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posted by sadiebugz00
Chapter 2 (BTW, I'm just copying and pasting from Word, so it may look like I don't have paragraphs, but I do)


2
ROAD TRIP
Derek’s Perspective

A while later I call Jesse over so we could discuss Carter’s situation.
Jesse is quite attractive; she has ocean-blue eyes and long, flowy, bleached blonde hair, and looks much like a Barbie. However, she can be very fickle, so if I use the correct wording I could be able to keep Carter. But, if she’s in one of her “moods” there’s no way on Earth that I’ll be able to keep him.
I hear a pounding hard knocking on my door.
Great… I think. She’s in a “mood”. I hurtle towards the door to keep her from waiting. She grimaces at Carter once she sees him hobbling after me. I’ve never really known why she despises him. I open the door as she says, “Why is Butt Mutt still here, babe?” she asks, not really caring if Carter could understand her or not.
“Don’t call him that, please!” I say for the millionth time.
"Whatever. Just get rid of that thing as soon as possible. Preferably today. If not sa pamamagitan ng tomorrow, we're over," she replied manipulatively.
“Fine. How about we go right now. I figured out a place that I can drop him off at. It’s called the Sonaran Desert or something like that.”
“First of all, there’s NO way I’m getting in your wimpy little truck with that… thing. segundo of all, I believe it is the Sonoran Desert.” She ang sumagot arrogantly.
“Okay, then. I’ll be back in an oras or so,” I reply, “stay safe.”
“Whatever…” she retorts blandly.
Sometimes I wonder if she really does pag-ibig me… Anyone could easily see that I pag-ibig Carter and no matter what they think they would make sure I was happy… Maybe she’s just using me for the little money that I make that she always gets a handle of to buy a new pair of shoes. Why do I even doubt myself?? Of course she loves me! It wouldn’t make sense; she had been dealing with me for a whole taon now! I haven’t known anyone else that has stayed in a relationship that long and tolerated me. She’s a keeper. I just know it in my heart. I whistle to Carter twice, signaling it was time to leave the house. He hurriedly runs out the front door and approaches my truck. I will be the first to admit, it isn’t the best truck. Its cherry-red paint is chipping, and the engine is pretty rusty. However, it works just fine, for its old age of 21. It’s an old GMC. For some reason, Jess really hates it, and is horrified sa pamamagitan ng the idea of being trapped in the old thing with sweet ol’ Carter. I open the door, motioning for Carter to jump in.
He tries to jump in at first, but then I realize that it is way too high for him to reach. I gingerly lift him up into his seat, and then switch sides to hop into mine.
I put the key in and listen to the old thing rev up. Luckily, she seemed to be cooperating today and was running nicely.
I pull out of my driveway, but pause to look at the front of my house. It most definitely doesn’t have the best curb appeal on the block, that’s for sure. It clearly hasn’t been painted in at least two decades, and what used to be glorious white paint, is now tinted yellow. The only plant life I have is dead leaves from my neighbors’ trees, dead grass, and a whole bunch of weeds. The only way I manage to escape the griping of my neighbors is sa pamamagitan ng weekly spray-painting my damo a nice shade of green and buying fake bulaklak and burying them into the dry dirt.
I pull away from my shameful house and out of the neighborhood full of perfect front yards with flowers, trees, garden gnomes, and perfectly painted houses.
I look over at Carter, and see that his tail is wagging. I instantly feel twice as guilty. I have to. I think, I need Jesse in my life. She’s the best girlfriend I’ve ever had. There’s gonna be some way that’s he’s gonna make that place his home… Sadly, he probably thinks we’re going to somewhere fun… I just feel so malicious doing this to him!
We drove for an oras or so as we finally approached the road that enters the desert, and I turn onto it. Carter looked around and started whimpering in the softest tone I had ever heard. It was one of those moments that made me regret leaving him in this desert. After all, I hadn’t done a whole lot of research on this place. For all I know, Big Foot, the Abdominal Snow Monster, and the Boogie Man might live there! It’s a pretty low probability level, but… it COULD be possible!
The silence was just too awkward for me, even though I was just riding in an old truck with a dog. I decided to turn on the radio so it doesn’t seem so awkward. All of the sudden, Drive sa pamamagitan ng sa pamamagitan ng Train comes on and makes me feel twice as guilty, because it’s about someone telling the other person that they’ll never leave them.
So, I switch the channel, and I Won’t Give Up sa pamamagitan ng Jason Mraz came on, a song about someone who loves the other person so much that they won’t leave them. I switch the channel again, and Somebody That I Used to Know sa pamamagitan ng Goyte comes on. I decide to turn the radio off, because every song was too awkward, madami awkward than the silence.
I look over at Carter, who seems thoroughly confused sa pamamagitan ng all the changing of music and silence. I could’ve sworn he had shifted his head to his head and he had a glint in his eye that seemed like he was thinking, “What was that for, man? Those were my JAMS!” I chuckle to myself. You’re going crazy, I tell myself. You’re just hallucinating.
We drive for about 30 minutos along the straight road into the desert, not turning once (I figured I would get lost) before I found a good spot. In the distance, you could see a pack of coyotes, so I figured it was the PERFECT place to drop him off.
I open my door, counting on him jumping out over my lap as usual. He succeeds in jumping straight over my lap and out the door. I quickly slam the door closed, pull the truck into reverse, switch into drive, and slam the pedal so I wouldn’t have to look at his face, which was most likely not the most happy or trusting face that I would ever see. The only thing I could think as I was speeding away was, Don’t feel guilty… It’s for the better.
posted by Problematic129
~Genre:realistic fiction, humor~
Chapter 19    
        I didn’t even need revenge
    I couldn’t help but feel giddy as I brushed my teeth and changed into madami prettier looking clothes than my bedtime pajama’s of Hello Kitty. The house was quiet and I was a little bit disappointed, but at least I’d get some time to myself, and I needed that very much. I was also glad I didn’t have to go to school either, not because I’d be embarrassed or anything, but because the minuto I saw Meredith I’d go all Ninja...
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posted by Problematic129
~Genre: Fiction, mystery and pantasiya :)~
Chapter 31
        The worst form of betrayal
    I think I woke up, it still painfully hurt to breathe. But I was still in the woods, or at least susunod to it. Witnessing the moment.
    The moment my sister died.
    I hadn’t been able to hold the tears ever since I appeared here, leaving my sister behind, I still couldn’t believe it. I missed my one chance, I remember what she had said, though I didn’t understand most of it, but I do now.
    Now...
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His eyes fluttered open, and his muscles automatically tensed. For a segundo he was back in Afghanistan, alone, without his comrades, falling asleep unguarded behind enemy lines. He noticed how his arms were, like they had been holding someone, someone who is no longer there. Gemma.... The thought entered his head like a speeding bullet. The fact that she wasn't there made him think that she had never been, that he wasn't really home, and that he imagined the whole thing. But one look around the room, his eyes adjusting to the moonlight, he could tell he was in the club house. He really was...
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posted by SweetHoneyBunny
(Fantasy)

I woke with a pounding head and a throbbing shoulder. A bright light was shining in my eyes so I couldn't see anything. “What happened?”
“You were shot.”
“Shot?” I couldn't see anyone. Suddenly, the light snapped off and the room was thrown into shadows. Rubbing my eyes, I saw that I was in some sort of operating room. “Yes, shot. Brett and Dalla brought you here, sinabi I was the only one that could save you so I did the only thing I could.” I was drawing a blank, what was it Dylan could do? An image came into my mind. It was a stack of files, one flashing after another....
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I shook in fear as I felt him hovering over me it scard me out of skin I could already feel his hits coming. As leaned over me I heard angry load foot steps stomping their way towards us. My eyes were closed tight but snapped open when I heard his out burst.

"Dad! Stop!" He'd sinabi firmly.

"This little witch" he stooped down so his mouth was level with my ear. "Was snooping on on our conversation I think I'll..." he chuckled "finish her off in one sweep."

I could feel the cold metal of the kutsilyo against my skin against my vocal cord. God, I wasn't even breathing I didn't didn't bother to think....
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posted by alicia386
Action: Spy Fiction

Chapter Two: I May Be A Spy But Weather Can Kick My Butt Any Day

      I and almost everyone else is the world takes life for granted. I didn't realize how good I had it until something hit our jet which immediately caught on fire. Years of training for disasters like this kicked in. I was on high alert looking for the nearest exit. My dad was already at one with two parachutes. Dang it. How could he have possibly have gotten those that fast? This would not seem impressive. Our pilot was already trying desperately to control the jet. It was like he wasn't afraid of those...
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posted by 1999jacko
4 weeks ago
Ron sat miserably in his apartment watching the new for something interesting, when a beeping noise butted into his little araw dream. He ran over to the mesa where the phone was placed, he picked it up instantly hitting answer." Hello commander, is my dad back yet?" he sinabi hopefully. The commander cleared his throat before answering," Ron I'm really sorry but we just received a message and its not good news... I'm afraid your father is dead and we need you to relocate away from Washington today. So pack your stuff and get ready for your escort to take you to your new home." All...
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posted by flabaloobalah
Genre: Realistic Fiction, Mystery, Drama/Romance

Claire and I unpacked our belongings and put them in our own dressers and waited for lunch to be ready.
After a little while, Leila hollered for us. As Claire and I reached the doorway, we observed the stampede as the six of them pounded down the stairs.
When my little sister and I reached the kitchen, Jeb greeted us and handed us a bowl and silverware. At the head of the table, Leila stood with a ladle and served us plenty of food. I sat susunod to Makayla, and Claire sat across from me, susunod to Joey.
The meal was spent in almost total silence, save...
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posted by flabaloobalah
Once we were all done swarming each other, Leila helped Claire and I through the little herd of cousins, upstairs, to our room. Where usually you would take a left and be looking at their bedroom doors and a bathroom, we took a right at the tuktok of the stairs so we were faced with a room i hadn't seen before. The interior was a pale, almost skin like beige that was cracked and peeling in some spots, especially where our beds were pushed against the wall. Beside each kama was a small mesa with drawers and a lamp. In between us was a large window, creating a distorted patch of light on the scratched...
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Hi, my name is Jonas. I'm thirteen. I'm...well, not what you would consider normal.
I have twenty pairs of X-His from the Converse store susunod door, all pink. Okay, okay, see? I'm not normal. And that's not the end of it.
I have thirty T-shirts that say tupa Bampira Rock on them. Yeah, I pag-ibig the horror movie "Sheep Vampires." It's filled with tupa that get tortured and wake up at midnight only to turn into tupa Bampira that suck the blood out of their shepherds. It's rated R, but my parents never notice. I bet they don't even know there's a rating system. Lucky for me.
So, this morning, I woke up, when my glass of kouk left from an taon nakaraan shimmered. A misty face appeared.
"Jonas...come here to me...or you shall suffer the consequences...like your precious ancestors," the woman screamed.
Was it my imagination...or did I get sucked into my glass of Coke?
 Jonas's glass of kouk
Jonas's glass of Coke
posted by 1999jacko
because I like to have lots of stuff on at once heres a prologue of one of my new stories

The prologue
I ran pasulong into nothing things being erased in the path of the other kids behind me, the world is crumbling before my eyes. MY mga kaibigan that have already died bodies appear on the nothingness in front of me I shove them away from my eyes and jump high over them.Too high I feel the pain shoot up and down my leg searing a hole of pain in my head and then that's all I feel, think and hear..Pain and that's when I know they are right behind me haunting me for all the bad things I've done I just...
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posted by flabaloobalah
Genre: Realistic Fiction, Drama/Romance

There was this one summer I spent with my cousins, back when I was fourteen. My little sister, Claire, went to their house with me.
That first day, when we jumped out of the van, we were stunned. The house was this glorious, leaning, peeling, giant tahanan on a winding dirt road. The paint was a soft baby blue, something that reminded me of rocking horses and winter nights. Our Auntie Leila stepped onto the rickety porch and waved and smiled. Cautiously, Claire and I waved and smiled back. Uncle Jeb came to give us hugs. We returned the hugs without complaining....
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posted by Problematic129
Chapter 8
    That was not subtle
    “My reports so good! I’ll get at least a D!” I squealed as Beth and I walked towards the school.
    Beth frowned. “A D? Why not aim for B?”
    “Honey the last time I got a B, was when one stung me.” I informed her.
    “You can at least try, bubs, it can’t be that hard.” Beth reasoned as reached the school parking lot.
    “Impossible you know I- uy look it’s Grey!” I yell when I see him on his motor cycle. “Hi...
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posted by rory2011
David rode the man's car , the man drove to the police station ,when they arrived ,the man told David to go to ask for officer 12's office in the segundo floor
David ran towards the office as fast as he can ,when he arrived ,the officer looked at him asking " are you Mr. David miller ? " yes ,I'm sir " David sinabi
" sit down please " the officer sinabi
David sat on that black sopa near the officer disk
" sir ,could you please tell me what's going on with my son Kevin " David sinabi
" today there was a apoy in the sugar factory where your son work ,your son is a very good strong guy ,he helped all...
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posted by Problematic129
*Thanks for all the comments and fans :) Please don't copy and please read and review. Note, my stories might be posted later than usual, so your forewarned. Thanks for tuning in!!!*
Chapter 6
    Sage, the really strange red head
    I feel my blood boil when I see my gals outside drooling over football players outside with no shirts on. I suppress the urge to roll my eyes, Sage’s practically fanning herself, Ali has no shame in giving them the stalker look, and Beth is too pre-occupied on her phone.
    I stomp towards them. “How...
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posted by Problematic129
*Thanks for all the comments and fans :) Please read, review, and don't copy*
Chapter 5
    Okay I’ll- wait what
    We danced liked the crazy people we were, close yet strange, sweet yet insane, cool yet tender, happy yet…something else. I hoped that Cal was noticing, I haven’t seen him since he and Grey left the kitchen.
    Sage and Beth came back after there bathroom break and joined us, and soon we were the four mga kaibigan of awesome dancing together.
    When we took break, Grey and (girly squeal please) Cal...
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posted by hgfan5602
This is a crazy song I wrote called Rotten Tomatoes, and I hired the Black-Eyed Peas to sing it. WARNING: This song was meant for entertainment, and should in no way be connected to real people, places, or things. It is not the author's responsibility for the medical bills if you die from laughter, or possibly, thinking I'm weirdness.
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Converse is awesome
The Westing Game is gruesome
My mga kaibigan all ran
When they heard me say that

People say I'm weird
But look over there then,
That teen has a
White, fluffy beard

tsokolate coins rock
They're the celebs of the block
They're creamy and sweet
Cuz they always go to swim meets

I pag-ibig Harry Potter
Or was it mansanas Rotter?
It was everyone's favorite,
But it soon molded.

Now, I'm almost five
And I live in a hive,
Like my other amigos
Who live in anthills!
posted by Problematic129
*Thanks for the comments and fans :) I just noticed I put Ch.3 for Ch.2, my mistake I can be so dumb sometimes. But! I fixed it. Please read, review, and don't copy*
Chapter 3
    We all pag-ibig the great Beth
    Back to the story, Ali was right, the new substitute was HOT, sa pamamagitan ng the time class was over the girl sitting susunod to my had drowned in a pool of her own drool. We make our way to the cafeteria and listen to one of many of Beth’s crazy stories, it’s basically this lame story that she recreates improvising as she goes along.
    That’s...
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posted by rory2011
two years later ...
kevin took his father's part of making money for this family and David stood in the house to take care of the others ,and to brought pagkain and other needing for his family

Jack hated school so much ,but David refused to let him without education ,jack taking drugs and stealing money from other people ,he's not a good guy like Kevin and Paul ,so all David caring is around jack ,David couldn't understand that his son is a bad guy , cause jack look like his father so much with his black hair and his skin , his face shape ,he took his green eyes from his mother but he look nothing...
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posted by Problematic129
*Chapter 2 up! Thanks for all the comments and fans :) Please read, review and don't copy*
Chapter 2
    Evil takes true form
    So right now I’m talking to my best friend, Beth, as were walking to our class. As we were talking Grey Callister interrupted us.
    With his flawless gold-blonde hair and warm brown eyes, it isn’t a surprise he’s wanted sa pamamagitan ng most girls. I hate to admit when I first laid eyes on him, my legs turned jello and I didn’t want to look away, but later on I realized he was a conceited jerk.
    So...
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