now this is not the real first chapter ok it's mine:
Percy
I walked out with Hazel and Frank, the bangka was already starting to land. I started to think about who was on it, I knew Annabeth would be but other then that I had no idea. There was a huge thud breaking me from my thought, the bangka had landed. I watched with anticipation, then Annabeth came out of the bangka scaning the crowd when she saw me she froze and began running tored me wnen she got to me she kissed me and i kissed her back.
I know it's not long but it is NOT REALY the chapter it's what i thought the book would start as when i finished th son of neptune
Percy
I walked out with Hazel and Frank, the bangka was already starting to land. I started to think about who was on it, I knew Annabeth would be but other then that I had no idea. There was a huge thud breaking me from my thought, the bangka had landed. I watched with anticipation, then Annabeth came out of the bangka scaning the crowd when she saw me she froze and began running tored me wnen she got to me she kissed me and i kissed her back.
I know it's not long but it is NOT REALY the chapter it's what i thought the book would start as when i finished th son of neptune