OK, I know my nakaraan fanfictions pretty much suck, so... Give me some feedback, please. I think that this site is dead. :( Also, I have a new-ish OC. Let me know if I get any facts off.
I walked through Central, heading to the Command Center. I pulled my black and white amerikana hood tighter over my head. I held out my trademark pocketwatch to ipakita the guards I was a State Alchemist. I went into Roy's office. A golden-haired boy sat on the couch. He turned to look at me as I walked in. I said, "Hello, Colonel Mustang. What do you have for me? And who is the boy?"