Forewarning: I am a little cheesed, so you'll have to forgive any brutal comments. I tried to be biased but, well, you'll see.
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I had a lot of issues with this story, mostly characterization and some time-line things.

1) Artemis' age. Artemis was fifteen in The Time Paradox. Angeline, towards the end, even makes the comment “Why are you still fifteen?” He was also fifteen in The Nawawala Colony. I'm going on assumption here, but I'm pretty sure The Atlantis Complex takes place after the events in TTP. So, if that's the case, how does Artemis'...

Okay, so this is cringey.Even in the FIRST BOOK there are signs of star-crossed affection between Artemis and Holly!!!!
you see, holly thought that Artemis had died and was actually a bit sad, EVEN THOUGH HE JUST FLIPPIN ABDUCTED HER, and then she realized he wasn't dead and still helped his mum regain her sanity, which shows she had sympathy for him.
In the segundo book, Artemis was thinking about puberty and thinking that he would start accidentally flirting with holly in a few months.....OH GOD CRINGE OUT!!
In the third book, they actually become proper friends, and Artemis says he wishes he...

After lunch the susunod day, Elena was cleaning the main living room on the first floor. She had already cleaned everything else and had just finished polishing the old konsiyerto piano. She dropped her hands in weariness. Her hands came down on some of the keys, creating an unpleasant combination of notes. Elena flinched. Then, she got an idea. She glanced around to make sure no one would be able to hear.

She sat on the piano bench and lightly placed her hand on the keys. Her fingers found the right notes automatically and she started to sing.



If I die young, bury me in satin
Lay me down on a, bed...

uy guys please let me know which ending you like best.





“No!” Elena screamed. She dropped the gun and ran over to where Artemis had collapsed. She felt the chip deactivate. She ripped it out of her forehead and threw it across the room.

Elena picked up Artemis’s head and set it in her lap. Tears poured down her checks. A door on the opposite side of the room whooshed open. Opal floated in with an enormous smile on her face. Elena carefully set Artemis’s head down and stood up.

“You are a monster!’ she yelled, pointing at Koboi. She slowly advanced towards Opal.

“I wouldn’t try anything,”...