Kate & Humphrey Adventures.
Summer of 2011 Part 3. “The war was just begun.”
3 days later....
“OK guys! Listen up! We found where the group in the eastern territory are hiding. So we attack from here, and here. Garth will lead team 1 to the northern part, while team 2 will hit the middle and knock them south towards their territory. Team 1 you will kill any in your way. Team 2 only kill if necessary. We will attack at first dawn, so be up 2 hours before sunrise so we will be there right at dawn.” Kate went back to her yungib after her big speech. Humphrey slowly followed her back. He will be with the medic group. His duty is to drag the injured out of the battlefield, and then back to the medics. After a restless 8 oras sleep, the alphas were ready to attack. Hair was standing up on their back as they sneaked through the darkness to the 2 camps. Team one which is led sa pamamagitan ng Garth and Can-do were the first to part from the main group. 3 omegas followed to get the wounded to the medic team. Team 2 Nawawala some madami members as the medic team set camp 200 feet from the fight. Humphrey and 4 other omega's followed close behind team 2. Kate spotted the camp while the other alphas stayed low to the ground. Humphrey was ordered to stop 50 yards from the battlefield. Within seconds, the alphas leaped into the air and pounced on a group of omegas. Ten minutos into the battle they already pushed the group back 200 feet. The medic team moved closer and surprisingly there were no casualties. Of course not from the group with Kate. The group Kate’s fighting has mga lobo dead and bleeding all over. Kate jumped at an alpha and bit him across the neck. Then Hutch came in and smashed the wolf's back causing its neck to break. The mga lobo then quickly retreated to the southern territory. Kate’s team moved up towards team one after their quick accomplishment. She was happy with her victory and wanted to see what Garth’s team has accomplished. When they got there she was absolutely shocked. It was a way different battle then hers. 23 alphas were fending off the surprise attack led sa pamamagitan ng Garth. She saw Can-do pinned sa pamamagitan ng a huge male. Hutch's reflexes caused him to jump out and attacked the male that was holding his best friend
Can-do. The male fought back fiercely but was quickly overpowered when can-do also leaped at him. They bit through his jugular and he immediately died. Kate then ordered team 2 to ilipat in and surround surrounded the remaining 22 alphas. Now every alpha Kate had was attacking. Within 3 minutos the 22 alphas were down to 17. Kate got bit in her back sa pamamagitan ng a bravo omega. She thrashed her body around and got loose. The omega was caught off guard and got pinned down sa pamamagitan ng Kate within a second. Then another lobo bit her and another, and another! She was pinned down hard. Hutch tried to help but was also teamed up on and thrown down. Garth was fighting off 2 alphas and couldn't break free. Can-do ordered the remaining mga lobo to form a line. When the line was formed they pushed into the remaining wolves. First they helped Garth, then Kate, then knocked out 4 madami wolves. Finally they fought their way to Hutch. They quickly fended off the mga lobo and pulled him out from the pile of dead wolves. Humphrey came rushing in and grabbed him. One other omega joined him to help him pull Hutch back. When they reached the medic group they were amazed with all the injured and dead mga lobo from their pack. Even 2 omegas that tried to drag the wounded to the medic group were attacked and injured. Bite marks were in every mga lobo sides. Lucky for them it was their side and not their neck. When Humphrey returned to the front lines, he saw victory around the corner. Only 6 mga lobo were left and 19 of Kate’s mga lobo were surrounding them. The 6 mga lobo decided to fight for their lives and jumped at Kate’s wolves. Even though they were greatly outnumbered they put on a hell of a fight. Blood sprayed everywhere with every claw and bite. Never was such a war fought in Jasper. 2 madami mga lobo fell dead to a bite on the neck. Pops of broken Buto and legs mixed in with the snarling and whimpers. Kate backed out to get a break while another lobo filled her place. Can-do got 2 madami and so did Hutch. Kate joined back in and stopped another females puso with a bite to her head. Finally the last 3 mga lobo were killed. It was a costly success. Only 2 of Kate’s mga lobo died, but 12 were severely wounded. That meant only 19 alphas were left not severely injured or killed. They slowly returned tahanan after they made sure all of the trespassers were killed. At the dens, the wounded would get better medical attention from Eve. After 3 hours, they finally reached home. Everyone was shocked from all the wounds on everyone. The only mga lobo without wounds were the ones who didn't fight. Beside the 2 unlucky omegas. Eve quickly patched up the wounded, but couldn’t save 1. The alphas and omegas limped back to their dens and fell asleep 3 hours before they normally did. When they woke up the susunod morning still tired, Kate had to give the order to get the dead mga lobo and carry them back to the southern packs line. This would give the southern mga lobo no excuse to tumawid back into Kate and Garth’s territory. Kate only brought all the non wounded besides a few of the biggest alphas like Garth and Hutch. When they reached the piles of death they quickly grabbed a body and dragged it south to the line. A half oras later they came across the place where team 2 first attacked. They picked up 3 madami bodies and and continued on their way. They then ran across 2 madami mga lobo who tried to flee but bleed to death. Now almost everyone was carrying a body. When they reached the line they found a group of mga lobo waiting their. They dropped the bodies and skid them across the line. The southern pack was in shock to see all the death. But they were madami shocked when they saw all the unwounded mga lobo Kate brought. They were fooled exactly like planed, and quickly picked up the dead and carried them away. Kate’s mga lobo left for another 4 oras hike back to the dens. Within an oras a lobo fell to the ground exhausted. They tried to get her on her feet but couldn't. Humphrey fetched a wet leaf and gave the tired lobo some water. The group took a half oras brake, until the female lobo was able to get back up and walk. Finally when they reached the dens, Kate was overjoyed to see all the wounded mga lobo walking around again.
Please comment to tell me how good I did or what I should change. Also I will take suggestions and may possibly add them in an upcoming story!
Summer of 2011 Part 3. “The war was just begun.”
3 days later....
“OK guys! Listen up! We found where the group in the eastern territory are hiding. So we attack from here, and here. Garth will lead team 1 to the northern part, while team 2 will hit the middle and knock them south towards their territory. Team 1 you will kill any in your way. Team 2 only kill if necessary. We will attack at first dawn, so be up 2 hours before sunrise so we will be there right at dawn.” Kate went back to her yungib after her big speech. Humphrey slowly followed her back. He will be with the medic group. His duty is to drag the injured out of the battlefield, and then back to the medics. After a restless 8 oras sleep, the alphas were ready to attack. Hair was standing up on their back as they sneaked through the darkness to the 2 camps. Team one which is led sa pamamagitan ng Garth and Can-do were the first to part from the main group. 3 omegas followed to get the wounded to the medic team. Team 2 Nawawala some madami members as the medic team set camp 200 feet from the fight. Humphrey and 4 other omega's followed close behind team 2. Kate spotted the camp while the other alphas stayed low to the ground. Humphrey was ordered to stop 50 yards from the battlefield. Within seconds, the alphas leaped into the air and pounced on a group of omegas. Ten minutos into the battle they already pushed the group back 200 feet. The medic team moved closer and surprisingly there were no casualties. Of course not from the group with Kate. The group Kate’s fighting has mga lobo dead and bleeding all over. Kate jumped at an alpha and bit him across the neck. Then Hutch came in and smashed the wolf's back causing its neck to break. The mga lobo then quickly retreated to the southern territory. Kate’s team moved up towards team one after their quick accomplishment. She was happy with her victory and wanted to see what Garth’s team has accomplished. When they got there she was absolutely shocked. It was a way different battle then hers. 23 alphas were fending off the surprise attack led sa pamamagitan ng Garth. She saw Can-do pinned sa pamamagitan ng a huge male. Hutch's reflexes caused him to jump out and attacked the male that was holding his best friend
Can-do. The male fought back fiercely but was quickly overpowered when can-do also leaped at him. They bit through his jugular and he immediately died. Kate then ordered team 2 to ilipat in and surround surrounded the remaining 22 alphas. Now every alpha Kate had was attacking. Within 3 minutos the 22 alphas were down to 17. Kate got bit in her back sa pamamagitan ng a bravo omega. She thrashed her body around and got loose. The omega was caught off guard and got pinned down sa pamamagitan ng Kate within a second. Then another lobo bit her and another, and another! She was pinned down hard. Hutch tried to help but was also teamed up on and thrown down. Garth was fighting off 2 alphas and couldn't break free. Can-do ordered the remaining mga lobo to form a line. When the line was formed they pushed into the remaining wolves. First they helped Garth, then Kate, then knocked out 4 madami wolves. Finally they fought their way to Hutch. They quickly fended off the mga lobo and pulled him out from the pile of dead wolves. Humphrey came rushing in and grabbed him. One other omega joined him to help him pull Hutch back. When they reached the medic group they were amazed with all the injured and dead mga lobo from their pack. Even 2 omegas that tried to drag the wounded to the medic group were attacked and injured. Bite marks were in every mga lobo sides. Lucky for them it was their side and not their neck. When Humphrey returned to the front lines, he saw victory around the corner. Only 6 mga lobo were left and 19 of Kate’s mga lobo were surrounding them. The 6 mga lobo decided to fight for their lives and jumped at Kate’s wolves. Even though they were greatly outnumbered they put on a hell of a fight. Blood sprayed everywhere with every claw and bite. Never was such a war fought in Jasper. 2 madami mga lobo fell dead to a bite on the neck. Pops of broken Buto and legs mixed in with the snarling and whimpers. Kate backed out to get a break while another lobo filled her place. Can-do got 2 madami and so did Hutch. Kate joined back in and stopped another females puso with a bite to her head. Finally the last 3 mga lobo were killed. It was a costly success. Only 2 of Kate’s mga lobo died, but 12 were severely wounded. That meant only 19 alphas were left not severely injured or killed. They slowly returned tahanan after they made sure all of the trespassers were killed. At the dens, the wounded would get better medical attention from Eve. After 3 hours, they finally reached home. Everyone was shocked from all the wounds on everyone. The only mga lobo without wounds were the ones who didn't fight. Beside the 2 unlucky omegas. Eve quickly patched up the wounded, but couldn’t save 1. The alphas and omegas limped back to their dens and fell asleep 3 hours before they normally did. When they woke up the susunod morning still tired, Kate had to give the order to get the dead mga lobo and carry them back to the southern packs line. This would give the southern mga lobo no excuse to tumawid back into Kate and Garth’s territory. Kate only brought all the non wounded besides a few of the biggest alphas like Garth and Hutch. When they reached the piles of death they quickly grabbed a body and dragged it south to the line. A half oras later they came across the place where team 2 first attacked. They picked up 3 madami bodies and and continued on their way. They then ran across 2 madami mga lobo who tried to flee but bleed to death. Now almost everyone was carrying a body. When they reached the line they found a group of mga lobo waiting their. They dropped the bodies and skid them across the line. The southern pack was in shock to see all the death. But they were madami shocked when they saw all the unwounded mga lobo Kate brought. They were fooled exactly like planed, and quickly picked up the dead and carried them away. Kate’s mga lobo left for another 4 oras hike back to the dens. Within an oras a lobo fell to the ground exhausted. They tried to get her on her feet but couldn't. Humphrey fetched a wet leaf and gave the tired lobo some water. The group took a half oras brake, until the female lobo was able to get back up and walk. Finally when they reached the dens, Kate was overjoyed to see all the wounded mga lobo walking around again.
Please comment to tell me how good I did or what I should change. Also I will take suggestions and may possibly add them in an upcoming story!
A&O 7 was... OK. It is Splash's best movie so far but that's not going sa pamamagitan ng much. The humor is hit-and-miss. It's very action heavy but it gets real silly as well. Brent, Agnes, Lyle and Link really have no reason to be there and are the cause of a lot of the slapsticky stuff that didn't work for me.
Of course since this is a Splash movie, the animation is not that good at all. Crest actually did that better.
Overall, it was... not great. Only the most diehard A&O fans will probably pag-ibig this one. I'll give a 3.5 out of 6, since I rated the original movie as a 6.
Of course since this is a Splash movie, the animation is not that good at all. Crest actually did that better.
Overall, it was... not great. Only the most diehard A&O fans will probably pag-ibig this one. I'll give a 3.5 out of 6, since I rated the original movie as a 6.