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Can you guys tell what do you think of it?

Call me wacko,call me " a weird one ",
i don't care,'cause you don't see...
You don't see the dept of my soul,
so call me what you want to...
When the sorrow tear my heart,
i hide my tears,i hide it from you,
'cause that's the way you can't see it,
the pain pulling me down and you don't feel
me the right way,the way i want...
Still the sorrow screams inside me,
that dark side of me you will never see,
you will never understand when i hush then
when i should say something,when i smile when i should cry...
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I don't like mga tula but well done!
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Thank you. :)
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orangeturnip said:
a poem that sounds like a scream
a sadness inside ,
a message from your soul
a sad cry
but poems can be from the heart
can also be ...
from a position of empathy of anothers pain
either way i hope you can see
the sun is shineing (i wish looks likes its gonna storm)
any way i didn't want to write a short answer
i wanted to express that i loved it
but in doing so i
waffled and draged out my responce un neccercererly long and Nawawala my sence of spelling with the pain of brain freezing numbness

any hoos

this is for you
♥
and dont break it.
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Thanks... I won't....
irena83 posted sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas
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awwwh.
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life_rehab said:
this is nice. really. i read mga tula quite a lot and i'm a rather harsh critic but i do believe that this is pretty good. i mean, it's not Whitman or Shakespeare or whatever and you'll have to work hard and practise a lot to develop your talent, but this is 'you', you know, a little piece of your soul under the mask of words and it is quite beautiful...if you polish it a little bit, it will be really good. nice job:)
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Thanks a lot...
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i hope you didn't mind my answer (i'm not sure if your comment is sarcastic or not...). really, that's just what i think... nevertheless, i like the poem and it shows great potential but you'll see that if you keep writing, you'll definitely evolve, you'll get better with every poem -- again, this doesn't mean that i don't like it cause, well, actually i do. anyway, i also wanted to say that it's nice to see other young people interested in poetry:)
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life_rehab; this ----> but this is 'you', you know, a little piece of your soul under the mask of words ... IS BEAUTIFUL! oh em gee
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Vixie79 said:
"you will never understand when i hush then"

I pag-ibig how you did this line, pag-ibig the word hush too. ♥♥♥
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:) ♥ thank you.
irena83 posted sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas
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lol
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You're welcome hon ♥
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CB4evaGiggles said:
wow, i think thats a really good, and about the soul poem, i like it!

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Thank you. ♥
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your welcome!! ur good!
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Pikafan32 said:
It's another beautiful accomplishment. Truly a fascinating write.
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aw thank you so much. :)
irena83 posted sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas
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:3 Your welcome
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clanbillr said:
Hi "irena83",
Thank you for the awesome poem, "Again"!! We all get to wear our disguises because we don't want certain people to see how we're really feeling inside!! But those disguises end becoming walls so we don't get hurt again!! You sound like a truly loving and caring lady and someday the right person will come into your life!!! Just be aware that sometimes pag-ibig is only there for a short while but it can feel like a lifetime!!!
So your neither wacko or weird, it's just life!!! Your poems are from deep down inside of you and keep letting them out!!!
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Hi "irena83", Thank you for the awesome poem, "Again"!! We all get to wear our disguises because we don't want certain people to see how we're really feeling inside!! But those disguises end becoming walls so we don't get hurt again!! You sound like a truly loving and caring lady and someday the right person will come into your life!!! Just be aware that sometimes pag-ibig is only there for a short while but it can feel like a lifetime!!! So your neither wacko or weird, it's just life!!! Your poems are from deep down inside of you and keep letting them out!!!
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Yes i agree with you,we all wear our disguises so those one's who can hurt our feelings easily can not see that. We try to cover that,our weakness.
irena83 posted sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas
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Thank you and yes they are deep, i can say a cry of my soul.
irena83 posted sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas
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We all have that same weakness inside of us!!!! I know it's your poem but we all cry in our souls!!!
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Oh yes we do.
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CullenProperty said:
Pretty. Are you Pagsulat it from past experiences from someone that hurt you or just because you can?
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Well actually i wrote that from my personal experience. It did happen a long time ago, but i guess i didn't forget.
irena83 posted sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas
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On one hand it's funny that we can't seem to forget those things! But on the other hand it's great that we don't so we don't have to repeat and go through them all over again!!!
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oh well, thats sadening & pretty cool at the same tim
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NatyLy said:
I pag-ibig it! good job! :)
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:) Thank you. ♥
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