by the fire-like plasma, the fire that flares from their extremities increases in temperature accordingly. If heat is not absorbed often the fire that flares from their extremities reverts back to its original temperature. Unlike the fire-like plasma that the blade generates, the fire that flares from the wielder’s hair, wrists and ankles cannot be projected.

Bankai technique(s):
Kagaitō (Fire Cloak): This technique enables the wielder to cloak their hands, forearms, feet or forelegs in the fire flaring from their wrists and ankles.

Teion Ōuzumaki (Low Temperature Maelstrom): Genshotai Teionjin generates a huge vortex of the blue-coloured fire-like plasma that rages around the target. On command, the plasma vortex engulfs everything inside, completely absorbing all of the heat within its attack area and thus leaving the affected area with an incredibly low temperature.

Nenshō Teion, Hikajin (Burning Low Temperature, Flying Fire Blade): The fire that flares from the wielder’s hair, wrists and ankles flows down into the blade, turning the fire-like plasma engulfing the blade a bright white colour. This slightly alters the properties of the fire-like plasma. Now as well as rapidly absorbing the heat from whatever it touches, it then instantly uses the absorbed heat to burn. Thus, when Genshotai Teionjin cuts while this technique is active, the target is burned simultaneously as its temperature is being drastically lowered. The rate of spiritual energy consumption increases exponentially while this technique is active. Also this technique cannot be utilized while other techniques and abilities are active and vice-versa.
blackpanther666 commented…
Dammit! Nice one, Ryuu. I had been thinking of doing something like this as a Zanpakuto, but I just couldn't figure out how I wanted to do it. I think I might make this into a DF on the One Piece club, because I don't believe there is one that directly deals with this... Monet's one sort of can do that, like when she fought Luffy, but it's not the same. sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas
Ryuuikari commented…
Thanks BP. I like it in the fact that its appearance contradicts its typing. I for one have no idea what type of zanpakuto this would be... Fire-type ? Thermal-type ? Ice-type ? I did make sure that I never mentioned freezing or ice (because then people have no reason to mistake it for an Ice-type; I would hate that). sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas
blackpanther666 commented…
Yeah, I agree. I think thermal blade would be a fitting type for it to be called... though, maybe you could look into the whole energy/metabolism and think of something through that, too. Either way, I like the design. sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas
sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas zoehart said…
shinigami name kurosaki pein

[zanpakuto's name/shikai name] [ zanpakuto name:zangetsu/shikai name:vizard]
[release command] [realease name awaken]
[bankai name] - optional [bankai name susumbachi
description:
lvl 10000
reatsu lvl 100000
another heart
name:hichigo

[shikai abilities] - limited only (3)
=getsuga tenshou
hollow form
reatsu overflow

[bankai abilities] - limited only (3)
=enhanched getsuga tenshou
hollow mask
extreme speed


hollow abillities
=getsuga tenshou
cero
fast regeneration
blackpanther666 commented…
Wow, so original... did you copy and paste this straight from the manga, or anime? sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas
Ryuuikari commented…
Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha... sickening... sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas
sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas blackpanther666 said…
Name: Tsume ('Claw')

Release Command: Slash to pieces, Tsume.

Bankai: Kiretsume Hayaikai ('Slicing Claw, Swift Cut')

Sealed Appearance: The sealed sword is a wakizake, with little significance to it. It has a blue handle, with green diamonds and a guard set to look like five claws sticking outwards. It is fitted with a blue sash, which can be strapped to the wielder's back.

Shikai Special Ability: Five blades are formed to the end of the pole, which are approximately 45 centimeters long, allowing increased cutting power and speed, with the added fact that the pole is 1.75 meters long, making it a very long Shikai. These blades are extremely hard and difficult to shatter, smash, break in almost any way (basically, they are like Ichigo's Bankai in that manner), of course, this is including the added measure of reiatsu, which causes much of the added hardness - in retrospect, the blades are about as hard as diamond, until they are augmented with the strength of the user's Shikai. The blades are ideal for blocking short-range and mid-range attacks, while they are weaker to long-range attacks that are commanded by the wielder itself (think of Senbonzakura as an example for this one). It's basic special ability is a increase in the speed of the blade swing. With any swinging motion, the Zanpakutou's spirit automatically detects this and delivers a burst of speed to any attack that involves swinging the pole downwards, upwards, or sideways - providing it is a swinging motion. All other motions get a slight bonus, but only of a much smaller rate than sideways motions. Here is the synopsis:

Swinging Motion:

Level One - 1.5 x faster
Level Two - 3.0 x faster
Level Three - 4.5 x faster
Level Four - 6.0 x faster

Other Motions:

Level One: 0.75 x faster
Level Two: 1.5 x faster

(Only gets two different levels... the higher the level, the more spirit energy that is required to use the ability full-time and energy is used slightly faster than with regular abilities)

Shikai Appearance: Shikai is a 1.75 meter long pole with five large blades attached to the end of the pole, which are attached by a metal fitting, similar to a guard.

Bankai Special Ability: The same general bonuses apply with this, except that it has a better resistance to long-range Zanpakuto, making them more ineffective to to this Bankai. The general idea of the blade is the same, except that the levels have been abandoned for a different way of utilising the swing, or cutting motion of the blade. With any cutting, swinging, or any motion at all, this Zanpakuto generates extra force and extra speed, by detection and intervention of the Zanpakutou's spirit. Bonuses apply as following:

Cutting motions are increased with speed and force by 10 x
Swinging motions are increased with speed and force by 12 x
All other motions are increased with speed and force by 5x

Mystical Slice: When this ability is activated, this can give an extra bonus to any attack that is affected by the Bankai's special ability, which applies to every motion of the Zanpakuto attacking. This allows the blade to disappear during the first 3 seconds when the Zanpakuto is affected by any motion and Bankai special ability. After 3 seconds, it will reappear.

Bankai Appearance: Same as Shikai, except the Zanpakuto has gained an extra fitting and set of blades at the other end, making it a double-ended pole/lance. Zanpakuto has same dimensions, as with Shikai.
Ryuuikari commented…
Dammit BP, you've got a really good melee blade here... why hadn't I thought of this...? Sometimes its the simple abilities that are the best. sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas
blackpanther666 commented…
Thanks, dude. I thought of it at work ironically. I was raking and looked at the rake and thought 'hmmmmm, maybe I could use this disensyo as a Zanpakuto...' sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas
Ryuuikari commented…
Did you feel like a Shinigami at that moment ? Did the feeling to randomly shout bankai flood your soul ? sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas
blackpanther666 commented…
Yes. I often wish I could shout Bankai and have a massive weapon appear. XD sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas
sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas blackpanther666 said…
Name: Nanjuu No Sonoshi Kokoro ('Retardation of the Mind')

Type: Conceptual/illusion

Release Command: See through the cracks

Shikai abilities/Stage 1:

Sparse landscapes: The wielder of this blade concentrates their spirit energy and condenses it into a ball of fragmented energy. After this initial step, the energy starts to invert and grows to an area-covering technique. This affects the retinal vision of the opponent, distorting the view of the landscape around them. While not necessarily being damaging, this technique is a good distraction to use other abilities. The opponent generally tends to get the feeling that the landscape around them is constantly changing, even though it is merely an illusion that their mind is playing through their eyes. This can give them the idea that the landscape around them is growing larger and smaller all of the time... For example, they mayb find it harder to see their opponent, or sense their spirit energy signature.

Fragmented Blades: The Zanpakuto seems to split in two, spiritually, wielding separate reiatsu of the wielder and Zanpakutou's spirit. Initially confusing to the opponent, this ability allows the user to concentrate larger amounts of reiatsu into their blade, channelling it and allowing it to harden the defenses of the blade itself and its wielder, too.

Final Stage: Affinity to the Senses

This is the final ability of the Zanpakuto. In this form, the Zanpakuto is the same as in Stage 2, a three-bladed Zanpakuto. Each of the senses, to the wielder, is greatly attuned and allows them to move in synchronisation to the environment around them, allowing seconds for them to adapt to new techniques and greater sources of spirit energy. In short, they can see better, hear better, smell better, sense energy better and have a greater sense of touch and taste.


Bankai Abilities:

Special ability: Affinity to the Senses. In Bankai, this technique is automatically activated and is passive, allowing the user to constantly be affected by the technique. Best yet, it uses no spirit energy, as it is passive and not something the wielder needs to concentrate on. Also, the user's speed is doubled, allowing them to utilise the Zanpakutou's abilities to a much fuller extent.

Adapting Landscapes: This is the Bankai version of Sparse Landscapes. This increases the area and effectiveness of the ability.

Invisible Blade: This replaces Fragmented Blades from the Shikai and allows a different technique. This allows the Zanpakuto, in its two pieces to remain invisible even after the wielder allows their presence to be felt and themselves to be seen. The blades will still invisible for a second after they appear.

Ten Strikes, One Moment: The wielder's most deadly ability. In Shikai, there are no abilities that are dangerously offensive. This is Bankai's deadly ability. In the space of a moment, the wielder cuts with enough speed to create ten cuts in the same amount of time that a regular Zanpakuto would cut once. This ability can only be used once every five minutes and requires a fairly large amount of spirit energy to use, which is the drawback for its power.

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sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas Liquidz-Flamez said…
Zanpakuto Name: Tokage Tesaki ((Lizard Minion))
Sealed Appearance: A Tanto with a small green ribbon tied around the end of the hilt.
Release Command: Slither and Strike

Shikai Appearance: The small but deadly tanto grows a whole 2 inches longer, and the blade has a slight green tint on the tip. The blade also tilts almost unnoticeably forward. The ribbon becomes a small, dark green handkerchief that hangs from the end of the hilt. The hilt on the other hand, is marked with a green snake that coils itself up towards the blade.

Shikai Special Abilitiy:*A stab/cut wound in the limb from this blade can immobilize that particular limb for a full 6 seconds. The sheathe itself will also be able to cut the opponent*

Shikai Techniques:
Chūnyū suru ((inject)): When this technique is used, when the blade is thrusted forward it extends 50 feet from the guard of the blade and can inject the opponent with a poison like substance that lowers his/her spiritual pressure slightly each time they are struck with the attack. The effects last for a full 30 seconds.

Nomikomu ((Swallow)): This technique allows the user to absorb, or "swallow" large portions of anything thing that involves kido and fire it back at them 2 times stronger.. The blade itself is allowed to consume small portions of a weaker opponents spiritual pressure when it comes in injures the opponent.
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Bankai: Mōkin Ō ((Raptor King))
Bankai Release: Before the wielder releases the bankai, he/she bites the blade of the zanpakuto
Bankai Wielder Appearance: The wielder of this unique zanpakuto is covered in a skeleton armor-like equipment that resembles that of a snake. The spine travels up to a skull like helmet that resembles a snakes head. The head of the skeleton snake has two 4 inch fangs that curve themselves downwards.
Bankai Zanpakuto Appearance: The blade stretches an extra inch and is sticking out of a snakes mouth, which is the guard of the zanpakuto. ((Imagine a blade coming out of snakes mouth XD)) The hilt has the small green handkerchiefs hanging from the end of it.

Bankai Abilities:

The handkerchiefs are a symbol of spiritual pressure releases. When the first handkerchief is removed, the wielder's speed and agility increases by 10 percent. But this 10 percent only lasts until the second handkerchief is removed.
When the second handkerchief is removed, the wielder is allowed to heal his/her wounds once. The wounds that are not so serious would heal at the same rate as Aizen's did after Ichigo sliced him. But if the wound is to deep, then the wound will only heal partially and will heal slowly.
And when the third handkerchief is removed, the wielder can use the zanpakuto's ultimate attack which is Saishū-tekina kama. This entire process in known as Inshō-tekina hebi ((Striking Serpant))

Saishū-tekina kama ((Concluding Bite)): This is Tokage Tensai's ultimate attack. When this technique/attack is used, one blow from blade will lock the joints of the opponent. This technique relies on the amount of reiatsu. If the opponents spiritual pressure is weaker than the wielder's, the attack will slowly kill the opponent. This slow death will cause the opponent to hallucinate and vomit constantly until they life ends.

((Ok guys, tell me what you think!))


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Ryuuikari commented…
Liquidz ? Yeah I remember you, from Resurgence :P your shikai abilities and techniques remind me way too much of Mayuri and Gin's blades (although I can see why considering the blade's butiki theme). That being sinabi the poison effect of Chūnyū Suru is quite good. I’d say make the poison effect the shikai special ability and then create another lizard-inspired shikai technique. sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas
Ryuuikari commented…
Your bankai is definitely going in the right direction. I like its simplicity and how its appearance iugnay with its abilities. I quite like Inshō-tekina Hebi process, I think that’s the best part of the zanpakutō as a whole. One thing though, just be a little madami detailed with each part. Example: How much does speed and agility increase and how long can this increase of speed and agility be maintained ? From what severity of wound can be healed (e.g. could it fully heal from dismemberment or bifurcation) and how fast does an injury heal ? That sort of thing is what I want to know. Same goes for Saishū-tekina Kama. Nice technique, but not detailed enough. How long will the opponent’s joints stay locked (and does this length of time depend on how much reiatsu the opponent has in relation to the wielder) ? How long does it take for the technique to kill an opponent and is it a painful or debilitating process for them ? sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas
Liquidz-Flamez commented…
Ok, madami details have been added! sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas
sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas blackpanther666 said…
I think this might be my first proper OP blade ever. I just randomly thought of this - literally a minute ago, when I was trying to think of a serious idea. I'll think of that idea, too. (This isn't OP enough, so I'll expand on the Bankai... xD)

Name: Setsuna Katto ('Instant Cut')

Release Command: Slash all things within your grasp, Setsuna Katto.

Bankai: Sokushi Kamisori Ittou ('Instant Death, Razor Blade')

Sealed Form Appearance: Unusual for a sealed Zanpakuto. The blade is approx. 1.35 meters long. It has no guard, nor does it have a handle like a regular katana - the handle is longer than usual, at about 39 centimeters long and is also metallic, except a different color.

Shikai Special Ability: The special ability of this blade is immensely powerful in itself - without having to be near the opponent, the Zanpakuto can cut from anywhere, without having to physically touch the opponent with their blade. The area it works in, is about 200 meters i.e. if the opponent is outside the 200 meter range, the wielder cannot cut them with the blade instantly. For a better explanation of the way Shikai works, think about slashing at something, from within 200 meters away, from the said object - the blade will cut through it instantly, where 'instantly' is within the space of half a second at it's furthest away point (199.9 meters) and less than a millisecond for the closest, which can be anywhere near the opponent, excluding the restriction, which is within 5 meters - the blade will not cut like it is supposed to if the wielder is within 5 meters of the opponent, but will like a regular sword/Zanpakuto and cut upon real contact of the opponent's body.

Shikai Appearance: Blade becomes longer, thinner and more deadly looking. Otherwise, it essentially looks the same as it did in its sealed form.

Bankai Special Ability: The special ability of this blade is immensely powerful in itself - without having to be near the opponent, the Zanpakuto can cut from anywhere, without having to physically touch the opponent with their blade. Bankai allows the wielder to cut anything within 150 meters away from the wielder - the blade will cut through it instantly, where 'instantly' is within the space of half a second at it's furthest away point (149.9 meters) and less than a millisecond for the closest, which can be anywhere near the opponent, excluding the restriction, which is within 5 meters - the blade will not cut like it is supposed to if the wielder is within 5 meters of the opponent, but will like a regular sword/Zanpakuto and cut upon real contact of the opponent's body. While having the same general effect as the Shikai ability, the Bankai also expands on it, adding an extra ability to the original ability. This ability is to enhance the killing intent of the blade, as well as the extra cutting power and allow 1 in 10 attacks the power to destroy 1/50th of the opponent's spirit energy and cause them to lose twice as much blood as they would normally lose. If the opponent hasn't been killed by the 200th strike, then the 201st strike will kill them instantly.

Bankai Appearance: For extra control and speed, the blade becomes melded to the dominant arm of the wielder.
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Jester15 commented…
uy Black, just wondering, what do you think of my Densetsu no Kishi? sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas
blackpanther666 commented…
Why do you only comment on my blades when you want me to read yours? Did you even bother to read mine, or did you just use it for the comment function to promote your own? I just read it. I don't know why I was compelled to, but I did anyway. It was pretty unoriginal... the ability enhancement one has been used so many times, that I pretty much skipped it and the other two abilities were very much similar to properties of Ichigo's Bankai... I don't know why you felt the need to copy Ichigo's Bankai abilities, then rename them for your Shikai. Your Bankai was basically the same, except slightly madami powerful. Overall, I wasn't overly intrigued, sorry to say. I like some of your other blades, but that one seems pretty cliche to me. No offense intended. sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas
Ryuuikari commented…
All hail the OP blades XD I pag-ibig the fact you use detail to highlight just how OP the blade is XD sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas
sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas Liquidz-Flamez said…
Ok, now its time for more unique zanpakuto!

Zanpakuto Names: Shō Saru ((Small Ape)) and Dà Hóuzi ((Large Monkey)) *Note: One's a Japanese name and one's a chinese name!
Sealed appearance: The name of these zanpakuto totally contradicts themselves in terms of appearance. Shō Saru is a wakizachi with small bells that are 3 inches tall and wide at the end of its hilt and an average sheathe. Dà Hóuzi is a hamidashi with a bamboo sheathe. It has 5 inch tall/wide bells at the end that creates a deeper tone of ringing.
Release Command: Swing through the forest

Shikai Appearance: Shō Saru becomes a long piece of what seems to be wooden bamboo with no guard at all. It has the symbols of a monkey eating the king of the jungle carved in black on it. On the other hand, Dà Hóuzi becomes a smooth looking wooden stick that is 32 inches long. The bells remain on the two zanpakuto.

About the bells: The bells on the zanpakuto are used to confuse the opponent. If the bells on Dà Hóuzi rings, that means that the wielder is going to attack with Shō Saru, and if the bells on Shō Saru rings, then the wielder is going to attack with Dà Hóuzi.

Shikai Abilities:
The Balance: As you can see, both zanpakuto are very different, yet very similar. The Balance is a form of giving the wielder a style of fighting. So in this case, The Balance gives Dà Hóuzi the most strength and allows it to increase 2 times as much as the opponent gets weaker, or as its wielder's spiritual pressure increases. On the other hand, Shō Saru can attack with the most speed. This speed remains the same until the bankai is released, but the scale can be tipped to Unbalanced.
Unbalanced is where one of the zanpakuto takes a more aggressive role than the other, and it all depends on the wielder.

--What's unique about this zanpakuto, is that it has two bankais that can be released all together, or seperately.

Bankai: Shinrin- ō ((Forest King)) and Cónglín Jūzhù Zhě ((Jungle Dweller))
Bankai Wielder Appearance: The wielder of this rather unique zanpakuto gains sleeves of brown ape fur that reaches from the wrist, to the elbow on each arm. The wielder also earns a capette of brown fur. The stomach area is left revealed and the bottom half of the shinigami uniform stays. The wielder also has the eyes of an ape at this point.
Zanpakuto Bankai Appearances: The two zanpakuto remain the same, except that they are alot thicker than before. Dà Hóuzi gains black markings of a monkey putting on a king's crown. The crown is actually a gauge. Both Zanpakuto lose their bells.

Bankai Abilities:
The Gauge--The crown fills itself with a red reiatsu every time an attack is successfully blocked, countered, or planted. When the gauge is full, the process of the Saru no odori, Tǒngzhì yuán ((Dance of the Monkey, Reign of the Ape))

Saru no odori, Tǒngzhì yuán: The process of this all out barrage is sectioned in a total of 4 steps. The Step of the Lion''s Gate, The Step of the Ape's Grace, The Step of the Monkey's Wisdom, and the final stage, The Branch of the Ape Lord, Step of the Kings.

The Step of the Lion's gate increases the wielder's strength tenfold, but takes a tole on his/her speed all together and decreases it by 5%. This lasts until the wielder kicks it up to the next step of the dance.

The Step of the Ape's Grace increases the speed tenfold, but decreases the strength by 10% until the next step of the dance is activated.

The Step of the Monkey's Wisdom allows the wielder to encase themselves in a coat of spiritual pressure that reduces any damage taken by any attack. While in this step of the dance, both strength and speed are well balanced, and increase gradually with each attack that successfully lands on the opponent, and with each attack countered or dodged.

And in the final step, The Branch of the Ape Lord, Step of the Kings, the wielders speed, strength, and agility spikes greatly for 30 seconds, allowing the wielder to release a barrage of powerful attacks and move at a high rate of speed.

((Comments on this zanpakuto, come one, come all!))
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sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas grif16 said…
Zanpakuto Name: Tondai (Iron Sand)

Sealed Appearance: It takes the form of a basic katana with a dark grey handle and a thin rectangular guard

Release Command: Break down

 Shikai Appearance: After releasing it the blade crumbles into iron sand and while the sand is not in use it swirls around where the blade used to be.

 Shikai Abilities: The sand can take on a new form in an instant depending on the need of the wielder. It can only take one form at a time.

 Shikai iron sand forms and their abilities:

 Single Grain Form-It is just iron sand that swirls around where the blade used to be. This is its first post release form, and it must return to this form before it can take on a new one. It has no offensive or defensive capabilities.

 Blade Form-The sand reforms the blade for close quarters combat

 Ball Bearing Form-The sand takes the form of 24 ball bearings, each of them an inch in diameter. In this form the ball bearings fly at high speeds and can impact with enough force to pulverize rock

 Needle Form-The sand takes the form 100 needles, each 6 inches long. The needles fly with enough speed and force to pass through a body unhindered (bones and all). But unlike the ball bearings once the needles begin their flight path they cannot change their trajectory until they impact something

 Shield Form-The sand creates a large circular shield, 2 feet in diameter and an inch thick

 Whip Form-The sand takes the form of a 4 foot long whip
 
Bankai Name: Tondai Tonsumi (Iron Sand Iron Mist)

 Bankai Appearance: The owner holds the handle with both hands in front of his chest with the blade pointed toward the ground. The sand from the blade falls and burrows into the ground. The handle then disperses and reforms as two dark grey cloth gloves each with a small iron plate on the top. Then from under the owners feet a sand storm appears and completely coats a one hundred yard diameter in iron sand that is nearly 6 inches deep. Then the sand starts to congregate toward the wielder and is ready to be used

 Bankai Abilities: The sand takes on numerous forms and is controlled by the owner using the gloves. The sand can take on up to 3 different forms at a time due to the concentration it takes to retain those forms

 Bankai iron sand forms and abilities:

 Single Grain Form-This is its first post release form, and it must return to this form before it can take on a new one. It has no offensive or defensive capabilities.

 Sword Form-The sand forms and exact duplicate of Tondai’s sealed form for close quarters combat

 Ball Bearing Form-The sand takes the form of hundreds of ball bearings, each of them an inch in diameter. In this form the ball bearings fly at high speeds and can impact with enough force to pulverize rock

 Needle Form-The sand takes the form of thousands of needles, each 6 inches long. The needles fly with enough speed and force to pass through a body unhindered (bones and all). But unlike the ball bearings once the needles begin their flight path they cannot change their trajectory until they impact something

 Whip Form-The sand takes the form of a 4 foot long whip

 Armor Form-The sand forms armor around the wielder and can hold up to all but the strongest of strikes by and enemy

 Sand Storm Form-A large portion of the sand begins to swirl at high speed engulfing both the wielder and enemy in order to restrict the enemy’s line of sight and awareness to what is around him

 Pillar Form-The sand forms several large solid iron pillar over the enemy and on command crashes down with enough force to destroy anything caught underneath it

 Binding Form-The sand creeps under the ground and burst forth in the form of chains to bind an enemy in place

 Living Spike Form-The sand creeps under the ground and burst forth a single large spike and from that spike (depending of the direction the enemy moves) several more spikes burst forth in an attempt to impale the opponent

 Most Powerful Forms: these forms require every grain of sand and so cannot be used with any other forms

 Asteroid Form-Every last grain of sand ascends into the air and forms a large sphere in the clouds that then crashes down killing anything caught underneath it with massive collateral damage from the shockwave of the impact. This technique can even kill the wielder if he is caught in the blast

 Squad Form-The sand forms 10 iron soldiers. Each soldier has a sword and a shield and can engage a lieutenant class soul reaper in equal combat. The wielder retains enough iron sand for sword form so he can fight as well. If a soldier is cut down it can reform after a set amount of time depending of the wielders concentration on the task. If the wielder is actively being engaged by the enemy it can take up to 5 minutes. If the iron soldiers can handle the fight without help leaving the wielder time to concentrate the soldier can reform within moments

 Iron Giant Form-The sand forms a giant humanoid that stands 30 feet tall and uses its fists to engage an enemy with incredible determination and force while the wielder sits on the shoulder to instruct the giant.

Please let me know what you think
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Ryuuikari commented…
While I quite liked its bankai appearance and bankai release, I think the rest is a too generic for my liking, most probably because it's an elemental blade. You need some serious creativity to make elemental zanpakuto look and/or sound good. sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas
grif16 commented…
what do u think you would have changed? sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas
Ryuuikari commented…
I look pasulong to it :) sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas
sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas thantosquad10 said…
How am I just now finding this? :)
Name: Kurayami no Tenshi (Angel of Darkness)
Release command: kurakunaru (Darken)
Appearance: A normal katana with a tsuba shaped like a skull.
Shikai: After the release command,black feathers made of reiatsu begin to fall from the sky. The sword doesn't chanfe when released, except the smoke like black reiatsu surrounding it.
Special ablities:
1)Its main ability is to control any form of darkness (as the name states.) The shadows can be manipulated into different shapes (swords, knives etc, etc)
2) the wielder can only use the available shadows
3) if the wielder needs more shadows, they're forced to use their own reiatsu to create more.
Bankai: Furaingu Kurayami no Tenshi
The user is surround in a sphere of feathers. The sphere explodes and it reveals the wielder with two dark purple wings. The downside to the wings is that, although they can be regenerated when cut, the user feels the pain as if they would any other limb.
Bankai special abilities:
1) the user is able to use all shikai abilities more efficiently, such as molding shadows with his hands (which allows him to use the swords abilities without touching it.)
2) he is able to create living creatures out of the shadows, they will fight until they are killed or run out of reiatsu (as they are given a set amount upon creation). The bigger the animal, the more reiatsu it consumes.
3)He is able to create illusions made of shadows to confuse opponents.


Any question? :)

sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas grif16 said…
Zanpakuto name: Kagegarasu (Shadow Crow)

 Sealed Form: It takes the form of a wakizashi with a black handle and no guard. A crow is etched into the base of the blade

 Release Command: Ferry this lost soul

  Shikai Appearance: The handle doesn’t change. The blade becomes a three foot long double edged darkened steel sword (not black but dark grey) with a hollow center reaching all the way up the blade to just an inch below the tip. At the base of the blade is a large orange jewel at the base of the blade in the shape of a crow eye, partially closed by darkened steel eyelids.

 Shikai Techniques:

 Kaze no garasu (Wind of Crows)-A thick black spiritual energy fills the hollow center of the blade, and then with a swing the energy is released from the blade in the form of five black crows. Each of the five crows flies outward in a different direction then all at once flock toward the target and attack the enemy from all sides making it very difficult to defend from.

 Kuenmadai (Void of the Underworld) - The crows eye jewel opens to reveal the full jewel. The jewel then creates the illusion of thousands of crows. Since the crows are nothing more than illusions they have no offensive capabilities, they exist only to obscure the movements of the wielder and act as a distraction and a way to hide a barrage of kaze no garasu. This ability can only be used one per shikai release and only lasts for 5 minutes. Once the eye opens it will slowly begin to close, and after 5 minutes it will shut completely and the illusion will end.

 Bankai Name: Senju no kamigarasu (Murder of Crows)

 Bankai Appearance: The crow’s eye jewel fully opens and dark cloud of smoke pours from it fully enveloping the wielder. Once the smoke clears the wielder is shown wearing a long black cloak embroidered with crow feather fringe along the bottom. On the right shoulder is a large ivory crow skull with a dark steel beak that hangs down the arm. In the wielders right hand they hold the shikai blade with the crow’s eye jewel now fully opened, and in the left hand, a long slender silver bird cage approximately nine inches in diameter and four feet tall. Inside the cage is a swirling of black spiritual energy that does not take any distinguishable shape, and in the middle of this energy are two glowing orange eyes with black smoke escaping through the gaps in the cage.   

 Bankai Abilities: The cage is unbreakable from an outside source and is held from the top and used as a shield. Despite its size it weighs very little and therefore can be wielded with little effort. Upon something striking the cage the creature inside becomes agitated and lashes out at the attacker with violent burst of black energy which becomes more powerful the angrier it gets. The cloak allows the wielder to disperse his body in the form of a flock of crows enveloped in black smoke in order to avoid damage or move from one spot to another at high speed.

 Bankai Techniques:

 Kuenmadai  (Void of the Underworld)- with the crows eye jewel fully opened the wielder can activate this ability and time they wish. The illusions recharge time is equal to that of its usage time. However the maximum amount of time the illusion can be generated remains at five minutes.

 Kaze no garasu (Wind of Crows)-A thick black spiritual energy fills the hollow center of the blade, and then with a swing the energy is released from the blade in the form of five black crows. Each of the five crows flies outward in a different direction then all at once flock toward the target and attack the enemy from all sides making it very difficult to defend from.

 Ogarasuryo (King Crow Spirit) - Once the creature inside the cage becomes angry enough it burst from the cage and takes on the form of a massive crow that stands approximately 50 feet tall with a wing span of 120 feet. Its eyes are dark orange and its entire body is emitting black smoke. Around its neck is a chain of large crow skulls.  Upon its release the creature is in such a blind rage that it cannot distinguish between friend and foe. It attacks both its master and his enemy with all of its will. Along with its god-like strength, a flap of its wings it can launch a volley of very large crow feathers that can reduce an entire landscape to dust. With a mighty scream it can release the same violent energy as when it was in the cage but now with much greater destructive force. Any force that tries to harm it will pass right through, and the black smoke will reform what was damaged. Only after an undeterminable amount of time will it calm down and finally fight on the side of its master. Until such time it will kill anything it sees

Let me know what you think
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Ryuuikari commented…
I actually quite like this one; it's generally balanced in power, decent shikai design, a unique bankai release and decent bankai design. I quite like the Kaze no Garasu and Kuenmadai techniques, I think they work well. The only thing I don't like is the Ōgarasuryo technique; in my opinion it seems too overpowered compared to the rest of the zanpakuto. I would've kept the same name but done a different technique. But overall, I'd say this is a good blade :) sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas
grif16 commented…
yea i started it back on page 107 and decided to finally finish it. i had a really difficult time with the final ability and even i think somethings should be changed but im at a loss lol. i tried balancing it sa pamamagitan ng making it run wild after release. any sugestion would be helpful. i guess i dont have as much of an imagination as i used to lol sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas
grif16 commented…
i originally had the same idea as you about the hunam sized one who could along side the wielder but i didnt want to make it too much laki that one arrarncar sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas
sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas CODYFLAME626 said…
The Shinigami
Shinigami Name: Shibō Engimono, captain of the Second Division (nibantai, or 二番隊) and leader of the Stealth Force (Onmitsukidō, or 隠密機動)
Appearance: Shibō looks to be about 19. He has black Hair that just a bit longer than his ears, with some able to drape in front of his eyes. Has grey blue eyes and looks very similar to Shiki Tohno (from TYPE-MOON). He mainly wears a black suit instead of his captain uniform.
Personality: Mainly regarded as a cold person he keeps to himself. He always searches for the most logical and sensible way to complete a task, referring to cold logic and expertise rather than ideals. Constantly contemplating ideas and strategy he prefers to have a plan in a fight. Favoring speed and agility over power he tries to use his skill to get the job done but will not hesitate to use dishonorable tactics if that is what is needed. Although he seems like a heartless person he still cares for the people in his division as well as his comrades, always looking for the best way to get everyone out alive.
Abilities: Extremely fast and agile compared to most other shinigami. Although he prefers to have speed instead of power, his constant training gives his strikes incredible damaging ability while attacking. He is a master strategist and combat expert. He prefers to use hand to hand combat instead of spells and kido but is still very adept to using either, being able to use kido up to 85 without any incantation. His constant training allows him to easily overcome adversaries and he can easily learn to overcome any complications in a battle.

The Sword
Sword Name: A Shadow in the Darkness
In Romaji: Yami No Kage
In Kanji: 闇の影
Appearance: The sword is completely black and has a blade that is about the length of a standard wakizashi (60 cm) The blade has 12 cm of serration from the hand guard up, with the rest of the blade being razor sharp. The handle is completely black with black wrapping around it (20 cm long, making the total sword length 80 cm) There is a short chain that is 6 links long attached to the handle on one end and attached to an “S” shaped metal piece at the end. The hand guard resembles the same type of “S” shape (also being completely black).

Release Command: Rise From the Depths of Hell
In Romaji: Jigokuu No Fukau Sa Kara Joushou
In Kanji: 地獄の深さから上昇

Bankai Name: Shadow of Death
In Romaji: Shi No Kage
In Kanji: 死の影


Shikai Abilities
When the Shikai is activated the blade will shorten to a tanto blade that is 40 cm long and the handle will shrink down to 15 cm (making the sword 55 cm long). The blade will also split into two identical swords. The chain on the bottom will be removed and be replaced by 3 holes on each blade spaced equally far apart, one for each chain link. The shortened blades will focus the reiatsu of the user and make the blades sharper and stronger, as well as increasing the users speed.

Consuming Shadows:
In Romaji: Kage o shōhi suru
In Kanji: 影を消費する
Description: Shadows cover the entire battlefield; growing or shrinking at the owners will. The shadows will slowly consume and absorb the reiatsu of any living thing other than the swords true owner that steps into the shadows; increasing the amount absorbed the longer something stands in it. The shadows also will slow down anyone inside them and sap their energy; also increasing in severity the longer it’s in effect. Any shadows that touch the user will slowly increase their speed and agility more and more the longer it’s in effect. The larger the area that is covered: the slower the progression of absorption as well as speed increase. The smaller the area covered: the faster the effects take hold.

Seething Shadow Blade:
In Romaji: Futtō shadouburēdo
In Kanji: 沸騰シャドウブレード
Description: When the command is spoken one of the circles on one of the sword’s blades will be filled with a black gem and a blade made of pure shadow will appear. It will obey the mental commands of the owner but will also act with a mind of its own creating and using unique attack patterns and strikes. The ability can be used up to 6 times, summoning another blade to fight for you with each new incantation as well as filling another hole with a black gem. You may only use the incantation one blade at a time and you must wait to use it again if you used it before. The stronger your reiatsu the less wait time there is. standing in “Consuming Shadows” will also reduce the wait time.


Speed of Shadow:
In Romaji: Kage no sokudo
In Kanji: 影の速度
Description: This ability is constantly in effect while the Shikai is active. For each circle that is filled the faster the user will become. For each gem filled the user will also become more transparent and it will become more difficult to sense their reiatsu. When any amount of the six circles is filled, the incantation can be spoken and the user will become completely invisible and impossible to detect in any way. The users speed will dramatically increase as well. This effect will last for ten seconds for each circle that is filled.

Bankai Abilities
When the Bankai is activated both blades will shrink to the size of a dagger’s blade (30 cm) and the handle will shrink down to 12.5 cm (making to total length 42.5 cm). Each blade will split into 2 blades with a gap in between, still attached to the same handle. The blades focus the reiatsu of the user and allow them to be so sharp they can cut almost anything as well as focusing the reiatsu into the user, increasing their speed even more, to the point where their normal speed is equal to the speed they had when fully activating “Speed of Shadow”. The blades can instantly materialize into the users hands from any location and can be thrown at an incredible speed; maintaining their trajectory towards their target. The wielders appearance will change to the look of an assassin, clad fully in black leather armor and mask. Consuming shadows can also be used while in Bankai.

Shadow Infusion:
In Romaji: Shadō chūnyū
In Kanji: シャドウ注入
Description: The daggers become infused with pure shadow energy; allowing them to become intangible and pass through objects as well as become real again in an instant. These blades also pass this property to the owner but when an object other than the blades becomes intangible it must use a large amount of reiatsu to complete. Any object that is touched by the shadow infused blades will be drained of some of their reiatsu and that energy will be stored by the blades for the owners use. These blades can also absorb reishi from the environment and transfer is into energy for the user. Anything the blades touch will also become marked by shadow energy. The owner of the blades can then teleport instantly to any location that is affected by “Consuming Shadows” or anything that is marked by shadow energy.

Clone of Darkness:
In Romaji: Yami no kurōn
In Kanji: 闇のクローン
Description: Both daggers split down the middle and creates four total daggers. The user of the blades can split any amount if spirit energy he has or has absorbed and creates an identical clone that will use the extra blades; following the users commands but using its own unique attack style. The clone can also perfectly mimic the user’s actions as well as mimic any ability the owner has. The clone can be instantly destroyed and have its energy transferred back to the owner or instantly rebuilt on command.

Striking Shadow:
In Romaji: Kage no sutoraiki
In Kanji: 影のストライキ
Description: The daggers glow purple with shadow energy, condensing and focusing the owners reiatsu into the tips of the blades on both daggers. You can then fire the blast of shadow energy in a highly condensed and accurate form, able of causing massive damage over a small area. This ability can be used with either blade and up to 4 times at once (one for each blade tip) it can also be used many times and does not require very much reiatsu because of its ability to condense the energy before firing.

Final Abilities
Form of Shadow:
In Romaji: Kage no katachi
In Kanji: 影の形
Description: When this ability is activated both daggers will dissipate and the user will be engulfed in shadow, masking their true appearance. A tanto blade that is slightly longer than the twin tanto blades will be made created out of pure shadow energy and will be able to be used by the owner (Blade length is 50 cm long with a handle of 10 cm making the sword 60 cm long). The sword has a total of 6 holes near the hilt which will all start filled with dark energy. For every 15 seconds that this effect is activated one hole will be emptied of its shadow energy. For each hole that is filled the user will gain a ridiculous speed and power increase, decreasing in ability with every hole that is emptied. The user of this ability will be made completely intangible, making them effectively invincible for the duration of this ability. The sword can still strike opponents but no opponents may strike you. This ability will end after all the circles are emptied of their shadow energy (1 minute and 30 seconds). After this ability expires the user will be unable to use their Bankai for 3 days after this technique is used.

The End of All Things Living:
In Romaji: Ikite iru subete no mono no owari o
In Kanji: 生きているすべてのものの終わりを
Description: The user of this ability sacrifices 95% of their spirit energy and temporarily sacrifices their zanpakuto, making it impossible to be used during this time, and in return one target will be completely banished from this universe into an inescapable realm of darkness and despair, slowly consuming the targets soul and sanity, making it impossible for the target to move and causing them unending agony until they die. After the target is finished the zanpakuto will reappear at its user’s side and the user will be heavily drained and fatigued, forced to wait an extremely long time until their energy levels return to normal.

*due to the limitations on this site i may only post one image per post but i have a total of 5 so please feel free to browse through the next 4 posts for more insight on specific abilities of my zanpakuto*

*Image*
The main large katana to the left is the sealed for of the blade.(there are 2 drawing one from the side and front of the blade)
The twin swords to the upper right of the image is the shikai form.
The twin daggers in the upper left of the image is the bankai form.
The twin daggers in the lower right are the blades that the clone summoned with "Clone of Darkness" and you will wield while the ability is active.
The long tanto blade in the lower right is the blade that you will wield during "Form of Shadow".
The circular black piece is the hand guard.

*Please leave feedback. Any and all is greatly appreciated*
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 The Shinigami Shinigami Name: Shibō Engimono, captain of the segundo Division (nibantai, or 二番
sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas grif16 said…
Zanpakuto Name: Sabito (Rust Blade)

 Sealed Form: It takes the form of a basic katana with a red handle and square bronze guard

Release Command: Corrode

 Shikai Appearance: The guard and handle remain the same but the blade turns into a rust covered double edged broadsword blade with flakes of rust constantly falling off and new ones reforming

Shikai Abilities: Anything the sword cuts will instantly begin to rust outward from the initial point of contact. The longer the blade stays in contact with a surface the faster that object will begin to rust. The progression of the rust can be slowed (but not stopped) if the opponent has high amounts of spiritual power. If the blade cuts flesh then the sword introduces a strain of rust poisoning into the bloodstream, while the strain is not lethal but it is incredibly aggressive. From the first contact point on the body the neurotoxin spreads out from there until it infects every part of the body. If the toxin is introduced to the body via an arm or leg wound then the affected limb will suffer from sudden, powerful, and painful muscle contractions. The contractions can cause fractures and muscle tears. If the toxin is introduced to the body via a wound to the body, neck, or head (if the opponent doesn’t have enough spiritual strength to resist) the virus will shut down the body’s entire nervous system and the enemy will go completely limp. If the opponent has enough spiritual power they can resist the nerve shutdown but then every movement the opponent makes is incredibly painful.

Shikai Techniques:

 Sabigumo (Rust Cloud) – This technique is only useful against a living target. With a swing of the blade a large cloud of rust flakes are launched toward a target, and if the target inhales any of it then the poison infiltrates the body. Since the neurotoxin was introduced via the lungs the infection is slow to move to the bloodstream but the toxin does infect the lungs and make it difficult and painful to breathe. If the target remains in the rust cloud for too long they will suffer from fatigue and if they have lower spiritual pressure will pass out

Tachisabi (Earth-Severing Rust) – The wielder drives the blade into a solid surface, the blade then releases a wave of rust that instantly corrodes and collapses it. This technique is useful for collapsing the ground underneath an opponent of for swiftly destroying a building

Bankai Name: Sodesabi (Sleeved Rust)

 Bankai Appearance: The entire blade (handle and all) disintegrates. The wielders hands and arms turns entirely to rust. Any clothing that covered the arms is corroded off. The rusted areas of the skin reach to just below the shoulder with flakes of rust falling and reforming

 Bankai Abilities: The rusted skin acts as armor and constantly releases the Sabigumo. All it takes to rust something away or introduce the toxin into a body is a simple touch. The toxin is now far more aggressive and lethal. If the wielder touches something that does not have a high concentration of spirit energy (like a zanpakuto) then it will instantly rust and whither. If he can maintain prolonged contact with a zanpakuto it to will eventually begin to rust and become brittle. A simple touch will introduce the toxin into the body and from that point everything the toxin infects will slowly become rust and flake away. Entire limbs can wither away or simply fall off if an infected limb becomes too brittle. The bankai strain of infection feasts off spiritual pressure and so the more the opponent has the slower the infection will spread because it will take time to devour all of the energy. If the target has low concentrations of spiritual energy then the toxin will rapidly spread through the entire body and turn it to dust. From the palms of the hands the wielder create spears of rust which can be used for close quarters combat or be thrown and a new one can instantly be created. Any injury inflicted by the spear can also introduce the toxin into the body

 Bankai Techniques:

 Sabiho (Rust Cannon) – By aiming the palm of his hand toward the enemy the wielder can release a blast of compressed air by deoxidizing some of the rust in the palm of the hand. There must be a recovery period of more than 5 seconds in between each sabiho blast per arm allowing the rust on the palm of the hand to oxidize again. The cannon is twice as powerful if the wielder uses both hands for one strike. Since it is just compressed oxygen the rust toxin cannot be transferred if the shot makes contact   
 Sabinawa (Crawling Rust) – The wielder drives his hand or the spear into the ground and from that point a stream of rust rushes forth across the ground at high speed toward the opponent. The stream can split multiple times to strike multiple targets or to strike a single target from many directions. From stream large spikes of rust can burst forth and pierce a single enemy, or many.

 Hozanku (Avalanche Void) – By placing both hands on the ground the wielder can rust the space around an opponent and create a large and very deep sinkhole. If the enemy falls in the wielder can then collapse the sinkhole and crush anything caught inside it

 Sabimane (Rust Clone) – The wielder can create one or two rust clones of himself by sacrificing one or both of his arms. The clones can perform all the attacks as the original. While the clone or clones are active the arm the wielder chose to sacrifice is gone (so if two clones are activated the wielder is armless and therefore defenseless, all he can do have the clones defend him or dodge with flash step). If one of the clones is cut down it will instantly reform and continue its assault. If the wielder and clone or both clones activate the same ability then the ability is twice as powerful. The only way to stop the clones is to attack and grievously injure the original body.

Let me know what you think. Leave comments plz
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blackpanther666 commented…
Powerful, much? Not gonna go with overpowered so much, because that's a pretty cliche way to put it, but it is very powerful - one of the better blades I have seen recently. Yours is only topped sa pamamagitan ng some of Ryuu's blades, I think. Anyway, I like the abilities of this, they are all well thought-out. You did a great job with this blade, dude. sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas
grif16 commented…
thanks bro. i had to do a lot of research about how rust poisoning affects the body. i tried my best to balance it but it did turn out pretty powerful lol. sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas
Ryuuikari commented…
This is a very powerful blade indeed ! I quite like the Sabimane technique, especially the fact that the wielder has to sacrifice their arm(s) to make a clone. Things like that help balance blades. I'm liking what you produce grif :D sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas
sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas thantosquad10 said…
Soooo.... I decided to make another one (as I didn't like the first one I did)
Name: Shibō Karasu (Death Raven)
Appearance: Shibō Karasu takes the form of a 28 inch black bladed katana with a crown shaped guard and a purple handle. Its sheath is a traditional black one with skulls engraved a

Release command: Tobitatsu(take flight)
When released the sword stays the same. Upon uttering the release command, the blade emits black smokey reiatsu in the shape of feathers.

Shikai abilities:
1) Control all forms of darkness. Shadows, darkness in an enemy's heart, etc etc. The user is able to shape the darkness into anything they can imagine. The bigger the object, the more reiatsu it takes. If there is a lack of shadows, the wielder can exchange their reiatsu for an eauivalent amount of darkness.

2)Create living creatures out of shadows. Upon creation, they are given a set amount of reiatsu. They continue to fight indefinitely unless killed or they run out of power. When the creatures are created the user infuses the soul of the dead into the creature. The bigger the creature, the more reiatsu it takes. They can be used for reconnassaince missions or diversions.

3) Shape shadows into illusions to confuse the enemy. It can be molded into a loved one who passed on into the next life, therefore giving the wielder a psychological advantage over an opponent.

4)When the blade of Shibō Karasu hits another zanpakuto, it is able to ressurect whoever that blade has killed.

Techniques:

Hane no ya(feather arrow): The black feather shaped spirit energy rains down on the oppinenet causing severe damage if not blocked or dodged.

Kage no nami (shadow wave): When the wielder swings their blade, an arc of shadows shoots out of the blade. Its not very powerful (about the strength of a bala) but can be used as a distraction.

Shi ga motarasu (death bringer): Shibō Karasu releases a black fog that will rot away all organic matter upon contact (so kido, swords and inanimate objects are unaffected). People will lieutenant level reiatsu or higher are unaffected as well.

Shadou Ryokō (shadow travel): The user is able to use the shadows as a sort of doorway.

Bankai Name:Kurayami no shi ​​ na karasu

Appearance: same as shikai

Bankai abilities:

The user gains wings made of black reiatsu. The downside is that the wings, while able to be reformed, will cause pain like any other limb when cut. The wings are pretty sturdy, able to take sufficient damage before the pain starts to settle in.
1)all shikai abilities are magnified

2)Uingushīrudo (wing shield): the wings gained after releasing the bankai wrap around the user like a sphere, protecting the user from external damage.

3) Kage no Sākuru (shadow circle) : A transparent black dome of reiatsu surrounds the user. If the user wills it, they can drain the energy of whoever steps inside the dome. The dome itself moves with the user. However, using this ability takes about half of the users reiatsu, and makes them unable to use this technique for 8 days. Use of the technique beyond the limit could kill the user or cause them to lose their soul reaper powers.

Feedback please? Id like to know you guys' opinion on it.
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grif16 commented…
bro your blade has the potential to be pretty damn good. the only problem is you are too vague with the blade and its descirption. just add madami detail to the blade to get an idea of what would blade would require just go back and read some of ryuu`s and blackpanther`s post to try and match the detail they put in theirs sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas
thantosquad10 commented…
thanks man! and I added some to it if you still wanna check it out! :) sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas
blackpanther666 commented…
Right back at ya, Grif16. Your blades, so far, have been pretty detailed, too. But, thanks for the mention :) sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas
sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas blackpanther666 said…
Name: Kousa Sumiyaka ('Speed Test')

Release Command: Rewind the past and fast forward to the future, Kousa Sumiyaka!

Bankai: Toki Sekisho Zenkei ('Time Barrier, Perfect Form')

Sealed Form Appearance: A 1.05 meter long katana, with an orange and black handle and a gold coloured guard, that is circular and has 12 notches, essentially as a clock would and two engraved 'clock hands' that point to 12 and 6 positions, as with a clock.

Shikai Special Ability: The user can control the speed of objects around them, with the exception of living, breathing entities, such as Shinigami, humans, Hollows, Arrancar, Quincies and other beings. This ability does, however, affect Zanpakutous and inanimate objects, like rocks, dirt and weapons of any kind, unless they are living entities.

Kaso Kuundou ('Accelerated Motion') The user can cut something and increase its speed by 8x, which includes inanimate objects, Zanpakutous and Kido. The user can speed up a Kido spell, or speed up their own Zanpakuto. This effect lasts for a minute. This ability affects their own Zanpakuto, and Kido, less than inanimate objects, where the effectiveness is half that and lasts for much less time. For Kido and their own Zanpakuto, this effect lasts for 10 seconds and the speed of both are increased by 1/3 of the original speed.

Yuuchou Dougi ('Slow Motion') When the user cuts something, that object is slowed down to an 8th of its original speed. This works only on inanimate objects, like weapons. After a minute, the object is returned to its original speed. There is only an exception for Zanpakutous, where, because they are imbued with reiatsu of the user and the spirit, the spiritual energy cancels out the time-altering effects by having that reiatsu - this ability is reduced to being affected by a 1/3 of its original speed, for 7 seconds.

Rewind Aura: This is a passive Shikai ability, where, once every two minutes, the Zanpakuto affects the time within the last two minutes and rewinds it back by 3 seconds, which cancels out any action made during that 3 seconds. This affects weapons, Kido and inanimate objects.

Shikai Appearance: Their weapon lengthens by 0.6 meters, discarding the guard and a plate-sized clock appears between the blade and the handle, which has also lengthened by 0.15 meters. The blade turns black and gains two protrusions near the tip of the blade, which resemble clock hands.

Bankai Special Ability: Bankai has the same general effect as Shikai, where the speed of objects can be changed. This ability affects Zanpakutous and inanimate objects, like rocks, dirt and weapons of any kind. However, in Bankai, the user can also change the speed of themselves and other living, breathing entities, which includes Shinigami, Hollows, Arrancars, Quincies and Humans.

Kaso Kuundou ('Accelerated Motion') The user can cut something and increase its speed by 16x, which includes inanimate objects, Zanpakutous and Kido. The user can speed up a Kido spell, or speed up their own Zanpakuto. This effect lasts for a minute. This ability affects their own Zanpakuto, and Kido, less than inanimate objects, where the effectiveness is half that and lasts for much less time. For Kido and their own Zanpakuto, this effect lasts for 25 seconds and the speed of both are increased by 4x their original speed. This Bankai ability also affects spiritually-aware beings. Beings are increased by 2x their original speed and the effect lasts for 10 seconds before they return to their original speed.

Yuuchou Dougi ('Slow Motion') When the user cuts something, that object is slowed down to an 16th of its original speed. This works only on inanimate objects, like weapons. After a minute, the object is returned to its original speed. There is only an exception for Zanpakutous, where, because they are imbued with reiatsu of the user and the spirit, the spiritual energy cancels out the time-altering effects by having that reiatsu - this ability is reduced to being affected by a 1/6 of its original speed, for 10 seconds. However, this Bankai ability also affects spiritual-aware beings - beings are slowed by half of their original speed and this lasts for 5 seconds, before it wears off and the being returns back to its original speed.

Time-change Aura: This is a passive Shikai ability, where, once every two minutes, the Zanpakuto affects the time within the last two minutes and rewinds it back by 9 seconds, which cancels out any action made during that 3 seconds. This affects living, breathing entities, such as Shinigami, Hollows, Quincies, Humans and Arrancar, as well as Kido, weapons and inanimate objects. This aura also speeds up the user of this Zanpakuto, after the passive ability activates, by two times every two minutes.

Bankai Appearance: Their weapon lengthens by 0.8 meters, discarding the guard and a plate-sized clock appears between the blade and the handle, which has also lengthened by 0.2 meters. The blade turns black and gains two protrusions near the tip of the blade, which resemble clock hands. With Bankai, the blade also gains a red line down the middle of the blade and a chain hanging from the end of the handle.
Ryuuikari commented…
Hahaha I did enjoy it XDD my favourite feature is its Rewind Aura and its Time-Change Aura. Not only could those passive abilities be incredibly useful for the wielder but it could also potentially be a hindrance ! pag-ibig it (y) sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas
Ryuuikari commented…
Also it reminds me of a blade I posted a while back: link How do you think the two would fare if they clashed ? sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas
whiteflame55 commented…
Intriguing. It seems you did manage to make a time-based blade that's restricted enough to not be blatantly overpowered without being too weak at the same time. I like it, BP. sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas
blackpanther666 commented…
^ Thanks, to both of you. This was something I had been thinking about since I designed Jigokuhensen and did a sumira job of it... I wanted to come up with something, so I finally managed this one, almost two years later. Lol. sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas
sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas Ryuuikari said…
smile
Since I've now been on Fanpop for over three years (woo !!) I thought I'd give back to the forum that brought me here in the first place.
This is my first ever zanpakutō I ever created way back in 2011. link. And here's what it's like now :)



Name: Reimohō (Spirit Mimic)
Sealed appearance: Its sealed form takes the form of a katana with a silver, semi-circular shaped tsuba; the hilt-wrapping is grey and the sheathe is dark grey.
Release command: Absorb and conquer

Shikai appearance: Its appearance does not change in shikai.

Shikai special abilities: When using its special ability, Reimohō’s blade changes to perfectly mimic another zanpakutō, in appearance and abilities. It is only able to mimic one zanpakutō at a time; however it can freely change the zanpakutō it mimics. The wielder must be able to see the opponent’s zanpakutō to be able to mimic it. It is extremely difficult and taxing to properly mimic a bankai’s abilities and appearance. The mimicry of a zanpakutō can be sustained for as long as willed. Reimohō will not automatically mimic an opponent’s zanpakutō. The only thing that is not mimicked is the power and skill behind the abilities and techniques.

Bankai name: Mugen Reimohō (Infinite Spirit Mimic)
Bankai appearance: In its bankai form, Mugen Reimohō becomes similar to a chokutō; its hilt remains the same but the tsuba becomes circular and the blade becomes double edged. Mugen Reimohō gains a silver-coloured tassel at the base of the hilt. The wielder‘s shihakushō gains a mainly light grey colour scheme with hints of silver.

Bankai special abilities: Mugen Reimohō’s main ability is to be able to perfectly mimic the abilities and techniques of every zanpakutō in the wielder’s spatial proximity (anything within a two hundred metre radius). If the zanpakutō isn’t within the wielder’s spatial proximity then Mugen Reimohō can’t mimic its abilities. It can mimic both shikai and bankai abilities and techniques however it cannot mix and merge the abilities of multiple mimicked zanpakutō. When Mugen Reimohō mimics an ability or technique its appearance doesn’t change; the abilities and techniques are manifested from Mugen Reimohō’s blade itself. The mimicked abilities and techniques look identical to the originals except that they appear greyscale in colour. Unlike in shikai, Mugen Reimohō will automatically mimic and have access to another zanpakutō’s abilities and techniques once the zanpakutō enters the wielder’s spatial proximity. Like in shikai, the only thing that is not mimicked is the power and skill behind the abilities and techniques.

Bankai technique(s):
Tamashī Taihō (Soul Cannon): This technique fires a powerful energy wave of concentrated spiritual energy. This technique is actually all the power of the abilities Mugen Reimohō has gained merging and manifesting in the form of an energy wave. Subsequently the more abilities that are mimicked the more powerful the technique. The energy wave is the same colour as the wielder’s spiritual energy with a thick black outline.

Reidōka (Spirit Assimilation): A powerful but extremely taxing technique, where the wielder temporarily merges with Mugen Reimohō. The wielder’s appearance changes: they gain blade-like extensions that protrude from the ends of their elbows, from their shoulders, from the sides of the forearms and from the back of their calves, their fingers become bladed claws and their skin takes on a metallic appearance. This new form enables the wielder to perform all the abilities and techniques that Mugen Reimohō could perform and the wielder’s skin becomes much denser and harder (functioning quite similar to an Arrancar’s Hierro). However, this technique is physically difficult to sustain and subsequently leaves the wielder drained of almost all their spiritual energy; in addition Mugen Reimohō reverts to its sealed form after the technique has been cancelled.
grif16 commented…
hahaha bro you and i think a lot alike. i had a blade with the same idea as this a long time ago. i think its back on page 110 sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas
grif16 commented…
but i do like this one. what did you think about my last post, the sabito? sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas
Ryuuikari commented…
Yeah I think we've all had the copy-every-power idea at least once haha ! Couldn't find your one unfortunately... and yeah my response is up above on your post ^^ sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas
blackpanther666 commented…
^ Not me. Surprisingly, this is one type of ability tht I'm not overly interested in. However, I enjoy this blade, Ryuu. You did an excellent job here, dude. sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas
sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas Ryuuikari said…
Another one from the vault. Inspired somewhat by Sakanade.



Name: Kyōgan (Devil Eye)
Sealed appearance: In its sealed form it takes the appearance of a regular katana with a circular tsuba, maroon-coloured hilt-wrapping and a ring, big enough to fit a finger through it, on the side of the pommel. It has a light red coloured sheathe.
Release command: Deny

Shikai appearance: In shikai Kyōgan takes the form of a 1.2 metre long chokutō. The blade of the chokutō is 90cm long and has a chakram (with a radius of 8cm) embedded in the middle of the blade. The inside edge of the chakram is the sharpest edge of the blade. There are two holes above and below the chakram along the length of the blade. The ring remains on the side of the pommel. (I had the pleasure of Kevy drawing the shikai for me – it’s below)

Shikai special abilities: Kyōgan has the power to suppress the powers of a single spiritual weapon such as a Shinigami or Arrancar’s zanpakutō, a Quincy’s reishi weapon and Vollständig or a Fullbringer’s Fullbring. Whatever spiritual weapon Kyōgan cuts, has its powers and abilities suppressed; the level of suppression depends on the level of the target’s reiatsu in comparison to the wielder’s reiatsu. If the wielder has stronger reiatsu than the target, the powers and abilities of the target’s spiritual weapon are completely suppressed and are thus negated completely; if the wielder and the target have reiatsu relatively equal in strength then the powers and abilities of the target’s spiritual weapon are suppressed by roughly 40%-85%; if the target has stronger reiatsu than the wielder then the powers and abilities of the target’s spiritual weapon are suppressed by around 5%-30%. If a spiritual weapon is being suppressed and Kyōgan cuts another spiritual weapon then the previous spiritual weapon becomes unsuppressed while the new spiritual weapon becomes suppressed instead. In addition if a spiritual weapon has its shikai, bankai, Resurrección, Vollständig or Fullbring activated and its powers and abilities are fully suppressed (i.e. negated) the spiritual weapon is forcibly reverted to its sealed form and rendered unable to be released. The suppression of a spiritual weapon lasts until either Kyōgan is resealed or the wielder is knocked unconscious.

Shikai technique(s):
Tamashī Kowasu (Soul Shatter): An instinctive technique used against any part of a target’s spiritual weapon that comes inside the bladed chakram. If part of the target’s spiritual weapon comes inside of the chakram a thin burst of energy instantly fills the area inside the chakram, thus cutting/breaking/decapitating part of the spiritual weapon. This technique also allows the diameter of the chakram to increase to a maximum of almost 90cm; however as the chakram diameter increases in size, the blade decreases in length. The technique can be used in shikai and bankai.

Bankai name: Onigiri Kyōgan (Demon Mist Devil Eye)
Bankai release: The wielder puts their index finger through the hole on the side of the pommel causing Kyōgan to begin rotating around the wielder’s finger. Then the wielder initiates bankai.
Bankai appearance: In bankai Onigiri Kyōgan becomes a double headed chokutō with each blade resembling its shikai form except that the blades are now each a metre in length. In essence it looks like two of Kyōgan’s shikai were connected base-to-base to form a dual bladed weapon. The handle in between retains its maroon-coloured hilt-wrapping and has a finger-sized hole in the centre and the two blades lose their guard and tsuba. The blades are completely black in colour while the inside edge of the chakrams are silver. Like in shikai, the inside edge of each chakram have the sharpest edges.

Bankai special abilities: Onigiri Kyōgan has the same abilities as in shikai except on a larger scale. On command Onigiri Kyōgan absorbs some of the wielder’s spiritual energy and releases a sweet-smelling demon-coloured mist that when inhaled suppresses the powers and abilities of the victims’ spiritual weapons. The mist covers large areas in very short spaces of time and dissipates naturally after lingering for several seconds; the mist can be blown away by a strong enough release of reiatsu. The suppressive effects can be targeted at or neglected from specific persons. Like in shikai the level of suppression depends entirely on how the target’s reiatsu compares to the wielder’s reiatsu (regardless of how many other persons’ spiritual weapons are being suppressed at the same time). If the wielder has stronger reiatsu than the target, the powers and abilities of the target’s spiritual weapon are completely suppressed and are thus negated completely; if the wielder and the target have reiatsu relatively equal in strength then the powers and abilities of the target’s spiritual weapon are suppressed by roughly 50%-90%; if the target has stronger reiatsu than the wielder then the powers and abilities of the target’s spiritual weapon are suppressed by around 15%-30%. If said spiritual weapon is fully suppressed (i.e. negated) then it is forcibly reverted to its sealed form. The suppressive effects last as long as the wielder can maintain it; the more spiritual weapon that are suppressed or the stronger the reiatsu that the targets have, the harder it is to maintain. Spiritual weapons can still be suppressed by cutting.
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 Another one from the vault. Inspired somewhat sa pamamagitan ng Sakanade. Name: Kyōgan ([i]Devil Eye[/i]) S
blackpanther666 commented…
This is pretty interesting, dude. A really well-written blade. It seems that you onloy do those - well-written ones. XD sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas
Ryuuikari commented…
Haha thanks BP, I'll be posting a lot madami in the coming weeks :P sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas
sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas Ryuuikari said…
Another one from the vault...



Name: Tenshite (Angel Hands)
Sealed appearance: It looks like a regular katana, with an octagonal guard and magenta hilt-wrapping and sheathe.
Release command: Amplify

Shikai appearance: Tenshite takes the form of a pair of metallic silver and magenta gauntlets that extend into magenta coloured metal-clad gloves; the glove tips are silver. On the back of each glove is the yin-yang symbol.

Shikai special abilities: Tenshite has the ability to augment the capabilities of biological, mechanical and technological mechanisms sevenfold via touch; this power works by Tenshite absorbing some of the wielder’s spiritual energy and then infusing the spiritual energy into a target. When augmenting something Tenshite glows and spiritual energy crackles all over it. The time the augmentation lasts depends on how much spiritual energy Tenshite infuses into the target and how quickly the target then uses up the wielder’s spiritual energy.

Shikai technique(s):
Jūden Kobushi (Charging Fist): A technique where Tenshite absorbs and then charges the wielder’s spiritual energy until it begins to crackle enabling the wielder to use the charged power to increase the power of their punches fivefold (twentyfold in bankai). It can be used in shikai and bankai.

Bankai name: Shinwan (God’s Arms)
Bankai release: The wielder puts their hands together, as if in prayer, and then initiates bankai.
Bankai appearance: In bankai Shinwan takes the form of segmented armoured, silver and magenta gauntlets that encompass the entirety of both arms and extend into metal-clad gloves. At the shoulder of each arm gauntlets is a thick metal chain that connects the arms together at the back. Each knuckle has a small spike on it and the yin-yang symbol remains on the back of each glove. The wielder’s shihakushō becomes sleeveless as a result of the release.

Bankai special abilities: Shinwan retains its ability to augment the capabilities of biological, mechanical and technological mechanisms via touch, however in bankai it augments these capabilities up to 30x. Like in shikai the time the augmentation lasts depends on how much spiritual energy Shinwan infuses into the target and how quickly the target uses up the wielder’s spiritual energy. Because of the nature of Shinwan’s ability, the wielder’s physiology and senses are enhanced to peak levels.

Bankai technique(s):
Jūden Bakufū (Charging Blast): A strong technique where Shinwan absorbs an incredible amount of the wielder’s spiritual energy until it begins to crackle violently all over the armour (maximum charge time is roughly three seconds), then the wielder clasps their hands together and looses a powerful blast of red spiritual energy (similar in appearance to Hiryū Gekizoku Shinten Raihō).

Jūden Kyūtai (Charging Sphere): Shinwan absorbs and charges (with a maximum charge time of five seconds) the wielder’s spiritual energy then releases a red, electric-like energy that forms a red, translucent protective sphere around the wielder and any other targets; the sphere has a maximum 12 ft radius around the wielder. The longer Shinwan charges the stronger the protective sphere becomes. At maximum charge time the sphere is near impenetrable; they are still somewhat susceptible to the effects of temperature however. The wielder is rendered immobile inside the sphere until they decide to release the technique.
blackpanther666 commented…
Nice! Hand-to-hand Zanpakutous are very interesting! I've been meaning ti make something like this for years, but I just never decided what I wanted to do. The attacks are pretty good, too. XD sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas
Ryuuikari commented…
Thank-a-you man XD to be honest, I've never really been a big tagahanga of this blade myself. I will (im)patiently await your hand-to-hand zanpakutō, but don't leave me waiting too long haha XDD sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas
blackpanther666 commented…
Lol, it certainly isn't my tuktok priority, ibingiay that I want to write a long post for our fight on Resurgence, but I'll try get it up when I can, dude. XD sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas
grif16 commented…
nice one bro. there are too few hand to hand combat zanpakutos sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas
sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas mangaman222 said…
any body know where i can get english to japanese in english letters? until then i have to do it only english
Ryuuikari commented…
link sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas
Ryuuikari commented…
This one changes kanji (Japanese symbols) to romaji (Japanese in Roman characters): link sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas
blackpanther666 commented…
^ Haha, cheeky bugger. XDDDD sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas
sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas mangaman222 said…
zanpakto: regular except the blade is an uber hard mirror. he uses the mirror to blind the oponents by reflecting light to their eyes. the mirror also reflects sound and the other senses. he can reflect the senses with illusions.
i know its crazy for a zapankto
release command to shikai: roar! my pet

shikai: it becomes invisible unless you're touching it. it can also become whip like and while in its whip like state it can lenghthen and shorten but when its normal the change in length is gone. when it touches something it can change the gravity thats effecting that object.

1st ability: caging blast
it is instantaneous but it causes no immediate harm. what it does is wraps them in near indestructible chains

2nd ability: god sphere
at the tip of your blade a tiny sphere appears. the more spirit energy put into it the larger it grows it can be aimed. everything inside it can be totally controled. the thing you want to control must be 100% in, if 3/4 of a sword is in you cannot control the sword. HOWEVER, if a person holding a sword is in but the sword is out you can control him. it cannot be moved from the tip of your blade.

3rd ability:release!
an enourmes blast of spiritual energy coming out from you

bankai release: fall to the pits of hell!

bankai: you are moved to a empty dome. the walls of the dome are mirrors. each mirror can create anything that is smaller than it. only one mirror creation at a time can be real though, be others are illusions. you also control everything in the room except living beings unless they have willingly alowed you to control them.
sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas Ryuuikari said…
Another from the vault. It's been reforged a few times along the way.




Name: Sōkage (Twin Shadows)
Sealed appearance: When sealed it takes the form of a stylized kodachi with a clip-point blade and black hilt-wrapping.
Release command: Hide in the shadows

Shikai appearance: Sōkage splits into two identical kodachi. The appearance of each kodachi is identical to its sealed form except the blade turns completely black with a crimson edge.

Shikai special abilities: Although Sōkage is used mainly for close combat melee its main ability, which is automatic, is to make the wielder’s reiatsu undetectable. The level at which the wielder’s reiatsu is masked depends on the brightness of the wielder’s vicinity with their reiatsu gradually being masked more and more as the light levels drop. In bright daylight the wielder’s reiatsu is unmasked and easy to sense; in total darkness, the wielder’s reiatsu is nigh undetectable.

Shikai technique(s):
Sō-yami Seppun (Twin Shadow Darkness): When Sōkage cuts or stabs a victim, all of the victim’s senses, except their sense of touch, are dampened. The victim’s sense of pain is intensified however. The level of sensory suppression and pain intensifying increases the more the victim is cut with this technique. The blades release a wispy, shadow-like smoke while this technique is active. It can also be used in bankai.

Bankai name: Kagehada (Shadow Skin)
Bankai release: The wielder positions the two kodachi, so that the tips touch each other, causing them to begin rotating. Then the wielder initiates bankai and the kodachi bursts into black energy that engulfs the wielder.
Bankai appearance: In bankai Kagehada takes the form of black body armour which replaces the wielder’s shihakushō. This takes the form of a black figure-hugging combat body suit complete with heavily stylized dark silver forearm and foreleg gauntlets, a pair of clawed black metal-clad gloves, form fitting black jika-tabi, a slim black chest plate, slim black shoulder guards, slim black torso and back plates and slim thigh guards. When the light levels drop and it gets darker, Kagehada forms a featureless form-fitting black mask that conceals the wielder’s entire head, leaving only their eyes exposed. Small spikes also gradually form over the plates, guards and gauntlets as the light levels drop and it gets darker.

Bankai special abilities: Kagehada retains the automatic ability to make the wielder’s reiatsu undetectable depending on the light levels; in total darkness the wielder’s reiatsu cannot be detected by any means whatsoever. As a by-product Kagehada causes the wielder’s vision to be perfect at all light levels.

Bankai technique(s):
Sō-yami Heika, Kagehada (Twin Darkness Weapons, Shadow Skin): Using the wielder’s spiritual energy, Kagehada forms either a pair of solid black energy blades (resembling basic kodachi) or a 6’6” long black energy spear. The energy weapon generated glows red.

Kage no Hontai, Kagehada (Body of Shadows, Shadow Skin): This technique enables the wielder to transform their body into that of a shadow, making them nigh invulnerable to physical attacks. However the wielder can only use this technique when they are standing in a shadow; also it only works in shadows and does not function in normal darkness.
sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas mangaman222 said…
name: tenrai rihi (divine judgement of right and wrong)

release command: issaishujou wakusei kieuseru! (all living creatures on this planet, DIE!)

shikai: 2 sickles (cresent shaped blades). each one is bound to his wrist by a chain. the chain does not have a limit of length, thus he can use it as both a long range and close combat weapon.

shikai powers: senpuu shikyo (whirlwind of death), this power is mainly for fighting of groups or people that can easily dodge a precise attack. by waving his arms around wildly and increasing the length of the chain he creates a storm of death. tou tairyouki keibatsu (sickle scales of judgement), to do this attack he must be holding both sickles. 5 seconds after this attack has started the sickles will glow. if they glow white noting will happen. if it glows black he shall die the next time he exhales

bankai: shikyo gai (death scythe). its a scythe. when bankai is activated his reflexes are ten times faster than ichigo's bankai speed but his speed and strength don't increase.

powers: tenrai kira (divine killer), there are 2 requirements for this attack. 1) the user must have drank at least one cup of the persons blood. 2)he must have cut off part of his opponents body that was larger than a finger. once the's are fulfilled the enemy shall die.

captain class. all other powers unknown

grif16 commented…
if i had to give any payo about this blade and the last it would be to give madami detail and to balance them a little. they are all kill in onr hit sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas
mangaman222 commented…
i'll try another sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas
grif16 commented…
just remember to balance it and give detail sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas
sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas mangaman222 said…
this is him in bankai.
 this is him in bankai.
sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas unknown99 said…
Shikai: Sabre
Sealed Form: Saber
Command Release: Sugata o kesu (Disappear)
Bankai: Fukushū no kishi
Blade disappears like Haineko and Senbonzakura and the blade will be invisible but made of heavy reiatsu.

Shikai Abilities: Shi no senjin (Thousand blades of death)
Blade will continuously slice enemy from the wielder's direction for a limited time.

Bankai Description: Hilt disappear turning wielder having to have control with his hand.
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sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas unknown99 said…
One more...

Shikai: Kumo no kaze (Cloud Breeze)
Sealed form: Broadsword
Command release: Sugu ni sore o fuku (Blow them away)
Bankai: Tokumei no kyōfū (Anonymous Gale)
Shikai Description: Blade widens, turning transparent like glass.

Shikai abilities: Kaze no ko (Wind Saw)

Makes a very thin saw made out of wind at the edge of the blade. When thrown, saw turns into a circle, able to cut through normal katana in 1.5 seconds.

Chissoku (Suffocation)

Needs wielder's aim to shoot the wind to the target and if hit, target will suffocate, lacking oxygen. However, wielder will require a lot of reiatsu to control this technique.

Ichi-jin no kaze (Gust of Wind)

Blows the enemy away with a high-speed pressurized wind. Only effective for cover or stealth.

Bankai Abilities: Bankai abilities are mostly similar to shikai, only used without the sword due to bankai. In bankai, the attack can have an increase of damage attack or an extension to the attack. Also, in bankai, the wielder will sort of merge with the zanpakuto spirit making his/her hair like the zanpakuto spirit and the outfit like the zanpakuto spirit.

Kumo no Kaze: Kurosuburēdo (Wind Saw: Cross Blades)

Similar to Shikai ability but only with a crossing blade making an x or + shape depending on which angle it is shot on.

Ichi-jin no Kaze: Saikuron no Me (Gust of Wind: Eye of the Cyclone)

Creates not only wind that moves in one direction but in a circular motion like a cyclone, throwing the enemy in a semi-fixed direction away from the wielder.

Kaze no Ken (Sword of Wind)

Well, the wielder still needs a weapon than a hand doesn't he/she?
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grif16 commented…
bro you need to add madami detail and balance it sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas
unknown99 commented…
U satisfied? sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas
sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas grif16 said…
Zanpakuto Name: Nenshougasu (Combustion Gas)

 Sealed Appearance: It takes the form of two separate swords, a basic katana and a wakizashi. Each with pale green handles and a guard in the shape of two serpents, each devouring one another from the tail

Release Command: Ignite

 Shikai Appearance: Upon release the katana retains its size and shape except thin layer of pale green gas envelopes the blade and seethes out with every movement of the sword. The wakizashi retains its size and shape also, except the blade turns from steel to a dark flint.

Shikai Abilities: By channeling spiritual energy into the katana the blade can produce a pale green gas that can then be ignited by the dragging the flint wakizashi across the katana and sending a spark of spirit energy into the gas cloud. The size of the explosion depends on the size of the gas cloud that is ignited. By channeling extra energy into the blade the amount of gas produced and the rate that it is released can be increased or decreased. The wielder can also increase the thickness of the cloud to use as a smoke screen. The thickness of the cloud does not increase the explosive power of the blast, only the size of the cloud.

Shikai Techniques:

1. Hebisatsu (Splitting Snake): With a swing of the katana two gas cloud snakes that fly toward the enemy. The gas can only travel approximately 100 feet because after that point the gas will begin to dissipate. Once the snakes reach their target they can be ignited, causing a large explosion at where the snake’s heads are.

2. Gasufunsui (Gas Geyser): By driving the katana into the ground the wielder can create a power gas geyser anywhere within a 200 foot radius of the point of contact. The geyser can be detonated be dragging the flint wakizashi across the katana, to remotely detonate the gas or the wielder can remove the blade from the ground and the geyser will continue to spew for the next several minutes before running dry. Within that time the wielder can still detonate the geyser only if he is close enough to do so

3. Hebihigeki (Fire Snake Strike): By dragging the katana across the wakizashi the wielder can ignite the gas around the blade and then launch the flame at a target

Bankai Name: Maruchihebi Yuugao (Multi-Headed Snake Gourd)

 Bankai Appearance: The katana releases a thick cloud of gas the envelopes the user. Then once the gas clears the wielder is shown wearing four large grey gourds. Two are strapped to the wielders back with white cloth ropes. The other two are strapped with white cloth ropes to each side of the wielders waist. Each gourd is 2 feet long and 1 foot wide. Each gourd has a different colored serpent emblem on it. The one on the right of his back has a red serpent emblem, the one on the left of his back has a blue serpent emblem, the one on his right hip has a yellow serpent emblem, and the one on his left hip has a white serpent emblem. The wielder is also revealed to be sitting cross-legged on the head of a large armored black snake. The snake is roughly 75 feet long and 2 feet thick with a head large enough to sit on.

 Bankai Abilities: Because the gourds are so large the armored black snake the wielder is riding is not for combat but for movement to help compensate for loss of mobility due to the gourds weight. Each gourd can produce a different colored gas snake. The color of the snake depends on the gourd they are released from (red gas snake from the red emblem gourd, blue from blue, yellow from yellow, and white from white). Each snake has a different ability depending on its gourd. The wielder can also combine two of the gas snakes to create a new snake with a new ability. Each arm can only control one snake at a time. The wielder can either pull two snakes from the same gourd or one from two separate gourds. If he combines two separate snakes into one he then must use both hands to control the new one. The snakes can only stretch up to 300 feet from the wielder. The wielder can instantly release control of a current snake and pull a new one from any gourd. If the wielder releases control of a snake it will instantly evaporate into mist and fly away.

Bankai Techniques:

 Riding Serpent Techniques:

1. Tabatate (Coil Shield): The riding snake rapidly coils around the wielder with the armor plating facing outward in order to create an Omni-directional shield. While the coil shield is active the wielder cannot take any offensive action. Not until the snake completely uncoils can the wielder take action.

 Primary Gourd Serpent Techniques:

1. Red Emblem Gourd: The red emblem gourd produces a red gas snake that can solidify its form in order to strike with enough force to crush bone or rock with ease.

2. Blue Emblem Gourd: The blue emblem gourd produces a blue gas snake that can steal the heat from anything it touches and freeze it solid        

3. Yellow Emblem Gourd: The yellow emblem gourd produces a yellow gas snake that can spit a yellow gas bomb at a target. Upon impact the bomb explodes with incredible force.

4. White Emblem Gourd: The white emblem gourd produces a glowing white gas snake that is intangible. It cannot attack or be harmed in anyway. Its only use is to combine with one of the other snakes in order to double its effectiveness in some way

 Serpent Combination Techniques:

1. Iseiniiro Hebi (Powered Red Serpent): By combining the red and white gas snakes the wielder can create a glowing red snake that is twice the size of the original and can solidify its form to complete pulverize whatever it strikes with twice the force and speed of the original

2. Iseiaoi Hebi (Powered Blue Serpent): By combining the blue and white gas snakes the wielder can create a glowing blue snake that can hyper freeze anything it strikes at, and from the point where the snake struck the ice will spread out and freeze anything touching the ground within 30 feet. The snake can also launch ice spikes

3. Iseikiiro Hebi (Powered Yellow Serpent): By combining the yellow and white gas snakes the wielder can create a three-headed glowing yellow snake. From each of the heads the snake can launch a concentrated yellow gas bomb that can detonate with twice the power and speed of the original

4. Murasakidoku Hebi (Violet Poison Serpent): By combining the red and blue gas snakes the wielder can create a purple snake that can inject a lethal poison into anything it bites. Once the poison enters the blood stream the victim will suffer from dizziness, coughing, difficulty breathing, and erratic heartbeat. If the target cannot have the poison treated within an hour or 2, the target will go into cardiac arrest and die. All the effects can be slowed by elevated spiritual pressure. Also defeating the wielder will neutralize the poison.

5. Guri-nsui Hebi (Green Acid Serpent): By combining the blue and yellow gas snakes the wielder can create a green snake made of a powerful acid that can quickly dissolve anything it touches. It also has the ability spit a glob of acid at an enemy.

6. Orenjikaen Hebi (Orange Flame Serpent): By combining the red and yellow gas snakes the wielder can create an orange snake made of compressed flame. Anything or body part the snake strikes at and makes contact with will spontaneously burst into flames. The flames can be smothered by elevated amounts of spirit energy. 

 Last Resort Ability:

Neji orochigeki (Rainbow Hydra Strike): Once this ability ends the bankai will automatically deactivate and take the majority on the wielders spiritual energy with it. Upon activation all ten gas snakes appear around the wielder. The wielder can control each serpent telepathically. Due to the massive amount of concentration and energy it requires the technique can only remain active for 20 seconds.


I hope its not OP but comment and let me know what you think
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Ryuuikari commented…
Okay okay okay okay okay. First things first, I thought this was amazing. pag-ibig the amount of detail put into this and I actually quite enjoyed the snake and colour themes. sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas
Ryuuikari commented…
Now, it has arguably too many technique in bankai which, in my opinion, makes it OP. Despite this, I don't really mind because I feel it would take away from the beauty of the zanpakuto if you removed any of the techniques. Personally I can't see how the Kuroraikou Hebi technique produces lightning but, uy that's just me. Also despite Neji Orochigeki being so OP I still like it because it has that 20 segundo and the bankai deactivation afterwards. sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas
Ryuuikari commented…
Personally I would scrap Kuroraikou Hebi but it's down to you man ! 75 feet seems madami reasonable :) Apart from the fact that the RP has moved into its final battles, I'd see nothing wrong with that. Message crazieone106 and ask him, he's in charge. sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas
sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas CarpeNoctem1213 said…
I just discovered this thread last night, and as my obsession with Bleach is currently at it's peak, I decided to try it, I'm not the best at description, especially since it's my first attempt, but I may as well try to show some people lol. Not sure about the power balance, though.

Zanpakuto/Shikai name: Shadōgādian (Shadow Guardian)
Releasing: The wielder holds the sword with one hand and twirls it over their head while saying, "Kurayaminonakade dansu (Dance in darkness), Shadōgādian!"

Sealed form: 28" steel katana with a black guard in the shape of a skull, and a black and red hilt.
Shikai description: When released, the hilt curves and becomes entirely black metal with a silver spike at the end, the guard also becomes silver, and the blade changes to become entirely made of dancing shadows.

Shikai abilities
Kage myūjikku (Shadow Music): The blade fires a bolt of shadow that releases a musical humming sound as it flies at the opponent.
Kagenokabe (Shadow Wall): The shadows around the wielder flow like water and form a small protective wall that blocks ranged spiritual attacks.
Shadoukurōku (Shadow Cloak) Covers the wielder in a layer of shadow that acts as an armor against spiritual attacks but is not effective against physical attacks.

Bankai name: Shadōdansā (Shadow Dancer)
Description: The blade dissolves into shadow which splits into two that become huge raven wings on the wielder's back, and the hilt flows up to become a large shadowy skeletal claw over the wielder's sword arm.
Bankai abilities:
Shadoufōmu (Shadow Form): The wielder temporarily becomes a shadow, in turn becoming untouchable by the enemy while gaining the ability to travel through shadows is if they're portals.
Kage no kyūshū (Shadow Absorption) The claw draws in all shadows around the wielder, growing in size and power. It can then be used to slash an enemy to ribbons, or fire all the shadows it has absorbed in a single davasting burst of dark energy.
Shadoufurarī (Shadow Flurry) The wings draw in the shadows around the wielder, then flap several times, each time releasing a flurry of thousands of shadow blades, similar to the Shikai form.
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sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas KJ-number-1 said…
big smile
Here's my Zanpakto.



Zanpakto/Shikai Name: KageKitsune (Shadow Fox )

Release: Zutazuta ni sorera o hikisaku (Tear them to shreds.)

Unreleased appearance: In its unreleased state it takes the form of a 12 inch Wakizashi. it's hilt is red in colour with a pair of black ribbons wrapped around it, which trail off the end. the guard is shaped like a Foxes fang with the point going upwards alongside he blade.

Shikai Apearance: In Shikai the Blade remains the same length but has thickened a few inches. Think Ichigo's sword only shorter. Along the Blade are several 2 inch fang's protruding from the blade each one black in colour., giving it a large serrated edge. the hilt is completely wrapped in the black ribbons along with a foxes tail coming of the end.

Shikai abilities:

Ability 1: Kage no warutsu (Shadow Waltz)
A move that is similar to flash step in that it allows for quick movement. It uses the fox tall on the end of the hilt to provide the illusion of shadows consuming the wielder and then causing them to vanish. Unlike flash step it is nearly impossible for the enemy to predict where it goes.

Ability 2: Fokkusufangu kōshō (Fox Fang Bite)
This ability focuses the user's reitsu into the Protrusion's (or Fangs) making them appear to be cloaked in shadows. The fangs do nearly three times as much damage when this ability is active.

Bankai: Shadōfokkusu kishi no kiba (Fang of the shadow fox knight)

Bankai Appearance: In Bankai the Sword remains the same in shape except now the blade is completely black and missing the fox tail on the hilt. the left arm of the wielder is now clad in a silver armour which come to a lance at the end in replacement of a hand. The wielder has a long fox tail hair piece flowing down their back.

Bankai Abilities:

Ability 1: Kage no warutsu, kyūkyoku (Shadow waltz, Ultimate)
The same as the Shikai ability except impossible for the enemy to predict and harder for the user to control.

Ability 2: Kitsune no sutoraiki (Strike of the Fox)
small spikes of metal shoot off the Lance, which in turn manipulates the light around them giving the impression that blades of shadow are being shot at the enemy. the attack while weak is unblock able due to it's speed and the spike tiny size.

Ability 3: Hasai kage no kiba (Shredding Shadow fang)
The fangs concentrate reitsu into themselves and break off from the main blade. they then spiral towards the opponent, they give off the appearance of a blanket of shadows moving towards the target before shredding through their opponent. the attack s incredibly strong and it is impossible to defend against it, however it is a last resort tactic, due to the fact it completely drains the user of all spirit energy.

I'd say my Bankai's biggest weakness is that it's attacks are not 100% reliable even though they are strong. I may post my Shinigami in a bit too.
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blackpanther666 commented…
I actually kind of like this... it would make a great blade for a Stealth Forces Captain. Though, I do have one comment... Kitsune No Sutoraiki - the explanation you gave for why it is unblockable isn't really good enough... against many Shinigami, it wouldn't work like that. Imaginbe trying to pull that on one of the Captains, or Aizen... it simply wouldn't happen. I suggest adding to that ability and coming up with a better explanation, too. otherwise, I like it. Also, if you're gonna post a character, please post on one of the character forums... this is only for Zanpakuto, not characters. sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas
KJ-number-1 commented…
Yeh i agree with you there it doesn't make much sense and wouldn't work in battle. If I were to remove the bit about confusing the brain t might make a bit madami sense, I just don't really know ho to explain it. Thanks for commenting though. sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas
sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas CODYFLAME626 said…
Hello again, I'm back and I've reworked my old zanpakuto, editing it's abilities a bit and adding a complete back story to my shinigami. It's a very long article but I hope those who read it will thoroughly enjoy it. Any and all feedback is greatly appreciated. for those of who may only want to read about my zanpakuto and not my shinigami, the information about the sword begins directly below the line of ****

The Shinigami
Shinigami Name: Shibō Engimono, captain of the Second Division (nibantai, or 二番隊) and leader of the Stealth Force (Onmitsukidō, or 隠密機動)

Origin:
When Shibō Engimono lived in the human world he was known as Kokoro Moeru and lived in urban Japan with his single mother. He was born in Kyoto and lived in the rural area of the city with his mother making enough money to provide them with a decent, but lackluster lifestyle. They lived their life in a moderate way, where Kokoro explored the forests around his home to find some source of excitement.
During July when Kokoro had turned 15 they traveled all the way to the downtown area of the city to participate in the Gion festival but their journey ended short. Before entering the main festival they were ambushed by a drug syndicate, where they were robbed and murdered. The next thing Kokoro knew, he was alone and afraid; forced to head to the Rukongai, where he was sent to the West Rukongai in district 78, Kogekeikoku (Scorched Valley, 焦げ渓谷).
The district was a complete wasteland, filled with murderers and thieves. Kokoro soon found himself fending for his life, so he learned to become a master of stealth and shadows. He also gained the ability to be fast and agile, being able to steal from almost anyone with ease. He spent his free time out in the forest building his strength and speed to unimaginable levels in order to aid him. While he was training one day, he heard a scream from the distance and went to investigate. When he reached the source of the scream found it to be a girl, just a few years younger than him, surrounded by three assailants. He acted quickly and fought them all, knocking them unconscious, and told the girl to leave and find safety somewhere else because this was no place for a child. After which he searched through the assailant’s belongings, looking for valuables, and found a pitch black Asauchi, with a serrated edge; and decided to take it for himself. Much to his annoyance, however, the girl decided to stay with him, asking him to teach her how to fight like he did. After a short time, he agreed and decided to teach her what he knew. During his time in the 78th district he had learned to use his speed and size to his advantage, striking from his opponent’s blind spots and taking advantage of their weaknesses with no regard for honor. He lived by the saying “If it must be done, Then it will be done; by any means necessary.”
Through their training together they bonded together and grew to be as close as family. Since neither of them remembered their names he nicknamed her Meiwaku (迷惑, Annoyance) because she never stopped asking questions. She nicknamed him Kage (影, Shadow) because he loved spending his time in the darkness. Over time they become masters of combat. Meiwaku preferred hand to hand combat, but Kage could never be torn from his pitch black sword. It was at that time when Kage’s life changed for the worse. Meiwaku tried to steal from a district wide syndicate and was killed. When Kage found out that she was gone from his life forever he went on a rampage, annihilating the syndicate and killing any member he could find. Through this, he earned the name Shibō Engimono (死亡縁起物, Death Bringer). After he exterminated the gang, he made a final decision that he would become a shinigami so that he would never have to deal with the pain of living in this wasteland anymore. He journeyed to the Shinōreijutsuin (真央霊術院, Spiritual Arts Academy) and on the way constantly practiced with his Asauchi eventually imprinting his soul upon it and turning it into his Zanpakutō. Eventually he learned to communicate with his Zanpakutō’s spirit, a dark angel, and learned its name (and Shikai) before even reaching the academy. After reaching the academy he further improved his abilities, honing his skills and easily mastering Hohō (歩法, Step Method; "Fast Movement") and Zanjutsu (斬術, Swordsmanship; "Art of the Sword"; Cutting Technique) due to his early and constant training. He easily learned and mastered all the curriculums early on and by the end of his first year there was nothing left to learn at the academy. He did decide to stay, however, deciding that he would only leave once he had mastered his Bankai. After the final year of the academy he had become a master with his Bankai, and immediately after graduation challenged the second squad’s captain in a trial by combat, easily defeating the captain and taking the leadership of the squad from him.

Appearance: Shibō looks to be about 19. He has black Hair that just a bit longer than his ears, with some able to drape in front of his eyes. Has grey blue eyes and looks very similar to Shiki Tohno (from TYPE-MOON). He rather dislikes his Zanpakutō’s sealed form so he always keeps his zanpakuto in its Bankai form sheathed at his sides.

Personality: Mainly regarded as a cold person he keeps to himself. He has a slight disregard for authority and rules. He doesn’t respect those who he feels choose not to try to the best of their ability. He always searches for the most logical and sensible way to complete a task, referring to cold logic and expertise rather than ideals. Constantly contemplating ideas and strategy he prefers to have a plan in a fight. Favoring speed and agility over power he tries to use his skill to get the job done but will not hesitate to use dishonorable tactics if that is what is needed. Although he seems like a heartless person he still cares for the people in his division as well as his comrades, always looking for the best way to get everyone out alive.

Abilities: Extremely fast and agile compared to most other shinigami as he is a master of Hohō (歩法, Step Method; "Fast Movement"). Although he prefers to have speed instead of power, his constant training gives his strikes incredible damaging ability while attacking which allows him to be a master of Zanjutsu (斬術, Swordsmanship; "Art of the Sword"; Cutting Technique). Even though he prefers to use his daggers over anything else, Shibō is also extremely adept at using Hakuda (白打, Hand to hand combat). He is a master strategist and combat expert, being a very perceptive combatant at all times. He prefers to use blades instead of spells and kido but is still very skilled in using either, being able to use kido up to 80 without any incantation while still retaining the original effect. His constant training allows him to easily adapt to new abilities and overcome adversaries in order to overcome any complications in a battle.
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The Sword
Sword Name: Deadly Shadow
In Romaji: Chimei-teki kage
In Kanji: 致命的影
Appearance: The sword is completely black and has a blade that is about the length of a standard wakizashi (60 cm) The blade has 12 cm of serration from the hand guard up, with the rest of the blade being razor sharp. The handle is black with black wrapping around it (20 cm long, making the total sword length 80 cm) There is a short chain that is 6 links long attached to the handle on the end. The hand guard is a hexagonal shape with slightly rounded corners and a square structured swirl around the center piece.

Release Command: Rise from the Depths of Hell
In Romaji: Jigokuu No Fukau Sa Kara Joushou
In Kanji: 地獄の深さから上昇

Bankai Name: Shadow of Death
In Romaji: Shi No Kage
In Kanji: 死の影

Shikai Abilities
When the Shikai is activated the blade will shorten to a shorter blade that is 40 cm long and the handle will shrink down to 15 cm (making the sword 55 cm long). The blade will also split into two identical swords. The chain on the bottom will be removed and be replaced by 3 holes on each blade spaced equally far apart, one for each chain link. The shortened blades will focus the reiatsu of the user and make the blades sharper and stronger, as well as increasing the users speed.

Consuming Shadows:
In Romaji: Kage o shōhi suru
In Kanji: 影を消費する
Description: Shadows cover the entire battlefield; growing or shrinking at the owners will. The shadows will slowly consume and absorb the reiatsu of any living thing other than the swords true owner that steps into the shadows; increasing the amount absorbed the longer something stands in it. The shadows also will slow down anyone inside them and sap their energy; also increasing in severity the longer it’s in effect. Any shadows that touch the user will slowly increase their speed and agility more and more the longer it’s in effect. The larger the area that is covered: the slower the progression of absorption as well as speed increase. The smaller the area covered: the faster the effects take hold.

Seething Shadow Blade:
In Romaji: Futtō shadouburēdo
In Kanji: 沸騰シャドウブレード
Description: When the command is spoken the user focuses his reiatsu into his sword and one of the circles on one of the sword’s blades will be filled with a black gem. Then a blade made of pure shadow will appear obeying the mental commands of the owner but will also act with a mind of its own creating and using unique attack patterns and strikes. The ability can be used up to 6 times, summoning another blade to fight for you with each new incantation as well as filling another hole with a black gem. You may only use the incantation one blade at a time and you must wait to use it again if you used it before. The stronger your reiatsu the less wait time there is. “Consuming Shadows” will also reduce the wait time.

Speed of Shadow:
In Romaji: Kage no sokudo
In Kanji: 影の速度
Description: This ability is constantly in effect while the Shikai is active. For each circle that is filled the faster the user will become. For each gem filled the user will also become more transparent and it will become more difficult to sense their reiatsu. When any amount of the six circles is filled, the incantation can be spoken and the user will become completely invisible and impossible to detect in any way. The users speed will dramatically increase as well. This effect will last for ten seconds for each circle that is filled.

Bankai Abilities
When the Bankai is activated both blades will shrink to the size of a dagger’s blade (30 cm) and the handle will shrink down to 12.5 cm (making to total length 42.5 cm). Each blade will split into 2 blades with a gap in between, still attached to the same handle. The blades focus the reiatsu of the user and allow them to be so sharp they can cut almost anything as well as focusing the reiatsu into the user, increasing their speed even more, to the point where their normal speed is equal to the speed they had when fully activating “Speed of Shadow”. The blades can instantly materialize into the users hands from any location and can be thrown at an incredible speed; maintaining their trajectory towards their target. The wielders appearance will change to the look of an assassin, clad fully in black leather armor and mask. Consuming shadows can also be used while in Bankai.

Shadow Infusion:
In Romaji: Shadō chūnyū
In Kanji: シャドウ注入
Description: The daggers become infused with pure shadow energy; allowing them to become intangible and pass through objects as well as become real again in an instant. These blades also pass this property to the owner but when an object other than the blades becomes intangible it must use a large amount of reiatsu to complete. Any object that is touched by the shadow infused blades will be drained of some of their reiatsu and that energy will be stored by the blades for the owners use. These blades can also absorb reishi from the environment and transfer it into energy for the user. Anything the blades touch will also become marked by shadow energy. The owner of the blades can then teleport instantly to any location that is affected by “Consuming Shadows” or anything that is marked by shadow energy.

Clone of Darkness:
In Romaji: Yami no kurōn
In Kanji: 闇のクローン
Description: Both daggers split down the middle and creates four total daggers. The user of the blades can split any amount if spirit energy he has or has absorbed and creates an identical clone that will use the extra blades; following the users commands but using its own unique attack style. The clone can also perfectly mimic the user’s actions as well as mimic any ability the owner has. The clone can be instantly destroyed and have its energy transferred back to the owner or instantly rebuilt on command.

Striking Shadow:
In Romaji: Kage no sutoraiki
In Kanji: 影のストライキ
Description: The daggers glow purple with shadow energy, condensing and focusing the owners reiatsu into the tips of the blades on both daggers. You can then fire the blast of shadow energy in a highly condensed and accurate form, able of causing massive damage over a small area. This ability can be used with either blade and up to 4 times at once (one for each blade tip). It can also be used many times and does not require very much reiatsu because of its ability to condense the energy before firing.

Final Abilities
Form of Shadow:
In Romaji: Kage no katachi
In Kanji: 影の形
Description: When this ability is activated both daggers will dissipate and the user will be engulfed in shadow, masking their true appearance. A tanto blade that is slightly longer than the twin tanto blades will be made created out of pure shadow energy and will be able to be used by the owner (Blade length is 50 cm long with a handle of 10 cm making the sword 60 cm long). The sword has a total of 6 holes near the hilt which will all start filled with dark energy. For every 15 seconds that this effect is activated one hole will be emptied of its shadow energy. For each hole that is filled the user will gain a ridiculous speed and power increase, decreasing in ability with every hole that is emptied. The user of this ability will be made completely intangible, making them effectively invincible for the duration of this ability. The sword can still strike opponents but no opponents may strike you. This ability will end after all the circles are emptied of their shadow energy (1 minute and 30 seconds). After this ability expires the user will be unable to use their Bankai for 3 days after this technique is used.

The End of All Things Living:
In Romaji: Ikite iru subete no mono no owari o
In Kanji: 生きているすべてのものの終わりを
Description: The user of this ability sacrifices an extremely large amount of their spirit energy and temporarily sacrifices their zanpakuto, making it impossible to be used during this time, and in return one target will be completely banished from this universe into an inescapable realm of darkness and despair, slowly consuming the targets soul and sanity, making it impossible for the target to move and causing them unending agony until they die. The longer this takes to occur: the more damage that is dealt to the Zanpakutō’s spirit. After the target is finished the zanpakuto will reappear at its user’s side and the user will be completely unable to communicate with their Zanpakutō’s spirit, therefore rendering them unable to use Shikai or Bankai. The user is forced to wait until both their reiatsu levels returns to normal and their Zanpakutō’s spirit has been completely healed and is ready to fight again.

*Images*
These are rudimentary images of what my zanpakuto looks like in all of its stages
*Bottom left* This is the zanpakuto in it's sealed state. There is both a side view and front view for this one
*Bottom middle* These two daggers are supplied to both you and your clone while using "Clone of Shadow
*Bottom right* This is the blade you get during "Form of Shadow"
*Top left* These twin daggers are the blades you receive when Bankai is activated
*Top right* These blades are the weapons you receive when shikai is activated
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 Hello again, I'm back and I've reworked my old zanpakuto, editing it's abilities a bit and adding a c
KJ-number-1 commented…
Dude you have put a tone of effort into this, it's amazing. sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas
sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas InuyashaGames said…
Hello people I might not seem familiar but I happen to be Inuyasha138 I just forgot my password -_-

Zanpakto name: Gouka(Hellfire)
Shikai name: Makai's Kaigan (hell's spiritual awakening) <-- closest I could get to 'Hell's Awakening

Zanpakto appearance:
A red bladed scythe. With a 3 foot long wooden pole stained black as night.
A flame chain 'tail' comes off of the end of the pole.


Release command: Flare up and burn everything to the ground Gouka!

Bankai Name: Niban sou Makai's Kaigan (second phase hell's spiritual awakening)
Bankai Appearance: it looks almost exactly the same as Shikai and Sealed form but the red metal blade of the scythe becomes lava burning anything it touches

Bankai Abilities:
Maguma Kyanon
The user slashes the scythe create a getsuga tensho like wave but made of lava and spiritual pressure.


This is all I have so far I'm kinda tired ill work in the rest of it tomorrow
blackpanther666 commented…
Sigh. Where's all the detail? Your Shikai doesn't even have a special ability at this point, other than the 'flame chain tail'... and your Bankai is just another rip off of the Getsuga Tensho... honestly, I'm sick of people using that as a template for a energy wave attack... don't be so cliche. sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas
InuyashaGames commented…
I'm not finished thoug lol sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas
InuyashaGames commented…
Btw my finished one is at th bottom ish area :/ sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas
sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas Ryuuikari said…
Another from the vault, been reforged a few times...



Name: Shindōhime (Vibration Princess)
Sealed appearance: When sealed it takes the form of a regular kodachi with a simple bronze cross guard and pink hilt-wrapping. Its sheathe is pink.
Release command: The wielder holds Shindōhime in between their fingers then releases by the command “Scream”.

Shikai appearance: It takes the form of a single regular sai with pink wrapping around the tsuka, a faceted monouchi and a blunt saki.

Shikai special abilities: Shindōhime has the ability to release powerful vibrations, or shock waves, which can travel through any medium (except a vacuum); these shock waves are strong enough to easily repulse heavy objects. Shindōhime can also project concentrated blasts of air that have been vibrated at an intense frequency that can weaken or destroy structures from sheer vibrations alone. Shindōhime releases these vibratory and shock wave attacks from the saki of the sai.

Shikai technique(s):
Shindōtai (Vibrating Body): An automatic technique that takes effect upon release in both shikai and bankai. It causes any and all types of vibrations to be effectively dissipated and nullified upon contact with the wielder’s body effectively making the wielder immune to all vibratory attacks. This technique also prevents most intangible opponents from phasing through the wielder’s body.

Bankai name: Shindōjoō (Vibration Queen)
Bankai appearance: In bankai Shindōjoō becomes a twin pair of manji sai with the wrapping now being dark pink in colour and the saki now being pointed.

Bankai special abilities: Shindōjoō retains all the abilities it had in shikai with its enhanced vibration emission abilities being generally five times as strong as in shikai.

Bankai technique(s):
Kōshūhagawa (High-Frequency Edge): Shindōjoō causes the twin sai to vibrate at an extremely high frequency to the point where they are able to cut through materials like a blade. The high frequency vibrations are maintained for as long as the wielder can manage. The sai give off a high-pitched hum while this technique is in effect.

Zekkyōgawa (Screaming Edge): By hitting the two monouchi of the sai together Shindōjoō releases an extremely powerful ballistic sound wave that is capable of very easily shattering steel or diamond. The sound wave lasts for as long as the twin sai are held together however this technique consumes a lot of spiritual energy to perform; the wielder’s spiritual energy is consumed exponentially with the length of time Shindōjoō is emitting the sound wave.
sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas Senato said…
I haven't posted a zanpakuto in like FOREVER :\ so here's a new one :D


Name: Shi no hana (Death's Flower)

Sealed form: The sealed form is a simple Wakizashi with a greenish hilt wrapping, with an insignia in the form of a lily.

Release command: The wielder turns the blade and pierces it into the ground, whilst saying: "Shisha iseki kara seichō" (Grow from the dead remains)

Shikai form: Shi no hana is completely made of a strong vine-like material, the blade is comprised of three thorned vines wrapped around one-another. These vines can open to reveal a mouth at the center by the cross-guard. The cross-guard is formed out of multiple leaves, and downwards from it the petals of a white lily grow.

Shikai Abilities:

The mouth of Shi no hana, is able to devour any kido/kido-based ability that is fired at it, and stores the energy for future techniques. Though in order to devour the kido, the vines forming the blade must unwrap leaving the wielder unable to preform melee combat whilst absorbing the kido/ability.

Iyashino hanabira (Healing Petal) The wielder uses their spiritual energy to grow the petals of the lily, which can be plucked off and used to heal injuries (one petal can heal roughly one cut). The wielder can also use the stored energy from absorbed kido to power this ability.

Hangeki suru (Strike back) Any absorbed kido/kido-based ability can be fired back by revealing the mouth once more. The wielder can augment the kido by boosting it's power with his/her own spiritual pressure. (Multiple kido can also be fired back if multiple kido have been absorbed.)

Bankai name: Shi no niwa (Death's Garden)

Bankai form: After stabbing the zanpakuto into the ground to initiate bankai, the area around the wielder begins to be covered in an aray of giant vines, lilies, poppies, Chrysanthemums, Carnations and Roses. All these flowers are coloured white and/or black. The lily on the weapon itself also turns black.

Iyashino hanabira and Hangeki suru can now be preformed from any of the numerous flowers littering the battlefield. Though Kido can still only be absorbed by the mouth of the weapon. The wielder can also control the vines and use them to attack the enemy.
The blade of the zanpakuto can now also absorb any blood spilled on it for bankai-specific techniques.

Bankai Abilities:

Shibito no yōna shōki (Deathly Miasma) After absorbing enough blood, the zanpakuto reworks the blood into a specialized miasma which is realeased from all the plants created by bankai. This Miasma hampers the senses of the one who's blood was used to create it.
To get enough blood for this ability the blade would have to have pierced the enemies skin at least 10 times, or have come into contact with the enemies blood 10 times. (Spilled blood can be used but each individual spill can only be used once, thus the enemies blood would still have to be spilled at least 10 times.)

Jakutai doku (Enfeebling Poison) The zanpakuto reworks absorbed blood to create a specialized poison which will be applied by each cut done by the weapon. This poison will weaken the area around the cut ever so slightly. Though at first the affect will not be noticable, after rougly 3 cuts to the same area, the target will find it difficult to move and use that part of the body. The target will be placed in complete paralasis after about 45 poison-infused cuts. The poison can only be made after the weapon has absorbed blood from 5 cuts to it's victim. Spilled blood cannot be used for this technique.
Ryuuikari commented…
Well what do we have here now ? XD I really like this one man, its bankai especially, and its disensyo quite compliments its abilities (y) though I must say, its bankai may be a little too overt for the 2nd Division ;D sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas
Senato commented…
Haha thanks! xD I was constantly re-evaluating how the poison could work so as to keep it from being too powerful, I think I edited that part like 5-6 times before Pagsulat it down xD and I sinabi your's would fit better :P sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas
sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas CODYFLAME626 said…
Something that confuses me is why some people dislike a character AND his zanpakuto being posted on this forum. Many people use the reasoning that this forum is specifically for zanpakuto, but even the original creator of this forum wanted people to also make characters to go along with their zanpakuto (See page two of this forum for proof) I personally find that having a character to go with your zanpakuto can really help show what the feel of your blade is supposed to be. After all, the zanpakuto is part of the characters spirit and the character is what helps make the zanpakuto what it is. I say that if someone makes a character to go along with their zanpakuto then it makes it that much better, it can help someone understand what the true feeling of that zanpakuto is as the zanpakuto is tailored to fit the wielder, and knowing the wielder helps understand the strengths, weaknesses, and specialization of the zanpakuto.
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blackpanther666 commented…
And yet, that creator was long-gone years ago. The point is, it clutters up the pagtitip. and is pointless... you might feel that every blade needs a character to go with it, but it just isn't the case. I can understand on certain blades that are tailored specifically for a character, not for every single Zanpakuto you make... it alters your creative process to create a character, then create a blade as well, rather than just focusing that creativity on just the blade. Almost every Zanpakuto with a character has little detail, because that person put all of their creativity into that character, then skimped out on the blade... obviously, not everyone does it, but it is quite common. I don't care if the Zanpakuto was creative as well, though, like yours, where your blade and character were creative. Basically, we say that in hopes that lazy, uncreative people will stop posting on this forum. sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas
CODYFLAME626 commented…
Many of the points you made are true, but they only apply to those on this pagtitip. that don't put enough work into their zanpakuto. In regards to your opinion on characters, which i respect but will kindly refute, they are far from pointless. A character is what makes a zanpakuto, the abilities, the techniques, the fighting style, those are all part of the character, not the blade; this is shown through the use of Asauchi. What I'm trying to say is that you shouldn't discourage people from posting both quality zanpakuto and characters. This pagtitip. was made so that people would have the ability to share and create their own zanpakuto and if a quality blade comes with a character, I say there shouldn't be an issue with it. Unfortunately there will always be those people that lack the amount of creativity or compositional skills to actually make something presentable, but in most ways, those posts cannot be prevented so long that some people will still use the same old recycled ideas. sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas
blackpanther666 commented…
Yes, they are true... and, yes, they do apply to those on this pagtitip. who don't enough work into their Zanpakuto... that's what I said, is it not? You don't really need to repeat what I already said, I understood it when I sinabi it. Yes, you do make a point - often enough, a Zanpakuto and character together can work well, because they fit one another, but to each their own... it's not my style... I RP many of my characters and blades, so I create blades that can fit any character I make. I'm not saying that you shouldn't do it, just that it isn't my style. Do you understand what I'm saying? sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas
sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas InuyashaGames said…
worried
Time to finish my zanpaktou :D

Zanpakto name: Gouka(Hellfire)
Shikai name: Makais Kaigan (hells spiritual awakening) <-- closest I could get to 'Hell's Awakening

Sealed appearance:
The sealed form of this zanpaktou is a basic katana. It has a blade made of fire. The fire burns hotter or colder as the user gains and loses spiritual energy. The hilt is colored blue.

Shikai appearance:
This Shikai is a scythe based Shikai. The scythe blade resembles the color of blood. The staff (not sure what it's called I'll just call it a pole) is colored a deep black. At the end of the pole is a flame chain 'tail'. The pole is about 3-4 feet long. The tail has the same properties as the blade of the sealed form.

Release command: Flare up and burn everything to the ground Gouka!

Bankai Name: Niban sou Makai's Kaigan (second phase hell's spiritual awakening)
Bankai Appearance:
The Bankai thakes the form of a dual scythe. The handle/pole/what ever it's called shortens to be about 1-2 feet long. The flame chain tail connects to the other tail and the flame turns blue. The tail has the same properties as before.

Shikai abilities:
Nenshou meiun ( burning doom )
This ability creates a fire demon who can be controlled by the user. ( don't know what else to do so I did this xD)

Bankai Abilities:

Senkou Kasai ( flash fire)
The user slashes both blades in an x formation which causes a slash shaped fire to get sent in the area the just slashed at.

Maguma Kyanon
The user puts both blades of the scythes point inwards and focuses massive amounts of spiritual pressure in that space creating a kido like ball. This ball catches on fire and can be charged farther to turn it from a fireball to a magma ball. Then the user launches the ball forward doing massive amounts of damage.

Niban Houmen ( second release )
This is less of an ability and more of another form passed bankai ( by this I mean like ichigos final Getsuga tenshou were he becomes his ability) This ability also drains 80% of your maximum spiritual pressure and is unusable unless that condition is met.
In this form the user and the sword have major differences. The user shinigami cloak turns red and it's shape is like the fourth hokage's cloak from naruto (mind you this is only the shape). The dual scythe becomes one scythe and the pole goes back to is origanal Shikai length. The blade catches fire. The flame chain tail grows longer. The tail also wraps around the users arm creating the illusion of his/her arm being on fire. Although looking cool, it serves another purpose it allows the user to more directly control all there abilities. It also applies all effects.


I know it's not the best but consider I'm on a tablet and I'm tired I consider this ok xD
Ryuuikari commented…
Before I start reviewing your blade let me say, I'm not a big tagahanga of elemental blades (not your fault though, it's the fault of many people before you who have posted awful elemental blades). sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas
Ryuuikari commented…
First of all, the shikai name is the same as your zanpakuto name e.g. Zangetsu is the name of Ichigo's zanpakuto and is also the name of its shikai. Your blade disensyo are a little too cliche for me, but uy that's just me. Now for abilities: since your zan is a fire-type does it possess the basic ability to manipulate apoy (like Ryujin Jakka) or is it restricted to specific apoy techniques (like Tobiume or Tengumaru) ? For Nenshou Meiun I'd like to know madami about this apoy demon that is created like: What does it look like ? How powerful is it ? Can it be destroyed ? How long can it be maintained for ? How sapient is it ? Can the technique be used in bankai ? Senkou Kasai - does it do just burning damage or a combination of both cutting damage and burning damage ? Finally, you're gonna need to be madami specific about how Niban Houmen affects the shikai/bankai abilities. sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas
InuyashaGames commented…
Thanks for the feed back ill work on it it's just I have limitations on a tablet xD sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas
sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas CODYFLAME626 said…
This will be my second zanpakuto that I've made. I know the whole angel theme may be a bit cliche so i hope I've put an interesting spin on it. any feedback is appreciated.

This sword is mainly used in combination with different types of fire type kido into a fighting style that the user calls Heavenly Inferno (天国のインフェルノ, Tengoku no Inferuno)

The Sword
Sword Name: Crusading Angel
In Romaji: Jūjigun no Tenshi
In Kanji: 十字軍の天使

Appearance: The blade is silver and slightly longer than a large katana (80 cm) with no other anomalies. The handle is black with white wrappings and is 25 cm long making the entire sword 105 cm long. There is a set of wings engraved onto the Habaki of the sword and the Kashira has a razor sharp spike on the end of it. The hand guard is a six pointed star that has two concentric circles through the spikes.

Release Command: Blaze with the Light of the Heavens
In Romaji: Ten no Hikari de Bureizu
In Kanji: 天の光でブレイズ

Bankai Name: Divine Archangel
In Romaji: Kami no Dai Tenshi
In Kanji: 神の大天使
Shikai Abilities
When the Shikai is activated the blade becomes a short style Scottish claymore (Being 100 cm long) and the handle shrinks down to 20 cm long (making the whole sword 120 cm long). There is no hand guard on the claymore and the cutting power of the blade is significantly increased in comparison to its sealed form. The blade and pommel turns completely white and the handle turns pitch black while the section attaching the blade to the handle turns silver. In this form the wielder of the blade has access to powers related to the positive emotions (Happiness, Kindness, and Trust). Those feeling these emotions or any incarnation of these emotions will be affected by these abilities with more severity than those who are not.

Angel’s Forbearance: Repentance
In Romaji: Tenshi no Sakebi: Kuiaratame
In Kanji: 天使の叫び:悔い改め
Description: The caster of this ability takes their sword and points it at their target while speaking the incantation. After it is spoken the target immediately experiences a crushing sensation upon their body that will increase in severity depending on how much damage that person has done in their lifetime to anything or anyone. The targets ability to withstand this attack is directly related to their physical strength. Targets with enough physical strength can even act as if the attack doesn’t affect them but the more damage they deal: the more force applied to them.

Angel’s Pride: Righteous Blaze
In Romaji: Tenshi no Puraido: Masayoshi Bureizu
In Kanji: 天使のプライド:正義ブレイズ
Description: The wielder of the zanpakuto speaks the name of the ability while slashing in a downward arc at their target. White Flames will then erupt from the ground around the wielder at the total command of the owner. They cannot harm anyone but the initial target of the ability. Once a target is selected the flames cannot burn out unless the creator wills it. They can be manipulated to create objects out of flame or surround objects in flame; for defensive or offensive capabilities.

Angel’s Vigilance: Celestial Aegis
In Romaji: Tenshi no Keikai: Ten no ījisu
In Kanji: 天使の警戒:天のイージス
Description: The caster speaks the command and points their open hand towards their target unless the target is the caster. If the target is the caster then the caster uses a closed fist. The caster uses and focuses his reiatsu to envelop their target in a clear, yellow tinted shield that will help protect them from harm as well as heal previous injuries. The shield can heal any injury, but does so relatively slowly; even for superficial injuries. For wounds that are extremely damaging, the shield would take an extremely long time to heal them. It works similarly to Ulquiorra's High-speed regeneration, but at a far toned down pace. If enough force is applied the shield can shatter. The strength of this shield is directly related to amount of reiatsu channeled into the ability and it can be shattered by those with enough strength.

Bankai Abilities
When the Bankai is activated the wielder is encased in pure white armor and the blade will glow with a white light. The claymore gains a silver hand guard and its pommel changes to a white jewel surrounded by gold inlay. They wielder also gains a shield that is also white, with a gold symbol of a stylized star on the front of it, surrounded by gold inlay. When the Bankai is activated the user gains access to abilities that relate to the negative range of emotions (Anger, Fear, and Grief) while still retaining access to their Shikai abilities. Those who feel these emotions or incarnations of these emotions will be affected by these abilities with more severity. Only one ability can be used at a time save for “Angel’s Vigilance: Celestial Aegis”, which can be used alongside other abilities. If “Angel’s Vigilance: Celestial Aegis” is used with another abilities, its effects are reduced in strength. The Bankai increases the user’s strength greatly but decreases their mobility slightly. The armor grants tremendous durability and protection and feels lighter than its actual weight to the user, but it can be broken with an attack administered with enough strength.

Angel’s Rage: Annihilation
In Romaji: Tenshi no Gekido: Zenmetsu
In Kanji: 天使の激怒:全滅
Description: This ability is activated by the wielder taking their shield and putting onto their back, and after that they grip their sword with both hands while speaking the incantation. After the ability is activated, the user’s armor glows with a dark red and their strength will increase dramatically. The user can have their armor dissipate, rendering the caster able to move at ludicrously fast speeds, temporarily sacrificing defense for immense offensive power. The wielders blade will also glow red and be covered in flames that posses the same abilities as “Angel’s Pride: Righteous Blaze” but to a much lesser scale and extent.

Angel’s Terror: Oblivion
In Romaji: Tenshi no Kyōfu: Oburibion
In Kanji: 天使の恐怖:オブリビオン
Description: The Caster of this ability points their sword at their target and speaks the name of the ability. The Zanpakutō’s spirit looks into the mind of the target and finds their greatest fears. It creates a perfect illusion that depicts the caster to be an incarnation of their greatest fear, utilizing the incarnation’s abilities against the target. This fear causes the target to doubt themselves and their abilities, wondering if anything they do really matters; effectively crippling their resolve and fighting ability. The target may fight back against their fear and their ability to conquer it is directly related to their mental strength and stability, but the wielder can fight as if he is unaffected by the ability. The illusion can only be shattered if the owner wills it to, or the target conquers the specific fear that is being utilized at this time. If the target does overcome the specific fear that is being used against them, the illusion will shatter and the ability will be temporarily over. This doesn’t grant immunity to the entire ability, only immunity to the specific fear utilized by the ability. A new fear can be used if the old one is defeated; but only after an appropriate amount of time for the ability to recharge has passed.

Angel’s Despair: Agony
In Romaji: Tenshi no Zetsubō: Kunō
In Kanji: 天使の絶望:苦悩
Description: The caster of this ability takes their shield and then throws it at their target. The shield dissipates into a black mist that surrounds the target. Anyone surrounded by this black mist experiences hypersensitivity to all types of pain. Even extending to the point where normal movements that would not cause pain, to cause additional aches and pains. The targets movements are also slowed with this ability, sapping their strength and stamina.

Final Abilities
World’s End: Judgment
In Romaji: Sekainohate: Hanketsu
In Kanji: 世界の果て:判決
Description: The user of this ability takes their sword and stabs it into the ground, after which a massive area around them erupts in a huge amount heavenly fire that moves at the will of the owner much like “Angel’s Pride: Righteous Blaze” but on a much larger scale. The heat of the blaze is so intense that it can turn object to ash at a mere touch of them. The flames can even harm the user due to their intensity, but they can also be formed into a protective flame armor that won’t hurt the caster.

Divine Word: Obliteration
In Romaji: Kami no Kotoba: Massatsu
In Kanji: 神の言葉:抹殺
Description: The caster of this ability takes their blade and stabs themselves through their heart, killing themselves. The body will then burst in to white flames and out of the ashes will rise the collective soul of both the caster and the Zanpakutō’s spirit, fused together in a white and burning entity. They will choose a target together and that mark will be completely destroyed and removed from this world instantaneously and with no remorse, leaving the target with no ability to return to life or heal in any way. It cannot be countered. It cannot be avoided. There is no way around the attack. Both the caster and the target will die, no matter what. This attack may only be completed if both the Zanpakutō’s spirit and the caster will it to be the ideal solution and may only be done when the wielder is in complete harmony with his spirit, essentially fusing them into one entity. After this ability is used, both the Zanpakutō’s spirit and the casters spirit will dissipate, forever gone from this world

I hope these abilities aren't too overpowered. I thought it was at least partially fair with "Divine Word: Obliteration" with how it's essentially trading a life for a life, but let me know what you guys think. I'd love to hear your thoughts.

*Images*
*Top Left* This is the shield you get when bankai is activated
*Top Middle* This is the sword you get when in bankai
*Top Right* This is what the shinigami will look like while in bankai
*Bottom Left* This is the handguard
*Bottom Middle* This is the blade in shikai form
*Middle Right* This is the white entity you become during "Divine Word: Obliteration"
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 This will be my segundo zanpakuto that I've made. I know the whole angel theme may be a bit cliche so
Senato commented…
Really a wonderful zanpakuto! Though I do find the ability to simply obliterate a single target rather powerful, the trade-off of one's own life makes it fair in my book. I do have one question, what is the extent of Angel’s Vigilance: Celestial Aegis in terms of healing? Since if it could heal all injuries regardless of the severity, it would be rather overpowered in my eyes. sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas
CODYFLAME626 commented…
It can heal almost any wound, but it does so at a slow pace even for minor injurys. so in theory it can heal an extremely severe injury, but the battle would likely be over sa pamamagitan ng the time it was healed. to put it in perspective, a paper cut would heal around 30 seconds, a superficial wound would heal in a couple minutes, and for a legitimate wound it would likely take 3 to 5 times as long depending on the severity. it's basically a healing over time effect, nowhere near as powerful as Ulquiorra's High-speed regeneration. It works similarly, but at a far toned down pace. I'll edit the paglalarawan to be madami clear, and thanks for the feedback. sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas
Senato commented…
Oooh in that case, it's a well rounded ability! Keep on making good zanpakuto! ^^ sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas
sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas InuyashaGames said…
meh
Time to finish my zanpaktou for real -_-

Zanpakto name: Gouka(Hellfire)
Shikai name: Makais Kaigan (hells spiritual awakening) <-- closest I could get to 'Hell's Awakening

All form's ability:
Ever form this sword has, has the ability to control/create fire. The strength of the ability depends on its form. The sealed form can control size and movement but its range is about 5-6 in a circular pattern.
Shikai: can do the same as the sealed but at a greater range about 9-10 feet on a circular pattern it can also create fire at the same range as it's other range.
Bankai: can do the same but at the range of 20-30 feet. It can also control pre-existing lava.
Bankai-second phase: it has the ability to create lava. Every ability range is doubled.

Sealed appearance:
The sealed form of this zanpaktou is a basic katana. It has a blade made of fire. The fire burns hotter or colder as the user gains and loses spiritual energy. The hilt is colored blue. If the users spiritual energy gets low enough the katana becomes a dagger. But at this point your already dying.

Shikai appearance:
This Shikai is a scythe. The scythe blade resembles the color of blood. The staff (not sure what it's called I'll just call it a pole) is colored a deep black. At the end of the pole is a flame chain 'tail'. The pole is about 3-4 feet long. The tail has the same properties as the blade of the sealed form. Also like the sealed form if the spiritual energy is low enough the scythe will turn into a blue flame and the handle will shrink to about half size.

Release command: Flare up and burn everything to the ground Gouka!

Bankai Name: Niban sou Makai's Kaigan (second phase hell's spiritual awakening)
Bankai Appearance:
The Bankai that's the form of a dual scythe. The handle/pole/what ever it's called shortens to be about 1 foot long. The flame chain tail connects to the other tail and the flame turns blue. The tail has the same properties as before.

Shikai abilities:
Nenshou meiun ( burning doom )
This ability creates a fire demon who can be controlled by the user. If has no mind of its own. In a sense it is the manifestation of the Makai's Kaigan. If the user lets the beast slip it will go after even the user. The demon can be strengthened or weakened by adding or taking spiritual energy from the demon. This ability can be used in bankai and bankai second phase. In both forms the demon gains a lot of strength but the users control over it weakens. So if you use it in bankai second phase your orders are more like extra things to do where as if you where in Shikai it would follow almost every command.

Bankai Abilities:

Senkou Kasai ( flash fire)
The user slashes both blades in an x formation which causes a slash shaped fire to get sent in the area the just slashed at. It can set targets on fire it also does damage to them as if they cut them

Maguma Kyanon
The user puts both blades of the scythes point inwards and focuses massive amounts of spiritual pressure in that space creating a kido like ball. This ball catches on fire and can be charged farther to turn it from a fireball to a magma ball. Then the user launches the ball forward doing massive amounts of damage.

Niban Houmen ( second release )
This is less of an ability and more of another form passed bankai ( by this I mean like ichigos final Getsuga tenshou were he bocomes his ability) This ability also drains 80% of your maximum spiritual pressure and is unusable unless that condition is met.
In this form the user and the zanpaktou have major differences. The user shinigami cloak turns red and it's shape is like the fourth hokage's cloak from naruto (mind you this is only the shape) The zanpaktou goes back to its Shikai for with some differences. The blade catches fire. The flame chain tail grows longer. The tail also wraps around the users arm creating the illusion of his/her arm being on fire. Although looking cool, it serves another purpose it allows the user to more directly control all there abilities. It also amplifies all effects. By this I mean Maguma Kyanon would double in size and would explode in contact. The same goes for Senkou Kasai and I already explained how it affects Nenshou meiun.

Feed back is appreciated
Ryuuikari commented…
A lot better hehe, nice work :) sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas
InuyashaGames commented…
Ty the funny thing is I made this at 1 am -_- I work best when I can't sleep sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas
sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas InuyashaGames said…
Man this is so fun to do when I can't sleep :D

Sealed Name: Kumori mitsukai (shadow angel)
Shikai name: same as sealed.
Bankai name: soubou ranpu (shadowy light)

Sealed Description:
The sealed form of this zanpaktou is a normal dagger blade with a black colored handle. It has no guard. It has a carved out line through the center of the blade on both sides. The blade is about 3 inches long

Shikai Description:
In the Shikai form it gains about 3 inches in length. The 'carved out line' now fills with reiatsu (for abilities). This reiatsu is a red colored. A quillon type guard appears. The guard has the properties of light. It's colored black as night.

Shikai abilities:
Ranpu bakufuu
This ability is done on the left side. This ability creates a kido like ball at the tip of the dagger. The user creates this ball in a position that looks like they are going to lunge the dagger at the opponent. They then focus energy at the tip of the dagger and the ball appears. The ball is bright white. When ready to fire the user lunges the dagger towards the opponent
Kumori bakufuu
This ability is the same as ranpu bakufuu except it's done on the right side and the ball is a deep black (sorry for repeat abilities but I can't think of anything else will edit later)
Going Bankai
To go bankai the user throws the blade in the air, the user then waits for the dagger to start falling tip down. As the dagger is falling down the user shouts " Shadows are nothing with out brightness " as the user finishes saying those words
The dagger's 'carved out lines' reiatsu now burst out like a flame making it look like a flaming dagger, and just as the dagger passes by the user then throws out there hand and catches the daggers hilt. This process takes about 5 seconds.

Bankai Description:
In the bankai form the dagger's blade looks like its on fire. The blade's reiatsu flames can be increase in size. They can not burn the user. The 'flames' in bankai mode are not red but a deep black. The hilt of the dagger now goes from a black light to a bright white light.

Bankai Abilities:

Has all Shikai abilities but are doubled in strength.

Kumori yajuu (shadow beast)
This ability creates a monster much like Nenshou meiun on my other zanpaktou. It has serveral differences though. The shadow beast technique only works at night. It summons a mindless beast controllable only by the user. Kumori yajuu's strength is fairly high, it's defense average, it's speed extremely fast. It's first weakness is that in the day if it is not in the shadows it will burn. It's second weakness: if it has contact with any light based abilities , they will easily destroy it. At night it's strength speed and defense doubles.

Ranpu yajuu (light beast)
This ability is basically the same as Kumori yajuu except its a light beast.

Kumori kou (shadow box)
This ability creates a box around anything. Everything in this box will either get strengthened to destroyed. The user has no control on witch effect happens. So if they put shadow box on you, you could either be healed of half your injuries, that is a 50% chance, or your opponent could be utterly destroyed at a 20% chance. At 10% chance 10% of your opponent's injuries will get cloned and placed on the user

Hope you like it.
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sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas Ryuuikari said…
*sigh*



Name: Sokudo (Velocity)
Sealed appearance: In its sealed form it takes the form of a tantō. The hilt-wrapping is navy blue and its sheathe is blue.
Release command: Race

Shikai appearance: In shikai its blade gains a finger-sized hole in the middle.

Shikai special abilities: Sokudo is used heavily for melee combat. Its sole ability is that it quadruples the speed of the wielder’s physical movements; this enables the wielder to run faster, punch faster, kick faster, chew faster, blink faster etc. Sokudo also enables the wielder to slow down their perception of time allowing them to clearly see faster moving objects. The wielder is unaffected by the effects of enhanced speed (such as friction or airborne particulate matter) due to this power. Sokudo does not affect the wielder’s mental speed or the speed of the wielder’s shunpo.

Bankai name: Kasoku Sokudo (Accelerated Velocity)
Bankai release: The wielder rapidly spins Sokudo in their hands and then initiates bankai.
Bankai appearance: In bankai Kasoku Sokudo becomes silvery-blue metallic wrist guards that connect to silver spiked knuckledusters (a spike for each knuckle) via two barely distinguishable metal chains; fused to the top of each wrist guard is a small metal sharply-edged silvery-blue disc, with a 6cm diameter, that has a white ‘x’ on it. The wielder’s general attire also changes: the wielder now wears an open-chested sleeveless kosode and their hakama become tucked into navy blue boots. Two thin silver chains run across the wielder’s torso in an ‘x’ shape, underneath the kosode.

Bankai special abilities: Kasoku Sokudo is used heavily for hand-to-hand melee combat; this is mostly due to the shape of the bankai. It retains its shikai ability, except it now increases the speed of the wielder’s movement tenfold. Kasoku Sokudo also quadruples the wielder’s mental speed enabling faster reflexes, reaction times and thought processing speeds. Like in shikai Kasoku Sokudo enables the wielder to slow down their perception of time (but to a much higher degree) and renders the wielder unaffected by the effects of enhanced speed. Kasoku Sokudo does not affect the wielder’s shunpo speeds. Extended usage of this bankai causes serious strain to the whole of the wielder’s body and mind and will cause permanent damage to the wielder’s body if used for way too long.

Bankai technique(s):
Tate Enkei (Circular Shield): A technique that allows the wielder to enlarge the size of the metal discs on their wrist guards; the discs can grow to have a maximum diameter of up to a metre. The discs usually function as a very strong shield capable of deflecting, repelling and withstanding extremely powerful attacks, but can also be used offensively (in a manner similar to a bladed chakram) thanks to its very sharp blade-like edge.

Saibō Kasoku (Cellular Acceleration): A technique that rapidly regenerates any injury that the wielder sustains; it cannot regenerate vital organs. This is due to Kasoku Sokudo using the wielder’s spiritual energy to temporarily vitalize the wielder’s body, drastically increasing the speed of its physiological and cellular processes. However using the technique usually requires a lot of spiritual energy and will shorten the wielder’s lifespan after being used; the length at which it is shortened is proportional to the level of regeneration.

Chōshitsuryōken (Ultra Mass Fist): Kasoku Sokudo drastically increases the mass of the wielder’s fist without losing any velocity (thus increasing its momentum) thereby increasing the power of the wielder’s punches immensely.
InuyashaGames commented…
I like it. It's powerful but it's not over powered like most of mine :c sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas
Ryuuikari commented…
Haha thanks, it's actually pretty easy to power down your blades if you know how (y) sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas
blackpanther666 commented…
@grif16. It's just an example. And, that wasn't funny. sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas
sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas Senato said…
Time for something almost entirely based on close combat! ^^

Name: O sasori (Woven Scorpion)

Sealed appearance: O sasori takes the form of an average wakizashi and a dagger. The blades of both weapons have a dusty metal colour. The wakizashi has a faded old cloth as a hilt wrapping, the hilt of the dagger resembles the tail of a scorpion.

The wielder must hold the wakizashi in their off-hand and the dagger in their main hand before releasing the blade.
Release command: Mīra (Mummify)

Shikai appearance: The wakizashi changes into the cloth that was wrapped around it's hilt, and then wraps around the wielders hand, and half of their forearm. The cloth no-longer looks faded and has a papyrus colour to it. The dagger does not change in shikai.

Shikai abilities:

Hateshinai nuno: (Unending cloth) The cloth wrapping the wielder's forearm can extend out from the palm, it has no exact limit to how far it can extend. This mainly used for movement, ie: pulling the wielder closer to the enemy or an object. This can also be used to pull objects towards the wielder.

Shisha no tate: (Shield of the dead) The cloth extends from the user's palm and weaves itself into a circular shield about 1,5 meters in diameter. This shield can block kido and physical attacks. The user cannot move easily with the shield active. Thus needs to be deactivated in order to allow for movement.

Sasori no sashi kizu: (Scorpion's sting) Any cut inflicted with the wielder's dagger will provide a constant stinging sensation. The severity of the sting is determined by the severity of the cut.

Bankai: Mīra-ka shita sasori (Mummified Scorpion)
The wielder must throw the dagger into the air before initiating bankai.

Bankai appearance: A single cloth will extend from the wrapping on the wielder's off-hand. going over the arm, across the upper chest, over the main arm and then form the same wrapping on the wielder's main hand (and forarm) as on their off hand. Another cloth will then extend downwards from the part of the cloth at the center of the chest and move down the middle of the users body before splitting into two strands of cloth which will extend down the legs and cover both feet and half of the lower legs in the same wrapping as what was on the hands. Finally, the cloth which goes over the shoulders will extend to the wielder's upper spine, and extend outwards away from the body, and grab the dagger attaching it like a scorpion's tail.

The user can now only fight hand to hand, they can use the 'tail' to strike at enemies as well.

All shikai abilities can be used in bankai. Hateshinai nuno and Shisha no tate can be used from either palm or foot.

Bankai abilities:

Shisha no sho: (Book of the dead) The wielder must bring their palms together, all fingers pointing directly upwards. The hands must remain together for 2 minutes, the user may move and fight in this time, using their feet and tail. If the hands are seperated then the user must restart. Upon completing the requirement, a large old tome will appear in front of the user, this tome will allow them to use numerous spells that do not fall under average kido. The spells include summoning different undead to assist in combat, transferring the user and target(s) into an alternate dimension of the user's choice, summoning charms to improve/assist/defend the caster and outright kido-like attacks. Only 2 spells can be casted per summoning of the book and only 5 spells can be active at any given time.

Ketsugō seinaru: (Holy Binding) This ability requires Shisha no sho to be summoned, the caster will use about 50% of their total spiritual power to completely mummify their target. The target will be sealed within the wrappings for about 1 hour. The wrappings cannot be broken and the target cannot be harmed during this technique. Using this technique will also end the caster's bankai and the caster will be unable to enter bankai until about 30 minutes after the technique has ended.
Ryuuikari commented…
I really like this one boetman !! It's quite unique in both disensyo and ability (y) I think it's bankai techniques are my favourite part of the zanpakuto, especially with Ketsugō Seinaru (I like how it's almost the perfect sealing technique). sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas
Senato commented…
hehe, at first I had no idea what to use for the bankai techniques xD Though eventually I came up with these (Thanks egyptian mummification process!) Although the techniques (especially the binding) are powerful, I wanted them to have drawbacks, so that the techniques wouldn't be used constantly :P sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas
sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas unknown99 said…
Name: Gureamira (Glare Mirror)

Sealed Form: 2 blades, Nodachi.

Command Release: Bunkai Suru (Disassemble) (Does not require blades to be unsheathed, but visible)

Shikai Form: Each left side of both blades shine a warm white light, each right side of both blades turn more clear like a mirror.

Shikai Abilities:

Yuzai no Kako (Guilty Past)

This ability traps the enemy in their painful past as their physical body is frozen unconscious with a half open eye. Can be mentally lethal. (Does not need fully unsheathed blade.)

Projection (Doesn't need to be said)

Projects any person or item in a place which wielder know. The projected image can be controlled by wielder's will. Wielder can project as many image as he can if his/her reiatsu can hold. (Needs both blades fully unsheathed blade.)

Mekura Ken-Ka Kei (Blinding Light)

Both blades are used to reflect light from one blade with the other blinding the enemy with light creating random illusion as they open their eyes again (Enemy will be conscious). (Require both unsheathed blade.)

Bankai: Sagi no Kagami (Mirror of Deception)

Bankai Form: Blades stay the same, but Shikai abilities can be used using wielder's eye.

Bankai Abilities:

Aku Mabarai no Kei (Light of Exorcism)

The tip of one blade will fire a light burning the enemy, if enemy have bigger reiatsu than wielder, then they will just recieve burn marks, if have smaller reiatsu, then disintegration is possible. (Require at least one unsheathed blade.)

Mugen Zetsubō no Kako (Past of Infinite Despair)

Wielder will take enemy into illusion in a conscious state while projecting himself inside the illusion to control it. The projection may move by it's own will. (Require both swords unsheathed.)

Kagami no Ie (House of Mirrors)

A dome of mirrors surround the enemy/enemies trapping them inside. The outside is barely destructable since it will quickly regenerate using the wielder's reiatsu. The wielder will project himself inside each mirror inside the dome and can attack the enemy from any direction he wants. The mirrors can only be destroyed from the inside. (Requires both blades to be fully unsheathed)
InuyashaGames commented…
What do you mean sa pamamagitan ng in bankai all Shikai ability scan be used with eye. It clearly states in the ability mekura ken-ka Kai that the BLADES reflect light from on another. But how would you reflect light from eye to eye does the light go through your head if so that would kill you before the enemy would die. And kagami no le sounds like an ability from naruto the early episodes I forget there name. Yuzai no kako how does it trap them in there past does it do it mentally or is it a box of some sort that the user has to create around the targeted person? sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas
unknown99 commented…
It is clearly just mirrors reflecting light from each other. sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas
unknown99 commented…
The mirrors ipakita the outside envvironment... sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas
sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas KJ-number-1 said…
I wanted to have a go at making a poison type Zanpakto that was slightly more defence orientated (along the lines of Disabling the enemy).


Zanpakto/Shikai :Re sutoresu hebigami (Restless serpent god)

Release: Surīpu (Sleep)

Unreleased appearance: Unreleased, it's a pair of 12" Tantō, each identical except for the guard which are both one half of a Bronze Snake head. Both Hilts are a deep purple in colour.

Shikai: To release the Shikai the wielder has to put the two blade's together to make the hilt a complete snakes head. The actual Shikai is three blades an inch apart with a cover on the top connecting the blades. The Sword ends in a 3" Bronze Snakes head with fangs dropping down 4". The Hilt of the sword is a simple Metal handle attached to the blades.

Shikai Abilities:

Ability 1: Chien kama (Delayed Bite)
An unspoken ability that is active from the activation of the Shikai. This ability Cause the Fangs on the snake head to drip a poison which slows their reactions. The more the person moves the more quicker the Venom Reacts. It is possible to stop the poison and destroy by remaining completely immobile for 12 hours.

Ability 2: Hebi gurea (Serpent Glare)
The Eyes on the Snake Project an orange forcefield out in front of the wielder, This forcefield is made up of a gas that Blurs anyone who gets it in their eyes vision and if enough gets in, it can temporarily blind them.

Bankai: Gozu no hebi no kami (Five headed Serpent God)

Bankai Apearance: The Bankai Changes massively from Shikai. To start off with the wielder is now wearing a set of Bronze plate armour, with each of the pieces of metal shaped like a snakes scales. On the Wielders back there is a Snakes tail 10cm in Diameter going for 3 metres off their back, the user has full control of it as if it were a limb on their body. This tail moves up to the Shoulders where it breaks off into 5 separate necks each 5cm in Diameter ending with a snake head. The two outside heads travel down the arms, these are missing their bottom jaws and fangs, they also have a silver colouration. piercing the centre of the snout of each arm head is a 12" blade. The second two heads hover above the shoulders on their necks, these have both 3" fangs and a bottom jaw, these two heads are Bronze.. The most central head hovers directly above the wielder, and is Gold rather than the Bronze of the others. other than it's colour it is the same as the other two inner heads.

Banakai abilities:

Ability 1: Dorippingu kiba doku (Dripping Fang Venom)
The Central Golden head lunges forward and bites it's opponents, releasing a potent venom into their bloodstream. This venom Slowly stops everyone of the bodily function's, starting with it's ability to feel pain. Eventually the poison causes their vital organs to cease functioning and die.

Ability 2: Buronzusukēru san yoroi (Bronze scale acid armour)
The Bronze heads move down into a defensive position over across the wielder forming and almost impregnable defence, if the wielder chooses to do so he can produce an acid from beneath the scales, this acid will soak the Snake necks but wont dissolve the scales or the wielder, but anything else that comes into contact with it will be disssolved.

Ability 3: Zanshu hebi (Beheaded Snake)
If the head of one of the Snakes is cut off, another one can grow in it's place, The previous head dissolves into a acidic gas the remains in the air, anyone other than the user comes into contact with it they suffer horrendous chemical burns. However if the backbone connecting the Necks to the tail is severed, the Bankai is broken.
sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas InuyashaGames said…
meh

Man this one took me a while mainly cause I haven't had internet for a while lol.

Sealed Name: doragan naito ( dragon knight )

Release command: Destroy everything and die. Then return anew

Appearance: doragan naito takes the form of a basic broad sword. The blade is a double edge blade and is made of platinum. The hilt is a basic blue color the hilt is roughly 4-5 inches long. Decorated in roughly the center of the hilt is a golden Chinese dragon. The blade is roughly 3-4 feet long. The user holds in both hands.

Shikai appearance:
the sword basically remains the same. The blade lowers to about 1-2 feet in length and the hilt lowers to about 2-3 inches long. A shield appears on the users back. The shield is a basic round shield decorated with golden dragons of all shapes and sizes. The shield is made with a rare reiatsu infused diamond. The shield can never break but can be dispersed. The shield drains reiatsu when active. If the shield drains half the users spiritual pressure it will disappear and the shield cannot be activated untill 1 the user has waited 1 hour and 2 the user has full spiritual pressure



Shikai abilities:

Ryu no gekido ( draconic rage )
The user spiritual pressure manifests in the form of a red Chinese dragon head made of fire. The sword becomes dull and unusable. The dragon is coming from the depths of the users inner world. The user acts like a portal he does not control the dragon he only guides it. The dragon is never fully out of the users body aka the 'portal' so it looks like reiatsu engulfing the user. With the dragon in this form the user heals at 4 times that of a normal shinigami. The ability does not have to be spoken and can only be used when angered. It can absorb all reiatsu based abilities temporarily increasing the ability to heal to be 6 times faster then a normal shinigami.

Ryu No Yobidasu ( draconic summon )
The user thrusts the shield forward 1st effect of this: blocks all in coming attacks. 2nd effect: creates a portal into the user inner world temporally release the red Chinese dragon from the user. The user must keep hold of both the sword and the shield for the ability to work a full strength. The sword is not need but it helps control the dragon. The only way for the ability to be broken is 1. The user forcefully ends the ability. 2. The shield runs out of reiatsu. 3. The shield is knocked out of the users hand.

Bankai name: za doki no za doragan naito ( the wrath of the dragon knight )

Bankai appearance:
The shield disappears and is replaced by a full body armor. This armor appears as if it is made with 'dragon scales'. The scales are colored blood red. The armor is made of the same material as the shield. The armor cannot be penetrated when the user is at half reiatsu level for higher. If they users reiatsu goes under 1/2 the users armor can be penetrated and destroyed. The armor can regenerate If the user gains enough reiatsu. if the armor is broken it disables the bankai.

Bankai abilities:

Advanced Draconic Summon
This ability has 3 stages they have the same properties as Ryu No Yobidasu ( not gonna translate these xD )
The stages are:
Advanced Draconic Summon: Tri Summon
This summons 3 Chinese dragons the user can control. One red dragon. One blue dragon. One gold dragon.
The next stage is:
Advanced Draconic Summon: White Death
This summons a Chinese dragon made of pure white light with a deep black coloring in its eyes. This stage also can summon the dragons of the Tri Summon stage along with White Deaths dragon. White death can destroy any foe with a reiatsu level below 1/4 the users total reiatsu.
The last stage is:
Advanced Draconic Summon: Total Annihilation
This stage can do both effects of the previous two. It's ability can be caster but at the cost of half the users total life force. The ability summons 10 huge Chinese dragons there scales are black with pure white eyes. It also summons 1 more dragon double the size of the other 10. This one has blood red scales. Deep black eyes and it is exhaling fire from both nostrils. It takes the user half there reiatsu to summon all 11 dragons. Each dragon has the capability to destroy an Aizen strength foe with a single strike. Of course at a cost. For every person he kills with a large reiatsu amount he will loose some of his life force. The blood red dragon can destroy the earth if not the sun with one blow at max power but this would kill the user before the dragon could even launch the attack. After about 10 Aizen strength foes the user will die.


Inner World: (don't hate me some of the abilities reference it so I kinda have to :3)
The inner world is a volcanic island occasionally erupting. There is dragons flying everywhere mostly the ones the abilities reference. There is so much land you could build 20 gigantic mansions and still have a 5 mile yard each. The volcano, is about the size of 4 of those "mansion sized plots". There are other islands far away from that island but the user is never able to see them so I won't bother describing them.the closest island though is a decellent ( have know idea how to spell that xD) wasteland. (Anyone get my reference to another zanpaktou I made on a different account?)


Hope you like it if I come up with any changes I will make them :P
sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas Senato said…
It's time, to release my favourite of my creations so far!

Name: Kessoku (Unity)

Sealed Form: Kessouku's sealed form is a 1,5 meter staff, the bottom of which can be removed to reveal a blade. The back half of the blade is a pure white, which transitions to a pure black at the front (meaning it's a gray-ish colour in the middle)

Kessoku has two releases for shikai, each release changes the abilities of the weapon completely.

Release command: Zandaka o hakai suru (Destroy Balance)

Shikai form: The zanpakuto becomes a beautiful black wooden staff, with a length of 1,5 meters. The top of the blade sports two pure black snakes coiling upwards. The top of the snakes' heads point towards a pure black crystal orb which floats just above the the end of the wood, in between the two heads.

Shikai abilities:

Tanmonoshitsu (Antimatter): The wielder points the tip of the staff towards the enemy, a ball of black spiritual energy forms just around the orb, then fires forwards at the wielder's target.

Yami hebi (Dark Snakes): Black energy forms around the two snakes on the staff, after charging enough, the energy will charge off at the wielder's target. The snakes will follow after the target until destroyed, or the wielder ends their chase.

Nuru bun'ya (Null Field): The wielder points the staff upwards, resulting in the snakes and orb glowing for a moment. The according to the amount of spiritual energy used, a soft black mist will cover the area, anyone within the area of the black mist (including the caster) cannot use any forms of kido. (This has no effect on zanpakuto abilities)

Release command: Zandaka o kaifuku suru (Restore Balance)

Shikai form: The zanpakuto becomes a beautiful white woden staff, with a length of 1,5 meters.The top of the blade sports two pure white snakes coiling upwards. The tops of the snakes' heads point towards a pure whtie crystal orb which floats just above the the end of the wood, in between the two heads.

Shikai abilties:

Bōgo kabe (Protective barrier): The wielder points the tip of the staff forwards. White energy swirls in front of the staff and forms a white barrier, which protects against both kido- and physical-based attacks.

Hikari hedi (Light Snakes): White energy forms around the two snakes on the staff, after charging enough, the energy will charge off towards the wielder and/or their allies. The snakes will coil softly around the allies and heal them of their injuries until they are completely healed, or the wielder ends the abilitiy.

Jūden bun'ya (Charging field): The wielder points the staff upwards, resulting in the snakes and orb glowing for a moment. The according to the amount of spiritual energy used, a soft white-gold mist will cover the area, the mist will drain any kido used by enemies, and reform it into reiatsu which can be added to the wielder's and/or their allies' reiatsu.

(Any active effects of either shikai end when the wielder switches between forms.)

Bankai: Ni Tamashī no kessoku (Unity of two souls)

In bankai the wielder can switch forms simply by saying: Hakai suru (Destroy) or Fukugen suru (Restore)

All shikai abilities can be used in their respective forms.

Bankai form:

Dark form: The wielder's hair turns pure black, they now wear a long, open black jacket, which completely covers their arms and reaches down to their ankles. They wear a black tank-top and silver-lined black leggins, which cover the feet as well. The skin gains a greyish-black colour, and their iris turns a dark red.

Light form: The wielder;s hair turns a pure white, they now wear a long sleeveless white gown which is slit open at the sides from the knee down to allow for easy movement. They have short white gloves on their hands and long gold-lined white stockings covering their legs and feet. The skin becomes pale white, and their iris turns a light blue.

Dark form bankai abilities:

Hakai no shūshi (Master of destruction): The wielder can now make dark energy take any form they wish, and use it to attack the enemy. It can be used for ranged attacks or it can be a form the wielder holds to attack in melee alongside their staff. (This energy cannot be used for any defensive purposes.)

Kaikishoku (Total eclipse): This is a follow-up ability to Nuru bun'ya, the wielder once again raises their staff into the air, the soft black mist will thicken and create a dome around the wielder and their target. Anyone within the dome cannot be sensed from outside, and vice-versa. Attempting to forcefully exit/enter the dome will result in the loss of about half of one's spiritual energy. The dome can be broken if enough power is applied from the outside (Since it can only be effected by kido, and within the dome the effects of Nuru bun'ya are still active.)

Light form bankai abilities:

Sōzō no shūshi (Master of creation): The wielder can make light energy take any form they desire, these constructs can be used for anything besides offense.

Hikari no inkan (Seal of light): The wielder charges energy within the two snake heads on the staff. After charging for 1 minute they can seal the enemy's zanpakuto completely. However this ends once they switch form or end bankai.

General bankai ability:

Naibu kōsō (Internal conflict): This ability forces both spirits of the zanpakuto to unite under the wielder, the wielder's takes on both forms of their zanpakuto at the same time. Their appearance is split down the middle by a jagged line, the left side taking the appearance of the light form, and the right side taking the appearence of the dark form. Their clothing changes back to the general captains uniform, with the left side black and the right side white. The central part is a gray-ish colour, melding the two sides together. In this form the wielder must suppress both spirits of their zanpakuto, as they are constantly battling for control of their body. If one begins to over-power the other, then it will be visually noticable, as that form will take more of the wielder's body.
In this stage the zanpakuto splits into two scepters, each with one snake and half the orb (Essentially the staff has been split in half.) the left scepter takes the same form as the staff in light form, and the right takes dark form. The secepters are rougly 75cm in length each.
The wielder can use all abilties from both forms using their respective scepter, except for Kaikishoku and Hikari no inkan.

Eien no itami (Eternal pain): This is an ability that can only be used during Naibu kōsō, the wielder holds both scepters together so that both halves of the orb connect completely. Then a cyclone of light and dark energy fires out from the orb. If someone is caught in this energy, they will continually have their body burnt and cut, then healed back at the same time. Causing unnatural ammounts of pain, without actually killing the target. This ability can render anyone below captain class incapactiated.




Notes: Although Kaikishoku and Hikari no inkan are very powerful abilities, it is important to note, that they are only active during their respective forms just like all other abilities. Also Naibu kōsō is entirely dependent on the wielder's will power and if one of the spirits win, then the other is lost forever. The wielder's attitude will also change slowly as long as they remain in one of the forms, either becoming aggressive and gaining bloodlust (Dark form) or becoming kind and a pacifist (Light form)
sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas Ryuuikari said…
This is a Ryuumake (my lord, I'm hilarious...) of Senato's zanpakutō "Genso no Shihai-sha". link



Name: Genso no Shihai-sha (Ruler of the Elements)
Sealed appearance: Takes the form of a regular katana with a circular tsuba, dull grey hilt-wrapping and a grey sheathe.
Shikai release: Genso no Shihai-sha is always released by the command, “Synergise”. However depending on the wielder’s environment or the opponent they are facing, the elemental form that is released differs.

Shikai appearance: The sword has 8 different element forms: Fire, Water, Earth, Air, Lightning, Nature, Decay and Sound.

Shikai special abilities: Only one elemental form can be released at a time and which form is released depends on the wielder’s environment or the opponent the wielder is facing. For example if the environment is very hot, magma filled etc. or the opponent has a fire-like ability then the form “Kaōja” will be released. If the environment is wet, rainy or the opponent has a water-like ability then the form “Suiōja” will be released and so on and so forth. Each individual form gifts the wielder with a particular added power.

Shikai forms:
Kaōja (Fire Monarch): Increases the wielder's physical strength and speed and offers the wielder high resistance to heat and fire but it also lowers the wielder’s physical endurance and durability. The blade of the katana is engulfed in a vibrant red-orange flame while this form is active.

Suiōja (Water Monarch): Allows the wielder to heal themselves and others by ‘cutting’ the wound or injury with the water-like blade. Due to the blade’s liquid state, it doesn’t offer much offensive capabilities. When this form is activated the blade of the katana transmutes into dark blue liquid-like substance but still retains its blade-like structure.

Doōja (Earth Monarch): Drastically increases the wielder's physical strength and durability but drastically lowers the wielder’s physical speed and agility. When this form is activated the blade of the katana transmutes into a heavy solid stone-like substance.

Kūōja (Air Monarch): Drastically increases the wielder's physical speed and agility but lowers the wielder’s physical strength and drastically lowers their physical durability. Wind constantly revolves around the blade of the katana like a vortex while this form is active.

Raiōja (Lightning Monarch): Drastically increases the wielder's physical speed, increases the wielder’s agility, offers the wielder high resistance to the effects of electricity but lowers physical durability and drastically lowers physical endurance. Violent sparks of electricity constantly crackles around the blade of the katana while this form is active.

Shizenōja (Nature Monarch): Drastically increases the wielder's sensory and spiritual perceptions and also increases physical endurance but lowers physical strength, speed, durability. When this form is activated the blade of the katana transmutes into multiple roots that are wrapped around one-another to create a blade-like structure.

Gensuiōja (Decay Monarch): Attacks inflicted by the serrated edge of the blade infect the target with the blade’s poison, causing the wound to undergo necrosis if not treated within a minute or two. When this form is activated the katana’s blade edge becomes serrated with small drips of black poison being secreted from it.

Onōja (Sound Monarch): Renders the wielder’s unable to be detected via sound (unless consciously willing themselves to be detected). It also enhances the cutting power of the blade and drastically enhances the wielder’s sense of hearing. The blade of the katana emits a constant humming noise due to it vibrating thousands of times a second.


Bankai: Genso no Kesshō Shihai-sha (Final Ruler of the Elements)
Bankai appearance: Genso no Kesshō Shihai-sha forms another smaller blade that resembles a wakizashi with the same circular tsuba and dull grey hilt-wrapping giving the wielder a daishō pairing.

Bankai special abilities: Two blades allow the wielder to combine the use of two elements simultaneously. The katana retains the elemental form it possessed whilst in shikai but cannot change to another elemental form. The wielder can freely change what elemental form the wakizashi takes on however the overall power of the boosts that the forms give are lower as a result. The wielder cannot use the same elemental form on both blades. Genso no Kesshō Shihai-sha also gains two additional elements.

Yōōja (Shadow Monarch): When used with one of the 8 shikai elements, this additional form enables the wielder to absorb/consume the element of the elemental form as well as enabling the wielder to cloak parts or all of their body in said element e.g. if used alongside Kaōja the wielder would then be able to absorb/consume fire as well as cloak part or all of their body in fire (absorbed/consumed elements restore the wielder’s spiritual energy). The wakizashi constantly emits a wispy black smoky substance while this form is active.

Kōōja (Light Monarch): When used with one of the 8 shikai elements, this additional form enables the wielder to generate and manipulate the element of the elemental form e.g. if used alongside Raiōja the wielder would then be able to generate and manipulate electricity from the katana. The wakizashi constantly emits a soft white light while this form is active.
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Senato commented…
I really like what you did with it Ryuu! I defintely like this one madami than my original xD sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas
sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas InuyashaGames said…

Sealed Name: doragan naito ( dragon knight )

Release command: Destroy everything and die. Then return anew

Appearance: doragan naito takes the form of a basic broad sword. The blade is a double edge blade and is made of platinum. The hilt is a basic blue color the hilt is roughly 4-5 inches long. Decorated in roughly the center of the hilt is a golden Chinese dragon. The blade is roughly 3-4 feet long. The user holds in both hands.

Shikai appearance:
the sword basically remains the same. The blade lowers to about 1-2 feet in length and the hilt lowers to about 2-3 inches long. A shield appears on the users back. The shield is a basic round shield decorated with golden dragons of all shapes and sizes. The shield is made with a rare reiatsu infused diamond. The shield can never break but can be dispersed. The shield drains reiatsu when active. If the shield drains half the users spiritual pressure it will disappear and the shield cannot be activated untill 1 the user has waited 1 hour and 2 the user has full spiritual pressure



Shikai abilities:

Ryu no gekido ( draconic rage )
The user spiritual pressure manifests in the form of a red Chinese dragon head made of fire. The sword becomes dull and unusable. The dragon is coming from the depths of the users inner world. The user acts like a portal he does not control the dragon he only guides it. The dragon is never fully out of the users body aka the 'portal' so it looks like reiatsu engulfing the user. With the dragon in this form the user heals at 4 times that of a normal shinigami. The ability does not have to be spoken and can only be used when angered. It can absorb all reiatsu based abilities temporarily increasing the ability to heal to be 6 times faster then a normal shinigami.

Ryu No Yobidasu ( draconic summon )
The user thrusts the shield forward 1st effect of this: blocks all in coming attacks. 2nd effect: creates a portal into the user inner world temporally release the red Chinese dragon from the user. The user must keep hold of both the sword and the shield for the ability to work a full strength. The sword is not need but it helps control the dragon. The only way for the ability to be broken is 1. The user forcefully ends the ability. 2. The shield runs out of reiatsu. 3. The shield is knocked out of the users hand.

Bankai name: za doki no za doragan naito ( the wrath of the dragon knight )

Bankai appearance:
The shield disappears and is replaced by a full body armor. This armor appears as if it is made with 'dragon scales'. The scales are colored blood red. The armor is made of the same material as the shield. The armor cannot be penetrated when the user is at half reiatsu level for higher. If they users reiatsu goes under 1/2 the users armor can be penetrated and destroyed. The armor can regenerate If the user gains enough reiatsu. if the armor is broken it disables the bankai.

Bankai abilities:

Ryu No meiun (Draconic doom)
This ability basically creates a atom bomb strength blast. The ability to be cast uses the naruto hand seals (but I'm not copy any ability from naruto I just like the idea of weaving hand signs) if you need to look these up please do. The hand signs in order are:
Hitsuji, Ushi, Ne, Tatsu, Saru, Hitsuji, Mi, U, and finally, I
When done correctly this ability will first launch the user backwards away from the target at that exact moment a shickwave will forcefully push the enemy backwards after the shockwave the blast activates.

Advanced Draconic Summon
This ability has 3 stages they have the same properties as Ryu No Yobidasu ( not gonna translate these xD )
The stages are:
Advanced Draconic Summon: Tri Summon
This summons 3 Chinese dragons the user can control. One red dragon. One blue dragon. One gold dragon. Each have there own ability. The blue one can control water and ice. The red one can control fire and lava. The gold one can control dark and light energies.
The next stage is:
Advanced Draconic Summon: White Death
This summons a Chinese dragon made of pure white light with a deep black coloring in its eyes. This stage also can summon the dragons of the Tri Summon stage along with White Deaths dragon. White death can destroy any foe with a reiatsu level below 1/4 the users total reiatsu.
The last stage is:
Advanced Draconic Summon: Total Annihilation
This stage can do both effects of the previous two. It's ability can be caster but at the cost of half the users total life force. The ability summons 10 huge Chinese dragons there scales are black with pure white eyes. It also summons 1 more dragon double the size of the other 10. This one has blood red scales. Deep black eyes and it is exhaling fire from both nostrils. It takes the user half there reiatsu to summon all 11 dragons. Each dragon has the capability to destroy an Aizen strength foe with a single strike. Of course at a cost. For every person he kills with a large reiatsu amount he will loose some of his life force. The blood red dragon can destroy the earth if not the sun with one blow at max power but this would kill the user before the dragon could even launch the attack. After about 10 Aizen strength foes, the user will die.


Inner World: (don't hate me some of the abilities reference it so I kinda have to :3)
The inner world is a volcanic island occasionally erupting. There is dragons flying everywhere mostly the ones the abilities reference. There is so much land you could build 20 gigantic mansions and still have a 5 mile yard each. The volcano, is about the size of 4 of those "mansion sized plots". There are other islands far away from that island but the user is never able to see them so I won't bother describing them.the closest island though is a decellent ( have know idea how to spell that xD) wasteland. (Anyone get my reference to another zanpaktou I made on a different account?)


Hope you enjoy and yes I did change a few things
sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas alphonse33 said…
Name: yes nadoolshi (skinwalker)
Release command: give shape to the way
Appearance: it takes the form of a nodachi though there is fur attached to the hilt
Shikia appearance: the blade becomes longer and jagged
Shikia Abilities:
Kyushu suru (absorb): draws in reistu the more reistu that is absorbed the thicker the fur gets
Norowareta kiba (cursed fangs): releases the reistu in four condensed slashes can be used two to three times
Bankai release command: yes nadoolshi you (skinwalker god)
Bankai appearance: e sword disappears but the wielder becomes more beast like in nature and appearance attaining claws and fangs along with a increased sense of smell, hearing, and sight.
Bankai abilities:
Shifuto (shift): these ability allows the wielder to change into any animal the wielder is in complete understanding of, for a limited time of thirty to fourth seconds.
Norowareta Kiba: the destructive power slightly increases
Kyukyiku no kemono fomu ( ultimate beast form): in this form the wielder gets any increase of speed, strength, and destructive power but sacrifices all available reistu and defense, it only lasts two minutes. In this form the wielder looks similar to the wendigo from men except the fur changes with the wielder.
Inner world: the inner world looks like a giant forset. The spirit of the zanpakuto is constantly changing from one form to another.

alphonse33 commented…
* it is meant to say yee sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas
sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas alphonse33 said…
Name: Ni yoru kabocha (pumpkin duke)

Release command: dance with glee

Appearance: takes the form of a katana with the handgaurd looking like a jack-o-lantern

Shikia: when released it takes the form of five floating jack-o-lanterns that fly around the wielder.

Shikia abilities:
Rantan boei (lantern defense): two of the lanterns shoot out orange lights to form a shield from most attacks, can be used three times.
Rantanfuruasshu (lantern flash): three of the lanterns fly at the opponent at extreme speeds for a rapid attack, can be used two times
Maddodansu (mad dance): all the lanterns fly out and attack the opponent in a discordant dance pattern. Used once

Bankai release: Maddokabocha no o (mad pumpkin king)

Bankai: in bankai there are now ten lanterns floating around the wielder and discordant music emanating from them.

Bankai abilities:
Rantan boei: the # of lanterns increase from two to three and can be used four times
Maddodansu: can now be used two times and at a much faster speed.
Rantan-o no uta (lantern king song): this attack increases the frequency of the song playing to the point of near fatality to any one in a two mile radius( including the wielder) and attacks in a frenzied dance pattern, can only be used once (last resort technique).

Inner world: the inner world looks like the inside of a royal palace except it is filled with jack-o-lanterns.
The zanpakuto spirit looks like a scarecrow except it is dressed in a kings attire. It says home at the end of each sentence with a maniacal smile.

sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas alphonse33 said…
Name: Ochi (the fallen)

Release command: lead all to ruin and despair

Appearance: takes the form of a katana. The handgaurd looks like to black wings.

Shikia: the blade now has glowing sigils on it. The handguard disappears.

Shikia abilities:
Saluriel: one of the sigils one the sword starts to glow. The wielder then shots 2-3 energy snakes at the opponent. Can be used 4 times.
Magog: one of the sigils on the sword starts to glow. Increases the user strength for 1-2 minutes. Can be used once.
Lasciel: one of e sigils on the sword starts to glow. The wielder can create illusions that affect all the senses for 45 seconds. Can be used 2 times.

Bankai: Ribenji-o (Fallen king)

Bankai appearance: the sword disappears. The wielder becomes covered in sigils and grows two black wings (the abilities change to completely different ones in bankai).

Bankai abilities:
Anduriel: one of the sigils start to glow. The wielder can manipulate shadows to attack or defend for 29 seconds. Can be used 2 times.
Ursiel: one of the sigils start to glow. the wielder gains an increase in attack and defense for 15 seconds. Can be used once.
Imariel: one of the sigils start to glow. The wielder gains and increase in the power of their kido and come summon a swarm of insects to attack the opponent. Can be used twice and for 30 seconds.

Inner world: the inner world looks like red and black clouds. The place always smells of fire and brimstone. The spirit looks like a black shadow with black wings.

The people who have read the Dresden files know where I got the idea for the names of these abilities figured it would be cool idea.
InuyashaGames commented…
I like your zanpaktou but they have a lack of details it has enough to understand but if you look at mine (3 above this one) it has a lot of detail per ability also you don't have to put the number of times it can be used I'm not trying to be mean hope you understand :D sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas
sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas Ryuuikari said…
This one is definitely borderline OP... another from the vault...



Name: Kūkansai (Spatial Split)
Sealed appearance: It takes the form of a stylized katana; it has a silver tsuba that is shaped like a hollow oval with a cross-shape inside it (similar to the Quincy symbol), its hilt wrapping is silver, the blade curves slightly more than normal and it has a light grey sheathe.
Release command: Rend

Shikai appearance: Its appearance changes slightly with it gaining five indentations on the back edge; its tsuba gains four small spike shapes and its blade becomes slightly longer.

Shikai special abilities: Kūkansai is used mainly for melee combat but possesses the ability to become intangible at will. Kūkansai achieves intangibility by passing the wielder’s atoms through the spaces between the atoms of the object through which the wielder is moving; in this way the wielder and the object through which they are passing temporarily merge without interacting and each is left completely intact when the wielder has finished passing through the object. However due to this the wielder must become tangible again to interact with their environment. Kūkansai must recharge after a period of intangibility; the recharge time is directly proportional to the amount of time spent in an intangible state. The wielder can continuously stay in an intangible state for up to two minutes before having the need to recharge for twenty seconds. The wielder is still susceptible to vibration-based and energy-based attacks since they can cancel out the wielder’s intangibility; the wielder is also susceptible to temperature-based attacks although temperature-based attacks generally do not cancel the wielder’s intangibility.

Bankai name: Kūkan Haretsu (Spatial Rupture)
Bankai release: The wielder grabs the base of Kūkansai‘s hilt with two hands then initiates bankai. At that Kūkan Haretsu glows and begins to form two identical blades; as they peel away they become connected together at the base of the hilt by a long silver chain.
Bankai appearance: The blade resembles one of a dao but is the same length as in shikai and it retains the five indentations on the back edge. The wielder now wears altered attire: a sleeveless shihakushō, white tabi, dark silver fingerless gloves that cover up to the forearms and several silver chains around their neck.

Bankai special abilities: Kūkan Haretsu is still used mainly for melee combat but now possesses the ability of spatial mimicry (basically an enhanced form of intangibility); the wielder occupies space but does not have physical form, by literally becoming space itself. This also means that the wielder is completely unaffected by all attacks while in an intangible state, however the wielder still must become tangible again to be able to interact with the environment. The wielder can only stay in an intangible state for up to two minutes before needing to recharge for thirty seconds; the recharge time is still directly proportional to the time spent in an intangible state. The chain that connects the two blades can be extended a large distance at will and is extremely sturdy. Anything that the wielder is touching when they become intangible will become intangible as well.

Bankai technique(s):
Uchū no Mage (Bending of the Universe): Kūkan Haretsu bends and manipulates the space-time continuum allowing the wielder to instantly teleport anywhere via the creation of very short lived wormholes; the destination is limited only by the wielder’s imagination. However using the technique consumes a vast amount of spiritual energy (especially if carrying passengers) and is physically tiring. Attempting to use it more than a few times within a short space of time will have extremely detrimental effects to both the wielder and Kūkan Haretsu.

Zettai Kiri (Absolute Cut): Kūkan Haretsu manipulates the space around its blades to enable it to slice cleanly through any material, regardless of the material’s strength, hardness, density or makeup. This technique cannot be blocked and does not suffer from ‘time lag’ since it cuts through the very space-time continuum itself (which are the third and fourth dimensions). This technique is Kūkan Haretsu’s ultimate attack and thus uses a monstrous amount of spiritual energy to perform. Kūkan Haretsu must recharge for an hour before being able to use any abilities or techniques again. It cannot be used if the wielder is injured or in bad shape and attempting to do so will have extremely detrimental effects on both the wielder’s and Kūkan Haretsu’s wellbeing.
sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas Tailedfox66 said…
Zampakto/Shikai name: Guìzishǒu (Executioner)
Release command: Death awaits you.

Description: the blade is 6ft long, 2ft wide and resembles a kitchen cleaning knife with the blade black and silver. The guard looks like ichigos original zampakto guard and the handle is that of a medieval broardsword with a miniature skull at the end about 1inch long.

Bankai name: Shōuhuò Guìzishǒu (Reaping Executioner)

Description: the blade becomes a scythe with the same length as the shikai with the handle resembling a wooden club with the skull at the top and the blade coming out of the back of the skull, the blade is red and black with a long wave pattern resembling the scythe.

Shikai ability 1) when the blade comes into contact with blood it will absorb it to repair itself and the skull will turn blood red the more blood that gets absorbed.

Shikai ability 2) when the skull is completely coloured red, the blade releases 6 chains that latches onto the opponent and pulls them to the ground ready for me to make the final strike.

Bankai ability 1) same as the first Shikai ability but two times quicker and it also affects the user.

Bankai ability 2) the more the skull turns red the faster my movements are.

Bankai ability 3) when skull is completely red, the skull releases thousand of blood coloured chains that bind him to where ever he is (even in the sky) to anything within the area to hold them in place for the final strike.

I had this idea of what the Shikai and Bankai of kempachi zerakis zampakto may be like if he ever found out its name, if it does sound dark and gruesome the that is what I based it on when thinking of kempachi. I hope you like my idea.
Ryuuikari commented…
link sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas
Tailedfox66 commented…
to be honest, i don't read the manga as it's abit of a spoiler sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas
InuyashaGames commented…
Not really cause bleach stopped from the anime pov sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas
blackpanther666 commented…
^ It might have stopped, but it supposed to be starting again susunod March. So, it probably would end up being a spoiler, unless you like pagbaba manga madami than watching anime. sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas