Pagsulat
Pagsulat What`S Your Opinion ?!
tiny_princess posted on Jan 22, 2011 at 07:50AM
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... I`m in love with writing poems . In fact , i believe that words can do more . > that`s why my poems are my life !!! ... I need your honest opinion about this poem so that i can improve my writing skill ... ~~ a letter to my dear prince ~~ Dear prince, I`m tired of living in this unusual life My diary Took me to an old distain memory when I become your wife I don`t know why ?!! Every good memory has became whiter then white Except the day I saw you You`re right Special memories always colored with special liquids But which kind of inks should I use to erase my past I tried everything Harm Hate Even pain! But this distain memory seems to be My number one aim I decided to listen to my wais heart But suddenly I was falling apart It gave me a magical ink All I have to do is only to spring one , two , three drops or four and everything started to be like old time before ,,, i`m waiting on burning fire to hear ur opinion about it =) |