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posted by sadiebugz00
Chapter 2 (BTW, I'm just copying and pasting from Word, so it may look like I don't have paragraphs, but I do)


2
ROAD TRIP
Derek’s Perspective

A while later I call Jesse over so we could discuss Carter’s situation.
Jesse is quite attractive; she has ocean-blue eyes and long, flowy, bleached blonde hair, and looks much like a Barbie. However, she can be very fickle, so if I use the correct wording I could be able to keep Carter. But, if she’s in one of her “moods” there’s no way on Earth that I’ll be able to keep him.
I hear a pounding hard knocking on my door.
Great… I think. She’s in a “mood”. I hurtle towards the door to keep her from waiting. She grimaces at Carter once she sees him hobbling after me. I’ve never really known why she despises him. I open the door as she says, “Why is Butt Mutt still here, babe?” she asks, not really caring if Carter could understand her or not.
“Don’t call him that, please!” I say for the millionth time.
"Whatever. Just get rid of that thing as soon as possible. Preferably today. If not sa pamamagitan ng tomorrow, we're over," she replied manipulatively.
“Fine. How about we go right now. I figured out a place that I can drop him off at. It’s called the Sonaran Desert or something like that.”
“First of all, there’s NO way I’m getting in your wimpy little truck with that… thing. segundo of all, I believe it is the Sonoran Desert.” She ang sumagot arrogantly.
“Okay, then. I’ll be back in an oras or so,” I reply, “stay safe.”
“Whatever…” she retorts blandly.
Sometimes I wonder if she really does pag-ibig me… Anyone could easily see that I pag-ibig Carter and no matter what they think they would make sure I was happy… Maybe she’s just using me for the little money that I make that she always gets a handle of to buy a new pair of shoes. Why do I even doubt myself?? Of course she loves me! It wouldn’t make sense; she had been dealing with me for a whole taon now! I haven’t known anyone else that has stayed in a relationship that long and tolerated me. She’s a keeper. I just know it in my heart. I whistle to Carter twice, signaling it was time to leave the house. He hurriedly runs out the front door and approaches my truck. I will be the first to admit, it isn’t the best truck. Its cherry-red paint is chipping, and the engine is pretty rusty. However, it works just fine, for its old age of 21. It’s an old GMC. For some reason, Jess really hates it, and is horrified sa pamamagitan ng the idea of being trapped in the old thing with sweet ol’ Carter. I open the door, motioning for Carter to jump in.
He tries to jump in at first, but then I realize that it is way too high for him to reach. I gingerly lift him up into his seat, and then switch sides to hop into mine.
I put the key in and listen to the old thing rev up. Luckily, she seemed to be cooperating today and was running nicely.
I pull out of my driveway, but pause to look at the front of my house. It most definitely doesn’t have the best curb appeal on the block, that’s for sure. It clearly hasn’t been painted in at least two decades, and what used to be glorious white paint, is now tinted yellow. The only plant life I have is dead leaves from my neighbors’ trees, dead grass, and a whole bunch of weeds. The only way I manage to escape the griping of my neighbors is sa pamamagitan ng weekly spray-painting my damo a nice shade of green and buying fake bulaklak and burying them into the dry dirt.
I pull away from my shameful house and out of the neighborhood full of perfect front yards with flowers, trees, garden gnomes, and perfectly painted houses.
I look over at Carter, and see that his tail is wagging. I instantly feel twice as guilty. I have to. I think, I need Jesse in my life. She’s the best girlfriend I’ve ever had. There’s gonna be some way that’s he’s gonna make that place his home… Sadly, he probably thinks we’re going to somewhere fun… I just feel so malicious doing this to him!
We drove for an oras or so as we finally approached the road that enters the desert, and I turn onto it. Carter looked around and started whimpering in the softest tone I had ever heard. It was one of those moments that made me regret leaving him in this desert. After all, I hadn’t done a whole lot of research on this place. For all I know, Big Foot, the Abdominal Snow Monster, and the Boogie Man might live there! It’s a pretty low probability level, but… it COULD be possible!
The silence was just too awkward for me, even though I was just riding in an old truck with a dog. I decided to turn on the radio so it doesn’t seem so awkward. All of the sudden, Drive sa pamamagitan ng sa pamamagitan ng Train comes on and makes me feel twice as guilty, because it’s about someone telling the other person that they’ll never leave them.
So, I switch the channel, and I Won’t Give Up sa pamamagitan ng Jason Mraz came on, a song about someone who loves the other person so much that they won’t leave them. I switch the channel again, and Somebody That I Used to Know sa pamamagitan ng Goyte comes on. I decide to turn the radio off, because every song was too awkward, madami awkward than the silence.
I look over at Carter, who seems thoroughly confused sa pamamagitan ng all the changing of music and silence. I could’ve sworn he had shifted his head to his head and he had a glint in his eye that seemed like he was thinking, “What was that for, man? Those were my JAMS!” I chuckle to myself. You’re going crazy, I tell myself. You’re just hallucinating.
We drive for about 30 minutos along the straight road into the desert, not turning once (I figured I would get lost) before I found a good spot. In the distance, you could see a pack of coyotes, so I figured it was the PERFECT place to drop him off.
I open my door, counting on him jumping out over my lap as usual. He succeeds in jumping straight over my lap and out the door. I quickly slam the door closed, pull the truck into reverse, switch into drive, and slam the pedal so I wouldn’t have to look at his face, which was most likely not the most happy or trusting face that I would ever see. The only thing I could think as I was speeding away was, Don’t feel guilty… It’s for the better.
posted by Problematic129
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Chapter 14
        A deadly experience
    The girl in the bag was whimpering now, and Dorothy and bubble gum hair started to look worried.
    “Your sure she won’t suffocate.” My sister asked, doubtfully looking at the tie in the bag.
    “Of course, I tied my brother in that bag so he would shut up, he’s still alive.” The leader told her, with a roll of her eyes, and a flip of her hair.
    “And...
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posted by Problematic129
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Chapter 13
        Payback and revenge, a bad combination
    It was a few hours after the doctor showed me my gray hair, and I felt spooked. I couldn’t have been that stressed, could I?
    I ate extra madami pagkain than my normal amount, and went to sleep earlier than just staring at the clock willing time to run faster. I closed my eyes and felt the calm relaxation of sleep grab me quickly, I opened my eyes and saw that I was lying down in a beautiful...
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posted by alicia386
Chapter Five
Book Two- Sophie

SECRETS ARE MEANT TO BE KEPT SECRET. DON'T GO LOOKING FOR THEM BECAUSE YOURS COULD BE AS EASILY EXPOSED. -Emma

       I studied myself I'm the bathroom mirror. I was pretty, no tanong about that. I had dark black hair and gorgeous brown eyes like my sister. I kept my hair shoulder-length while Zoe liked hers long and covering most of her face. She once told me that it gave her a mysterious vibe. I liked my hair short because it showed off my roundish face. It was odd. Zoe and I are twins but my face always seemed a little madami round and cutesy then Zoe's face. ...
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posted by alicia386
Chapter Four

WHEN I NEED YOU WILL BE THE SAME araw I DIE. -Erica

      For the last two days, Sophie hasn't sinabi one word to me. She was either locked up in her room or going to the mall with her new friend, Madison. It seemed like she was never tahanan and when she was home, she would never come out or her room. I have literally heard her whispering and if I stood there too long, everything would get eerily silent. It was bizarre. Dad would probably notice if he wasn't too busy sucking face with Carrie.
      I had spent most of my time in the aklatan looking up madami information on ghost and...
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 The Yarn....
The Yarn....
(Sequel to the A Cat Chasing Yarn (Yarn's Point of View) (This cat is going to be really perky and hyped up and energetic.))

OKAIZ, SO TODAY I SAW THE MOST AWESUME-Y THING EVER! A BASKET OF YARNZ!! I SAWZ MEH segundo paborito CULUR IN THERE, TOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! MEH paborito CULUR IZ GREEEEEEEEEEEN AND MEH SECUND paborito IZ PINNNNKK. SO I WUZ LIKE, POUNCE! SWIPEZ-Y! I'M SO AWESUMEZ! AND SO, I LIKE, CHASED IT DOWNZ DA STAIRZ, AND IT WUZ SO EXHILARATIN' AND STUFFZ. AND SO, LIKE, IT MADE IT TO THA HUMANZ AND DEY THREW IT SAID, "Go get it, Daisy!!" SOZ, I WENT AFTER IT AND yungib I SAW SOME GREEN YARN, SOZ I RANZ PAST THA kulay-rosas YARN TA GETZ DA GREEN..... I LURVVVVVVVVVV GREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEN!!!
 Me (right) and my brother (left).
Me (right) and my brother (left).
 Mom (left) and Dad (right).
Mom (left) and Dad (right).
Chapter Seven

    Since the death of Gwendolyn, Mr. Bulks cut the field trip short and gave everyone an A for the day. The Daltons were the most upset so they left a few minutos after Reese was arrested. Gwendolyn's body was not found. Police suspected that Reese had probably hid the body somewhere. She probably didn't want anyone to to find it. There was still an unsettling feeling in the air as everyone remembered what Reese last said. If she truly wasn't the one who killed Gwen and Abby then that meant that the killer was still loose and probably planning their susunod attack. If they were...
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posted by Sinna_Hime_chan
 in dedication to Mina
in dedication to Mina
The ocean may overtake me and lunok me- yet it will not bury me.
The whole of the mountain will crash down and roll over me - but it does not crush me.

Human physical strength has limitations and it weakens in time. 'Inner strength' knows no bounds!
The confines of this earthly realm have no bearing.

Let it be done!

Let the horns sound that shake the foundation.
Call forth the titans. Summon up the dread that lies buried deep within the puso and mind.
Let the godless fear when they face the charge.
The Nawawala will flee or loose heart.

'And in the darkening late hours when the ground rumbles like an oncoming train...I will draw from deep wells what cannot be poisoned or tainted or overturned. I will stand, though the tides rise and the clouds threaten...and there I will remain, even if I ipakita signs and cracks of care and hardship.
I will not be broken.

I may grow weary.

Though all the elements come against me
and tear at flesh and bone!-I WILL STAND!
 KAKASHI
KAKASHI
Why can't the world become a fairytale book?
It wouldn't be as mean
But it may be much madami green
Dragons that can be your pet
Princesses with hair for rope climbing
Pumpkins that can turn into horse carriages
And Pusa that wear boots and fight mice.
The people in reality aren't always very nice
But even the ogres and giants can say hello and give you nice things
Princesses aren't snobby reyna bees at school
Princes aren't egomaniacs
And money is in gold, silver, or copper or even magic beans!
Hens lay golden eggs
Poverty can end in five seconds
You can get your own fairy and wish for whatever you want
And have your any desires
But I guess this is all in the mind
But the world can be kind at times
It isn't always bad and cruel
But imagination makes it go around
posted by sawfan13
Lily knocked on the door to her mother and father's mansion, wanting to ask them a simple question; if it was okay to allow her to take her best friend, Roxy, to her and her sister's trip to Africa.

Lily's mother answered,"Hello there! I wasn't expecting you to come over." Lily came in and said,"Mom, may I talk to you about this whole trip to Africa?"

"Sure thing, dear! Ask away!" She and her mother sat down and Lily asked her,"Mom, is it alright if my friend and roommate Roxy can come with me on the trip?"

Her mother sighed and replied,"No." Lily's eyes widened, as her puso broke into a million...
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posted by Dhampires
"Katlen!" Eric stepped pasulong ready to rush to my aid.

"Whoa whoa whoa." Jarred sinabi placing a hand over Eric's chest pushing him back.

Eric looked at Jarred with a maasim face then turned his attention to Eliza she looked down at the girl then at her blood on herfinger tips she smiled and as she turned to Eric she slowly ran her younger over her bloody fingers.

Eric pushed past Jarrred and rushed up to Eliza he took her sa pamamagitan ng the sando and yelled "You bastard what did she ever do to you."

"The girls tired ya know. She doesn't even know what she is, such a pitful thing it's ashame she went on...
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posted by Problematic129
*Thanks for all the comments :) Please don't copy and please read and review :)
Chapter 5
    Let’s get started
    We were standing in front of a big boat, but it wasn’t the one Dorothy visited, I knew that for sure. We were at the docks, were a lot of boats are at, I’m surprised there’s so many. But as I inspect all of them, none of them were the one I hoped.
    The bangka smelled like a ton of fish, and on the corner I could just make out a small pile of dead fish, whoever owned this bangka must be careless.
    “This...
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posted by SweetHoneyBunny
Tears were rolling down my face. My puso hurt, and my thoughts were scrambled.
It was a araw that reflected my emotions. The clouds covered the sky completely and were threatening to rain, the wind was howling and my family was being ripped apart.

My parents were both suicidal, and were always having what they call “accidents”. One week, I found my mother cutting her wrists in the bathroom. Her blood was puddling on the floor, and she was crying. I called her therapist, who talked her out of it. Again. My father was no better. He tried to thrown himself out the third story window of our...
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I flinched before he hit me I could already feel the nails from the sinturon on my skin exactly where he'd hit before he really did. He hit that same spot at least five times—it was right above my butt bone.

I cried out in pain as he went up and down my spinal cord with the sinturon he moved it to my arms that clinged to the tuktok of the heater. Tears poured out of my eyes "Dad stop please dad!!" He whipped me harder saying "What did I tell you all about calling me Dad I'm your master you little runt!!" he changed to the other arm and and gave me a fine blow to the left jaw bone I fell on my back...
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posted by wantadog
Chapter 4


Juliet quieted. It was apparent that she was too weak to break the grip, and if this person really was friendly, fighting and screaming would only complicate matters. After a minuto of her staying limp in the person’s grip, he let her go. She took a deep breath to steady her nerves and twisted around to see who it was. She couldn’t contain herself.
“Steve, you bastard! What the hell!”
“Quiet! They’ll hear you,” he whispered frantically.
“Wait, so this is…real?”
Steve looked down. “Sorry, but yes, it’s real.”
Juliet clapped her hands to her mouth. “It can’t...
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posted by SweetHoneyBunny
I backed up slowly, not wanting the she lobo to feel threatened and attack. “Nice wolf, I'm not going to hurt you.” I got up off the ground with my hands out, facing the wolf. She had white balahibo with a small gray bituin on her chest. Climbing off the small burol she had been standing on, she began walking towards me. I stood still. If I ran, she would pin me down and attack; and if I stood here there was no telling what she might do. “Please don't kill me. I didn't want to be brought here.” She was circling me and sniffing. Suddenly, she stopped. “I can smell his blood.” Her voice was...
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 Saukerl
Saukerl
We were anxious to find out what was going on with the Jew. The Saumensch and I walked out and onto the streets, apart at a distance, careful of any danger around us. As we walked over onto Pariser Platz, we saw that there was a public execution today. A couple of Nazis were gathered around a feeble man, short and skinny, who appeared to be a Jew. The Saumensch and I stepped closer, seeing that it wasn't our Jew, but only to be halted sa pamamagitan ng one of the Nazis on command. "HALT! What brings you here?" I answered calmly, "We've just come sa pamamagitan ng to greet you fine men. Heil Hitler." The Nazi nodded briefly,...
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posted by Problematic129
*Thank for all the comments :) Please don't copy and please read and review*
Chapter 20
    Let the games begin
    “What are you doing here?” I ask.
    “I could ask you the same thing,” America sagot crossing her arms and giving me a pointed look. “Zyanna.”
    Now right then, my puso did stop. “What?”
    “Oh, don’t act stupid Zy, I know who you are.”
    “How…?”
    America looked confused. “You mean you didn’t send me that...
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 Abigail Dalton
Abigail Dalton
Chapter One

      The sudden death of Abigail Dalton casted a spell on the quiet town of Brunswick, Georgia. Everyone felt utterly dismal as they watched the reporter give the gruesome details. It happened so suddenly and out the blue. Who could have ever killed the sweet 17 taon old girl that made even the grumpiest of men smile at her beauty and charm. It was true that she was beloved sa pamamagitan ng her peers, family, and community. Who would kill her? Well, believe it or not but there were some people who thought she was arrogant, stubborn, vain, and unintelligent. All of those comments may be true...
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Okay, I'm positive fanpop messed up my formatting, and I don't feel like fixing 11 pages(nor do I have the time), but here it goes. I really would like Criticism please, All I've been getting is how much people like it on the Pagsulat spot, good criticism is hard to find over there, So don't tell me what you like, tell me what you hate, as vehemently as possible.


    “This world is lost…” The dragon’s words echoed in Karaza’s mind. She had been hiding near the gathering place, hoping for a chance to steal some of the dragons’ supplies before the great beasts flew...
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The rain was pouring as her bare feet touched the ground her black hair was stuck to her face ,she paused to realize that she was right in front of the graveyard gates she slowly walked into the graveyard while she was walking she found a bench, she sat on it and started to get tired ,she lay down and fell into deep sleep, waking up three hours later she realized it was it was past midnight with the rain coming to a stop ,she got of the bench and strolled through the graveyard , “where is it?” she kept asking herself while she was walking until she found what she was looking for, it was...
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