ang pakikipagkaibigan munting parang buriko ay mahika Article: Blue Bolt's Adventures

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posted by Dragon-88

Blue Bolt, ready for fun!

OK, so on with this story. Blue Bolt (me) is sleeping in his house situated in Ponyville. Right now, he is enjoying a good night's sleep, and hopes the morning will be normal. Too bad it's not gonna happen!

Bolt: (sees sunrise) Time to have another nice day!

Pinkie: (busts down door) Hey, new guy! Wakey wakey! It's a requirement that new residents meet the princess!

Bolt: I hope you can fix the door you destroyed!

Pinkie: Sorry...I'll wait while you get ready! I'll walk with you. Nice digs!

Bolt: (brushing teeth) OK, that was random. I'm new here, and Pinkie's a little energetic! Are they all like this? (finishes and washes face using horn and puts on glasses and ankle bracelets )

Pinkie: You ready? My, I like what you have on! Are ya trying to impress her?

Bolt: (blushing) No way! It's how I look!

Pinkie: Hey! What say you hop like me on the way there? It'll be fun!

Bolt: Why not? (starts hopping like Pinkie)

AJ: What y'all doin'? You look silly!

Bolt: I told you...

Pinkie: Let's run for it!

Celestia: Where's the new resident? May he or she present him to me right now!

Bolt: (opens door) Right here your Highness....(passes out)

Celestia: Oh, goodness! Pinkie! I know you're responsible! He doesn't have energy like you!

Pinkie: My bad...

Celestia: (approaches Bolt) My, he is quite the accesorizer! Here's some water for you!

Royal Guard: Lucky son of a...

Celestia: Watch your mouth!

Bolt: Thanks....So, it's a pleasure to meet you.

Celestia: bahaghari tells me your'e a gentlepony. Is that true?

Bolt: (holds Celesta's hoof and kisses it) 'Tis true, your Highness!

The other main five arrive. Bolt is stunned, as he has no idea where they've been. They walk with him outside to ipakita him around town, and during this time, a hilarious conversation ensued.

Bolt: Where the buck have you guys been? I almost Nawawala my cool there!

Twilight: Hey! Don't take that tone of voice at me!

Rainbow: I like it! Sweet and assertive!

Rarity: Please! Look at him. He's smarter than you, except Twilight. She's the smartest. I just pag-ibig those things on your ankles! You got great fashion sense!

Bolt: I also draw pretty well.

Fluttershy: (*eeps*) How is that possible? Most mga kabayong may sungay can't even draw well!

Twilight: HEY!! I take high offense to that!

Bolt: Your'e so edgy today! You get enough sleep?

Twilight: Not really...I could use a nice ten-minute nap, though!

Bolt: Since my house is close by, go ahead a sleep in my bed. It's big enough for two ponies your size, since I'm a tall unicorn.

Twilight falls asleep right on the ground.

Bolt: Yikes! Wait here, I'll carry her to my house so she can sleep! (picks up Twilight to take her home)

Twilight: Thanks....

Bolt: Hey, don't thank me. Just get some sleep. I'll leave a note on my front door.

Bolt makes a note that reads "Sleeping Twilight. Do not disturb!".
He nails it to the front door.

Bolt: OK, let's go!

applejack shows Bolt where she works.

Bolt: Impressive! Hey, maybe I can help you out!

AJ: OK! Let's do it!

We bucked fifty apples together, then Applebloom shows up.

Applebloom: He is the tallest unicorn ah ever saw! He doesn't use magic to get apples and uses his legs instead? SO COOL!!

Bolt: Ok, now....

Applebloom: How'd you get that cutie mark?

AJ: Now, then that's enough.

Bolt: For being a very fast runner, maybe the fastest among mga kabayong may sungay (runs to orchard and returns in ten seconds)!

AJ: Whoa...

Bolt: Where's Big Mac?

AJ: Right behind ya!

Bolt: (turns around) Whoa! Didn't see you.

Big Mac: Didn't mean to scare ya. Everybody doesn't seem to want to hang out with me because ah'm so muscular.

Bolt: It's fine. I'll hang out with you anytime!

Big Mac: Sure thing!

AJ: Here's a little gift for you!

Bolt: Sweet! I pag-ibig apples! (starts working on it, finishes in ten seconds)

Rainbow: Hey, what about me?

Bolt: It's her turn! ipakita me the way! I can't fly though....I'll use magic to levitate myself after you!

Rainbow: Currently, I'm working to become a Wonderbolt. Hey! You listening?

Bolt: Sorry, that fire-colored pegasus caught my eye!

Rainbow: Spitfire? You like her or something?

Bolt: Nah, she looks cute, that's all. You all know I like Applejack!

Rainbow: What? You got a crush on her?

Bolt: Please don't tell her! Cool house. I wish I had a house like that.

Rainbow: No problem, you can chill with me at my house! I wanna know madami of your secrets!

Rainbow: (inside my house) Guess what, Twi?

Bolt: No, don't!

Twilight: (wakes up)

Rainbow: Bolty here has a crush on Applejack!

Twilight: Oh my....

AJ: Who has a crush on me?

Rainbow: Bolt does. Look at his face!

Bolt: (blushing) I can't believe you told her! Not cool!

AJ: It's fine, Sugarcube! I'll keep this between you and me.

Bolt: Thanks...

Bolt spends two minutos with Twilight in her house after she wakes up, fully active.

Twilight: Impressive, huh? I'm Celestia's student!

Bolt: Oh....I can see this extensive aklatan you got, and you write letters.

Twilight: She'd pag-ibig it if you wrote letters to her, too. It is when you learn something, for the most part.

Fluttershy: Um, isn't it my turn?

Rarity: No, it's mine!

Flutteshy: BACK OFF YOUR'E GOING TO LET ME HAVE MY TURN!

Bolt: ......

Fluttershy: Shall we go see what I do?

Bolt: Please. After you.

Fluttershy shows Bolt her job of taking care of the animals. Bolt is rather impressed.

Bolt: Nice! I like mga hayop too!

Fluttershy: What? Shut up! Now way!

Bolt: You better believe it! (pets Angel Bunny)

Fluttershy: As tall as you are, your'e gentle! He likes you!

Rarity: You done yet?

Bolt: Goodness, Rarity! Where are your manners?

Rarity: Sorry!

Bolt follows Rarity to her boutique. Impressed sa pamamagitan ng the various designs, he talks about helping.

Rarity: I would pag-ibig for you to help me with designing. Of course, with you helping AJ additionally, it could influence the designs.

Bolt: Sign me up! You got yourself a designer!

Rarity: See you tomorrow. You can arrive any time of day, but don't get carried away!

Bolt: Ok!

Pinkie shows Bolt around Sugarcube Corner, where she works. He is fascinated sa pamamagitan ng everything that occurs.

Pinkie: Have you met The Cakes? Very friendly and easy to get along with. Have you heard they have....

Bolt: Twin toddlers? Yes!

Pinkie: How'd you know?

Bolt: My human days, watching the episode "Baby Cakes"!

Pinkie: They are so revealing sometimes!

Bolt: Hello, Mrs. Cake!

Mrs. Cake: Are you that new parang buriko everyone is talking about?

Bolt: Yes!

Mrs. Cake: Your'e palamigan than they say you are. Would you like to buy something?

Pinkie: Pick the cupcake!

Bolt: Cupcake, please. Pinkie made a suggestion!

Mrs. Cake: Two bits.

Bolt: (pulls out two bits) Here you go!

Pinkie: You been working with Rarity?

Bolt: Best job ever! Surprised you, didn't I?

Mrs. Cake: Here you are!

Bolt: Thanks!

Mr. Cake: Wow, did you see those bracelets on his ankles? Very cool, if ask me.

Bolt: I knew you'd like them!

I was walked tahanan sa pamamagitan ng everyone. AJ kept looking back at me as she went home. I looked back, and waved to her.

AJ: See ya Sugarcube!

Bolt: You too!

Bolt enters his house, which had the lights turned off. The sun was setting. Bolt heard someone, and that someone had a large head and small body and stood on two legs. So he turns on the lights, and...

Bolt: What the? Spike! What ARE you doing?

Spike: I thought Twilight was here. Are you Blue Bolt?

Bolt: Yes! Twilight went tahanan after taking a ten-minute nap in my bed. You can go now. You're Spike, right?

Spike: Right.

Bolt: Pleasure to meet you. I suppose we can hang out together to talk about the main six?

Spike: All right! I've been waiting for this!

Spike goes home. Bolt didn't know today would be different. Now he knows what the others are like, and made a few friends. Perhaps he'll be like this for good.

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NocturnalMirage Hmm... The honest truth is, this time it's really hard for me to form an opinion about the story, which doesn't happen to me very often. It was well written and the pacing was good too. There are admittedly some unique aspects to your character, however I didn't like the idea of all of Ponyville suddenly revolves around him. Also, he seems to be good at everything, which makes the character less reletable. Nopony can be good at everything. Take Luna for example. Her character has very human flaws, that is why she has an enormous fanbase. Now to the positives again. I really like the appearance and the thing with accessories and that he's probably the fastest runner among unicorns. That is a unique and creative talent. I'd love to explore more on that. What I mean is, one creative talent is good enough, since nopony's perfect, not even Celestia. The love interest sub-plot was funny and enjoyable and the characterizations of the mane six were pretty good too. Oh one more thing: we learned what Blue Bolt does, what he's good at, but we didn't learn much about his personality, which would have involved the reader into the story emotionally. All in all, I'd say it was an enjoyable work, with lots of unique aspects, just needs a little improvement here and there is all. I definitely see the potential.

Dragon-88 Hmm...I shoulda made the story where he just wants to overcome his shyness, but only conversation is his obstacle. He is based on me, I just wasn't sure what he would be like as a real character. He is actually good at drawing and gaming, but blows at talking to other ponies. Seems as though he shares this shyness with Fluttershy. Shall I write a fanfic about Blue Bolt talking to everyone else instead of everybody talking to him? The thing about the love interest is that I l have a secret crush on Applejack. I shall write a fanfic that is based on his personality. That'll open a few closed doors about what he's like. Or just him going around on his own and making his own discoveries.

NocturnalMirage I see. Well, that' s a great idea, I'd love to read it!

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The ice was melting, and an aircraft was about to take off.

Con: *Floors it*
Lady: We're not gonna make it.
Con: Oh yes we will.
Pilot: *Flying plane*
Chinese Ponies: *Closing doors*
Con: *Shoots Chinese Ponies*
Chinese Ponies: *Fall off plane*
Con: Now nopony can close the door. *Floors it*
Lady: Dear lord, please let us-
Con: Don't pray! Praying is for bad ponies. *Drives onto plane, then stops*
Lady: *Gets out of car, and closes door*
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posted by Seanthehedgehog

Theme song >>>> link

Seanthehedgehog presents

Ponies On The Rails

Starring

Peirce Hawkins "Hawkeye" From Seanthehedgehog

Red Rose From Chibiemmy

Coffee Creme From KarinaBrony

Snowflake & Orion From Alinah09

Metal Gloss From DragonAura15

Stylo From Jimmythedragon

Gordon, Percy, Jeff, Bartholomew, Wilson, and Pete from Seanthehedgehog

Episode 26

Portland Porter

June 1, 1953

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posted by Seanthehedgehog

At Changeling Headquarters

Major Jones: *On telephone* Amazing. Bring them here. *Puts on hat*
Queen Chrysalis: *Farting loudly* Aaah.
Major Jones: *Covers nose*
Changeling 53: *Brings in Bartholomew*
Queen Chrysalis: Mr. Perfect, and Jade Greene.
Bartholomew: *Sees Jade*
Queen Chrysalis: Now you'll wish you didn't put us in so much trouble.

Soon, three trucks, and three mga motorsiklo were traveling down the road.

Jade: What's troubling you Bartholomew?
Bartholomew: I'm not sure. I was expecting either a long stay or a very short trip.
Jade: That's not too bad.
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The Magic Begins! A Twilight Sparkle Story

posted by TotalDramaFan60

Once, in a land, called Equetsria, there was a parang buriko named Twilight Sparkle. She was a small Unicorn, and she loved to figure out what magic meant. She forever longed for a pet, and she's on different quests, to, find a pet, and venture out to see what magic means. Night Light and Twilight Velvet are sure, that Twilight can do this. They also say, if she finds one, she can get a pet! She tells Night and Twilight that she can't do this without a pet. She says it's impossible! Obviously, Night and Twilight don't believe her, but they know they should trust their daughter, so before Twilight goes out on her trip, Night and Twilight have to ground her (Nicely!) So they can plan who they're going to get for a pet and what they're going to name him. (I say him because Twilight says she needs a male pet)

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posted by Seanthehedgehog

The susunod morning was a very cold one. Everypony that didn't escape had to line up in a huge line, and listen to Gilda speak to a few other people.

Nazi Colonel 98: *Gives Gilda list*
Gilda: *Reading listahan of prisoners that escaped* Sechsundsiebzig.
Rainbow Dash: How many did she say?
Airborne: Seventy Six.
Gilda: *gives listahan back to colonel* Dismissed.

At a train station.

Bartholomew & Jade: *Walking upstairs to platform*
Shredder: *Sees Bartholomew*
Sacred Symphony: *Reading newspaper*
Shining Armor: *Standing near train track*
Shredder: I see a few ponies that escaped with us.
Brewster: Bartholomew,...

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posted by KendiKens

-Oh,great,everything is ready,-said Twilight.
-Yeah,but why are we all here again,-asked bahaghari Dash.
-KendiKens is coming in PonyVille today.I want everything just perfect,-said Twilight.
-Wait,let me get this right....KENDIKENS IS COMING HERE,ALL THE WAY FROM CANTERLOT,-asked Rarity,very happy.
-Well,yes,but,-said Twilight.
-Oh,really,-asked Flutter Shy.
-That is damn great,-said mansanas Jack.
-You hear girls,KendiKens is coming to PonyVille,YAY,-said mansanas Bloom.
-Hello my little ponies,-said KendiKens.
-You are here,you are really here,-said Sweetie Belle.
-Oh yeah,the greatest flier of all times...

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Hedgehog In Ponyville: The Great Escape Part 8

posted by Seanthehedgehog

The susunod morning, everypony tried out Sacred Symphony's plan. They walked around the compound, and poured the dirt on the ground, and kicked it in. Some of the ponies even poured dirt in gardens that the ponies were creating. After that, the gardeners would rake the dirt until it blended in.

Meanwhile

Shredder: *Marching with other ponies* Alright fella's, look sharp! *stops*
Ponies: *Dropping dirt*
Shredder: *Watching*
Ponies: *Kicking in dirt*
Shredder: That look's sharp! *Continues marching*
Gilda: *Walking towards gardens*
Sacred Symphony: *Sees Gilda* Princess...
Celestia: Oh *sees Gilda, and...

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posted by Seanthehedgehog

The susunod morning, Bartholomew, and Jade were walking around the camp with a few other ponies.

Bartholomew: So, what I'm thinking is that the woods should be only two hundred, and thirty five feet from any of the huts that we're digging from.
Jade: We got to get somepony to get the real measurement from here to the woods.
Bartholomew: That would be impossible. Has Shredder gotten us any maps of Germaneigh yet?
Jade: No, not yet. He's still working on getting a pick for Pablo.

Near the washdown.

Sigmund: *Turning handle*
Rainbow Dash: *Helping Sigmund*
Sigmund: *Pulls off handle*

Water soon shot out,...

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posted by Seanthehedgehog

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Jade: How many ponies do you plan on digging out Bartholomew?
Bartholomew: Two hundred and fifty.
Ponies: *Gasping*
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posted by Seanthehedgehog

Con found Lola tied to her bed, and there was tape on her mouth.

Con: *Frees Lola* What happened?
Lola: One of Frank's men came here, and tied me to this chair. He kept asking me where you were, but I didn't say anything.
Con: And that's why he tied you to the bed?
Lola: Yes.
Con: Well it's over. I killed him, and now we got to dump his body somewhere.
Lola: Where are we going to do that?
Con: Tonight. Oh, and I got the groceries. This should be enough for our flight into Equestria.
Lola:Con! *hugs Con* We can't go back to Equestria. Your boss will be looking for you.
Con: He won't know where...

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posted by Seanthehedgehog

Theme song >> link

Seanthehedgehog Presents

The Adventures Of bahaghari Dash

Based off the TV Show, Adventures Of Sonic The Hedgehog

Starring the fastest pegasus in all of Equestria, bahaghari Dash

Her German sidekick, Pinkie Pie

The main villian, Discord

Discord's sidekicks: Screwball, Karl, and Kyle

Episode 2

Magnum Horse

One araw bahaghari Dash went to get a newspaper. She was very eager to read the news until..

Rainbow Dash: *Reading newspaper* Whoa. Four ponies in a car die? What is all this about? *Goes to Sugarcube corner*

At sugarcube corner

Pinkie Pie: *Making candy*
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posted by Seanthehedgehog

A few of the bullets nearly hit Snips, but soon we were up in the air, and away from Nazi Forces, heading back to Ponyville

Sean: *gives book to Spike*
Spike: *reads book* Twilight joined them?
Sean: Yeah. We decided not to tell you until now.
Spike: I can't believe Twilight would do such a thing.
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Spike: All three of them?
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Spike flipped through...

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posted by Canada24

"What are we gonna do with that guy. Now that he's here, I really don't think we would be able to trust him" Rariry admitted.

"He only just got here. Don't ya'll think you might be overreacting" applejack admitted.

"AppleJack, please. Have I ever been know to overreact!?" Rarity insisted.

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"Did I forget the plates? I did! I totally forgot the plates! Of all the worst things that could happen! This is! The! Worst! Possible! Thing!"

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posted by OnlyAFangirl

Twilight's POV:
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posted by rockinpony

My character-Wildberry.

--Hi. This is my first MLP story. My friend, natasha1830, read it and sinabi it was good. So i wanted to put it on here. I hope you'll like it--

My name is Wildberry. I was born in Berryville, where we grow the best fruits in all of Equestria! I'm a unicorn. I have a violet-red coat, a blue mane & tail(with yellow highlights), and my cutie mark is a two cherry's. I got the name 'Wildberry', 'cause when i was a filly, i used to gallop to anypony or anyplace that i saw! I also jumped around everywhere. That's when my parents decided to call me Wildberry; so the name stuck, and i was no longer...