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Yes, everyone knew him, well, that is, everyone who was in the rebellion against Dr. Damion. Everyone called him a great leader, and he rules one of the five countries in Earth, The Midlands, a large chain of islands in the Atlantic ocean, from the tuktok of the hills, all the way to the city limits were vineyards of grapes, due to it's vast volcanic activity fertilizing the soil. It was often reffered to as "Big Italy". It was also a busy shipping area, due to the fact that ships stop here on their way across the Atlantic ocean to refuel or stock up on supplies. Back to the subject though, Hannah...

"Jett, how's the pagkain coming?" asked a female penguin, putting a block of wood into a fireplace. "Oh, Ummmm.... It's... Doing good," sinabi Jett. "I sure hope it is," sinabi the female, heading down to a small kitchen. She knew it, the kusina was a mess. Pots strewn about on the ground, the tsauder was burnt, the pasta too soft, and the ham was charred to blackened ash. "I got it Hannah," sinabi Jett. "Uh, no, you don't have it, this place is a dump, I think I should take it from here," sinabi Hannah. "No!! I have a plan!!" sinabi Jett. "Oh, is that plan to go out and order take out from some fancy...

After it had been announced that Dr. Damion was now dead, the rebels celebrated, all soldiers soon dropped their weapons and put on hard hats and hammers, they needed to rebuild society. The double agents got whatever prisoners left in Dr. Damion's fortress out before the initial blast. So now, an empty Earth, and only 27 species of animal left. All that was left were Penguins, Roadrunners, Rattlesnakes, and several other species. "I'm the last of my kind," sinabi Domingo, looking out into the sunset. "Ah Domingo, relax, it's not like you need to be in a pack again, you've got me right?" asked...

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Chapter 9

The boys had finally caught up with the girls.

"Wheres Private?" Greyson asked.

"We don't know. He was with us." Skipper said.

"Oh dear!" Emma said.

"Someone ambushed us and took him." Kowalski said. "A shadow figure in the shape of a lemur."

"It's them again." Bandit said.

"You're ran into them?" Kowalski asked.

"Yes and I'm very scared." Emma hugged Kowalski trying not to release her tears.

"I'll...