Pokémon
Pokémon My D/P Fanfic
SaitoSaturno posted on Mar 26, 2008 at 01:19AM
Okay. People at my school that know me have read this story, up to at least the fifth chapter. They really liked it. It's based off the games, though there are some obvious differences from almost the very start. I would enjoy reviews. Oh yeah, and it's separated into three books:
Genesis: The Beginning Exodus: The Penultimate Leviticus:The End Here's the first chappy! Reviews are greatly appreciated! Chapter I Dawn dragged Damion across the grass by the collar of his striped shirt, her dark blue hair whipping slightly in the wind. It was September 23, 2007 when Dawn and Damion’s adventure began. “Are you out of your flippin’ mind!?” Damion called from his line of protest apon the ground, the grass making green, highlighted stains on his black slacks. Dawn didn’t answer, she just pushed on to the tall grass on the other end of Verity Lakefront. “Can you at least put me down?” Still no answer from Dawn. Damion huffed, tensing his muscles as he tried to wriggle free of Dawn’s grasp. “I don’t think this is a good idea,” he fumed between flails of arms and legs. Finally, Dawn answered. “Look, those people left behind their briefcase. We need to return it before they completely forget about it.” Dawn’s voice was gruff as she continued to yank Damion across the grass. She didn’t even turn around when she said it. “You’re gonna’ tear my shirt.” Damion’s voice was quiet but angry as his flailing ceased. Dawn snorted, blowing a lock of navy hair from her face. “Does it look like I care?” Dawn whipped around, eyes ablaze with impatience, her grip tightening around his shirt collar. “I could be dragging you by your hair!” Damion quieted, but crossed his arms as Dawn continued across the grass, finally at the edge of the tall foliage surrounding Lake Verity itself. “Why meeeeee?” Damion moaned as the tall grass began tickling his nose. “Oh, shut up!” Dawn huffed. “Look, we’re here. All I need to do is get the briefcase, then we can leave.” Dawn reached for the briefcase, temporarily freeing Damion. He hurriedly scrambled to his feet, and started to take off, but before he went an inch, Dawn grasped him by his arm and firmly pinned him to the ground. He fell in a heap, huffing again, and crossing his arms this time when Dawn let go. “I’ve got it!” Dawn exclaimed, grasping the top of her white, pokeball emblazoned cap with excitement. She had the briefcase in her other hand, grasping it firmly. “It’s a little heavy, but...” “Can we please just get out of here?” Damion complained at Dawn’s feet. She opened her mouth to answer, but was interrupted by a rustle in the nearby bushes. “What was that?” Damion yelped, glancing over to the rustling bushes warily. “It’s probably just a harmless Pokemon,” Dawn retorted, flicking back her thick, navy hair. Damion wasn’t assured. Suddenly, bursting from the bushes came two very angry Starly, flapping their little, yet powerful, wings strongly, small black eyes glowering dangerously. “Yagh! What do you mean by harmless?” Damion yelped, clinging to Dawn’s leg in fright. “Get offa’ me!” Dawn squealed, kicking her leg into Damion’s face. He went sprawling. “Now’s no time for being afraid, we’ve gotta’ fight these guys!” Dawn shouted over the Starlys’ angry twittering and heavy wing-beats. “With what?” Damion retorted, standing up. He brushed off his dusty slacks hastily, glaring at Dawn. Dawn looked thoughtful for a moment, then her eyes brightened. “I know! Maybe this briefcase has Pokeballs in it!” She started smashing at the briefcase. “Stop it!” Damion shouted. The Starly looked ready to attack, for they were growling. “That briefcase isn’t ours! Just see if it’ll open!” Dawn nodded, and sure enough, the case wasn’t locked. Her face brightened as she noticed the contents. “Pokeballs! Three of them!” She picked one up, and tossed it to Damion. “Use this one!” Damion caught it. He could feel power eminating from the cranny of its opening. “Okay, go, whoever you are!” Damion tossed the Pokeball into the air, and it opened. A blaze of white light appeared, and a small green turtle with a leaf on its head materialized. Its big yellow eyes sparked with pride and courage. Damion smiled. “A Turtwig! Oh, it’s so cute!” He embraced Turtwig with a hearty hug. “We don’t have time for this!” Dawn called over the raging battle between one of the Starly and the Pokemon she’d found; a Piplup. “Use Turtwig to fight the other one!” Damion nodded curtly. He raised his arm and stood up, pointing at Turtwig’s opponent. “Use Tackle!” Turtwig nodded, and turned to face the now speeding Starly. Turtwig dodged whatever attack Starly tried to land apon it, and then charged quickly at the small bird. What a speedy Turtwig! Turtwig gave a tremendous leap to the air, plowing its skull into Starly’s back. Damion smiled as andrenaline pumped through his blood. Starly became angry, and cawed with menace at Turtwig. It zoomed towards Turtwig, wings lit up with white light. The Starly was using Wing Attack! Something had to be done! The super affective attack could hurt Turtwig terribly. “Um...I know!” Damion called to the wary Turtwig. “Use Withdraw!” Turtwig obeyed, and tucked into its shell faster than sound. Starly hit Turtwig’s shell. Its shell spun around wildly for a few seconds, then stopped at a lopsided angle in the grass. When Starly was far enough away, Turtwig popped from its shell, smiling determindely. “Finish it with Razor Leaf!” With that, Turtwig leaped into the air, and did some spirals. Flinging from the leaf on its head came more leaves, all spining rapidly, edges as sharp as knives. Starly chirped with alarm as the leaves edged closer. The Razor Leaf hit with an amazing force. Starly lost its balance, and fell to the ground, squiggles in its eyes. Damion was so amazed. His jaw dropped with awe as he gazed at the fainted Starly. Then, he snapped back to reality. “We did it, Turtwig!” Damion called. Turtwig cheered with approval. Damion embraced the small turtle in a crushing hug. Turtwig and Damion both smiled, Damion laughing the whole time. “That was great, Turtwig!” A few meters away, Dawn was finishing up her battle. Piplup was fighting strong and proud, using a montage of attacks on the angered wild Starly at Dawn’s commands. Eventually, the other Starly fainted as well. She praised Piplup heartily, and at the same time celebrating their first victory. “Damion!” Dawn called to her friend. Damion looked up from hugging Turtwig and stood up. “I can’t believe it!” “Neither can I!” Damion chorused in a proud tone. They exchanged some excited banter after that while Piplup snd Turtwig played together in the grass. Then suddenly, Dawn’s face fell. “I just realized something,” she said sadly, the realization whipping her in the face. Damion looked at her curiously at Dawn while Turtwig ran between his legs after Piplup. “We used some Pokemon that weren’t ours. We have to return them.” “Oh,” Damion answered, sighing. He looked down at Turtwig who was playfully tusseling with Piplup. Both were smiling, energy eminating from them even though they had just fought in a tough battle. Turtwig was a strong Pokemon. However, it had been wrong to use it. Dawn was right, Turtwig belonged to the people who forgot their briefcase. “Guess we had better return them.” Dawn nodded. “Piplup, return.” Dawn returned Piplup to her Pokeball and Damion did the same with Turtwig. “Have you guys seen our briefcase?” A sudden voice startled the crestfallen trainers. Tearing from the bushes came the young boy who had been there previously with an older man. The briefcase was obviously theirs. They recognized him from when they had first been at the lake. They remembered it clearly, for it had happened only a few minutes ago. ~.~.~.~ Damion was sitting with Dawn at the edge of Lake Verity. They had been fishing for a rare Pokemon, just to see and admire. Damion hadn’t managed to catch anything, but Dawn was fruitful with catches, reeling one in after another. “I caught one!” Dawn shouted, reeling in a Goldeen. It was a nice size, with bright colors. It looked healthy. Damion rolled his eyes and tried to concentrate on his own line. “Look, Damion!” Damion refused to look as he grimaced at what he reeled in. He had hoped it were at least a Magikarp, but it was a bundle of heavy lichen that had caught on his hook. “Drat!” he cursed, throwing his line back into the water. Dawn released the Goldeen after a few moments of adoration. “Come on, Damion! Usually you catch more than just lichen!” Dawn jeered, adding new bait onto her hook. Damion ignored her, and watched his bobber float gently against the soft waves. For a while there was a silence. Dawn managed to catch another Pokemon, this time a young Corphish. It was hard for her to let it go because she tried to avoid its snapping pinchers. She hastily tossed the clattering creature back into the lake with disgust. They were rare, but Dawn had never liked crabs. After a while, it became boring to stare at his line, and Damion found himself gazing about the lake. Its surface sparkled with beautiful light reflections. Something caught his eye. On the other end of the lake, he saw two figures, who appeared to be looking for something. “Hey, Dawn, look at this!” “Did you catch something?” “No..... There are people over there. D’ya see them?” Damion pointed his finger in the direction of them. “Yeah. Hey, they’re coming this way!” Dawn reeled in her line and put it at her side, racing forward to meet the people. Damion sighed self-conciously and reeled his own in, only to find he’d caught a stick tied up with a blobulous green moss. “Wait up!” He chased after Dawn, green scarf flapping madly in the strong wind. No matter how fast he ran, however, he couldn’t catch up to her. He stopped, out of breath, for the wind was pushing quite a resistance against his efforts. “Wait up...” he mumbled, as he trudged on after the energy high thirteen year old. “Well, Lucas, it appears there is nothing unusual about this area either.” The sudden voice made Damion look up. An old man was speaking to a young boy about his and Dawn’s age, who wore a black shirt and slacky jeans. “Hey, professor, who are those people?” The boy asked, fingering him and Dawn. The professor looked up, seeing them. Dawn had finally stopped running ‘against the wind’ and Damion was a few feet behind her. The professor dismissed Lucas’s question and stalked calmly out of Lake Verity’s realm. Lucas watched in silence, and soon followed. When Dawn looked back, she could see something left on the side of the lake. “Hey, Damion, look!” The professor and Lucas had left behind their briefcase. “Let’s return it to them.” “Are you out of your flippin’ mind?!” Damion called. “The briefcase is in the tall grass, where the wild Pokemon are!” “Oh, shut up, come on,” Dawn grasped the struggling Damion by the collar of his striped shirt and began dragging him across the grass. ~.~.~.~.~ “Yeah, right here!” Dawn called, holding up the briefcase in one hand to show Lucas. “Oh, thank Palkia you found it!” Lucas ran up and snatched the briefcase from her hand. He was about to run off when he saw what were in Dawn and Damion’s hands. “Did you guys use....” Damion and Dawn frowned and glanced at eachother warily. “Oh, you did didn’t you!” Lucas began sweating, limbs shaking. “Darn, what’m I gonna’ say to the prof.?” He ran off, not glancing back once to see if Dawn and Damion were following. Dawn and Damion followed however, tucking the Pokeballs into their pockets and wearing gloomy, responsible looks on their faces. Dawn cast an apologetic glance at Damion. It had been her fault that they ended up in the tall grass. Damion smiled, giving her the sign that it was okay. They were speechless, deep in thought as they trailed out of Lake Verity’s realms. Several yards down Route 201, Dawn looked up to see Lucas and the professor walking calmly in the opposite direction; to Sandgem Town a few miles away. Dawn nudged the still downcast boy at her side with her elbow. He looked up. “It’s them,” Damion whispered. “D’ya think they’re mad?” Dawn wasn’t sure, so she shrugged. “Let’s go talk to them.” “Okay, but we’d better hurry, they’ll get too far away and we’ll never catch up.” Dawn’s voice was quiet, not that it surprised Damion. They were both upset, they’d done something they shouldn’t’ve, and they were going to have to return the Pokemon they used. It was sad for them, because Piplup and Turtwig were already their best friends. The exilleration of battles; it was amazing. Pokemon and people alike trusting eachother, fighting together....It was a shame to see Piplup and Turtwig go. |
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