Okay i think Hollys still alive so i want to write this about Hollyleaf its the first chapter tell me if you like it and ill write more!(I tryed to make the Rats names Stuipied sa pamamagitan ng the way and slso i LOVEEEE ardilya AND LEAF!!!!)
---Chapter 1---
Hollyleafs eyes whent wide and claped her paws.
"E-e-eating g-g-good t-t-tonight"eyes titches as she drags a isda from the river to the portected yungib from teh flood the rats all whent around her and she hissed
"GET!!! GET!!!Hollystar eats first"chuckles evil as the rats run away she hade named everyone and she was leader of them she took a bite of the isda swiping her tough over her jaws"Hollystar like!"Hollyleaf ate half of it than called one of the rats"ScarFace!"a larg daga the size of an aprentice walk to the mouse and nibbled on it he hade scars on his face and all over and big fangs that where as sharp as claws.
"Y-y-yes e-e-eat u-u-up"eye twitches and calls the rest of the rats than stands up on you hind legs and claps her paws and dances"I'am a leader i'am a leader!I'am a-RUMBLEBELLY DONT HOG IT ALL!!!!!!!"she snarls"That doesent make HollyStar happy!"the daga hollyleaf seemed to be talking to backed off Hollyleaf hissed than bark she turned around and looked back no madami isda was there she chuckled and claped again and twitched eye as she said"And soon we will get revenge on the clans"she coughed"And we will kill them all!!!"laughs evily and dances again the little gloom of light lies on her ragged dirty matted balahibo her crazy eyes lay open the thousands of rats"And yo shall be my army!!"all the rats squicks"YOU WILL GET REVENGE ON THE Pusa WHO TOOK YOUR PLACE!"they squill again and she laughs crazily and spins in circles and dances her eyes go tumawid eyed and twitch"B-b-but first w-w-we need to find a way out SO G RATYS GO GO GO!!!!!"she lifts he paws up and ooks at the celing as thousands of rats run into every tunnel she turns her head and watches them"Hold on Squirrelflight and Leafpool m clans comming..."she smiles evily and walks deeper into the shadows thinking of Squirrelflights and Leafpools death.
---Chapter 1---
Hollyleafs eyes whent wide and claped her paws.
"E-e-eating g-g-good t-t-tonight"eyes titches as she drags a isda from the river to the portected yungib from teh flood the rats all whent around her and she hissed
"GET!!! GET!!!Hollystar eats first"chuckles evil as the rats run away she hade named everyone and she was leader of them she took a bite of the isda swiping her tough over her jaws"Hollystar like!"Hollyleaf ate half of it than called one of the rats"ScarFace!"a larg daga the size of an aprentice walk to the mouse and nibbled on it he hade scars on his face and all over and big fangs that where as sharp as claws.
"Y-y-yes e-e-eat u-u-up"eye twitches and calls the rest of the rats than stands up on you hind legs and claps her paws and dances"I'am a leader i'am a leader!I'am a-RUMBLEBELLY DONT HOG IT ALL!!!!!!!"she snarls"That doesent make HollyStar happy!"the daga hollyleaf seemed to be talking to backed off Hollyleaf hissed than bark she turned around and looked back no madami isda was there she chuckled and claped again and twitched eye as she said"And soon we will get revenge on the clans"she coughed"And we will kill them all!!!"laughs evily and dances again the little gloom of light lies on her ragged dirty matted balahibo her crazy eyes lay open the thousands of rats"And yo shall be my army!!"all the rats squicks"YOU WILL GET REVENGE ON THE Pusa WHO TOOK YOUR PLACE!"they squill again and she laughs crazily and spins in circles and dances her eyes go tumawid eyed and twitch"B-b-but first w-w-we need to find a way out SO G RATYS GO GO GO!!!!!"she lifts he paws up and ooks at the celing as thousands of rats run into every tunnel she turns her head and watches them"Hold on Squirrelflight and Leafpool m clans comming..."she smiles evily and walks deeper into the shadows thinking of Squirrelflights and Leafpools death.
About 3 moons after Firepaw come to the forest
Fire_dude has logged on
Gray_man has logged on
Firedude: Yo Graypaw whats up?
Gray_dude: I just nocked Sandpaw, so i'm hiding
Fire_dude: How mad is she?
Gray_dude: I'm hiding in a rabbit hole
Fire_dude: :O wow, that sucks.....Dude she just came into camp....DUDE SHES RED!!
Gray_dude: i'm not here i'm not here
Fire_dude: Brb, she wants to talk to me....
Gary_dude: ok.....
its really loney now.....
you back yet?
COME ON!
Bluestars_dead has logged on
Bluestars_dead has logged off
Gary_dude: ooooookkkkkkk
Fire_dude has logged off
Gray_dude: great
SPBH had logged on
Gray_dude: SPBH?
SPBH: Sandpaw...BEST HUNTER!
Gray_dude: mouse DUNG!
SPBH: NOW WHERE ARE YOU?
Gray_dude:.....uh....Riverclan
SPBH has logged off
Gray_dude: cool she bought it!
Gray_dude has been hacked, and can no longer chat 4 Gray_dude has been deleted
(PLZ! feel graypaws pain! AMEN!)
Fire_dude has logged on
Gray_man has logged on
Firedude: Yo Graypaw whats up?
Gray_dude: I just nocked Sandpaw, so i'm hiding
Fire_dude: How mad is she?
Gray_dude: I'm hiding in a rabbit hole
Fire_dude: :O wow, that sucks.....Dude she just came into camp....DUDE SHES RED!!
Gray_dude: i'm not here i'm not here
Fire_dude: Brb, she wants to talk to me....
Gary_dude: ok.....
its really loney now.....
you back yet?
COME ON!
Bluestars_dead has logged on
Bluestars_dead has logged off
Gary_dude: ooooookkkkkkk
Fire_dude has logged off
Gray_dude: great
SPBH had logged on
Gray_dude: SPBH?
SPBH: Sandpaw...BEST HUNTER!
Gray_dude: mouse DUNG!
SPBH: NOW WHERE ARE YOU?
Gray_dude:.....uh....Riverclan
SPBH has logged off
Gray_dude: cool she bought it!
Gray_dude has been hacked, and can no longer chat 4 Gray_dude has been deleted
(PLZ! feel graypaws pain! AMEN!)
Tell me ur siblings and mother and father and ill see what I can do! Yay...please reply as soon as possible, and if u have any other tanong u can ask and I will answer as soon as I get on! DONT FORGET TO tagahanga MEEE!
Your fellow warrior friend, Brightnose
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