Max: HOW DARE YOU EVEN ipakita YOUR FACE HERE!!!
Zack: BACK OFF MAX!!!
Star: STOP PLEASE!!!
Max: GO bituin NOW BEFORE YOU GET HURT!
Star:*tears rise in her eyes and steps back*
ZZZZ BOOM Zack shoots at max. A ulap of dust clears
Max:*a force field also clears and Max is on all hooves* really, that's the best you got I always new you wear WEAK
Zack: WHAT
Max: you heard me
ZZZZZZZZZ BOOM, BOOM, BOOM
Max:*same thing as before* HA! now its my turn black swirls of dust bilog around him then a bright glow orbits around him standing in aw Zack stares, unlike bituin just looking in horror for she knows what comes next
ZZZRRRZZZZZRRRRRZZZZZRRRRZZZZZRRRRZZZZRR BOOM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
a figure came out of the dust, but it wasn't max well it wasn't him anymore.
She herd a rriipp sound the it was all red(BTW this is all happening on a cliff)blood red then a blue lobo came out from the red he didn't have much blood on him just on his claws, teeth, ears, and some on his tail as if he dipped it in red paint
"are you scared?" asked the blue lobo tilting his head
"I don't know should I be?" bituin asked taking a step closer"
"IF YOU COME CLOSER ILL KILL YOU TOO" he yelled
"kill? w-what do you mean kill?! WHO ARE YOU!!!"
"*dose an evil laugh* you don't get it do you your madami stupid than Zack!!!! I KILLED ZACK OK!! oh speaking of KILL I have madami to, do don't you have a school filled with alicorns? ill stop there then of to you parents house!!!!!"
"YOU WOULDNT DARE" she yelled
"would I?" he smirked the ran off leaving bituin in tears she glanced to a body in blood wings and horn clear off walked in fear susunod to it the face made her jump "zack...." she looked up then flew off to her school but she was too late blood was on the walls like a horror movie with words in blood saying:
SAY sa pamamagitan ng TO UR MA AND PA FOR THE LAST TIME @$% !@#$
she walked over all the bodies until she hard a help it sounded like princess twi, the school principal she ran to the sound there in a room twi was under some mesa bituin used her magic to lift them off her
" thank you bituin know I need your help that lobo is a threat I need to kill it ASAP
"WHAT NO!! we cant!"
"why not it kill dozens of colts and mares I thought you would care"
"I do but that lobo is max..
"WHAT bituin I think you need to lie down"
" *rolls her eyes* he used black magic the spell of night claw he's just under his control that's all"
"then why is max blue?"
"UG I DONT KNOW but we cant kill him I pag-ibig him even if he did kill Zack, Sara, Zoey , Ruby and other ponies but it wasn't him"
"LETS GO" yelled twi
"and save him from the spell" shouted Star

LOOK OUT 4 PART 3!!!!!