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I've been thinking...

I am currently an English-Creative Pagsulat major in college, and I've been turning over an idea in my head for a while now. I want to practice on my own first 'novel.' I'm aware of copyright infringement and all that (I'm going to put a disclaimer XD), but I was thinking of rewriting Twilight. In my own way. Not as a parody, but with developed characters and a good storyline and plot. I think that Twilight had some potential in the hands of a capable author, and from what I've heard, I'm a pretty good writer.

I was going to write it as a fanfic on fanfiction.net. What do you think? I'm still on the edge of deciding whether I'll do it or not. If you like or dislike the idea say so, but just be polite please. And if you have ideas for it FANTASTIC! :D My email address is ladyvampresslilith@yahoo.com; please send me your ideas. It could be about anything to do with Twilight to make it better.

Please tell me what you think! Thank you!

LadyLilith (aka LadyCat aka Shelby) ♥
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Twilight_Dream said:
well, thinking that its a bad story is YOUR opinion. not fact. so please dont make it like it is. and what do you mean in the hands of a good d author? twilight was Stephenie Meyer's idea. no one els's. otherwise it wouldn't BE twilight. and rewriting it saying that YOU'LL make it better like your some accomplished may-akda makes it seem like your really full of yourself. so i would say no. im sorry if i haven't been polite but its just i got really ticked off seeing this question.
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I apologize that it made you angry, I was simply asking a question. No, I am not full of myself; I am actually the exact opposite. It took many other people saying that I was a good writer to consider this, and I still don't wholly believe them. I am no accomplished author; I never sinabi it once. It's a fanfic, so I can write it if I decide to do so; I will put the disclaimer on it saying that it is Stephenie Meyer's work. It would simply be an experiment of my abilities as an author. I personally think Ms. Meyer is not a good author, and I think that she could have made Twilight into a way better, madami well written series than what it is. I am curious as to what my version would be like.
LadyLilith posted sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas
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but how could that offend someone so much? it seems childish.
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can you please take one segundo to stop being rude and sarcastic?
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friendsfan101 said:
Well, I'd pag-ibig to see a story!
Even though I'm a tagahanga of Twilight, I don't think that SM is the best writer, now that I look back on Twilight, it kind of...sucks. (No offense, Twilight_Dream, I know you pag-ibig Twilight!) I think that it'd be cool to read a re-write of it. I don't think that it would be too bad, because there are a large numbers of Sinderella re-writes and nothing bad's happened. I'm all for it!
Of course, you'd have to write that you don't own Twilight if you put it up online, and I'm guessing that you would have to tweak some of the names and some aspects of the plot if you ever ilathala it, but I'd pag-ibig to read a story! I hope you write it, and please, tell me when you do! I'd enjoy pagbaba it. =)
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^-^ Thank you for your support! I'm thinking I may; once I've written some of it, I will post up a link. :)
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Cool! I can't wait to read it. =)
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Queenoftard said:
Personally, I think it's a brilliant idea. I've been toying with the idea myself.
I don't really have any specific ideas yet, as I'm pretty occupied with other projects, but I would pag-ibig to read your version.
Will you tell me if you do decide to write it? Or maybe you could just give me your username on fanfiction.net?
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My username on fanfiction.net is AikaOokami, and I might post a link to the first chapter up on the spot as well, if Dearheart doesn't see an issue with it. If you come up with any ideas for character or story development, please email me or message me and let me know and we can discuss it. People have sinabi that I'm a decent writer, but any help I can get is much appreciated. :)
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Dearheart said:
It's very true and very tragic...Twilight had a LOT of potential, but it was squelched and turned into a teeny-bopper drool fest. In the right hands, it could've turned out to be a genuinely great series.

If you want to rewrite Twilight "LadyCat style", then sa pamamagitan ng all means, go ahead. As long as you don't try to ilathala or sell it, I don't think you'll run into any trouble. And I think it could be a fun and interesting way for you to exercise your Pagsulat skills. However, I think it only fair to warn that link has already been done. So make sure your version stands out from the others people have done.

And hey, if you get creative enough with the plot and the characters, maybe you could change their names and ilathala it as an original work someday! ^__^
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Ah ha, LadyCat style. I like that. :) Thank you. As I said, if you got any ideas for character changes/flaws or ideas for the storyline, please contact me and discuss it with me. Any help I can get I will gladly take. :)
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mandapanda said:
Hmm. I'm actually very interested in pagbaba your version. I know Stephenie Meyer has some *cough*many*cough* grammatical errors in the books, however, maybe it was because of her lack of Pagsulat experience? We can't really be sure. I've heard The Host is pretty well written. Lol sorry. I'm getting off topic :)

As you know, I'm a huge Twilight fan, and I'm very curious as to how you will write your Twilight story. Will you be changing the main storyline? And will you add madami time and developement to characters you feel had been cheated? And will you be Pagsulat New Moon and the other books if your story does well? Mainly, I really want Breaking Dawn to be REDONE! lol I've found some rewrites, but not the way I wanted it haha

I pag-ibig Twilight because it is personal. Dearheart had sinabi above that making your character a blank is not something you want as an author... however, I pag-ibig that. There are alot of stories that have characters who are relatable and have relatable traits, but being able to become the character and how the story is told through the vessel (Bella), it further engulfs you and encaptures you. It's one thing to be captured and completely wrapped up in a book, but it's a whole different feeling when you feel like you are the character and you are in the story... My apologies if I sounded really corny there. lol

And, I will be honest. Some of the points that you had sinabi in your introduction irked me a little, just because I think Twilight has a good storyline and plot, but I KNOW that it wasn't your intentions :) Anyways, yes! I'm interested in pagbaba what you would have liked Twilight to be :) Hopefully you don't get chopped for this question. I already see some opposing and defensive answers. But I pag-ibig you and you have my support :)
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X3 I pag-ibig you too, mandapanda! Thank you so much for your support. Ha, Breaking Dawn sounds like a great challenge. If I do well with Twilight, I would pag-ibig to rewrite Breaking Dawn. I'm sorry that what I sinabi offended you, just my opinion as an English major. :) I definitely want to refine and develop the characters. The pagtatalo in my mind is what should stay and what should go as far as the story of whole goes. I want it to remain true to the original storyline, but there are some things I would like to alter as well. Anyways, thank you so much again. If you have any ideas at all about changes in the storyline or in the characters, please let me know. :)
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Oh and about Stephenie Meyer, I think that she may be a good author. All I have read of hers is the Twilight series, and in my opinion she rushed through it and got it published without properly going back on it and editing it to improve her basic ideals. I believe that all writers should do that before presenting a finalized piece of work, and I just don't think she did.
LadyLilith posted sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas
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No need to apologize! Opinions are great! Lol and yes. Breaking Dawn will be a hefty challenge! haha I will input on Breaking Dawn if you decide to re-write it! haha I have been told a few times that I have a future as a writer (LOL, i don't think so), and I was thinking about Pagsulat Breaking Dawn the way I wanted it, but I think it'd be too much! And I would constantly edit my work. Haha I always do that! But good luck with your story! I look pasulong to seeing how it differs from the original!
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this-is-my-name said:
Sounds like an interesting idea... I'd pag-ibig to read your version if you decide to write it.

Just please, for the pag-ibig of god, fix Bella!
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Oh, that's DEFINITELY happening.
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violetbabe said:
Yes! You should definitely do it. I know that if a capable may-akda rewrote Twilight, it would be excellent. :)
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Yes, I believe so too. :) Not saying I'm that author, but I'd like to see what I can do with it.
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snoznoodle said:
It is a great idea! I used to like the book and if it wasn't for this spot and the twi-hards I probably still would. If it was written sa pamamagitan ng someone who knows what they're doing I think it would solve my issues with it :)

Get to work! :D
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XD Yes ma'am! *Salute* And I'm touched that you have so much faith in me! I'll try not to let you down!
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MadamOcta13 said:
I think that's an amazing idea! I would so read it if someone else redid it! I'd pag-ibig a good vampire pag-ibig story (not a bad Meyerpire lust story)! You should make Bella have so much madami depth and personality...I'm actually thinking about this now...I'm tempted to do the same (but I probably won't).
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Well any ideas you got, you can throw at me. :) I might make a pagtitip. on here where people can give me ideas and we can all discuss it together. Bella is definitely something I plan on working on.
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hpfreak14 said:
You rewriting it reminds me of something that happened today.

In english my teacher sinabi "I have to read Twilight for my descriptive Pagsulat class. (yes teachers go to school to learn how to teach)The first few pages were descriptive. If it was written with less pages sa pamamagitan ng a better may-akda i think i would enjoy it more"

basically every twilight tagahanga was really annoyed. Not many students in my class like him now but others adore and respect him.

The thought of you rewriting it brought that up in my mind.

I would read it also if you did
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Well I'm glad the whole world's not going to hell. No offense intended towards Twilight or Stephenie Meyer. XD Thank you!
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sleazy_weasley said:
@Twilight_Dream: You were incredibly rude to Lady Lilith; she posted a perfectly good question, and you just accused her of being up herself, which she was not. She was merely stating her opinion on Twilight, and how she would like to recreate it.

In my own opinion, I think it is a brilliant idea! It would be interesting to read Twilight in a well-written form with developed characters - seeing as Meyer failed to do so.

Can't wait to read it on Fanfiction! :D Good luck! xox

P.S. When you finish it, send us all a link!
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X3 Thank you very much, sleazy_weasley. I will definitely let you know when the first chapter's out.
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see, this is what happens any time i try to post MY opinion. i get jumped on like a pack of dogs.
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i didnt mean it literally. and you know that.
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italiangirl976 said:
I think it is a bad idea. It was Stephenie Meyer's idea. Not yours.
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Understandable.
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bookworm12345 said:
Twilght hAs no potinetial I wouldn't bother trying make ur own I'd rather read ur orignial ideas
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Hmmm, I don't agree with the first part (even as anti Twilight as I am). But I'm pleased that you're interested in my other works. :) I have posted a lot of mga tula on my deviantart account in the link here if you would like to read it: link
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rachaelwsz said:
I'm actually kinda curious how your version will turn out... so I say: Do it. =)



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Oh and I forgot to mention... Breaking Dawn! I think that's a challenge... So a rewrite should be interesting... =)
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Ohhh yeah. *Cracks knuckles* Breaking Dawn should be something. Lol
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MrazBell10 said:
Well....I think... it's a good idea...
I want to see how it turns out...
I'm a little offended because...you see...I'm a Twilight fanatic...and...I read the Twilight Saga over and over again...
but I want to see it with other's point of view...
As a bookworm...
PLEASE!!! IF YOU FINISH THE WHOLE TWILIGHT SAGA PLS. E-MAIL IT AT MY ACCOUNT IN YAHOO: mraz_bell10@yahoo.com

Thanks...
♥ ya'...

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Hey, you know what? It's perfectly understandable that you're a bit offended, and that's just fine. I think it's really, really great that you're a Twilight fanatic, but that you're civil to the people who don't like it. That's madami than I can say for other Twi-fans I've run into. So keep it up! You're awesome! (Bookworms FTW!) =)
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katiecain said:
DO IT AND DON'T MURDER JACOB'S CHARACTER LIKE STEPHENIE DID, LADYCAT. KTHX? :) ♥
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XDDD That's one of the things that will change. As GrintCat sinabi somewhere else...he won't be humping Renesmee's leg sa pamamagitan ng the end of it. Or something like that, it was funny. XD
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ya atleast make him imprint on a human please.i am begging u
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'he won't be humping Renesmee's leg sa pamamagitan ng the end of it' HA HA HA HA HA.
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Matsy23 said:
cool!!!!! thats a pretty good idea!!!!! ^^
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Book_freak said:
It could work, just try to do it better than the origonal. Not that it could be worse :P lol
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snusnu13 said:
OMG when are you going to write it? it sounds fantastic. I was considering re-writing it for my enjoyment. I would like to see Bella with some convincing flaws and Edward with some flaws, any flaws!

I think it wouldn't be that difficult to re-write the bad book series, maybe do a alternate version where it is scientifically correct so Renesmee cant possibly exist, that would be cool.

I think it would be way awesome and please leave a comment on my response when it's up on fanfiction.net.

And for all people who think S.Meyer is a great writer, please reconsider because personally, I think she should recieve some critism and not be so uptight about it.

JK Rowling and HP 4 Eva!
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 OMG when are you going to write it? it sounds fantastic. I was considering re-writing it for my enjoyment. I would like to see Bella with some convincing flaws and Edward with some flaws, any flaws! I think it wouldn't be that difficult to re-write the bad book series, maybe do a alternate version where it is scientifically correct so Renesmee cant possibly exist, that would be cool. I think it would be way awesome and please leave a comment on my response when it's up on fanfiction.net. And for all people who think S.Meyer is a great writer, please reconsider because personally, I think she should recieve some critism and not be so uptight about it. JK Rowling and HP 4 Eva!
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XDDDD Omg. I'm majoring in English, so 'unpossible' cracked me up. I feel like such a dork lol. But yes, I will certainly let you know. ^-^
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thanks, i really hope you do it
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