I'm Pagsulat a fanfiction, and I need a few bits of information/opinions. Help?

1. Breakfast jump starts your brain. Kids who have breakfast do better on tests than kids who skip out on breakfast.
2. a. pagong Man
b. Ghost Hunters (my dad watches these all the time)
3. a. It's a ipakita about this man nicknamed the pagong Man who goes and catches mga hayop from people's property and gets paid to do it.
b. It's a ipakita about this group called TAPS that go around the world where there are complaints that there might be ghosts in the house. Sometimes it turns out to be nothing and some scientifically explained events, but sometimes they do get hard evidence that there is paranormal things happening in people's houses and other places.
4. "I heard movement, I was coming to make sure everything was okay,"