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Well,here's my first attempt to a short story :)

“Hey! Stop him! He’s stealing!!!!” the owner shouted. Ron ran as fast as he could, but he didn’t get far. Only a few yards from the tindahan he collapsed to a large person and fell on the ground. The ring fell susunod to him and the man understood what was going on. He picked Ron and the ring off the floor and dragged him back to the jewelry shop. “I think this boy has something that’s yours” the man sinabi looking at the tindahan owner and he gave back the ring. “Thanks” the owner accepted in relief.
“What’s going on?” a familiar...

ok pple tell me REALLY what u think
i'm a MAJOR harry potter tagahanga and i read all the booksmore than 5 times in english and in french and watched all the movies... i swear like madami than a HUNDRED times... exept one book ....
i was in pag-ibig with HP 4 really long and the idea of it to end and the fact that fred and madami characters that i pag-ibig will die KILLED ME!!! i pag-ibig sirius SOOOOOOO much.. and fred 2 and when dumbledore and sirius died i was DEVISTADED!!! i couldn't stop crying for a buwan for both of them!!!!
and when the last book was published i bought it in both languages the first araw (btw...