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Does this story sound good? I need help..

Ok so my story is called "Kikio's pag-ibig Story"

Anyways, Its about this blonde girl named Kikio and she goes to this all-girls school called "Green LeaF Acadamy" the "f" is capitalized because it stands for "female", anyway, the principal decides to let a boy sumali the acadamy just for fun. All the girls get pissed,even Kikio, but she starts to develop a crush on the boy whos name is Harima.

Soooooooooooooooooooooooooooo....what do you think? Good or Crap?....
Does this story sound good? I need help..
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Cantwait4book5 said:
I think it sounds awesome but you need to specify why the principal lets a boy enrol. there has to be a good reason cause a all girls school wouldn't let a walang tiyak na layunin boy join. he could be like the principals nephew or son or something. also what is the full story line. what happens. is their a twist or something. i think it would be a heaps good story though. what are you writting it for.
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Yeah, it sounds good, but why are they suddenly letting a boy join?
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thanks
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ScottishChic said:
I think it does sound good,

but like the others have sinabi you need to specify why all of a sudden a boy get's to join.

Obviously, the paglalarawan isn't all that will be happening in the story but add on to it.

Like the person above said, a twist and a bit of action.

But it really does sound good.

Good luck!
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Thank you
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