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Okay, so I wrote a satire for my English class. here's the link for it:
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it's on gay rights, and it may be offensive (but I really don't care).
Could you guys please read and review? it's short so it won't take up too much of your time. I would pag-ibig some payo on it. It's meant to be short, so I don't need corrections on that.
Thanks!
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either I don't know the difference between long and short, or there are some very laze asno people on this site. if it's the latter, I guess we'll see how far along they get in life..
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low--- said:
ummmmmmm... it's long...
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SymmaGirl2 said:
I don't agree on the information, but it's very well written. I hope you get a great grade, because you deserve it! It's well written, addresses both sides of the argument well, and has pretty much no errors! Even though I don't agree with the message, I'm definitely giving credit where it's due. Very well done!
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I don't agree on the information, but it's very well written. I hope you get a great grade, because you deserve it! It's well written, addresses both sides of the argument well, and has pretty much no errors! Even though I don't agree with the message, I'm definitely giving credit where it's due. Very well done!
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thank you :)
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XxKeithHarkinxX said:
WAY to long! oh god curse my perverted mind....
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