When I got into the car, emmet scared the crap out of me he was sitting in the backseat. I sinabi " here Emmet you drive". "no Max will notice if someone is sitting in the front passenger upuan addi" Emmet said. Okay fine I said. When we got far enough away we switched seats to where emmet was driving. I started crying I couldn't control it. Awe Addi, please dont cry on me He said. Do you think I'm crying on cause i want to? I ask but continued before he could answer. I can't control this Emmet, I can't stop feeling like crap. I just, I don't know anymore. Addi its ok, he said. I'm sorry I shouldnt have sinabi that to you he continued I wasn't thinking. I just pulled one of my knee up to me and rested my head on it and quietly cried. When we got tahanan no one was in site so I asked where everyone was? They all went hunting. Emmet said. Oh, you can go hunting if you want you don't have to babysit me. I sadi Nah, its okay Emmet sinabi I not thursty. Well I'm going up stairs I told him as I was still crying. Do you want to talk about it? Emmet ask. No its ok I said. I decided to just sit on the sopa and watch tv with emmet. I was still crying when he finally decided on a channel to watch. I had on my big sweat sando and pulled my none broken knee to my chest and rest my head on the arm rest. Emmet came over and put his arm around me and pulled me into arms and I just started crying harder. When the family finally returned I was in my kama I guess emmet put me there once I had fallen asleep. I looked in the mirrow before going down stairs and i looked horribly, but i didnt care. I walked downstairs and my stomch growled and emmet turned around and sinabi its time for the human to eat! thanks i sinabi and he sinabi no problem. I went into the kusina and saw jacob looking in the refrigerator. I sinabi hey, umm if you see cody whcich you probably will since he is a wolf- he cut me off before I could finish. You know? Jacob sinabi Yeah, it was easy i continued, after he pushed me he felt extremely hot like you do and he walked off shaking like you do before you turn into a lobo and his temper made his shake madami as he kept telling me all that b.s. i said.Make sure you tell him I'm sorry for calling him jackas* please I ask? Sure thing kid. He sinabi
Hi my name is Amanda and I have helped a few people out on fanpop. I'm in a college English course and wanted to put up and ad for myself! Anyone looking for an editor for there tagahanga fiction I'm the one. I do not changes stories I just add madami descriptive elements like how stephanie Myers is so descriptive. You can email your story at CoolMandyz43@Aol.com and then I will send them back to you and you can post it or change somethings I did. I would pag-ibig to write my own tagahanga fiction but I'm not a great idea person but I can really edit stories to the point of perfection! So anyone who wants a helping POV get at me!
This is for people who have been pagbaba Esme's Story:
I don't want to call it Esme Cullen story the whole time so I have come up with some ideas for names. please comment and tell me which ones you like. Ones i don't end up using for my story, feel free to use for any of yours:
Daybreak
Forever Awakening
Beyond Starlight
Nightfall
Sudden Dusk
Moonlight
Midnight Glimmer
Sunrise
Sunset
Dawn of Life
Precious Enchantment
If you can think of any others, please let me know
I want my story to have a madami interesting name so it draws madami attention than just 'Esme Cullen Story'. I went online to a listahan of words with 'atmosphere' and I found these words and made different combinations with them.
PLEASE HELP ME!!!
THANK YOU!!!
I don't want to call it Esme Cullen story the whole time so I have come up with some ideas for names. please comment and tell me which ones you like. Ones i don't end up using for my story, feel free to use for any of yours:
Daybreak
Forever Awakening
Beyond Starlight
Nightfall
Sudden Dusk
Moonlight
Midnight Glimmer
Sunrise
Sunset
Dawn of Life
Precious Enchantment
If you can think of any others, please let me know
I want my story to have a madami interesting name so it draws madami attention than just 'Esme Cullen Story'. I went online to a listahan of words with 'atmosphere' and I found these words and made different combinations with them.
PLEASE HELP ME!!!
THANK YOU!!!
Its short sorry. its supposed to be a cliff hanger. the susunod one is a lot longer.
I promise.
Bella's Pov.
We all looked at each other. That scream was SO familiar. Where's Alice?
Alice?
"Alice? Alice where are you?!" I shouted.
Then there was another yell coming from the middle door.
Then we realized. Alice went ahead of us and went towards the middle
section. We all ran as fast as we could. Edward smashed the door
and there they were. Alice, The mysterious man, and Jasper, with
mysterious purple eyes.
"Surprised to see me?" the man and Jasper sinabi at once.
I promise.
Bella's Pov.
We all looked at each other. That scream was SO familiar. Where's Alice?
Alice?
"Alice? Alice where are you?!" I shouted.
Then there was another yell coming from the middle door.
Then we realized. Alice went ahead of us and went towards the middle
section. We all ran as fast as we could. Edward smashed the door
and there they were. Alice, The mysterious man, and Jasper, with
mysterious purple eyes.
"Surprised to see me?" the man and Jasper sinabi at once.
uy ... This is my first fanfiction :D so if its not good just give me some constructive critism to make it better. Thanks (:
Preface.
The reason i left was to save my family. The one I cant live without. But i wish they were here. To hold my hand. Promise me everything will be ok. But i push that thought to the back of my mind when i hear the approaching footsteps. I stand there. Alone. Preparing myself for terror that i am about to face. If i could cry, tears would be running down my face. But when the hunters prepare to attack. I crouch forward, my lips pull back over my teeth. I let out a deep growl which was cut short. My head snapped up to the sound i heard behind me.
Preface.
The reason i left was to save my family. The one I cant live without. But i wish they were here. To hold my hand. Promise me everything will be ok. But i push that thought to the back of my mind when i hear the approaching footsteps. I stand there. Alone. Preparing myself for terror that i am about to face. If i could cry, tears would be running down my face. But when the hunters prepare to attack. I crouch forward, my lips pull back over my teeth. I let out a deep growl which was cut short. My head snapped up to the sound i heard behind me.