doktor na A Poem I wrote during the last days of Tennant!

Ahthen posted on Aug 20, 2012 at 02:08AM

Burnt orange skies
A forest of fire
The beauty of the great city
Incased in a great glass dome
A Utopia, of spendors and marvels
This is before the Time War

The Dome Cracked
The world shook
The city vanished
The people ran, though time to escape
But all found their doom

All but one, the only one
The one who stopped the war
Stopped the suffering,
Stopped the madness,
And for what reward,
an eternity along
His people
His family
His friends
Gone forever

But he ended their suffering
ended the corruption
But he can't forgive himself.

(my teacher marked this with a "WOW" i'm not sure if that's a good wow or a bad one.. please tell me what you think, i've beenn trying to figure it out for three years!)

doktor na 4 ang sumagot

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sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas no1drwhofan said…
Very well-written!!!!! <3 The wording is so cleverly done, that the main objective and point being conveyed is forgotten ond I just sat in a stupor, whilst reading it. <3
Beautiful!!!!! :)
sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas BuffyJ442 said…
sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas DW_girl said…
So good. Well done
sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas j1edwardcullen7 said…
Ha, this is fun!