House's Evil Laugh of Doom

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This is only the 1st part of House's point of view.
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Part 4.2: House's POV:

“How do I look?” The hooker didn’t speak, rather drew her pinky finger to her lips and bit gently on the tip. Her eyes scorn up so that her visual field was half blocked sa pamamagitan ng the blackness of her forehead, an abyss. The sinful look was met sa pamamagitan ng House, who cocked a half smile, mimicking an old Irish actor he had seen in films. “That good, huh?” The phrase wasn’t a question. He wore the same melancholy gaze as...