So I wrote this song yesterday & I would really like to know what you guys think of it. Thanks. :)

- I still remember you.
I was that new girl, you were that hot guy. Soon we would turn into a big mess. I looked at you, you looked at me, both waiting to say something. Who would've known that I would've fell so damn hard? But that's not where our story ends.
"Remember the araw we met? You turned me into a hot mess, now there's nothing I can do. You have that new girl, I'm still stuck on everything we've been thru. Baby I still remember you."
The days went by, I fell madami in love, just sa pamamagitan ng looking into your green eyes. Remember that night at your house? Shit who could forget. You had me head over heels, it was just so unreal, I was finally yours.
"Remember that araw we met? You turned me into a hot mess, now there's nothing I can do. You have your new girl, I'm still stuck on everything we've been thru. Baby I still remember you."
Now everything that happened with us has turned into memories. It's that typical high school story. I was just that new girl, that fell for that jock. & that's how our story ends. But heyyy
"Remember that araw we met? You turned me into a hot mess, now there's nothing I can do. You have that new girl, I'm still stuck on everything we've been thru. Baby I still remember youuuuu."
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LaDispute said:
Not bad but sort of cliche and unimaginatively worded..

Sorry :c
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animelol said:
Wow! Thats pretty good! I don't really know though without the tune, but I pag-ibig the lyrics!
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teentop449 said:
It sounds like a poem!

I <3 INFINITE!!
Sorry! random!!!
But yeah it sounds like a poem!!!!
i like it!!

Infinite is south korean!!<333
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 It sounds like a poem! I <3 INFINITE!! Sorry! random!!! But yeah it sounds like a poem!!!! i like it!! Infinite is south korean!!<333
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misscrazel said:
It's really good!
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ktichenor said:
I like it! I think it could be a poem or a song. Very cool! :)) I hope you write more
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