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this is chapter three. like it says in the title. Im re editing my entire story and this is the edited version, Hope you like it. Send me a prop. tell me if you like it and how i could change it.

“Renesmee what’s wrong?” Samantha asked.
“Jacob.” I sinabi with a hiss.
“Who is Jacob?” Chris asked with a smirk.
“Not who you think he is Chris.” I sinabi annoyed.
“He has been a friend of my mo… aunt for years he is closer to my age though. My boyfriend goes to school on the reservation.”
“Then why do you look so distressed Renesmee?” Samantha asked worriedly.
“he never finished...

My first class was biology. My teacher, Mr. Banner, called me to the front of the room for an introduction. I just don’t understand why teachers don’t let kids make their own introductions.
“This is Renesmee Cullen. Her Grandfather works at the hospital. Please let her feel welcome. Miss Cullen please take a upuan behind Ms. Weber.”
I walked to my upuan aware of the stares.
“Hi. I'm Samantha. Welcome to the worst place on earth or as the school board refers to it as Forks High School.” The girl said
“Well it was hell trying not to come to here, but you know family.” I joked.
“Well...

“Jacob!” I was yelling from the bath room. I was in madami pain than I ever thought was possible. It felt like something was clawing its way out of my stomach. This couldn’t be possible I’d been pregnant for only a couple of months. “JACOB BLACK GET YOU asno UP HERE!” I was screaming so loud I thought Jacob would go def. He ran into the bath room and kneeled down beside me. “What’s wrong?” “I need to get to grandpa.” He picked me up and drove me to the house and carried me in.

“What’s wrong with her?” My mother came rushing to my side. “Mom stop just get grandpa.”...

I shifted away from him, pressing my back as far against the car door as it would go. The small puwang was too close and his scent was overwhelming.
"Why?" I whispered. His eyes crinkled for a moment and he looked at me, his silver eyes stirring with hidden emotion.
"I'm not sure. The same reason your Jacob has one with you. It's not something we can control,"
"You can't have one with me. I pag-ibig Jake," He didn't flinch but I saw the deep hurt in his eyes. My puso stuttered. I didn't want to cause him any pain. His hand slowly moved up into the air and I didn't stop it.
"I'm sorry Renesmee....