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The last solstice

Chapter 23: Deadline



“Exactly who do you think you are?!” the Princess of the Night snapped at Mirage without any preliminary, as soon as she closed the large door of her office.

“Princess, I…” the stallion began.

“Silence!” Luna exclaimed, angrily raising her hoof. “Do you think you’re above me?! When I let you in to the menacing secret, I wasn’t expecting this! I was expecting achievements! It has been three weeks since your last ulat and when I finally have the time and strength to trot up there, what do I see?!”

Mirage looked around in the room quickly, like if there was somepony else there who could help him out.

“I tell you what did I see.” the cobalt alicorn hissed and took a step toward Mirage. “I saw YOU, waltzing out of my sister’s room with a wide grin on your face, carefree of everything! Did you forget what’s at stake here?! DID YOU?!”

“No I haven’t!” Mirage called out on a high tone of voice, which overstepped the confines of respect.

However, the cutting edge of Luna’s words struck him in the chest. He wasn’t sure anymore if his last statement was still valid or not. He also could not believe he spent three weeks up in the Ivory Tower. Could it be?

“What did you do up there?! What progress can you ipakita me?!” Luna questioned mercilessly.

Mirage remained silent, and the Moon goddess took another step closer to him.

“Don’t you see?! I have put the fate of our entire race into your hooves! If you fail, everything will be Nawawala and I’m not going to stand sa pamamagitan ng and let that happen! Not without a fight! What did you spend the precious time with?! SPEAK!!!”

“I was earning Celestia’s trust, your Highness!” the blue earth parang buriko replied quietly.

“I sense confusion in you, but your words are true.” Luna softened a little after a long break.

“Please, Princess, you have to understand! This takes time and your sister’s soul is very fragile. I cannot urge her! One wrong ilipat and she breaks again and everything will be Nawawala as you said. I may have Nawawala control over the situation, but please give me another chance!” Mirage requested passionately.

“Hmm…” Luna murmured, rubbing her chin, seemingly Nawawala in thoughts. “All right. You may continue your work with my sister, but this time, I want proof of your progress.”

“What do you mean?”

“The solstice is near; we have two and a half months to be exact. You know what happens if my sister will not perform her royal duty until then. I want to meet with Celestia, muzzle to muzzle before that. You have exactly one buwan to make that happen!” the nocturnal alicorn raised her hoof once madami to silence Mirage’s protest. “This is not a matter of bargain. If you fail, I will pull you off the case and you will never see her again. Is that understood?”

“Yes… your Majesty…” Mirage gulped.

“Good. And remember! This is your last chance! In fact, this is everypony’s last chance!


*** ***

Nocturnal Mirage gazed upon the obsidian skies, studying the flickering stars. He was sitting like a statue, on Celestia’s balcony, beside him there was the solar alicorn and between them stood a golden telescope. Autumn has arrived and the coldness started to ipakita its sharp teeth, but the two ponies did not seem to be affected sa pamamagitan ng it. It was almost midnight and the last lights of Canterlot slowly died out and the windows turned dark as the residents went to sleep. The sky was clear, not even a tiny ulap kept the stars and the Moon to pour their cool white light on the landscape.

It was the perfect time for stargazing. At first, Mirage was surprised the Princess invited him to sumali her for this nocturnal activity; therefore the confrontation with Luna occurred on the worst possible day. Never before Celestia allowed him to enter her suite at night, they always sinabi goodbye in the evening, only to rejoin again early in the morning susunod day. The royal blue stallion understood this was a huge favor from the sun goddess and a sign of trust. Since Luna’s ultimatum, Mirage began to realize the full depths of his odd relationship with Celestia. The quarrel cleared his mind and even though he could not pull himself out of the solar alicorn’s aura, he was at least able to observe things from a rational point of view. He now comprehended what he achieved with the Princess, and despite Luna’s warning he began to accept the role of the apprentice beside Celestia. As he looked back on the past few weeks he recognized with surprise how close he felt to her. It seemed like he has known this strange mare in his entire life and assumed she must feel the same way about him. Why else she would be pagganap like this?

Although his mother, Summer Pride often came at night to haunt his dreams, Mirage began to doubt everything she had taught him about Celestia. He remembered his initial hatred towards her with shame. Summer always told him that the Princess was a tyrannical monster, a common war criminal, who destroyed King Sombra only because he wanted an independent Crystal Empire. But as the stallion kept looking at Celestia, he found nothing monstrous about her. On the contrary, he could not believe how could possibly somepony who’s so wise, sophisticated and kind be a tyrant?

“… and you see, over there… that’s the Ursa Minor!” Celestia sinabi excitedly.

Mirage was so Nawawala in his thoughts he didn’t realize the solar Princess was talking to him for minutes.

“Excuse me, Princess?” Mirage shook his head.

“I said, if you look over there on the right, at two a clock, you can see the Ursa Minor constellation. It consists of seven stars; the brightest is called the Polaris… Oh my… I feel like I’m at the School for Gifted mga kabayong may sungay teaching young fillies and colts, ha ha!” Celestia chuckled.

The sound she made was short, yet it came from the puso and it was new. Mirage never heard it before; probably the Princess herself didn’t do it in over a decade.

“I hope I’m not boring you… you seemed to ipakita some interest in astronomy, that’s why I thought we could watch the stars together. I haven’t done it in a long time.” the white alicorn sinabi softly.

“No, no, please continue. It is very interesting.” Mirage replied quietly.

“All right. So, about the Polaris… it’s 360 light years from our planet…”

But her words did not reach Mirage’s brain, for he kept gazing at Celestia, trying to pick up the nakaraan thread of his thoughts. Her voice filled his ears with a pleasing resonance and she was utterly indulged in her presentation. In this uplifted condition she forgot about her billowing mane and the fluorescent hair returned to its natural position, no longer covering her old wounds. Even though it was dark, the black scars were clearly visible on her snow white amerikana which reflected the moonlight. Mirage tried to look away but it was attracting his eye and aroused his curiosity once again. It was the first time he could observe the scars from this close and Celestia wasn’t paying attention. The most severe injuries covered the right side of her chest and her face, but her ear, eyelid, hoof and neck were also affected.

It seems something burned the flesh long ago… the cobalt stallion thought. But in that moment, the Princess of the Sun snatched his vision. The enthusiastic smile immediately vanished and her features darkened. Mirage knew he made a fatal mistake, before Celestia opened her mouth to speak.

“It’s always about the scars, isn’t it?” she asked sadly, her voice was barely audible.

“No, no, I…” Mirage began but was silenced sa pamamagitan ng an alicorn the segundo time this day.

“I felt something was depressing you the entire night… but I thought…” Celestia sinabi as her mane slowly floated around her body, covering her wounds again. “I thought we’re passed this…”

“No, Princess, you are mistaken! We are… I… It’s just…” Mirage stuttered, desperately seeking for the right words.

“Go now.” the sun goddess sinabi coldly.

“Please, listen to me! It’s not what you think!” Mirage countered in frustration for he was forced to explain himself twice this day.

“I sinabi LEAVE!” Celestia yelled, her voice almost reaching the regions of the Royal Canterlot Voice.

“Let me explain…”

“LEAVE!!!” the alicorn stood up, menacingly towering on the smaller earth pony. “GET OUT! YOU WILL NEVER HAVE TO LOOK UPON THIS MONSTER!”

Sinister storm clouds appeared on the sky from nowhere, even though Mirage didn’t see the golden magical aura around Celestia’s horn. He assumed the dark cumulus was created sa pamamagitan ng her pure anger. He saw no other choice then to comply with her demands and quickly ran out of her suite fearing for his life. The door closed behind him with a loud bang and he remained alone in the dark hallway. He tried to get back inside but he bumped into an invisible repulsive wall. He doubled his efforts, even summoning upon his unique terra-magic, but the odd force got madami solid and madami powerful with every attempt. The royal blue stallion flopped down on the cold marble floor, gasping for air. He lay still for several hours in front of the door, but even from there he could hear Celestia’s violent sobs, coming from her bedroom.
posted by Seanthehedgehog
Chapter 3
New fan

By October 2012, I joined the fandom. It was wonderful with the music, and the fanfics (Though a few call it Fimfics I think) and I had to find a way to be a part of the group. I did. I had the great idea of combining Sonic The Hedgehog with My Little parang buriko in a fanfic called Hedgehog In Ponyville. The main character was the one I created, and he accidentally ended up in Equestria while trying to avoid Dr. Robotnik, the main villian of the story. The first two parts were nagkomento on sa pamamagitan ng a user named Epicskyrim54. He liked it, but I don't think he got a chance to read the rest...
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posted by Seanthehedgehog
Chapter 2
Finding out

I first heard of My Little parang buriko when I was 9. I didn't like it, but a few of my mga kaibigan (they were girls) made me play with them. I was embarrased at first, but I couldn't let them down. At that time I didn't know that the ponies my mga kaibigan were playing with, were scary G3 ponies. I didn't even know myself!

4 years later, I was watching Spongebob Squarepants when a commercial came on for a Princess Celestia toy. I was pissed off, and didn't even know about the bronies back then. Maybe they weren't even around yet. Perhaps they started being bronies toward the beginning of...
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posted by Canada24
"Having re read Cupcakes currently.. I still found it as serprisingly inspiring as I use too.. Particalary sa pamamagitan ng the writer. Honestly one of the most inspirating writers I've seen for these types of stories.. His descriptions.. Simply amazing. In fact. In this chapter, I'm trying use the same type of moods or whatever.."


CHAPTER 6:

When Twilight finally gained consciousness she found herself in a unnervingly dark room.

"Goodie, your awake" sinabi a sudden, fairly deep voice. Witch sounded almost familiar to the young mare.

At that point, Twilight a shadowy figure within the dark, staring back her with...
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posted by Seanthehedgehog
Culpepper was hiding a floor above the group that wanted to take the money from him.

Spike: Where is he?
Shining Armor: He has to be around here somewhere.
Culpepper: *drops suitcase*
Sean: Upstairs!! *runs*
Culpepper: *goes up a floor*
others: *follow*

Culpepper kept running up the stairs. After going up 6 floors, Sam tried to grab him, but Nawawala his grip, and fell on the others.

Sean: Congrats! You let him get ahead!
Culpepper: *goes onto roof* Oh dear
others: There he is!!
Culpepper: *climbs down*
mayor: Due to idiots that like history, we can't smash this building.
ponies: Look up there!
mayor: HEY!!...
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posted by Seanthehedgehog
Not far away from the stealth boat, a japanese freighter was sending supplies to South Korea. Things were going to be the same as it was in the nakaraan attack, or were they?

Steve Jobs: I see the japanese boat.
Snails: Get the North Koreans notified about this.
Steve Jobs: The Japanese will try to attack, but we need that misayl to hit Hong Kong, is it ready?
Snails: Press the magic button, and Hong Kong dissapears.
Steve Jobs: You've outlived your contract. *kills Snails*
Con: How dare you?!
Steve Jobs: It was snails, no one likes him, not even the bronies!
korean pony54: We have two airplanes...
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posted by Seanthehedgehog
After delivering the blueprints, Con was sent to a german military base in South Korea.

Fenix: Con, great to see you again
Con: Fenix, you can fucking walk! How's it been?
Fenix: Alright, but it was painful to get the leg on.
Con: At least you have one.
Fenix: So what do you want?
Con: I need to find out about a sunken ship in the sea of japan. Steve Jobs attacked it, but made it look like the North Koreans did the destruction
Fenix: I know how to get you there

6 minutos later, they were flying 4,500 feet above the water.

Fenix: Now what you want to do is cut the rope right when you hit the water....
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posted by Seanthehedgehog
Con had to go to Las Pegasus where Steve Jobs was hosting a party for his "excellent" news

car: Srow down!
Con: I wish S told me about the car talking!
usher: *opens door*
Con: *hands over keys* Don't let her boss you around.

Con walked into the building. When he got there, he was greeted with loud music, and flashing lights.

Con: Now let's see what they have here.
Carrot Top: Con?
Con: Oh, hey. I haven't seen you in a while
Carrot Top: *slaps Con*
Con: I see now. Other then being gone for too long what have I done to you?
Carrot Top: You don't remember?
Con: That's why I asked.
Carrot Top: How about...
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 London race track
London race track
There would be four races in London. bahaghari Dash would take the first one, Sean had the second, Daredevil would do the third, and the last race would belong to Nikki.

Felix: That bahaghari mare is going down.
Russian pony87: You sure boss?
Felix: Yes I'm sure.
Sean: You can do this.
Rainbow Dash: Yeah, I know.
Sean: Just saying. Good luck.
Rainbow Dash: *starts car*
Q.O.E: Let the race begin
racers: *drive*
Felix: *loads gun*
Rainbow Dash: *goes to 1st place*
Felix: I don't think so! *follows*
Sean: Hang on, that's Felix's car.
Daredevil: What do you mean?
Sean: That red Cobra!
Daredevil: Oh damnit!...
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posted by Seanthehedgehog
 Thomas' Flam Special
Thomas' Flam Special
All four of our bayani we're resting at the hideout. Nikki however, was remembering her first race four years ago. Before she had a Wrestler, her car was a Lightningbird.

DJ: *playing 50's rock*
Nikki: *upgrading transmission*
Thomas: Hey, that looks cool.
Nikki: Thanks. What do you have?
Thomas: See that Special over there?
Nikki: That car?
Thomas: Yeah. I'll take you on at the raceway if you want.
Nikki: Ok.

The two ponies got their car set up at the starting line.

Flag pony: You ready?
Nikki & Thomas: Ready!
Flag pony: 3... 2... 1... GO!!
Nikki: *floors it*
Thomas: *does burnout*
Nikki: *goes...
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posted by Seanthehedgehog
On a highway leaving Ponyville there was a truck. It was carrying heroine, and was going 60 miles an hour. Suddenly three cars showed up behind it. Nikki, Sean, and Daredevil were chasing it.

Sean: Ok, remember the plan?
Daredevil: Yeah!
Nikki: We stop the trucks, and get the drugs.
Sean: Perfect. You two get alongside it, I'll get infront. *goes faster*
Nikki: I have the left side
Daredevil: Right.
Sean: *gets in front of truck* You in position?
Nikki & Daredevil: Yeah!
Sean: Then here we go *slows down*
trucker: *honks horn*
Sean: Now this is where bahaghari Dash comes in. You hear me Dash?
Rainbow...
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posted by mariofan14
It was a rainy araw in the town of Ponyville on a Saturday. Nobody wanted to go outside during a rainy araw because they thought they would be afflicted sa pamamagitan ng a little bit of gloom. But then, there was a splash in a little puddle. Someone was walking someplace. But who? Let's follow that particular pony, shall we?

This parang buriko was making its way towards Sweet mansanas Acres, but for what reason? To buy some apples? Maybe, but this wasn't really the case. Anyways, the parang buriko knocked on the door in front of the house. Granny Smith opened it up, saying, "How can ah haylp ya?" "I've come for mansanas Bloom," the...
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posted by Seanthehedgehog
Warning, this has a extremely intense car chase. If you don't like intense action then do not read

Russians: *driving trucks*
Con: *driving behind them*
Russian trucker1: Who is that pony?
Sanchez: Attention, Con Mane has stolen one of our trucks. Stop him at all costs!
Russian trucker 1: I see him! *slows down*
Russian pony45: *driving bus*
Russian pony89: Stop!
Russian pony45: *stops* Get the rocket launchers, they're in the trunk.
Russian pony89: *grabs rocket launcher*
Russian trucker 1: *rams Con*
Con: *rams trucker*
Citizen 8975: *spins off road*
Con: *rams truck into canyon*
Construction worker:...
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posted by SomeoneButNoone
Location - Near Equestria Moutains
Time - 5:50
Alpha Team - Bravo we near location...
Dan - Roger that Alpha... Delta you near
FireDash - ye- HOLY CRAP RPG *silent*
Dan - DELTA DELTA! CRAP
Alpha Team - WE NEED BA- *silent*
NightFire - RPG!
Dan - apoy apoy *fire*
Marine - THIS CAR GET ONLY 2 FIRES FROM RPG!
Dan - WELL FIRE! *fire*
NighrFire - I-I DONT KNOW WHERE THEY ARE... RPG!
RPG hit Dan and NightFire
Dan - *lieing on ground* crap... NightFire... you ok
NightFire - yeah *wstand up*
There was apoy everywhere... they was knocked on 5 minutos and nuclear bomb exploted in air...
Dan - what the hell...
NightFire...
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posted by Seanthehedgehog
It's the 11th Con Mane story, and it begins in Berlin Germany. Con's best friend Fenix Lighter, an agent for the German Secret Service, M.I.3 is on his way to a marriage. Con, and another parang buriko is with him, until they run into trouble....

I was actually typing that while listening to the bituin wars theme song! LOL

Fenix: Are we almost there? How do I look?
Con: Relax Fenix.
German pony75: *flies near them*
German pony23: uy look, there's a message.
Con: *reads it* Follow me.
German pony23: *follows*
German pony75: *lands*
Fenix: *gets out* What the fuck happened?
German pony75: Sanchez escaped, he's...
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posted by Seanthehedgehog
A lot of people think Moonraker is the worst Bond film, but what about Nightmare Moonraker?

We begin in western europe, as an airplane with ponies that are learning to skydive is flying 30,000 feet above the air

Russian pony: I have never done this before. Have you?
Con: No.
Russian pony: Oh you from United States of Equestria?
Con: Yeah. So is this pony
Luna: Hi.
Russian pony: Hello *casts a spell*
Con: What are you doing?
Russian pony: *turns luna evil*
Nightmare moon: *grabs parachutes*
Con: What did you do?
Russian pony: I turned Luna evil!
Con: You sick asshole *hits russian*
Russian pony: *pushes...
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posted by Seanthehedgehog
We left off on the fight between bronies, and haters

Hater 54: *sets up MG*
Sean: *shoots haters*
Security guard: Stop the fighting!
Hater 54: *kills guard*
Sean: Enemy machine gun! Take cover
bronies: *hide behind wall*
Hater 54: *shoot at wall* Penetrate!!
Sean: *kills machine gunner* All clear!
bronies: *advance*
Jade: We got enemies with RPG's!
Hater 402: *shoots missile*
Sean: *runs from missile*
Hater 635: *shoots at Jade*
Jade: *shoots missile*
Hater 635: *dies from explosion*
Sean: *kills other misayl carrying haters*
Brony 64: Let's ilipat up!

We moved up a floor, and got introduced to 50 haters wanting...
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posted by SomeoneButNoone
5 days later in caferia...
Dimitri - *enter caferia... *sits in empety table*
Dan - *teleport on chair and speed sit* *smile* suprised...
Dimitri - rly... you live...
Dan - yup...
Dimitri - what you want... I left GEA halfyer ago
Dan - I know... *show picture of Tulip* know that mare...
Dimitri - no...
Dan - oh she famous in Russia...
Dimitri - *grab gun*
Dan - ...
Dimitri - *pick gun to Dan head* fuck you...
Dan- ... bad chose *teleport*
Dimitri - *shoot*
Dan - *teleport behaind Dimitri and grab him*... you suck in fighting like always...
Dimitri - SHUT UP!
Mare - RUN CALL POLICE!!!!!
Stalion - I DO THIS
Dan...
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posted by Seanthehedgehog
I was just driving to Los Angeles, which was a very long way from where I was now. Peekskill New York. I stopped here to visit my cousins, and aunt Laura.

Hater 24: uy isn't that the guy our team tried to get 2 days ago?
Hater 532: It is. Let's get him!
Sean: *hears haters & drives faster*
Hater 24: All units listen up! We found Sean Bodine, driving a 2012 Toyota Camry! License plate is GRE-33K
Hater leader: Alright! Permission to shoot on sight.
Sean: *weaving through traffic*
Hater 532: *grabs gun*
Sean: *turns off highway*
Hater 24: *follows*
Hater 532: *shoots back window*
Hater 48: Joining...
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posted by Seanthehedgehog
I escaped the haters, but now I had to turn around, and go to Frenchtown.

Mom: *calls me*
Sean: Hello?
Mom: What happened at your house?
Sean: Some guys tried to kill me, and murdered my dad.
Mom: I can see that. I want you in Frenchtown, at my place now!
Sean: On my way. I should be there in 20 minutes.

I made it into Frenchtown, but I wasn't sure how to tell my mom who was trying to kill me.

Mom: So what did you do after your father died?
Sean: I escaped.
Mom: How? They were at the front door.
Sean: Does it matter how?! I escaped!!
Mom: ANSWER MY QUESTION!
Sean: I climbed out of my kama room window....
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It was a regular araw in St. Foalis, and then every leader of the mafias except Dan drove up toward a train yard.

L.P leader: We are dealing with a gang that can destroy any of us.
Fillydelphia leader: Twilight Sparkle is working with them.
Baltimare leader: She's the one we have to kill then.
L.P. leader: And Dan. There's also a grey hedgehog with them.
Fillydelphia leader: Let's kill all three of them then.

The meeting was over. And the Ponyville mafia was relaxing at their place.

Sean: *drinking soda*
Rainbow Dash: *farts on chair* A whoopee cushion? PINKIE PIE!!!!!
Pinkie Pie: *laughing* Wow!...
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