this is my first fanfiction and it probley aint that good so could you please comment
chapter one
the sun was shining through the window, i felt the heat on my back, i rapped my arms around edward we both knew we had to get up not that we wanted to. i sighed and started to get up when i felt a strong arm pull be back down on the kama "were do you think your going" he wispered as he kissed my neck.i kissed him and sighed "we have to get up" he started to shake his head and kissed me again "edward we really have to get up,nessie is gonna be awake soon" he ignored me and carried on halik me just under my jaw, i gave in then and wrapped my arms back around his neck and started halik him so passionatley that this time he was the one to remind me that we had to get up that our little girl was waking up in the susunod room and as always he reminded me with one word "nessie" he crowed in my ear. i was up and out of his arms in a second, nessie wasnt exactly a little girl anymore she is technacally seven years old but phisically she looks sixteen years of age,she is really smart and spends all her spear time studying of with jacob.me and edward were in our over sized wardrobe when i heard my best friend and favirote lobo running to our door,he would knock in exactly two seconds,i sighed and put my blue v-neck jumper on the walked to the door.he didnt even say high he just rushed past me still in lobo form into nessies room i ran after him what has him so worried "jake,jake" i asked i was worried now. in the living room i heard edward answer the door again i got a wiff of the scent and realised it was alice, i heard edward growl from hearing her thoughts . i turned back to jake wanting sagot he was in his human form now he sat down on the side of nessie's kama and started to stroke her hair i waited for him to tell me what's going on,he looked up at me and sinabi two words that made me frezze into place "the volturi"
chapter one
the sun was shining through the window, i felt the heat on my back, i rapped my arms around edward we both knew we had to get up not that we wanted to. i sighed and started to get up when i felt a strong arm pull be back down on the kama "were do you think your going" he wispered as he kissed my neck.i kissed him and sighed "we have to get up" he started to shake his head and kissed me again "edward we really have to get up,nessie is gonna be awake soon" he ignored me and carried on halik me just under my jaw, i gave in then and wrapped my arms back around his neck and started halik him so passionatley that this time he was the one to remind me that we had to get up that our little girl was waking up in the susunod room and as always he reminded me with one word "nessie" he crowed in my ear. i was up and out of his arms in a second, nessie wasnt exactly a little girl anymore she is technacally seven years old but phisically she looks sixteen years of age,she is really smart and spends all her spear time studying of with jacob.me and edward were in our over sized wardrobe when i heard my best friend and favirote lobo running to our door,he would knock in exactly two seconds,i sighed and put my blue v-neck jumper on the walked to the door.he didnt even say high he just rushed past me still in lobo form into nessies room i ran after him what has him so worried "jake,jake" i asked i was worried now. in the living room i heard edward answer the door again i got a wiff of the scent and realised it was alice, i heard edward growl from hearing her thoughts . i turned back to jake wanting sagot he was in his human form now he sat down on the side of nessie's kama and started to stroke her hair i waited for him to tell me what's going on,he looked up at me and sinabi two words that made me frezze into place "the volturi"
in the mood to be walang tiyak na layunin again. *sighs*
I wrote a artikulo Last week on how Twilight found me, saying that the Cover did in fact haunt me.
but since i finally cave in and read. i realize that the Haunting is not over.
I'm Obsessed it's true, but this is turning scaryyyyy
I'm a disney tagahanga okay, majorly and well..i was watching "101 Dalma.." you know, anyways, i was watching it to get my mind off of Twilight for once...
and something just jumped up in my face i thought i would share.
one of the Charaters is named Jasper.
the "Call" that the Aso do at night to send a message, is called
TWILIGHT Bark.
yeah...am i going insane? i think so..only i put in "21" with Jim surgess okay..and at the end of the movie he did something completely crazy he sinabi a line from the Book.
"so, do i Dazzle you?"
I decided to turn off the TV and go to bed..sad thing is, the only thing i dream about is Edward.
should i be scared? O_______o
I wrote a artikulo Last week on how Twilight found me, saying that the Cover did in fact haunt me.
but since i finally cave in and read. i realize that the Haunting is not over.
I'm Obsessed it's true, but this is turning scaryyyyy
I'm a disney tagahanga okay, majorly and well..i was watching "101 Dalma.." you know, anyways, i was watching it to get my mind off of Twilight for once...
and something just jumped up in my face i thought i would share.
one of the Charaters is named Jasper.
the "Call" that the Aso do at night to send a message, is called
TWILIGHT Bark.
yeah...am i going insane? i think so..only i put in "21" with Jim surgess okay..and at the end of the movie he did something completely crazy he sinabi a line from the Book.
"so, do i Dazzle you?"
I decided to turn off the TV and go to bed..sad thing is, the only thing i dream about is Edward.
should i be scared? O_______o
Okay so I'm not one of those fans who wants the film to be exactly like the book-no offence to anyone- because I know thats just not going to happen.
But I was watching the new Twilight trailer and saw this:
Don't you think it's a little weird that all three cars are there, I thought the Cullens didn't want to bring any attention to themselves.Now I know all pelikula aren't like the books they're based on, Harry Potter is a great example of that. But I thought the Cullens wanting to keep themselves inconspicuous was an obvious fact that ran through the book.
I know other people have noticed changes in the movie too- like Bella having her dyaket at the restaurant, and that they've changed the name of the restaurant.
I just wanted to know what other people felt about this. Either way I'm still going to see the movie, I can't wait. But does anyone think these changes will affect the experience?
But I was watching the new Twilight trailer and saw this:
Don't you think it's a little weird that all three cars are there, I thought the Cullens didn't want to bring any attention to themselves.Now I know all pelikula aren't like the books they're based on, Harry Potter is a great example of that. But I thought the Cullens wanting to keep themselves inconspicuous was an obvious fact that ran through the book.
I know other people have noticed changes in the movie too- like Bella having her dyaket at the restaurant, and that they've changed the name of the restaurant.
I just wanted to know what other people felt about this. Either way I'm still going to see the movie, I can't wait. But does anyone think these changes will affect the experience?
So Like now EVERYONE in my school is pagbaba twilight when I read it like before they even started to film the movie. So what what's my point? Well, my point is that before before Breaking Dawn came out, when some was pagbaba the books it was like you would talk to them and you would talk like you've been mga kaibigan forever when you've just meet the person. Now I see someone pagbaba twilight and I eathier get tried of seeing them or get sick. Ok maybe not get sick but still you can't talk to the person like you used to talk to them, all enthusiastic and excited! And for me most of the time the real exciting stuff is in the movie and the people who read the books nowa days don't know alot stuff about the movie. I believe that the people on the fansites are the REAL CRAZY fans, because if you ask anybody else what Spunk Randsom means, they wouldn't know. Anyway i just feel like it's so not exciting anymore....