This is my opinion you may agree or disagree all you want. I’m not going to try to make the film modern sa pamamagitan ng saying have the princess save herself or take out the prince. But in the way that the film was made, what I think could have made it better. This artikulo will have spoilers.
Snow White and the Seven Dwarfs
1: madami Screen time with the prince.
I feel like this is one of the main thinks that makes the film lacking something and that’s the prince, I feel like it would be ten times madami amazing if he had a least a little madami screen time.
2: Snow’s Father.
I think what’s really important to this story is what happened to Snow’s Father, he died at sea in a storm that the evil reyna made, it would ipakita how bravo Snow was to stay with her step mother.
3: One Song.
As in one madami song for the movie, I feel like the Evil reyna could have an amazing song but I don’t see the time that she could sing it, maybe when she’s about to turn herself into a Hag.
4: Less Sidekicks
Mainly less great sidekicks, I mean the movie has a lot of characters that help with the story and ipakita who Snow White really is. But I feel like there’s way to mainly.
5: Snow’s Prayer
I would pag-ibig it, if the dwarfs overheard Snow praying for them. That would be really cute IMO.
6: Snow Prince
Just madami time for them to be a couple.
Besides those things that I think could be taken out or added, I think the story was amazing just the way it is and I wouldn’t mind if I couldn’t build a TARDIS in time to change it.
Cinderella
1: Mice
Take out at least some of the mice parts, their great but at times they seem to be the ones to drive the film.
2: Charming
Just give him a lot madami screen time. I think everyone agrees with me on that one. Maybe have him be the one to tell his father about Cinderella.
3: Songs
I pag-ibig the songs that didn’t make it into the movie.
4: Charming Ella
madami time for us to see them as a couple
5: True name
It’s bad enough that people call, Aurora, Sleeping Beauty or Merida, bravo (Well my younger cousin calls her that because she can say Merida) but Sinderella isn’t her real name, it’s Ella.
6: Bad Guy
I feel like her step family could have been madami evil just a bit, also the end could have been better just a bit.
Besides that, I pag-ibig the film
Sleeping Beauty
1: The Princess
madami screen time with Aurora because will she is kind of dull at times
2: Villain
She’s an amazing villain, but she’s lacking a lot at times. Hopefully her movie will make up for that.
3: Less Sidekick Screen Time
The mga engkanto really take up too much screen time IMO. A little less from them and we’ll be good.
Those 3 things and it would be close to perfect
The Little Mermaid
1: Eric
Either get rid of him or make him madami flawed…a piece of wood has madami personality then he will ever.
2: Song
I always liked the idea of Ariel and Triton having a song they sung together Voice over after Ariel ran away. Just about how each of them were sorry and they wish they could be together.
3: Sisters
They fix this in the third movie but not counting the third go madami into the sisters just a bit or just take them out.
4: pating Bait
dapa just no; he’s too annoying for his own good.
5: I’m Sorry
This is mainly to help the Ariel fans a Bit madami with Selfish Ariel Drama, but for her to be madami sorry after Ursula is dead not just for us to jump right away to the wedding but for us to get the feeling that she really was. Maybe have her and Triton talking about what she did and her saying what her punishment should be and him saying he knows she won’t be as happy as she used to be without Eric.
Change those things and I’ll be happy
Beauty and the Beast
1: Time and Space
Okay not puwang but when you’re a Doctor Who tagahanga you can’t really talk about time without bring up space. Anyway, out of all the films. Beauty and the Beast is the weakest when it comes to timeline. You get the feel that everything happened over two or three days when it really was months or something like that.
2: The Beast
Who on earth curses a 11 taon old boy for not letting you into his home? I mean it’s just plain old STUPID!!! Children, if someone asks for you let you in from the cold. Say NO! I personally will fight your case at court if you get turned into a Beast for not letting someone in. I guess they just wanted a story.
3: Chip
Tell us where on earth chip came from? I mean, he’s a 6 taon old boy with a 60 taon old mother, living in a house that has been cursed for 10 years…the number just don’t add up at all.
I
could say madami about what to change but that would be an whole artikulo in itself.
Aladdin
1: TAKE OUT GENIE!!!
Just take him out or make him less of a joker. I mean…who gets half his jokes now? I never did.
2: madami with Jafar
I think we should have gone into madami about Jafar’s wanting to be sultan.
3: Just take out half the jokes
I mean they’re funny but they really don’t help the film.
4: The Songs
Take out a lot of the songs put in better ones like Proud of your Boy.
5: madami Jasmine
They did a good job with her for her lack of screen time but I think she could be better.
Change those things and I’ll be happy.
Pocahontas
1: History
I know this would wreak the film sa pamamagitan ng a lot but…maybe make it closer to the real story just a bit.
2: Development
Everything is rushed, lacking or not needing in this department.
3: Villain
He could have been Amazing…sadly he wasn’t
But I think even with those changes, Pocahontas would be as good as it gets.
Mulan
This one is hard and I may update this late, but I feel like Mulan was as good as it was going to get. Kind of rewrite the story and make Mushu less of the main character. But it was lacking a lot that I can’t think of right now.
The Princess and the Frog
1: Dream
I think putting Naveen in Tiana’s pantasiya would have been amazing the two of them trying to get to each other. Naveen telling Dr. F, to take him and let Tiana get her restaurant. Just madami Tiaveen.
2: Naveen
Make him less of a Damsel just a bit, put in a couple times for him to save Tiana.
3: tahanan coming.
I think it would have been really cute if we saw Eudora (Tiana’s mom) looking for Tiana and then coming tahanan to find Tiana and Naveen together in the kitchen.
4: Villain Power
Go madami into his debt with his friends.
Besides those things I think the film was perfect.
Tangled
1: Rapunzel
Give her a little bit madami flaws.
2: Eugene’s Backstory
This one I think should be on everyone’s list. Who is Eugene Fitzherbert? He’s a storybook just waiting to be open.
3: Escapes
ipakita a couple of times where Rapunzel almost made it out but got catch sa pamamagitan ng Gothel.
4: Gothel’s Deal
This was art work of Mother Gothel talking to Eugene, I think that would have been amazing if she made a deal with him to give him money, and he turns it down and the island, also turns it down, but then says she’ll tell him what happens to his parents. Something like that.
I think the story was perfect just change those things.
Brave
1: Merida’s Sorry
I had this cool idea of Merida in the woods with her madala mother and telling her she was sorry for what she did and for everyone she hurt and then the madala turns to her and it turns out to be some walang tiyak na layunin bear. Then she goes back to her mother and doesn’t say sorry until the end.
2: Humor
Turn it down a lot; it was kind of DreamWorks humor or little boy humor than anything else.
3: Mor’dur
Go madami into his story and make him a better villain.
4: Friends
Give Merida some girly friends, who her mother tried to make her be mga kaibigan with, who try to tell her who she should marry like that, she seemed kind of alone in that castle.
But after that I think the film would be better
Frozen
1: Make it funnier
You may not get this part but to be honest, take Olaf out of the movie, everything he said, did and everyone’s reactions…how funny would be the movie be? That’s right kind of boring.
2: Powers Story
We know Elsa was born with it but go madami into it like ipakita the ancestors who had it.
3: Ending
I think this is how they ending should have gone. First of all, don’t manuntok Hans, it just showed how Lame this movie is. segundo of all, ipakita Olaf, Sven, Kristoff and the kingdom people together ice skating somewhere having fun…then go into the kastilyo into the ballroom, where Elsa and Anna…are building a Snowman and pag-awit together, I was think like the ending to Aladdin where Anna would be like “Do you want to build a snowman?” And Elsa would be like, “Yes! I want to build a snowman!” And together they say something like, “Just you and me!” But then I got pictures of Olaf dressed up as hasmin and flying around with Svenddin on carpet.
4: The Parents
They were awful parents, the other parents worst then them would be…The evil reyna and Frollo from THoND. They didn’t leave soon enough for me.
5: Less Elsa
I feel like Elsa was too much for the film and really overshadowed her younger sister, just bring her down a lot.
6: The Songs
They didn’t seem Disney to me and a lot of my Disney loving mga kaibigan outside of fanpop. They seemed like Broadway Songs but made sa pamamagitan ng Disney. My mga kaibigan wanted the Disney songs sa pamamagitan ng like from Snow White to Tangled.
There is madami but mainly has to do with the plot. I think I’ll write a part 2 or something after my ipakita week is done.
So there you have it, I hope you can agree on parts or not.
Snow White and the Seven Dwarfs
1: madami Screen time with the prince.
I feel like this is one of the main thinks that makes the film lacking something and that’s the prince, I feel like it would be ten times madami amazing if he had a least a little madami screen time.
2: Snow’s Father.
I think what’s really important to this story is what happened to Snow’s Father, he died at sea in a storm that the evil reyna made, it would ipakita how bravo Snow was to stay with her step mother.
3: One Song.
As in one madami song for the movie, I feel like the Evil reyna could have an amazing song but I don’t see the time that she could sing it, maybe when she’s about to turn herself into a Hag.
4: Less Sidekicks
Mainly less great sidekicks, I mean the movie has a lot of characters that help with the story and ipakita who Snow White really is. But I feel like there’s way to mainly.
5: Snow’s Prayer
I would pag-ibig it, if the dwarfs overheard Snow praying for them. That would be really cute IMO.
6: Snow Prince
Just madami time for them to be a couple.
Besides those things that I think could be taken out or added, I think the story was amazing just the way it is and I wouldn’t mind if I couldn’t build a TARDIS in time to change it.
Cinderella
1: Mice
Take out at least some of the mice parts, their great but at times they seem to be the ones to drive the film.
2: Charming
Just give him a lot madami screen time. I think everyone agrees with me on that one. Maybe have him be the one to tell his father about Cinderella.
3: Songs
I pag-ibig the songs that didn’t make it into the movie.
4: Charming Ella
madami time for us to see them as a couple
5: True name
It’s bad enough that people call, Aurora, Sleeping Beauty or Merida, bravo (Well my younger cousin calls her that because she can say Merida) but Sinderella isn’t her real name, it’s Ella.
6: Bad Guy
I feel like her step family could have been madami evil just a bit, also the end could have been better just a bit.
Besides that, I pag-ibig the film
Sleeping Beauty
1: The Princess
madami screen time with Aurora because will she is kind of dull at times
2: Villain
She’s an amazing villain, but she’s lacking a lot at times. Hopefully her movie will make up for that.
3: Less Sidekick Screen Time
The mga engkanto really take up too much screen time IMO. A little less from them and we’ll be good.
Those 3 things and it would be close to perfect
The Little Mermaid
1: Eric
Either get rid of him or make him madami flawed…a piece of wood has madami personality then he will ever.
2: Song
I always liked the idea of Ariel and Triton having a song they sung together Voice over after Ariel ran away. Just about how each of them were sorry and they wish they could be together.
3: Sisters
They fix this in the third movie but not counting the third go madami into the sisters just a bit or just take them out.
4: pating Bait
dapa just no; he’s too annoying for his own good.
5: I’m Sorry
This is mainly to help the Ariel fans a Bit madami with Selfish Ariel Drama, but for her to be madami sorry after Ursula is dead not just for us to jump right away to the wedding but for us to get the feeling that she really was. Maybe have her and Triton talking about what she did and her saying what her punishment should be and him saying he knows she won’t be as happy as she used to be without Eric.
Change those things and I’ll be happy
Beauty and the Beast
1: Time and Space
Okay not puwang but when you’re a Doctor Who tagahanga you can’t really talk about time without bring up space. Anyway, out of all the films. Beauty and the Beast is the weakest when it comes to timeline. You get the feel that everything happened over two or three days when it really was months or something like that.
2: The Beast
Who on earth curses a 11 taon old boy for not letting you into his home? I mean it’s just plain old STUPID!!! Children, if someone asks for you let you in from the cold. Say NO! I personally will fight your case at court if you get turned into a Beast for not letting someone in. I guess they just wanted a story.
3: Chip
Tell us where on earth chip came from? I mean, he’s a 6 taon old boy with a 60 taon old mother, living in a house that has been cursed for 10 years…the number just don’t add up at all.
I
could say madami about what to change but that would be an whole artikulo in itself.
Aladdin
1: TAKE OUT GENIE!!!
Just take him out or make him less of a joker. I mean…who gets half his jokes now? I never did.
2: madami with Jafar
I think we should have gone into madami about Jafar’s wanting to be sultan.
3: Just take out half the jokes
I mean they’re funny but they really don’t help the film.
4: The Songs
Take out a lot of the songs put in better ones like Proud of your Boy.
5: madami Jasmine
They did a good job with her for her lack of screen time but I think she could be better.
Change those things and I’ll be happy.
Pocahontas
1: History
I know this would wreak the film sa pamamagitan ng a lot but…maybe make it closer to the real story just a bit.
2: Development
Everything is rushed, lacking or not needing in this department.
3: Villain
He could have been Amazing…sadly he wasn’t
But I think even with those changes, Pocahontas would be as good as it gets.
Mulan
This one is hard and I may update this late, but I feel like Mulan was as good as it was going to get. Kind of rewrite the story and make Mushu less of the main character. But it was lacking a lot that I can’t think of right now.
The Princess and the Frog
1: Dream
I think putting Naveen in Tiana’s pantasiya would have been amazing the two of them trying to get to each other. Naveen telling Dr. F, to take him and let Tiana get her restaurant. Just madami Tiaveen.
2: Naveen
Make him less of a Damsel just a bit, put in a couple times for him to save Tiana.
3: tahanan coming.
I think it would have been really cute if we saw Eudora (Tiana’s mom) looking for Tiana and then coming tahanan to find Tiana and Naveen together in the kitchen.
4: Villain Power
Go madami into his debt with his friends.
Besides those things I think the film was perfect.
Tangled
1: Rapunzel
Give her a little bit madami flaws.
2: Eugene’s Backstory
This one I think should be on everyone’s list. Who is Eugene Fitzherbert? He’s a storybook just waiting to be open.
3: Escapes
ipakita a couple of times where Rapunzel almost made it out but got catch sa pamamagitan ng Gothel.
4: Gothel’s Deal
This was art work of Mother Gothel talking to Eugene, I think that would have been amazing if she made a deal with him to give him money, and he turns it down and the island, also turns it down, but then says she’ll tell him what happens to his parents. Something like that.
I think the story was perfect just change those things.
Brave
1: Merida’s Sorry
I had this cool idea of Merida in the woods with her madala mother and telling her she was sorry for what she did and for everyone she hurt and then the madala turns to her and it turns out to be some walang tiyak na layunin bear. Then she goes back to her mother and doesn’t say sorry until the end.
2: Humor
Turn it down a lot; it was kind of DreamWorks humor or little boy humor than anything else.
3: Mor’dur
Go madami into his story and make him a better villain.
4: Friends
Give Merida some girly friends, who her mother tried to make her be mga kaibigan with, who try to tell her who she should marry like that, she seemed kind of alone in that castle.
But after that I think the film would be better
Frozen
1: Make it funnier
You may not get this part but to be honest, take Olaf out of the movie, everything he said, did and everyone’s reactions…how funny would be the movie be? That’s right kind of boring.
2: Powers Story
We know Elsa was born with it but go madami into it like ipakita the ancestors who had it.
3: Ending
I think this is how they ending should have gone. First of all, don’t manuntok Hans, it just showed how Lame this movie is. segundo of all, ipakita Olaf, Sven, Kristoff and the kingdom people together ice skating somewhere having fun…then go into the kastilyo into the ballroom, where Elsa and Anna…are building a Snowman and pag-awit together, I was think like the ending to Aladdin where Anna would be like “Do you want to build a snowman?” And Elsa would be like, “Yes! I want to build a snowman!” And together they say something like, “Just you and me!” But then I got pictures of Olaf dressed up as hasmin and flying around with Svenddin on carpet.
4: The Parents
They were awful parents, the other parents worst then them would be…The evil reyna and Frollo from THoND. They didn’t leave soon enough for me.
5: Less Elsa
I feel like Elsa was too much for the film and really overshadowed her younger sister, just bring her down a lot.
6: The Songs
They didn’t seem Disney to me and a lot of my Disney loving mga kaibigan outside of fanpop. They seemed like Broadway Songs but made sa pamamagitan ng Disney. My mga kaibigan wanted the Disney songs sa pamamagitan ng like from Snow White to Tangled.
There is madami but mainly has to do with the plot. I think I’ll write a part 2 or something after my ipakita week is done.
So there you have it, I hope you can agree on parts or not.
