I like Twilight. I used to pag-ibig Twilight. But then, I began to feel disappointed. I wanted Bella to have DONE something that actually could affect the entire WORLD. Suddenly, I created my own versions of Edward and Bella and the Volturi. I like Twilight as it is....but it would be much better like this.
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Bella sisne tugged on her muddy brown ponytail to keep in in place as thundered roared and rain came down in buckets on the deserted island. The forest, slick with slime and muck, was dangerous enough without HIM lurking in the shadows. Her ears picked up a soft sound beneath the gale. He...

Note: I originally had this as a question, but I guess it was too long, so I'm re-posting this in an article.

Question number one: Bampira hearts don't beat, correct? Correct. I believe this is mentioned several times. Now, in health class, they teach you that your puso pumps and makes your blood flow, correct? Correct. So, it stands to reason that, since Bampira hearts don't beat, they don't have blood flow, correct? Yes. So, they have no blood flow, no circulation. They cannot bleed, or blush, or anything related to circulation, yes? Yes. This is sinabi several times in the book.

Now, call...