uy guys im wondering if this poem is good?

its from personal expirence, im in pag-ibig with my best friend wat else can i say?

HELP ME!
help me help me
I've done it again
I've fallen for someone
who thinks I'm a friend
help me help me
hes my best friend
i don't think this is going to mend
tell me tell me
theres a way out
I'm Nawawala and confused with now way out
pag-ibig me pag-ibig me
why cant he see
that the person who loves him is me?
ill try ill try
with all my heart
not to lose him
ill be smart
i will i will
see the araw when he loves me
than he might see
that he might be the only one for me
if he wont if he wont
i will always call him friend
and ill pag-ibig him ill pag-ibig him
till the very end