pag-awit My original Song- It hurts! sa pamamagitan ng Ellie Cowell ( my real name)

wierdgem7 posted on Jun 05, 2011 at 04:32PM
*Verse 1*
It hurts when I see you with her
And I know its rude, but I have to
stop and stare
*chorus*
But every time I look at you,
I feel like I'm in love
But it still hurts
It hurts

*verse 2*
Is lonely me?
Is lonely me?
Is lonely what i'm destined to be

*Chorus*


*verse 3*
When I try to get It right
It just ends up in a fight
So why don't I just stop trying?
Because it feels like i could be dying?

* Chorus*


Is love supposed to hurt?
Nothing I've ever felt
Has hurt like this
Do you know what I'd do
For a kiss?

*Chorus* (x2)






Hi there! Did you like it? I dont like it myself.. but i want to know what you think!

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sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas GrenadeGirl337 said…
sunny
Maybe make it a little longer? i dunno.
sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas wierdgem7 said…
It sucks. I know it does!
sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas applies112 said…
zzz
that made me fall asleep
sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas zaedenwild said…
whats the tune?
sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas webkinzluv said…
smile
i have the same problem with writing short songs. but it is a nice song.