Okay, this is going to be fun :) Debate time!:
1. Yes, she gives good descriptions...by raping the thesaurus. Almost every single page in Twilight mentions at least once how perfect Edward is. Look at this:
References to Edward's Beauty: 165
Broken Down into the following categories –
• Face: 24 (Favorite adjectives: glorious, heavenly, seraphic)
• Voice: 20 (The voice of an archangel, donchaknow.)
• Eyes: 17
• Movement: 11
• Smile: 10
• Teeth: 8
• Muscles: 7
• Skin: 7 (Note: This only contains accounts of Edward's skin being beautiful. I didn't count references to it as "pale," "cold," or "white." If I had, this number would be about ten times larger.)
• Iron Strength or Limbs: 5
• Breath: 4 (EVEN HIS BREATH IS AMAZING.)
• Scent: 4
• Laughter: 3
• Handwriting: 2
• Chest: 2
• Driving Skills: 1
That's too much description. Okay, describing Eddie's looks once in awhile is fine, but EVERY OTHER SENTENCE? Thesaurus. Rape.
2. She cannot write. FOR REAL. Any editor (except hers obviously) could show you--no any teacher could show you how grammatically incorrect she is most of the time. Hell, she doesn't even know what half the words she uses mean since she uses the thesaurus rape all the time. Example? 'Verbose' Don't know what it means?
Verbose – adj. Using or containing a great and usually an excessive number of words; wordy. See Synonyms at wordy.
This is used when Bella says that neither she nor Charlie is verbose. Bella? Not verbose? The girl who uses every chance she gets to describe how beautiful Edward is? Uh oh someone didn't check what the word really meant before using it :P
3. It has no plot. Example: Twilight, the first book in the "Saga" How many pages does this book have? 498
The first time there's a hint of a conflict/problem/plot (the foundation of a good book if you didn't already know) that has nothing to do with Edward's and Bella's romance? 328
When the conflict FINALLY arrives? 372
Looks like someone went, "Shit! I actually have to have a plot in this thing..." right towards the end of her book
4. Of course it's okay to have flaws! But clumsiness = NOT A FLAW!!
Flaw: a feature that is regarded as unfavorable
An example of a flaw: bad temper, attitude, moodiness
Everyone has clumsiness in them, it's not a unique thing. But your personal flaws are. See what I'm getting at? Clumsiness is normal...
Anyway, that's all I got for now. Feel free to protect and fight for your reasons :)
By the way, I'm not an Anti, I just feel like a debate with a seemingly intelligent Twihard
1. Yes, she gives good descriptions...by raping the thesaurus. Almost every single page in Twilight mentions at least once how perfect Edward is. Look at this:
References to Edward's Beauty: 165
Broken Down into the following categories –
• Face: 24 (Favorite adjectives: glorious, heavenly, seraphic)
• Voice: 20 (The voice of an archangel, donchaknow.)
• Eyes: 17
• Movement: 11
• Smile: 10
• Teeth: 8
• Muscles: 7
• Skin: 7 (Note: This only contains accounts of Edward's skin being beautiful. I didn't count references to it as "pale," "cold," or "white." If I had, this number would be about ten times larger.)
• Iron Strength or Limbs: 5
• Breath: 4 (EVEN HIS BREATH IS AMAZING.)
• Scent: 4
• Laughter: 3
• Handwriting: 2
• Chest: 2
• Driving Skills: 1
That's too much description. Okay, describing Eddie's looks once in awhile is fine, but EVERY OTHER SENTENCE? Thesaurus. Rape.
2. She cannot write. FOR REAL. Any editor (except hers obviously) could show you--no any teacher could show you how grammatically incorrect she is most of the time. Hell, she doesn't even know what half the words she uses mean since she uses the thesaurus rape all the time. Example? 'Verbose' Don't know what it means?
Verbose – adj. Using or containing a great and usually an excessive number of words; wordy. See Synonyms at wordy.
This is used when Bella says that neither she nor Charlie is verbose. Bella? Not verbose? The girl who uses every chance she gets to describe how beautiful Edward is? Uh oh someone didn't check what the word really meant before using it :P
3. It has no plot. Example: Twilight, the first book in the "Saga" How many pages does this book have? 498
The first time there's a hint of a conflict/problem/plot (the foundation of a good book if you didn't already know) that has nothing to do with Edward's and Bella's romance? 328
When the conflict FINALLY arrives? 372
Looks like someone went, "Shit! I actually have to have a plot in this thing..." right towards the end of her book
4. Of course it's okay to have flaws! But clumsiness = NOT A FLAW!!
Flaw: a feature that is regarded as unfavorable
An example of a flaw: bad temper, attitude, moodiness
Everyone has clumsiness in them, it's not a unique thing. But your personal flaws are. See what I'm getting at? Clumsiness is normal...
Anyway, that's all I got for now. Feel free to protect and fight for your reasons :)
By the way, I'm not an Anti, I just feel like a debate with a seemingly intelligent Twihard