Are these poems any good?

I walked through the barren desert
Not a drop of water
Not a sign of life
But as I walked at last I saw a colour
Standing on its own I saw a rose
The only life
The only hope
I bent down to pick the rose
But I did not
For it could change the place
Spread the life
Instead of dying it could bring a light in the midnight sky
And colour when all else is grey




You always feed yourself those stupid lies
Always say they don't see the anguish behind your eyes 
Maybe they don't
And maybe I do
I see the soul resting inside of you
It screams
It cries
It needs someone to hear it
It bleeds
And howls into the dark night
No one's there to hear it
You curse
You scream
You cry
But still they call you inhuman 
You love
You kiss
Your puso can break
But to them you're just an ugly slut
But trust me on this
In what I say to you
This pain can't last as no pain does
When your puso doesn't beat
As you fail to breathe
The pain so very slowly dies with you
Be sure you're not alone
If you are not the pain with end
There will be no one to receive it
You will be forgotten
You won't make a difference
You'll have accomplished nothing
All you will have done is Nawawala your pain
So at least die peacefully. 




I sat alone on that rainy day
The sun seemed so far away
Not a single person saw me
They all seemed to be blurred 
Just walked on by
Could they not see I was crying?
Could they not see the bruise on my face?
Or were they just afraid of talking?
Why did they leave me alone?
It was that araw I left them
It was the araw they could have helped
But later my own blood poured down
Slits in my skin
A kutsilyo in my hand
Empty bottle in the other. 




I saw him on a dreary day
As every araw is to me
I saw him on a lonely day
As I never have a friend with me
I thought him beautiful 
I began to grow to pag-ibig him
But not until I heard his voice did pag-ibig no longer describe it
His eyes like gems they shone
His lips like midni