I am a budding screenplay writer and wanted to write a script for New Moon. For lots of reasons. Mainly, to satisfy myself in case the real movie is not what I think it should be
I post frequently over in livejournal at the lion_lamb community and have posted it over there too.
here are iugnay to my screenplay
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This screenplay has some things different from New Moon. You will recognize many scenes I kept. You will notice some things that I have combined. You will also notice stuff of my own. This is all typical with any adaptation.
There are also hints of Eclipse in here and set ups for it. You will notice them.
This is my segundo draft, so it’s not finalized. There will be typos and such. I plan on getting this to a third or possible fourth draft, but I want to get opinions and see if I should go any further with this.
Some of the stuff was necessary in the screenplay. One scene in general I really wanted to get rid of, but my brain couldn't come up with anything else.
I left some things in the screenplay because I know some people would pag-ibig to read it and want a full out New Moon experience. If it was a real script, and the scenes were filmed, then the editor would just take it right out and put it in the deleted scenes section. You could think of it like that.
It is long. Like over 2 hours long, if you go according to the typical 1 page =1 minuto rule. Some scenes do go sa pamamagitan ng faster than others, so take that into account.
I know that some people will not like what I did with some scenes. But, I'm not going to please everyone. Which is why I am open to constructive criticism and look pasulong to your comments.
Again, this is a tagahanga made script. If you want to share it with friends, or what not, that’s fine. I am very satisfied with this project and hope all of you gain some sort of satisfaction from it as well.
I hope you enjoy it and QUESTIONS, COMMENTS, CRITIQUES, AND COMPLAINTS ARE ALL LOVE! Whether you want to PM me personally with a lengthy review or just give me a shout out on my comments, I would pag-ibig it to death.
Thanks for reading!
I post frequently over in livejournal at the lion_lamb community and have posted it over there too.
here are iugnay to my screenplay
link
link
link
This screenplay has some things different from New Moon. You will recognize many scenes I kept. You will notice some things that I have combined. You will also notice stuff of my own. This is all typical with any adaptation.
There are also hints of Eclipse in here and set ups for it. You will notice them.
This is my segundo draft, so it’s not finalized. There will be typos and such. I plan on getting this to a third or possible fourth draft, but I want to get opinions and see if I should go any further with this.
Some of the stuff was necessary in the screenplay. One scene in general I really wanted to get rid of, but my brain couldn't come up with anything else.
I left some things in the screenplay because I know some people would pag-ibig to read it and want a full out New Moon experience. If it was a real script, and the scenes were filmed, then the editor would just take it right out and put it in the deleted scenes section. You could think of it like that.
It is long. Like over 2 hours long, if you go according to the typical 1 page =1 minuto rule. Some scenes do go sa pamamagitan ng faster than others, so take that into account.
I know that some people will not like what I did with some scenes. But, I'm not going to please everyone. Which is why I am open to constructive criticism and look pasulong to your comments.
Again, this is a tagahanga made script. If you want to share it with friends, or what not, that’s fine. I am very satisfied with this project and hope all of you gain some sort of satisfaction from it as well.
I hope you enjoy it and QUESTIONS, COMMENTS, CRITIQUES, AND COMPLAINTS ARE ALL LOVE! Whether you want to PM me personally with a lengthy review or just give me a shout out on my comments, I would pag-ibig it to death.
Thanks for reading!
1) Edward
2)Bella
3)Alice
4)Seth
5)Emmett
6)Esme
7)Renesmee
8)Carlisle
9)Jasper
10)Rosalie
11)Jacob
12)Carmen
13)Kate
14)Benjamin
15)Renee
16)Angela
17)Eleazar
Thank you Stephenie for creating these amazing characters and sharing them with all of us.These characters will stay with me in my puso forever,long after Twilight comes to an end.
You could see it in his eyes.... that he really truly loved Kristen.
Brothers from different mothers!!
Kristen Stewart, who shot to fame as Bella sisne in "The Twilight" films and is the pamagat character in "Snow White and the Huntsman", jumped to the tuktok of Forbes.com's annual listahan of highest-paid actresses.
The 22-year-old earned an estimated $34.5 million (£22 million) from May 2011 to May 2012 and pushed Angelina Jolie into fourth place.
Cameron Diaz, who had a surprise hit with “Bad Teacher”, came in segundo with $34 million.
“She (Stewart) is an up-and-coming star. She is earning a lot of money from one of the most successful franchises of all time. This is who you would expect to see right now,” sinabi Dorothy Pomerantz, Forbes Los Angeles bureau chief.
“This taon you are seeing somebody young and at the brink of potentially great stardom sitting on the tuktok of the list.”
The 22-year-old earned an estimated $34.5 million (£22 million) from May 2011 to May 2012 and pushed Angelina Jolie into fourth place.
Cameron Diaz, who had a surprise hit with “Bad Teacher”, came in segundo with $34 million.
“She (Stewart) is an up-and-coming star. She is earning a lot of money from one of the most successful franchises of all time. This is who you would expect to see right now,” sinabi Dorothy Pomerantz, Forbes Los Angeles bureau chief.
“This taon you are seeing somebody young and at the brink of potentially great stardom sitting on the tuktok of the list.”
Slow, we paddle through the lake
Straight to the very center of the darkest water
Where we can embrace the shadows on the surface
The eyes that look up lifeless from our twins below
And though your arms and legs are under
pag-ibig will be the echo in your ears when all is Nawawala and plundered
My pag-ibig will be there still
True, it's chilling to behold
Up close we stumble backwards laughing in our boat
Till the image sinks away to someplace far but certain
A land of mere suspension where someday we must go
And though your arms and legs are under
pag-ibig will be the echo in your ears when all is Nawawala and plundered
My pag-ibig will be there still
Though your arms and legs are under
pag-ibig will be the echo in your ears when all is Nawawala and plundered
My pag-ibig will be there still
Straight to the very center of the darkest water
Where we can embrace the shadows on the surface
The eyes that look up lifeless from our twins below
And though your arms and legs are under
pag-ibig will be the echo in your ears when all is Nawawala and plundered
My pag-ibig will be there still
True, it's chilling to behold
Up close we stumble backwards laughing in our boat
Till the image sinks away to someplace far but certain
A land of mere suspension where someday we must go
And though your arms and legs are under
pag-ibig will be the echo in your ears when all is Nawawala and plundered
My pag-ibig will be there still
Though your arms and legs are under
pag-ibig will be the echo in your ears when all is Nawawala and plundered
My pag-ibig will be there still
Dreamed last night about a time and place
Where from our troubles we had escaped
I held your hand and I felt complete
As you turned and sinabi to me
From now on
From now on we'll be
You and me
We will be
From now on
From now on we'll be
You and me
You and me, we will be
Years went sa pamamagitan ng and nothing changed
The pag-ibig we shared just stayed the same
As hair grew grey on tuktok of our heads
Every night I quietly said
From now on
From now on we'll be
You and me
We will be
From now on
From now on we'll be
You and me
You and me, we will be
Only a dream
Only a dream
Only a dream
From now on
Only a dream
From now on
Only a dream
From now on
Only a dream
From now on
You and me, we will be
Where from our troubles we had escaped
I held your hand and I felt complete
As you turned and sinabi to me
From now on
From now on we'll be
You and me
We will be
From now on
From now on we'll be
You and me
You and me, we will be
Years went sa pamamagitan ng and nothing changed
The pag-ibig we shared just stayed the same
As hair grew grey on tuktok of our heads
Every night I quietly said
From now on
From now on we'll be
You and me
We will be
From now on
From now on we'll be
You and me
You and me, we will be
Only a dream
Only a dream
Only a dream
From now on
Only a dream
From now on
Only a dream
From now on
Only a dream
From now on
You and me, we will be
The moon is always full for us
The road is always clear
That's not what you want to hear
One is born so one can die
You must wait a real long time
That's madami than you can bear
And the days will come and go
And the band will march alone
Till the araw you cast a shadow
And it's nothing like your own
Rolling in on a burning tire
You're gonna set my house on fire
Just to ipakita me that you were there
bulaklak raised up like a snake
You will raise to leave me bait
And always, always take
And the days will come and go
And the band will march alone
Till the araw you cast a shadow
And it's nothing like your own
The moon is always full for us
The road is always clear
That’s not what you want to hear
That’s not what you want to hear
The road is always clear
That's not what you want to hear
One is born so one can die
You must wait a real long time
That's madami than you can bear
And the days will come and go
And the band will march alone
Till the araw you cast a shadow
And it's nothing like your own
Rolling in on a burning tire
You're gonna set my house on fire
Just to ipakita me that you were there
bulaklak raised up like a snake
You will raise to leave me bait
And always, always take
And the days will come and go
And the band will march alone
Till the araw you cast a shadow
And it's nothing like your own
The moon is always full for us
The road is always clear
That’s not what you want to hear
That’s not what you want to hear
It's all hats off now, all drum rolls and applause
sa pamamagitan ng slight of the hand you will turn them into dust
A face to face you will lead them sa pamamagitan ng the fall
A track fiend and the saw dust
You're allowed to stare it out
It’s all good luck charms
All trying to understand
Indeed inside me will always hope for worse
You say you keep them close by
They're closer than you think
A track fiend and the saw dust
You're allowed to stare it out
susunod spring will bring you back again
You'll sigh and crack the whip for us
And maybe you will be the one
Who'll draw the line in the sand
For us to crawl
It's all past bats now
All painting gorgeous time
And maybe when the night comes
You'll open up the cage
You'll open up the cage
sa pamamagitan ng slight of the hand you will turn them into dust
A face to face you will lead them sa pamamagitan ng the fall
A track fiend and the saw dust
You're allowed to stare it out
It’s all good luck charms
All trying to understand
Indeed inside me will always hope for worse
You say you keep them close by
They're closer than you think
A track fiend and the saw dust
You're allowed to stare it out
susunod spring will bring you back again
You'll sigh and crack the whip for us
And maybe you will be the one
Who'll draw the line in the sand
For us to crawl
It's all past bats now
All painting gorgeous time
And maybe when the night comes
You'll open up the cage
You'll open up the cage
I think I know what’s on your mind
A couple words, a great divide
Waiting in the wings, a small respite
Crowding up the foreground from behind
Even though you’re the only one I see
It’s the last catastrophe
Place your bets on chance and apathy
Take anything you want, it’s fine
Keep up the slow life for the night
Don’t take it back, I’ll just deny
This constant noise all the time
Even though you’re the only one I see
It’s the last catastrophe
Place your bets on chance and apathy
From the wind in front of me
Even though you’re the only one I see
It’s the last catastrophe
Place your bets on chance and apathy
From the wind in front of me
Even though you’re the only one I see
A couple words, a great divide
Waiting in the wings, a small respite
Crowding up the foreground from behind
Even though you’re the only one I see
It’s the last catastrophe
Place your bets on chance and apathy
Take anything you want, it’s fine
Keep up the slow life for the night
Don’t take it back, I’ll just deny
This constant noise all the time
Even though you’re the only one I see
It’s the last catastrophe
Place your bets on chance and apathy
From the wind in front of me
Even though you’re the only one I see
It’s the last catastrophe
Place your bets on chance and apathy
From the wind in front of me
Even though you’re the only one I see
Situations are critical
You got to look first before you go
If you wasn’t too sure then now you know
The situations are critical
Wait, ok, you’ve got to look before you go
Wait, ok, you’ve got to look before you go
Deep into the darkness where I hide
The monsters are buried down deep inside
You never know when they’re satisfied
Buried down deep where the sun don’t shine
The monsters are buried down deep inside but
Wait, ok, you’ve got to look before you go
You’re wasting away, ok, you’ve got to look before you go
Deep into the darkness where I hide
Deep into the darkness where I hide
Wait, ok, you’ve got to look before you go
Oh wait, ok, you’ve got to look before you go
You’re wasting away, ok, you’ve got to look before you go
Deep into the darkness where I hide
Deep into the darkness where I hide
Deep into the darkness
You got to look first before you go
If you wasn’t too sure then now you know
The situations are critical
Wait, ok, you’ve got to look before you go
Wait, ok, you’ve got to look before you go
Deep into the darkness where I hide
The monsters are buried down deep inside
You never know when they’re satisfied
Buried down deep where the sun don’t shine
The monsters are buried down deep inside but
Wait, ok, you’ve got to look before you go
You’re wasting away, ok, you’ve got to look before you go
Deep into the darkness where I hide
Deep into the darkness where I hide
Wait, ok, you’ve got to look before you go
Oh wait, ok, you’ve got to look before you go
You’re wasting away, ok, you’ve got to look before you go
Deep into the darkness where I hide
Deep into the darkness where I hide
Deep into the darkness
