I made some changes. Kiloni Lee Stars as "Shannon" from now on.
Tay: Yes! Let's go see Ray!
Jacob: Well I don't really feel like going. Tay.. (He threw his keys at her) You can take my car there. Scratch it, put a dent on it, i'll come after you. (He went to Ray's backyard)
*Taylee has a driver license. But her parents never actually thought of buying her a car*
Kayla: Come on.
//*---Driving--* At the Hospital, they went to the front desk\\
Tay: Hello.
Receptionist: (She sounded Nice) Hello Dears. How may I help you today?
Tay: We're here to visit Rayan Lopez. Is there anyway you can-
Receptionist: Oh...Rayan Lopez? He was checked out...(Checking Computer)..10 minutos ago.
Kayla: (She was panicking)
Tay: (She looked at Kay then back at the Rec) Um, what? There must be some kind of mistake!
Rec: This was a boy right? Two Braids? He tried to....(Checked Computer)...Commit Suicide? He was checked out sa pamamagitan ng this um......dark-haired, light-skinned girl?
Tay: Okay thanks.
//Tay and Kay were walking back to the car. Talking to each other\\
Tay: OH MY GOSH!! (Panicking) What are we going to do?!
Kay: We have to find Shannon! Duh!! (Also Panicking) Just breath!
//They both got into the car. But Tay didn't start the car\\
Tay: Where do you think Shan took him?
Kay: Her house?
Tay: That'll be too obvious! But fine.
//Tay drove to Shan's house. There was a note on the window\\
Dᴇᴀʀ Vɪsɪᴛᴏʀ,
Wᴇ ʜᴀᴠᴇ ᴍᴏᴠᴇᴅ. Tʜᴇ ғᴜʀɴɪᴛᴜʀᴇ ᴅᴏᴇsɴ'ᴛ ᴍᴀᴛᴛᴇʀ. Jᴜsᴛ ᴛʜʀᴏᴡ ɪᴛ ᴀᴡᴀʏ. Cʜᴇᴄᴋ ᴏᴜᴛ ᴛʜᴇ ᴘʟᴀᴄᴇ ɪғ ʏᴏᴜ'ᴅ ʟɪᴋᴇ.
Sɪɴᴄᴇʀᴇʟʏ,
NOBODY
Kay: I don't want to go in there! I'm scared!
Tay: (Sucked her teeth) Come on!
//They went inside carefully. No traps. They searched the place. Nothing suspicious. They went upstairs. Checked what Used To Be Shannon's room. Her mom was on the bed, eyes closed\\
Tay: Mrs.Williams?? (She inched closer to the kama then gasped)
Kay: We have to call the police!!
(There was a bullet in her neck. Yep. She was dead) *Murdered!*
Tay: No! They wont do anything! They'll just drop the case then go back to their doughnut-eating!!
//There was a whimpering noise in the closet\\
Kay: (She screamed then ran downstairs)
Tay: (Was about to run also but instead kicked the closet open)
//Jasmine was sitting in there. Apparently, crying and scared. BTW She's 14. Was a freshman to Tay's school last year. She was short\\
Tay: What the hell are you doing in there!?
Jas: Shan's watching! If you get in her way, she'll kill you! She's crazy!! I don't want any part of this!
//Tay convinced hasmin to come out and come downstairs with her\\
Kayla: (Grabbed a knife) Jasmine, I'm armed! Come at me b*tch!
Jas: (Hid behind Tay)
Tay: Kayla! Shut up. She's not going to do anything. *Let's not forget, Tay is 17. Kayla is 16. Both about to be Seniors*
//Taylee and Kayla did a full interrogation to Jasmine. They learned Shan just wants Ray. She killed her mother for trying to stop her plans. She threatened Jas. Chres knows her plan\\
(They all went outside)
Kay: Well thanks Jasmine. We didn't know you were that smart.
Tay: (Elbowed Kay in the arm)
Jas: Shannon, had me pretend that I was stupid. Just to make you think you were getting closer to unleashing her plan. (She walked down the road then disappeared at the turn)
//Taylee drove back home. The boys were at her front yard. Chilling in the sun\\
Taylee: Chresanto!
Chres: (He looked at her questioningly)
Tay: Tell us Shannon's plan. Now.
Chres: (He smirked) Don't worry about it.
Kayla: (She took out that knife) Don't make me use this!
Chres: (He didn't care) Use it.
Kayla: (She was too good-natured to do such thing)
Tay: Please tell us.
Chres: Fine. But I want s^x. From both of you.
Craig: (He was laying on the damo but quickly sprung up to him) Nigga back up. Taylee doesn't want to. And I know SURE AS HELL Kayla doesn't want to!
Chres: (Shrugged his shoulders, moved away then sat back down)
//Kayla suggested to Tay, they should go back to the hospital to ask the Receptionist questions\\
CUT!!!
