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Suddenly, Dumbledore got up, and said, "Before we begin the feast, I would like to say a few words. "Precipice, departure, euthanasia. That is all." I wondered what that meant. Some of the older students looked a little worried, but then mumbled, "He is a little mad, yes." Suddenly, pagkain appeared on the table, and not just any food, but all the pagkain you could think of.
Turkey, corn, lobster, and my favorite, ♥sushi♥
I piled it on my plate. I ate each bite slowly, to savor the flavor. It...

Harry Potter strolled into the muggle play park and headed directly for the swings, he was certain that was where he would find them. A satisfied grin broke across his countenance as he caught sight of the two people he'd been searching for. There was Hermione clad in a pair of dark blue jeans, trainers and a hooded burgundy jumper pushing an excited Teddy on the swings. Harry grinned at the antics of his two taon old godson. Andromeda had come down with a nasty bit of Hungarian Dragon Flu and Harry had quite naturally taken on the task of looking after little Teddy until she was feeling herself...