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posted by SweetHoneyBunny
Talow stood pagbaba the task he had been given. It had come from the general of the battalions and recruiting so he couldn't object. He read the scrawled out message again:

Task #1: Thursday, August 3 ****
Recruit 003579-Dains

You are to ulat to the prison-holds this afternoon for your task of executing the captured victims from the villages of Dains and of the Bellator boy captured one araw after. Failure to comply will result in serious penalty including but not restricted to:
Demotion
Reassigned
Imprisoned
Death

Talow swallowed as he pushed open the large doors, behind were the prison-holds. The air held a stench of sweat and blood that lingered in one's throat. He forced himself not to gag as he walked towards the three soldiers standing around a large desk. The mesa was occupied sa pamamagitan ng a large man who was giving one boy the death stare.
“You brought this upon yourself, failure to follow the rules has its consequences.” The man's fingers were inched towards a drawer in the desk, the boy in tanong watched silently. “Do you remember what it was you did?” The man sat forward, a wicked grin on his face. The boy was sweating but made no ilipat to wipe his brow. “Speak!” He jolted and like a machine began to talk.
“I refused to follow my battalion into battle, leaving my brothers to the mercy of the Bellators.” His mouth clamped shut when he was done.
“Exactly.” The man at the mesa had a look in his eye like a savage beast with its prey pinned under it. “And you know why I have to punish you for this. If everyone started abandoning mission we would have Nawawala years ago. Is that what you want! To be ruled sa pamamagitan ng self-loving Bellators! Well do you?” The man's face had turned red with rage as he leaned across the mesa to shout in the traitor's face.
“No...I...um..” He was silenced sa pamamagitan ng the man as he stood and gripped him sa pamamagitan ng the throat.
“I new you were a daga the araw you were recruited.” He dropped him to the ground. “Take him away, I'll deal with him later.” Two of the soldiers who had been standing behind the boy now came pasulong and grabbed him sa pamamagitan ng the arms. His shouts and pleading could be heard as he was dragged down the hall. Talow watched them leave and was having segundo thoughts about this when the man noticed him.
“Quit cowering and get over here before I do the same to you.” Talow obeyed and stood before the man, handing his paper over. The man read it and sank back into his chair.
“So, you got the guts to do this or are you going to chicken out like most of them?” Talow didn't say a word as the man walked around the mesa and lead him down the same hall the soldiers had vanished down. Talow could see people locked behind bars, dirty and sad-looking as he passed keeping close to the officer. When they reach cell 23 Talow could see the villagers from Dains watching him as the door was unlocked. They backed into the corner as the officer entered the cell and grabbed a thin man with bloody nails and a bruise on his cheek. He dropped him in-front of Talow.
“Your choice. We can do this the quick way or we can drag it out.” He pulled from his sinturon a small gun and a club with nails poking out of it. Talow looked from the weapons to the man who was watching the floor, not meeting his eyes. Talow picked the gun, checking how many rounds it had left. One. Just enough to finish the job. He saw the officer watching him, waiting for him to pull the trigger and end this mans life in full view of the others. Talow knew this man which made all so much harder. As he aimed the gun and steadied his shaking finger on the trigger Talow was about to bury the bullet in the man's head when a shout from down the hall forced him to jerk his hand and shoot the floor susunod to the man. The officer spun on his heel and stormed down the small ahllway, stopping at a cell containing one person. The boy who had attacked Talow in the clearing. The man sinabi something to him before he started walking back to his mesa to fins another bullet.

Talow took this opportunity to run down the hall and stop at the cell.
“Why did you do that?” He asked the boy behind the bars. The boy leaned casually against the wall, examining his nails.
“Do what?”
“Stop me from shooting that villager.” Talow was growing impatient knowing that his time was running out.
“I know you don't like killing, it's written all over your face.” The boy came closer. “You want to get out of here?” Talow nodded eagerly. “Next chance you get out of this place find the main road until you reach a place with two alley ways. Take the second, it'll lead you the jungle.” Talow made a mental note of what he was told.
“Why are you helping me?”
“Think of it as a favour.” Talow took a step back from him and started to turn away.
“Thank you...um..” He didn't even know his name to thank him properly.
“Name's Raza, now get out of here.” Raza shooed him away as the officer started coming back down the hall.

Talow found the entrance to HQ easy enough, it was getting out that would cause some problems. He waited around until he saw someone he knew.
“Nico, Cyle!”
“Hey Talow, what's up?” They stopped to talk to him, moving to a pader where they wouldn't be in the way.
“I was wondering if you guys could get the guards to open the doors since you've both got madami seniority then me. I think I dropped something outside when we were coming back.” Cyle and Nico exchanged looks, not quite believing his story but they helped him anyway. When Talow was far enough away, he started to follow the directions Raza had ibingiay him, sure enough he found himself at the edge of the jungle. All he had to do was dive in there and he'd be tahanan free, but should he? Talow looked back at the city noticing the line of men coming down the main road. He still held the plans under his dyaket and he knew they were looking for him. Were they after the plans? Did they know he had escaped? All thinking came to late as UFS soldiers found him. Maybe if he talked to them they would see it from his point of view. He had the plans, all he had to do was ipakita them.
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posted by AlOoOosh
I am that one who sleeps away
I am the one who spends the night …
reaching his dreams sa pamamagitan ng counting the stars…
I am that one who carries his sadness on his back

I’m not sad…
but inside of me there’s a country crying
There’s a thirsty land
And there’s a fear of losing what I’ve never had…

Every night I talk to the sky …
hope I find you up there someday…

call my name once
and see what will I do

I am here in the mess alone
Trying to find the pieces of my mind
I’ve Nawawala everything
And now I am losing myself

I want you to come and protect me from that loss
You are the one who can find me…...
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I held my breath. I adjusted my goggles. I tightened my black swim cap. I got onto the diving board, slowly and cautiously. I loosened my body before my big dive.
The timers got their stopwatches. A voice came over the speakers.
"Swimmers, get ready," I shook my body. "Set," I relaxed and thought of the pure heaven as I would dive, and break the surface. The moment I was waiting for would soon come. And...it did. "GO!!!"
The crowd roared. We were off to a quick start, I supposed. I thought of nothing but fire, fire, and only fire. I moved my arms in blind fury. I kicked my feet like I was...
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posted by para-scence
If someone wouldn't mind pagbaba and commenting, I'm kind of in need of feedback. Thanks in advance.

"Evangeline! It's time to get up!" Mom called from the hallway. I grumbled and pulled the blanket over my head. Just five madami minutes... five madami hours would be nice...

"Evan," my older brother Joshua poked his head into my room. "Didn't you hear Mom? You need to get up." I growled at him.

"Get out," I squeezed my eyes shut tighter.

"Why don't you try and make me?" he taunted. I grabbed my unan and flung it across the room at him. He laughed and ran out of the room. Not having anything to...
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posted by Problematic129
*Thanks for all the comments and fans :) Probably tomorrow I'll post the stories later than usual, so your forewarned. Please read, review, and don't copy*
Chapter 18
    A sleepless night
    I spent the rest of the vision following Dorothy and I, smiling at the good ole times. sa pamamagitan ng the time the vision was done it was dark outside and I was exhausted. I called the doctor to notify him that I was okay, and after a few minutos I had hung up, finished showering, and was ready for bed.
    But I couldn’t sleep, I kept thinking back to those...
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posted by alicia386
Dear Sam,
I've been see my therapist - never thought I would be saying those words - for a while now. She sinabi that I was making a major break through. I do not know why she believes that since u barely say a word during the sessions, I barely do anything during the sessions.

I had to miss a few days from work so right how my boss is on the verge of killing me. His birthday is coming yo so I will try to throw him a surprise party. Ha, can you imagine my boss at a party?!

My boss is about as all as a 13 taon old . He has a Gusot beard and beady green eyes, he use to have a full head of brown...
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posted by AlOoOosh
I was trying to reach the sky
I was trying to fly
That was my dream
And you made it my fault

It has taken all my life…
Staying away from you…
Thought I then can survive without you
Nothing has helped me to forget
Everything I pag-ibig reminds me in you
And to act like I’ve never known you…
There’s no way
………………………

How would I ignore your smile?!
How can I forget who has created me?!
The one who has changed my life
The one who has been always beside me…

Don’t ask me to ilipat on
Because you’ve never taught me how to do that
………………………

Nothing I need when you’re beside...
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posted by Problematic129
Part 8! I don't own any of these pictures! Most come from Alegrias.me Hope you feel inspired! Down here is a song I wrote called Breathe, hope you enjoy it.

Breathe
    Verse 1:
    I wake up today with a smile on my face, and I return back disappointments are made. Where did I go wrong? Did I even try? This world is gonna bring me down, bring tears to my eyes.
    What’s this weird feeling? I want it to go. I can’t believe that life can a cruel black hole. Time just seems to fade away, days become weeks, and I’m still, yes I’m...
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posted by Problematic129
*Thanks for all the comments and fans :) Please read, review, and don't copy*
Chapter 17
    Happy times
    “How can you not be happy, this is our first sister-sister tradition in like…ever?” My eleven taon old self asked my sister, giving her a look like I thought she was mental.
    Dorothy laughed, a huge smile on her face. “Your such a loser Des, we hang out all the time.”
    “Not all the time,” I insisted. “And this is the first time we planned this to do and do again every year.”
    Dorothy...
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posted by rory2011
so I see you guys Pagsulat alot of wonderful poems
so I just want to share this with you
I saw alot of you Pagsulat in the new mga tula style and no one have ever wrote in the old style ,maybe cause it's only popular in where I live ,but here's a part of my fav poem ,it won't be easy to read it for the first time ,I hope I can translate it right ,it called "be panacea " :

1-weak your feeling of pag-ibig when it fall in sleep without people senses they would be like dolls

2-love ,the hut became a bright kastilyo hate,the world became a dark prison

3- the life gave you all her treasures don't hold it back...
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posted by alicia386
September 1

Blair was almost out the door of her grandma's apartment. She was dressed and all set for today's activities. As soon as she opened the door her dad was sitting in his car. He was debating whether or not to go in. He had unfortunately heard the door click open and was out his car in a second. Blair had no choice but to continue walking to her car.
"Blair," called her dad. "Just listen to me. I can explain."
Anger filled her. "Explain what? That you cheated on my mom with her sister? What could you possibly say that could change everything? I bet the susunod words that will come out...
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posted by rory2011
I was in my house waiting my father and my brother
I heard something ,it's calling me since I was a kid ,and it always say "weak up" even If I'm not sleeping
I want to leave my house ,I opened the door and felt the air touching my hair ,the sun was cold in my cheeks ,it was summer ,and I feel the cold winter coming and escaping autumn
I walked away from my house , this is the first time I feel my house is very hunting that way ,while I was walking there ,I realized one thing and it was the most important thing I should realized in my dark life
I'm now a real human ,I were always close to live...
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