kastilyo [xy xx] Runaway while you can

I decided to make my first tagahanga fiction about kastilyo and Beckett so constructive criticism is appreciated. Please comment.




"It's getting late, we should sleep on it." kastilyo sinabi looking at his watch.
Beckett looked up from the papers she was reading.
"Separately!" kastilyo stammered quickly.
Beckett lowered her eyes to the floor.
"Katherine Beckett, I never..." kastilyo whispered as he headed for the door.
"Well, why not, Castle? Am I not attractive enough for you?"
"No." kastilyo sinabi turning around.
Beckett got up from her chair and walked over to Castle. "Then what is it? Don't you sleep with...