I decided to make my first tagahanga fiction about kastilyo and Beckett so constructive criticism is appreciated. Please comment.
"It's getting late, we should sleep on it." kastilyo sinabi looking at his watch.
Beckett looked up from the papers she was reading.
"Separately!" kastilyo stammered quickly.
Beckett lowered her eyes to the floor.
"Katherine Beckett, I never..." kastilyo whispered as he headed for the door.
"Well, why not, Castle? Am I not attractive enough for you?"
"No." kastilyo sinabi turning around.
Beckett got up from her chair and walked over to Castle. "Then what is it? Don't you sleep with every woman you meet?"
"No. Are you implying that you want to sleep with me?" kastilyo sinabi with a small smile.
"No, but I am going to find out why you haven't tried." Beckett threatened before leaving the building.
*Next Day*
"Sleep well last night, Castle?" Beckett asked as kastilyo entered the precinct.
"Not really. I was thinking about this case..." kastilyo answered re-examining the murder board.
"Yeas, that's why."
Beckett got up and went to interrogate a suspect. kastilyo turned to follow her but Esposito stopped him.
"What's going on between you and Beckett?" He asked.
"Nothing."
"Don't lie to us." Ryan sinabi coming up behind Castle.
kastilyo sighed. "Beckett's wondering why I haven't tried to sleep with her."
"Really? Good luck, bro." Esposito sinabi as kastilyo headed to the observation room.
Esposito joined him. "We need to work on our hand shake."
"Your right. We need to decide who's on tuktok and who's on bottom." kastilyo replied.
"Agreed."
"I'm on top." kastilyo and Esposito sinabi in unison.
They turned away from to the interrogation and faced each other. "No, I should. I'm a lefty." Esposito argued.
"What does that have to do with a handshake?"
"Lefties feel madami comfortable on top."
Beckett walked past them while pagbaba some papers. "Maybe you are gay, Castle." she sinabi glancing up as she continued towards the elevator.
kastilyo and Esposito exchanged confused looks before kastilyo followed Beckett to the elevator. "What do you mean maybe I'm gay?" kastilyo asked once the doors closed.
"When Natalie Rhodes was here she may have... suggested it."
"What made her think that?"
"Why do you care?"
kastilyo stayed silent.
"There's only one person's opinion you should care about. Mine!" Beckett sinabi before storming out of the elevator, her eyes all red.
kastilyo stared after her.
*That Night*
Beckett opened the door and saw kastilyo standing there. She went to close it shut but Castle's foot was in the way.
"What, Castle?"
"I don't understand."
"What's not to get?"
kastilyo entered her apartment, "Tell me something, Kate. Why have you waited so long?"
"Same reason you have. I'm in pag-ibig with you. I didn't want-"
kastilyo grabbed Beckett and pulled her close. Then he leaned in and kissed her.
And their segundo halik was even better than the first.
"It's getting late, we should sleep on it." kastilyo sinabi looking at his watch.
Beckett looked up from the papers she was reading.
"Separately!" kastilyo stammered quickly.
Beckett lowered her eyes to the floor.
"Katherine Beckett, I never..." kastilyo whispered as he headed for the door.
"Well, why not, Castle? Am I not attractive enough for you?"
"No." kastilyo sinabi turning around.
Beckett got up from her chair and walked over to Castle. "Then what is it? Don't you sleep with every woman you meet?"
"No. Are you implying that you want to sleep with me?" kastilyo sinabi with a small smile.
"No, but I am going to find out why you haven't tried." Beckett threatened before leaving the building.
*Next Day*
"Sleep well last night, Castle?" Beckett asked as kastilyo entered the precinct.
"Not really. I was thinking about this case..." kastilyo answered re-examining the murder board.
"Yeas, that's why."
Beckett got up and went to interrogate a suspect. kastilyo turned to follow her but Esposito stopped him.
"What's going on between you and Beckett?" He asked.
"Nothing."
"Don't lie to us." Ryan sinabi coming up behind Castle.
kastilyo sighed. "Beckett's wondering why I haven't tried to sleep with her."
"Really? Good luck, bro." Esposito sinabi as kastilyo headed to the observation room.
Esposito joined him. "We need to work on our hand shake."
"Your right. We need to decide who's on tuktok and who's on bottom." kastilyo replied.
"Agreed."
"I'm on top." kastilyo and Esposito sinabi in unison.
They turned away from to the interrogation and faced each other. "No, I should. I'm a lefty." Esposito argued.
"What does that have to do with a handshake?"
"Lefties feel madami comfortable on top."
Beckett walked past them while pagbaba some papers. "Maybe you are gay, Castle." she sinabi glancing up as she continued towards the elevator.
kastilyo and Esposito exchanged confused looks before kastilyo followed Beckett to the elevator. "What do you mean maybe I'm gay?" kastilyo asked once the doors closed.
"When Natalie Rhodes was here she may have... suggested it."
"What made her think that?"
"Why do you care?"
kastilyo stayed silent.
"There's only one person's opinion you should care about. Mine!" Beckett sinabi before storming out of the elevator, her eyes all red.
kastilyo stared after her.
*That Night*
Beckett opened the door and saw kastilyo standing there. She went to close it shut but Castle's foot was in the way.
"What, Castle?"
"I don't understand."
"What's not to get?"
kastilyo entered her apartment, "Tell me something, Kate. Why have you waited so long?"
"Same reason you have. I'm in pag-ibig with you. I didn't want-"
kastilyo grabbed Beckett and pulled her close. Then he leaned in and kissed her.
And their segundo halik was even better than the first.