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I wrote a poem can u plz tell me if its good?

Im just a girl
he was just a boy
thats what everyone else saw....
but they saw so much madami in each other..
to him she wasnt just a girl she was an angel that had taken his heart
to her he wasnt just a boy he was her soulmate, who'd left his puso with her....
it hurts me because all that pag-ibig is gone he's found somone new who he has ibingiay his puso to.......
pag-ibig is rare
hold on to it.........
my puso is broken.....
in to little peices......
im ipinapakita you.....
what you've done to me......
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??? wow someone has relationship issues. that is so depressing. I dont really like it its really sad .
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well im telllng a story this happened to my friend,,, so i just wrote it idc if u dont like it im just try=in to point out that pag-ibig dosrnt always work..... but tnax for ur comment
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wow !!!!!!!! omg !!! ♥♥♥
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jennyjen said:
it is awesome i pag-ibig it.... its great.......i pag-ibig it
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thank u
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