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Emmett's POV
I tried to open my eyes, it worked for a minute. I saw her, my angel, the one that saved me. I tried to leave them opened but the pain got worse so I had to close them. After the pain subsisted I tried to speak, I heard screams, it was coming from me. The pain was getting worse now, it was starting at my puso and shooting all around my body. I was still screaming. "Father, Edward!" I heard someone call in an angelic voice. At that moment my puso began to pound against my rib cage. I thought it was going to break all my ribs. I heard a conversation going on over the pounding of my heart. "He began to scream louder than ever and his pulse is racing, I'm worried." A voice chimed.
I felt a hand on my arm then it was gone, then another voice answered, "His puso is dying, it is the most painful part of the transition, but it is almost over. I heard footsteps leave the room and another soft hand on my arm and an angelic voice told me it will all be over soon.
What did that mean? Was I going to die? I felt like it, the way my puso pounded against my chest. What was the whole conversation earlier about, the transition, puso dying? His has to be death, transitioning from life to death. The beautiful women, angel, who saved me from the madala had to truly be an angel. If the last thing I saw before I die was her, I be happy.
Emmett's POV
I tried to open my eyes, it worked for a minute. I saw her, my angel, the one that saved me. I tried to leave them opened but the pain got worse so I had to close them. After the pain subsisted I tried to speak, I heard screams, it was coming from me. The pain was getting worse now, it was starting at my puso and shooting all around my body. I was still screaming. "Father, Edward!" I heard someone call in an angelic voice. At that moment my puso began to pound against my rib cage. I thought it was going to break all my ribs. I heard a conversation going on over the pounding of my heart. "He began to scream louder than ever and his pulse is racing, I'm worried." A voice chimed.
I felt a hand on my arm then it was gone, then another voice answered, "His puso is dying, it is the most painful part of the transition, but it is almost over. I heard footsteps leave the room and another soft hand on my arm and an angelic voice told me it will all be over soon.
What did that mean? Was I going to die? I felt like it, the way my puso pounded against my chest. What was the whole conversation earlier about, the transition, puso dying? His has to be death, transitioning from life to death. The beautiful women, angel, who saved me from the madala had to truly be an angel. If the last thing I saw before I die was her, I be happy.
Max's POV
When we rushed in Sergeant sinag office and I saw Addi lying there on
the floor anger just rushed over me. Sergeant sinag quickly tried to
fight us but between the both of us we had him pinned down on the
floor within seconds. As Jordan was holding Sergeant sinag on floor I
rushed over to Addi. I checked to see if she was breathing and that
made me a little calmer but not enough. So I grabbed the phone on the
mesa and called 911. When the police and ambulansya arrived I was happy
cause I knew that she was going to be okay and Sergeant sinag was going
to jail. Jordan and I had to stay on campus we weren't allowed to
leave.
When we rushed in Sergeant sinag office and I saw Addi lying there on
the floor anger just rushed over me. Sergeant sinag quickly tried to
fight us but between the both of us we had him pinned down on the
floor within seconds. As Jordan was holding Sergeant sinag on floor I
rushed over to Addi. I checked to see if she was breathing and that
made me a little calmer but not enough. So I grabbed the phone on the
mesa and called 911. When the police and ambulansya arrived I was happy
cause I knew that she was going to be okay and Sergeant sinag was going
to jail. Jordan and I had to stay on campus we weren't allowed to
leave.
Personally I read Twilight because kids kept bugging me because I haven't read it yet.
But after pagbaba all four books I feel in pag-ibig with them. I wasn't a tagahanga of the Pagsulat style or the romance. I prefer girl-on-girl. But I fell in pag-ibig with Edward and Jacob.
The characters are lovable. Now I hated Bella she was annoying but that's the only thing I dislike. I pag-ibig the ending to Breaking Dawn. And pag-ibig New Moon.
Edward left in that book I almost skipped it.
As of right now; Meyers is my paborito author.
She is way better then JK Rowling and Stephen King.
I used to pag-ibig HP until I read Twilight.
Now I used to write before pagbaba Twilight...and just suddenly realized my Pagsulat was nothing compared to Twilight. That's why I'm Pagsulat a vampire novel that I hope to ilathala in the near future.
But after pagbaba all four books I feel in pag-ibig with them. I wasn't a tagahanga of the Pagsulat style or the romance. I prefer girl-on-girl. But I fell in pag-ibig with Edward and Jacob.
The characters are lovable. Now I hated Bella she was annoying but that's the only thing I dislike. I pag-ibig the ending to Breaking Dawn. And pag-ibig New Moon.
Edward left in that book I almost skipped it.
As of right now; Meyers is my paborito author.
She is way better then JK Rowling and Stephen King.
I used to pag-ibig HP until I read Twilight.
Now I used to write before pagbaba Twilight...and just suddenly realized my Pagsulat was nothing compared to Twilight. That's why I'm Pagsulat a vampire novel that I hope to ilathala in the near future.