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uy do you like this poem i did about alice and jasper's love?

these two were insepreable
the trust and pag-ibig in his eyes
made her feel ligtas
when she smiled
it brightened his araw
the thrill of the adventure
the adventure of pag-ibig
was making alice and jasper
fall ever so passionetly inlove
pag-ibig is like the wind
you cant see it
but you can feel it
pag-ibig folowed jasper and alice
because they were destined for eachother

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TEAM-EDWARDxxx said:

I Like it...

But is okay i guess.. maybe sum madami stuff bout like Bampira haha that would be interesting..

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you could just go to the request a peom tanong and say that u kno! but thanx! for the tip

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Little_Cullen said:

pag-ibig it. Punctuation a bit funny, but the actual Pagsulat is really cool. I especially like the bit about he makes her feel ligtas and her smile brightens his day. I pag-ibig it. Keep it up!

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thank-u so much

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twilightgirlNo1 said:

i think its great but some of the lines could be a little better.

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twilight0girl said:

it's a perfect poem about them.

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it's a perfect poem about them.

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Twilightpup said:

Its really good , you should make one about Bella and Edward

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emilyemmett said:

That is really good!! You should write another one!! Maybe about the meadow or Jacob and Renesmee or something!

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sessa123 said:

Its not bad, i always thought a poem used to jus have to rhyme but narr its really gud maybe fix up some little thing and maybe have a good thing to rhyme bout, like werewolves, Bampira anything lol KEEP IT UP HUN XX

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zXwolfgirlXz said:

aww i like it

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Brysis said:

It´s cute ♥

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LovelyDragon said:

Ya, I like it. Some of the lines could be a little better, but it's really cool. :)

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