Hi, this is my first fanfic, so please comment (by the way this is a story about Proteus and Kida)Sorry for my spelling.
"Proteus...PROTEUS wake up man you look like your in a coma." sinabi Sinbad trying to wake up Proteus. Proteus finally opens his eyes. "welcome back bro" sinabi Sinbad. "Sinbad...I just had a strange dream." explained Proteus. "HAHA I'll bet it took me SO long to wake you up! Soo, what was it about?" asked Sinbad "Well it was...well it was just all a light blue." sinabi Proteus. Sinbad get a weird look on his face. "Anyway, your father needs to see you." sinabi Sinbad changing the subject. "Why?" asked Proteus. "I don't know. You know your dad doesn't tell ME anything!" sinabi Sinbad as they go to see Proteus's father. They go into the kings meting room. "Ahhhh, Proteus it's good to see you up! I need you to do something for me." sinabi the king. "Anything for you father. What do you need me to do?" asked Proteus "I need to go to Aldonia for a very important meeting. But i also need to go to Atlantis to ask if they would like to sumali Syracuse. So, you will go with Sinbad and ask them for me." The King explained "All right father, but one question, why do you want the Atlantians to become part of Syracuse?" asked Proteus "Because they are a small country and I fear that they will try to take over." The King informed his son again. "But why would they try to take over?" asked Sinbad "I hear their king is on the verge of dieing." answered Proteus. "Exactly. So I expect you two to be on that bangka and on your way in an half an hour." sinabi the king. So, half an oras later, they were on their way to Atlantis.
Hey, this is StarWarsFan7 and I just wanted to say thank you to crosslove821 for letting me correct her grammar in her wonderful first chapter of Love is Power. :)
"Proteus...PROTEUS wake up man you look like your in a coma." sinabi Sinbad trying to wake up Proteus. Proteus finally opens his eyes. "welcome back bro" sinabi Sinbad. "Sinbad...I just had a strange dream." explained Proteus. "HAHA I'll bet it took me SO long to wake you up! Soo, what was it about?" asked Sinbad "Well it was...well it was just all a light blue." sinabi Proteus. Sinbad get a weird look on his face. "Anyway, your father needs to see you." sinabi Sinbad changing the subject. "Why?" asked Proteus. "I don't know. You know your dad doesn't tell ME anything!" sinabi Sinbad as they go to see Proteus's father. They go into the kings meting room. "Ahhhh, Proteus it's good to see you up! I need you to do something for me." sinabi the king. "Anything for you father. What do you need me to do?" asked Proteus "I need to go to Aldonia for a very important meeting. But i also need to go to Atlantis to ask if they would like to sumali Syracuse. So, you will go with Sinbad and ask them for me." The King explained "All right father, but one question, why do you want the Atlantians to become part of Syracuse?" asked Proteus "Because they are a small country and I fear that they will try to take over." The King informed his son again. "But why would they try to take over?" asked Sinbad "I hear their king is on the verge of dieing." answered Proteus. "Exactly. So I expect you two to be on that bangka and on your way in an half an hour." sinabi the king. So, half an oras later, they were on their way to Atlantis.
Hey, this is StarWarsFan7 and I just wanted to say thank you to crosslove821 for letting me correct her grammar in her wonderful first chapter of Love is Power. :)