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Heyy tell me what you think of this poem i wrote. I wrote this poem cause i was recently backstabed sa pamamagitan ng someone i called my bestfriend. (Btw let me know if i need to change anything to make it better or any suggestions please & thank you)

Bestfriends are suppose to help you up when you're down, Not help you make your way down. Bestfriend should care & pag-ibig you for who you are, Not what you look or act like. Bestfriends should know the real you, not the fake you, Bestfriends should never make you change, They should like you for being yourself. What's the true meaning of a bestfriend?
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afsha1997 said:
oh good but it's not rhyme sorry. you should write like these
best mga kaibigan supposed to help you when you are sad
when everything wrong everything is bad
my best friend leave me alone when i need her
now there's nothing just dark blue colour
why did you betrayed me i'm feeling all alone
feels like my puso falls to pieces now i'm gone.
i knw my also weird :P
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That good:] bettr than mine
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