Is this good?

isn't the palaso a bit too,.. Straight across? It's normally madami in the right side. I think.

Unless you're trying to make it different. Different Is good
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It's great so far! Really! But, and I'm just offering honest payo here, I think you could make the inner bilog madami circular instead of oval-ish. Then you could, also, tip the palaso a little madami to the left instead of straight across. But other than that, it's good!