kasarian at sekswalidad Article: SENSES

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SENSES

posted by juicyjossy9

A poem
for blind
lovers

Wandering on the streets of my bloodstream
Naked puso in the darkness of my blind dream
Diving into the wonder that is my daydreaming
The light of you will always be alive and kicking

I don’t see you, but I feel you even more
I breathe your body yearning for my touch
Right here, with me, right now, in me
Letting our senses take control

From our secret symphony garden
Our hands play our music on us and
Delve into the memories of this present moment
Only to live the best encounter of our kind

In the heat of the sweet sweaty feeling
Our hands tell us what we need to know
Leaving us undone again, ashes burning
Yearning for more, so much more

Gay_Loverboy, kisskiss143 and 13 others like this

CullenProperty "I breathe your body yearning for my touch" is my favorite line. I love this, really. I'm gonna save a hard copy on my computer. :) Keep the writing up! &&& a suggestion for the title; Blind Love... or Sesitive Feelings, maybe?

juicyjossy9 Thanks for your kind comment and for the suggestions for the title. But I think I'll keep this one. Love with a blind person is all about the four remaining senses working as five, believe me... The love is there, the acute sensitivity of the feelings too. So I feel the title is very accurate for the "sense" I wanted to describe this particular kind of loving. Thanks nonetheless! :D

CullenProperty Oh! SENSES is the title... I thought A Poem For Blind Lovers was the title! *Facepalm* I'm an idiot! LOL. But, yeah, now that you explained that, I get it better. xD Beautiful poem, non-the-less. ;)

juicyjossy9 ... :D

Vixie79 That was really beautiful and passionate.

juicyjossy9 Thanks - That is sweet of you! =)

Vixie79 You're welcome. :)

TeanRose424 Now all we need is a story with da details ^^

Furmingirl11 This poem was very meaningful, it really doesn't have to be lovers it seems as if its husband and wife.

Dhampires Cool I really felt this poem nice work.