It Was A Sunny Afternoon At Camp Wawanawka And The Campers Were Finishing Eating Lunch.
Izzy:How Did You Enjoy The Meal?
Bridgette:It Was Very Good, First Vegetarian Meal In A Week.
Gwen:It Was Great.
Heather:The Best Yet!
Lindsay:I'm Gonna Go Now!
Sadie And Katie:Game Time.
Duncan:So Princess, Should We Go Outside?
Courtney:Yes Duncan!
Noah:I'm Getting Bored Myself.
Leshawna:I Need Rest!
Harold:That's The Best Bet.
Owen:(Burps) Great pagkain Today!
Geoff:It Filled Me Up.
Chris:Ok Everyone, Grab A Board Game And Let's Start Playing. (Clutches His Chest)
Trent:CHRIS!!!
Tyler:What's Happening To Him?
Sierra:He's In Pain!
Cody:I Think He's Having A puso Attack.
Alejandro:That's Bull****!
Beth:Do Something.
Justin:We Can't Do Anything For Now, I Nawawala My Cell Phone!
Eva:I'd Better Step Away.
Ezekial:Chris Is pagganap Funny.
Trent:So Respect Ezekial, He Isn't Breathing!
Duncan:Chris Please, Please Stay With Me. Princess, Any Pulse?
Courtney:It's Really Tough To Tell!
Bridgette:I Don't Feel Any Pulse! Geoff, Call 911.
Geoff:I'm On It!
(Chris Is Lying On The Floor)
Blaineley:(Screams) Chris, What Have You Done To Yourself?
Gwen:Blaineley, Just Get Out Of Here. The ambulansya Is On It's Way!
Lindsay:Oh Tyler, This Is Horrible. *cries*
Tyler:It's OK Lindsay, Help Is Here! *tears up*
ambulansya Arrives At The Camp As Chris Is Taken Away. The Campers Start Hugging And Crying.
End Of Part 1
Izzy:How Did You Enjoy The Meal?
Bridgette:It Was Very Good, First Vegetarian Meal In A Week.
Gwen:It Was Great.
Heather:The Best Yet!
Lindsay:I'm Gonna Go Now!
Sadie And Katie:Game Time.
Duncan:So Princess, Should We Go Outside?
Courtney:Yes Duncan!
Noah:I'm Getting Bored Myself.
Leshawna:I Need Rest!
Harold:That's The Best Bet.
Owen:(Burps) Great pagkain Today!
Geoff:It Filled Me Up.
Chris:Ok Everyone, Grab A Board Game And Let's Start Playing. (Clutches His Chest)
Trent:CHRIS!!!
Tyler:What's Happening To Him?
Sierra:He's In Pain!
Cody:I Think He's Having A puso Attack.
Alejandro:That's Bull****!
Beth:Do Something.
Justin:We Can't Do Anything For Now, I Nawawala My Cell Phone!
Eva:I'd Better Step Away.
Ezekial:Chris Is pagganap Funny.
Trent:So Respect Ezekial, He Isn't Breathing!
Duncan:Chris Please, Please Stay With Me. Princess, Any Pulse?
Courtney:It's Really Tough To Tell!
Bridgette:I Don't Feel Any Pulse! Geoff, Call 911.
Geoff:I'm On It!
(Chris Is Lying On The Floor)
Blaineley:(Screams) Chris, What Have You Done To Yourself?
Gwen:Blaineley, Just Get Out Of Here. The ambulansya Is On It's Way!
Lindsay:Oh Tyler, This Is Horrible. *cries*
Tyler:It's OK Lindsay, Help Is Here! *tears up*
ambulansya Arrives At The Camp As Chris Is Taken Away. The Campers Start Hugging And Crying.
End Of Part 1
Duncans POV:
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Did you want some thing princess?
Courtneys POV:
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YEs Duncan I dont know how to tell you this but...... Im pregnent but...... its not your baby.
Duncans POV:
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Whos is it I mean who would do this to you?
Courtneys POV:
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Its.............I cant tell you its to painfull he raped me a I was powerless Im so sorry Duncan please forgive me it was a mistake.....
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Did you want some thing princess?
Courtneys POV:
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YEs Duncan I dont know how to tell you this but...... Im pregnent but...... its not your baby.
Duncans POV:
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Whos is it I mean who would do this to you?
Courtneys POV:
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Its.............I cant tell you its to painfull he raped me a I was powerless Im so sorry Duncan please forgive me it was a mistake.....
Hello everyone. I'm going to rewrite TDR because i don't like how they are adding so many new characters. well anyways since we don't know where TDR will take place i decided to have it take place at a Roller coaster/fair/circus type thing called Mclain Land. The returning cast will be
Heather
Alejandro
Cody
Zeke
Dj
Izzy
Gwen
Tyler
Owen
Trent
Duncan
Bridgette
Geoff
Lindsay
Noah
Sierra
Beth
Courtney
LeShawna
and 2 new "Campers"
also i will need a very good artist to draw pics for this story. so if you can draw (and i mean VERY VERY well then please comment with some of your work) also i might need a few people to come up with some dialgue, so if you like to write comment me about that. And this is not a post your OC thing, and i dont need challenge ideas i already came up with them. Thank you and i would like an artist as soon as possible and i would pag-ibig it if one of you could get a hold of Escorte on deviantart! THANK YOU SOOOO MUCH!
Heather
Alejandro
Cody
Zeke
Dj
Izzy
Gwen
Tyler
Owen
Trent
Duncan
Bridgette
Geoff
Lindsay
Noah
Sierra
Beth
Courtney
LeShawna
and 2 new "Campers"
also i will need a very good artist to draw pics for this story. so if you can draw (and i mean VERY VERY well then please comment with some of your work) also i might need a few people to come up with some dialgue, so if you like to write comment me about that. And this is not a post your OC thing, and i dont need challenge ideas i already came up with them. Thank you and i would like an artist as soon as possible and i would pag-ibig it if one of you could get a hold of Escorte on deviantart! THANK YOU SOOOO MUCH!
(at the grave yared)
chirs:frist bone go's toooo jakki andrea mallory
samantha samantha rollings sara ashley suna dustin rose lynn anacpriana sara kristing amy kenya the last one go's to blaze im sorry chelsea
chelsea:thats ok
tak:bye chelsea (and gives her a hug)
chelsea:bye tak
(after the show)
lucas:i have no idea you sing good
tak:thanxs
chirs:will tak and lucas be madami than friends
both:HEY
chirs:and will everyone die on this ipakita find out susunod time on total drama goth vs emo
chirs:frist bone go's toooo jakki andrea mallory
samantha samantha rollings sara ashley suna dustin rose lynn anacpriana sara kristing amy kenya the last one go's to blaze im sorry chelsea
chelsea:thats ok
tak:bye chelsea (and gives her a hug)
chelsea:bye tak
(after the show)
lucas:i have no idea you sing good
tak:thanxs
chirs:will tak and lucas be madami than friends
both:HEY
chirs:and will everyone die on this ipakita find out susunod time on total drama goth vs emo
The End
I loved Total Drama Island when it first came on "Cartoon Network", I loved how everyone had a unique personality, how Chris was cruel to the campers, and I thought the ipakita had good character and relationship development.
But then, Total Drama Action premered, and I was not that Impressed. Any character development that had occured, was erased from the ipakita all together, The contestants became annoying as hell(especially Geoff and Trent), And all the good couples were destroyed(but I don't like the GwenXTrent couple at all). The Geoff and Bridget couple was just awful, she needs to ditch him and go with DJ, and I thought that "Teletoon" and "Fresh Tv" had decided to get rid of any words like crap and screwed so there wouldn't be so many edits.
I wont even mention the abomonation that is Total Drama World Tour. They shouldn't sing at all. But I will say one thing about the two new contestants, they were created to annoy the hell out of everyone.
But then, Total Drama Action premered, and I was not that Impressed. Any character development that had occured, was erased from the ipakita all together, The contestants became annoying as hell(especially Geoff and Trent), And all the good couples were destroyed(but I don't like the GwenXTrent couple at all). The Geoff and Bridget couple was just awful, she needs to ditch him and go with DJ, and I thought that "Teletoon" and "Fresh Tv" had decided to get rid of any words like crap and screwed so there wouldn't be so many edits.
I wont even mention the abomonation that is Total Drama World Tour. They shouldn't sing at all. But I will say one thing about the two new contestants, they were created to annoy the hell out of everyone.