no i would never hate u

I know....it just seems like everyone ELSE on here does.

no i dont hate you btw i think ur awlsome and i love ur fan charater hes not like anyone else what i do hate is malice i hate him!

Malice: Well...I DON'T CARE!
Shock: Really? *embarrassed* Why am I so unique?

heck no! ur coool :)

I do not like you. I can respect your opinions, but I do not agree with most of them. I hate some things that you do. I think you're annoying and somewhat similar to a pesky fly that just won't go away.

Well...I don't like u either. I KNEW u didn't like me--it was way too obvious.
Shock: So what if u don't like my creator? He doesn't care!

Doggie go bye-bye. :3 What i mean? IDK. :/

@Shadowlover: What.../

^I said IDK! :L

^ Oh...OK

@ShadowFan: If you didn't care, you wouldn't have asked the question. I repect you as a person and I can understand where you're coming from. But you annoy me to no means with all those FUCKING QUESTIONS. Did you ever read ripperoo1's article? Saying how sorry he was for asking annoying questions, when he wasn't even asking MANY in comparison to you?

You are, to be frank, one of the reasons I am starting to hate this club.

lol we posted at the same time.

Oh yeah, and I'd like to add, that I do not mind roleplaying with you. I like some of your ideas for characters, but I do not like how you do things with them all the time. You use them as something to hide behind in negative comments- You don't know when NOT to roleplay.

Sometimes, I wonder just how old you are... Because you act about 10.

^ OK...well, I don't post those question to annoy people. I just have a lot of random questions I wanna ask--that's all. And yes, I saw the article. And again..I'm not hiding behind ANYTHING wen i rol play--I just like role playing. Now...what are the things U DO like about my characters? And which are yor favorite? Well...if u HAVE a fav

And then, of course, you ignore constructive critism and want only the positives. -_-

I like Shock. Or, I did. I LIKED Shock when he wasn't a Gary-Stu. Back BEFORE the dark/super forms, and the key to freedom crap. When he was actually a likeable character.

Um...he's a not a Gary-Stu (who EVER that is) Shock already HAD a super form back then--but not everyone knew. There's nothing wrong with Dark/Super forms. I only added those things to make him better. Shock hasn't changed...his personality is still the same. have u heard of his twin sister Kori?

link

Run Shock through that if you don't belive me.

He IS a Gary-Stu, and you denying it only prooves it more~

It wouldn't matter if he WAS a Gary-Stu. He's a character...why does it MATTER if he is that or not? There's nothing wrong with the way I created him...

If he's a Gary-Stu, then yes, there is something VERY wrong. NO-ONE likes Gary-Stus except those idiotic Twilight fans. But they're idiots and they don't count. (Sparkling vampires... Urgh...)

Anyway, Gary-Stus/Mary-Sues/Marty-Sams are generally horrible. They're the mockery of writing, the English language all together. Look up 'My Immortal' by Tara Gi... I can't spell it. It's a Harry Potter fanfic and gives the prime example of why Mary-Sues/Gary-Stues SUCK.

I'm not a Twilight fan...and Um, I still don't agree with that tho. Shock is just a character I made up......it doesn't matter what he is.

Yeah... You keep telling yourself that.

See, that's the difference between a writer and an ameteur; a writer takes all critism on bourd, while an ameteur will dismiss it. The difference between you and I.

...And that's just ANOTHER thing I hate about you. Inability to take critism. -_-

So? Not everyone thinks the way u do--and not everyone will agree with u. No one likes to be criticized--and that doesn't make me an amateur. U aren't right about everything, u know...I'm just saying...

@ShadowFan ~ You shouldn't ignore criticism. It helps you improve at basically everything; Writing, singing, drawing, EVEN character designing/modifying.

Soda (MephilesTheDark) told me that the eyes I drew on my characters are elongating, or, if you don't understand the word, tall. I took that criticism and stopped making the eyes elongated, making my art slightly better.

Criticism can be good most of the time. If you keep ignoring it, there's no way you will be able to ace the skill you aim to be good at.

U do have a point.....it just seemed Meph always had SOMETHING against my characters, and it bothered me. It sounded like she was hating on me or something...oh, well. Thanks for the advise. I worked hard on Shock (my FIRST Sonic character), and I thought he was a good character.....

@ShadowFan: Okay, I just took a deep breath to steady myself. Now, I do not want to make excuses for myself, my style, and the way I talk, but please DO keep in mind that you're talking to a schizophrenic. I snap at things. I'm unpridictable. You do not know how I'll react to something. I am typing very slowley right now to prevent myself from saying something stupid against you that I'll regret.

I know not everyone agrees with me. If they did, I would hate them even more than I already do. I hate a lot of people... Because humanity generally sucks. Back on topic, I'm just going to continue on.

Quote, 'No-one likes to be critized.' FALSE. I LOVE being critized. Why? It helps me get BETTER. I love getting better at things. Unless of course people are trying to change who I am, in which case they can go fuck themselves. Matthew Reilly got critized by his wife when writing his AMAZING book, 'The Six Sacred Stones' what did she say? 'Hey... This bit here. From page 158 to page 463... You don't need it. Get rid of it.'

The Six Sacred Stones= INTERNATIONAL BESTSELLER.

J.K Rowling you should know. Rejected by NINE publishers. Each time, she changed the book, 'Harry Potter and the Philsophers Stone', and then she got accepted.

Harry Potter= EVERYDAY TITLE.

Angie Sage, Magyk. CRITIZED, GOT BETTER, GOT BIG.

CORNELIA FUNKE, Inkheart, Inkspell, Inkdeath, Dragon Rider, GOT CRITIZED, GOT BIG.

ME, got critized a LOT from a LOT of people. My English teacher for writing such a horrible book, my Elite Writer's teacher for even trying to publish it, my family for being messed up, my sister for being an idiot, and Jhonen Vasquez for stealing his morbidness. (I kid on the last one. I would never steal anything from JV. He's terrifying) GOT PUBLISHED... Isn't that big. Damn...

I have nothing to say for Twilight. That book is pathetic.

So... Yeah, I'd say it makes you ameteur.

I may not be right about everything, sugar, but neither are you. Try swallowing your words there.

I always have omething against... Well... Everything. Why? Everything sucks. There is very little joy in my life, and wherever there is, it is only breif and preludges a descent into levels of hell even a service-clerk could not dream of.

Enough about me. I critize things quite a bit. I'm not scared to say my opinions and I'm not scared for others to say theirs. Only dish it if you can take it, ya know?

I for one, ALWAYS love critism! When people disagree with me, it makes me think. Makes me smarter. Makes me better.

I'm not hating on you sweetheart, just my opinions.

You worked hard on Shock, yes... But you worked TOO hard on him.

If you ever WANT any advie from me, and actually though through and not blurted out in six seconds, just tell me to read your stuff, or look at it, or whatever! I love giving critic almost as much as I love getting it.

He's an okay character- He's a Gary-Stu right now, but he can be saved.

@Phoenix: Thanks, dude. :) Made me think about shit. For once in my life. You too, ever need any critic, and I'll stare at it until I can give you some.

LONG POST IS LONG. :B

I never said I was right all the time--and I'm not. Everyone is wrong at SOME point. And about my stories......sure, u can look at em whenever u wanna--I'm not gonna force u. I DO wanna get better--I love improving on things I work on. Shock is my 1st and FAVORITE Sonic character. At first, yes..he WAS overpowered...but I've improved since them. Dark/Super forms are normal for Shock to have because he's from the Sonic universe....not EVERYONE has em but you know what I mean. The reason I gave him BOTH Super and Dark forms was because I wanted to be similar to Sonic. Sonic IS his hero, so I thought why not? How much of the Shock have u read anyway?

Sonic is an icompetent, lazy, impatient, horrible person who always seems to get his way without any effort or consequences. I do not see how that is heroic in the slightest.

Just about EVERY fancharacter has a frikkin' dark/super form and they're ANNOYING AS HELL.

Yes, at first, Shock was overpowered, and then he was okay. But now he's overpowered again. Read; Key to Freedom.

I've read a bit of the first chapter. :L I found it boring so I didn't read on.

The Key to Freedom thing does NOT make him overpowered. Could u explain WHY u think it makes him overpowered? And about Sonic...he's not like that ALL the time. Also...tell me WHY u thought the 1st chapter was boring.....and which one did u read? The 1st, 2nd or 3rd story?

Easy.

"Hi! I'm Shock the Dog! I'm the Key to Freedom and I'm also super-sensitive! Even though I'm only 10, (or something) I have a girlfriend! And again, even though I'm only 10 I'm like an ancient-powerful being thing that almost managed to save the world from Perfect Chaos! Even though that doesn't make sence because my power is electricity and my main weakness is water, which is what Perfect Chaos is made of! LOL! :D And everyone loves me, see? I mean, I'm SO nice to everyone, how COULD anyone hate me? Even though my traumatic backstory SHOULD make me a competitive git, it's so not true! My parents died and it's all Malice's fault! I hate Malice SO much! I mean, it's his fault my parents are dead and that neither of us have original names. I have a dark form even though I'm supposed to be the Key to Freedom, because it doesn't make sence as a Key to Freedom SHOULD be pure good with no evil! Oh well! It's cool so it can stay! I can also turn super even though THAT makes no sence too! Yeah! And I have a little sister Kori who's barely mentioned and also doesn't make sence because I'm the Key to Freedom, which really shouldn't have any relatives because it's a diety! Oh well! I want a little sister so I cna have one! And, like, omg, Malice is SO evil and I HATE evil SO MUCH! Even though I AM partly evil because I have a dark form! See!? I MAKE SENCE. PARAGRAPHS ARE FOR CHUMPS."

No logic whatsoever.

Yeah.

Not a Gary-Stu at ALL right there. -_-

And, uhh... Yeah, Sonic? I'm pretty sure he is. I have no idea why people like him so much.

I read the 1st one you posted, so, the 1st chapter of the first story. I found it boring because the grammar was horrible, the wording was horrible, the storyline was boring and cliche, the themes were overused, the characters were annoying.

(Shock wants to talk to u)
Shock: I don't appreciate sarcasm, u know. Wait a minute...u really think EVERYONE likes me? Yeah, right...NOT true! And water only hurts me whenever I use my powers. Plus...u don't know the whole story. Jiyu IS pure good......but when I was reborn into a physical body, I became like every one else: I have good and evil in me. And about Kori....I have a sister because I was reborn on Mobius as a normal person..DUH! And she hasn't been mentioned because u haven't read past the 1st chapter of my 1st story. Malice kidnapped Kori the day we were born...and u would have known that if u read Kori's bio--which u didn't. What do u mean I don't have an unoriginal name? Sorry, but u need to know my story a bit more b4 u start saying junk about me that ISN'T true. And being sarcastic about it makes u so immature. Going by your post, u don't know much ABOUT my life..and u clearly don't understand it

Oh.
My.
Effin.
Bleejeepers.

SHADOWFAN100. I know this MAY come as a HUGE shock (NO pun intended) to you, BUT SHOCK THE DOG ISN'T REAL. THUS, HE HAS NO OPINION.

GOD.

STOP HIDING BEHIND A FUCKING ROLEPLAY.

I TRY being nice about it. I TRY to be good about it, but you're just an ARROGANT, STUBBON, WEAK-WILLED little dipshit who CAN'T TAKE CRITISM.

FOR CRYING OUT LOUD.

BE MATURE FOR ONCE IN YOUR LIFE.

Adding in stupid little 'details' DOESN'T make Shock a better character. IT JUST MAKES HIM ANNOYING.

And urgh, TALKING TO YOU, is the mot FRUSTRATING thing I have EVER done! Fuck.

Screw this shit. I'm getting Johnny_C. -_- He's better at this shit than me.

Great work, dipshit. You pissed her off. Now she'll be trying to sleep in my basement again. Uurgh. Thanks, you've just officially made my life for the next 40 hours a living hell.

Can't say I'm familiar with 'Shock the Dog', although I had a look around on your profile... BY GOSH, YOU'RE ANNOYING! More annoying than those demon-cookies... They were not human.

Anyway, from what I saw Meph say, I'd have to say I agree with her quite some here. Can't say I'm fond of fancharacters in general, actually... Very few are actually any GOOD. Especially Sonic ones because the universe they're being inserted into kinda sucks as well... My opinions, of course. There is horrible fancharacters everywhere and in any fandom.

So, uh, yeah, if I were you, ShadowFan100, I'd stop being so annoying and actually take critism on board for once rather than just shrugging it off all the time.

LOL AT DEMON COOKIES. :U That was fun. They exploded your oven. COOKING CLASS WITH NNY IS AWESOME.

Yes, Nny, I will sleep in your basement. Fear me. >_>

Thanks sweetheart. You always cheer me up! <3 And make me less... angry-ish... xD' Love you as my Uncle.

@whoever the ban I'm talking to: From what I can tell, you're not.... eh, awful.
Hitler, Stalin, Justin Beiber, THEY are awful.
JB ISH RAL-LIFE GARY-STU.
You? RP wise, you're good.
You're good with Shock.
But, it's also a downfall.
You almost never break character.
Whatevez -3-
Link me to one of your stories and I'll make up my mind.

@thet: I like role playing....and OK: Go to this link:

link

LOL LOVE HE WAY YOU IGNORE EVERYTHING ME AND JOHNNY_C SAID. :B

Can't take it. -_- Noob.

I don't hate you Shadowfan! But your characters are a little too Gary-Stu ish. If you can add some weaknesses to your characters and not make them all-so powerful, you'd get more respect from people.

That's what I've been saying: They HAVE weaknesses.....seriously, I thought I made it clear that they had one. None of my characters are invincible.....

FUCK U *throws a sonic 06 box at head* jk I keed I mean i dont know u so im going to say yes

Just a hint of advice, all Shock pretty much is is a floating dog head. So far I have NOT seen any body for him whatsoever. And its creepy. Cuz, well, A character cant be complete if its not whole. And sorry but Shock is sorta a Gary-stu....

I have a fully body pic of him....I just haven't posted it. Dude...cut it out with the Gary-Stu junk....no one cares!

They do.
I do.
LOTS of people do.
QUIT IT.

@ Eleanor: Dude....hating people is EVIL. U have no right to hate someone

I never said I did.
I said I care.
oco'

LOL AT "No-one cares" xD

IF WE DIDN'T CARE.
WE WOULDN'T POST.
AND YOU WOULDN'T HAVE SO MANY HATERS.
SO YEAH.
WE CARE BRO.
A LOT OF PEOPLE DO.

*Is kinda death-hugging Mephiles right now*

MY LUNGS.
OH GOD MY LUNGS.
THEY'RE EXPLODING.

MY LUNGS NOW.
Wait, what? xD

yes........ not hate but REALLY DISLIKE!!