can you read this poem and tell me what you think of it?

Quite interesting. Grammar and spelling could use some work, and I'm not a tagahanga of the topic, but it's interesting.

coolness! seems like something i would write...XD
how do u like mine?

Heartbreak
this madness stops here,
this world has filled me with fear.
i almost...shed a tear.
the pain...it's shear.
all because you left me here.

so, here i will stay,
and there i will lay.
every single day
here...i shall stay.

stay here, lie there.
shear fear, from my tears.

i promised myself...
i would stay strong.
but the susunod time's come and gone.
so I'll let my grief
lye here, on this shelf,
and i will walk away.